Hey! Nice job on your first entry.
Since you ask for honest feedback I'll do my best to help where I can!
My first tip would be to stop being too harsh on yourself. Man, you made a video game, I don't know about your background or anything but for what it is it's already cool. I think you spend a bit too much time justifying yourself about how bad it is and it shows an unnecessarily high level of humility in my opinion. Of course it can be funny, but not if it's in every sentence. Your game is promising, and I hope your are proud enough with what you got, to continue learning and participate next time!
The game concept and your take on the theme are very nice. It could have been pushed a bit further, as to have very distinct endings when you refuse to find anyone guilty vs when you find everyone guilty. But of course it would have required much more time!
At first I didn't really like the fact that reading text was timed. I felt that I was punished with the tutorial skipping itself for me being a slow-reader or not a native english speaker. In the end, on the other side, I wanted to skip because I had read everything but wasn't able to. I think that in general with game design, you want to be careful not to punish the player without them doing anything wrong.
Visually I don't have much to say, there's room for improvement, but I'd say you managed to make a very clear design, bringing the eye where it needs to, and to have enough variety.
Regarding the music, yes I'll say it too: it's okay :smile: To be honest, I think it's better to spend 20 minutes doing the music and getting something, than not including any music, and the whole game feels off. My only tip would be not to use piano sounds (I did the same mistake in my first jams). It has this "aggressive" sound that other instruments don't have, and it can give a non-intended mood to your composition. Of course there are masterpieces at piano, but I mean when you don't know how to make it sound right, it's not the easiest instrument to work with. I would recommend winds or strings. Of course all this is very subjective :D
Anyway, I enjoyed playing your game! Nice job!