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| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Mo | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2021 | 49 | Unstable | This is falling to be unstable | jam | 864 | 3.44 | 3.61 | 3.19 | 4.11 | 3.41 | 3.30 | ||
| 2021 | 48 | Deeper and deeper | The Deepest of them all | jam | 1632 | 3.00 | 2.97 | 2.77 | 3.00 | 2.58 | 2.33 | ||
| 2020 | 47 | Stuck in a loop | Stuck In a Hoard (While Looping) | jam | 1560 | 2.75 | 2.82 | 2.37 | 3.01 | 2.51 | 2.35 | 2.41 |
I like this game! Pretty fun, But i have 2 problems. 1.The Colliders are a bit off. 2.Sometimes the red bar goes too fast. The mechanic of creationg your own levels seems pretty interesting. Also the audio sounds like it was made by someone else, not yours. Fun game overall!
-WitekWitek
I like it! This is pretty good, Everything is fine and i don't see anything wrong!
Great game! I like the sounds and the graphics, fits well. I think the game was a little too long for a game jam game.
Overall, the end could be shorter
-WitekWitek
Very Unique and Diffrent Idea! But i have one problem that could use some work. Usually people can cheat by just clicking next all the time and that ruins the fun. (Maybe level progression when a condition is met?) (Also a + for somewhat teaching the player) Pretty much the rest is fine :)
I like this game! The theme fist very well, The artstyle was very nice, The Graphics were great. Fun game, also there are some negative problems i had. 1. This is one of the more common issues, The game dosen't have a proper tutorial, The tutorial and controlls could have been shown in the game instead one by one. 2.The Controls should also have been shown in the about or options menu instead of just showing up in the tutorial. 3.The UI is ok, but it could you some work.
Also this game kinda reminds me of "Just shapes and beats" But you can't really control the character, not that i am saying that it's bad that it looks similar.
Overall Pretty fun game! fitting and graphics look nice.
-WitekWitek
(I love the Humor of this game! I like it, there is just one problem. Usually when you are flying (especially through holes), you kinda need to guess where and how you need to position yourself, Maybe you can have the camera more staright than from an angle? Thanks!
-WitekWitek
Very interesting game! I like how you have to rely on your clones to help you. It's a very fun game. But The game isn't really Humerous or Moody. Also I wish the camera was a little bigger since i was making blind jumps.
Overall Fun and Fast-Paced Game But not really moody or humerous.
-WitekWitek
This is one of the games that have more slapstick humor than the actual gameplay. (I don't have a problem with that). It fits the theme very well. But i do have my complaints.
1.The sensitivity is too sensitive for the camera 2. The first level coudive had an tutorial 3. The elevator button was kinda too hard to press. 4. The elevator closed too fast.
Overall, Fun and Funny game!
-WitekWitek
Interesting Game! The Audio is great, the game is pretty fitting. But i do have some problems.
1. The Tiles look kind of ugly, that could use some work 2. You coudive put the gameover text a little bit higher in the HTML version 3. For some reason When I tried the top left boss for a second time the clones don't work at all.
Overall Fitting and Good.
-WitekWitek
Great game! I like the mechanic of relying on your clones. The Audio and Graphics are Great. You pulled off the tutorial very nicely. Fits the theme well, my only complaint is the tutorial text, The text is pixelated, and the second part of the tutorial the text dosen't show up all the way, maybe you could scale down the text without the pixelation?
Overall, Great game.
-WitekWitek
Very interesting game. The fact you have to change the name of the executable is amazing to me. Very fitting and very fun game. The game is somewhat humerous but it is more moody. I would like to see more games like this!
-WitekWitek
Very interesting mechanic. But i feel like the game is too hard or too long. not really moody or humerous. The Art is good enough. Overall Good game.
-WitekWitek
I love this Game! This may be one of the better games that i played in LD47. I am very impressed how you made the art assets in just 3 days
Interesting idea! I like the idea of the game, It also fits the theme very well. But i have my complaints. 1.There isn't audio which makes the game boring 2.There should be an introduction/tutorial instead of an text file 3.The victory screen isn't really "Impactful" 4.The Grid was freaking out.
Overall, Pretty fitting and intetresing idea!
-WitekWitek
Interesting mechanic! fitting game, music was great, but it did have some problems. 1. There wasn't really a proper tutorial level, maybe instead of an big wall of text how about you make the text show up when you pass the tutorial element. 2. A resume screen would be nice since i accidentally pressed the r key too many times.
Overall, Very fitting and good audio.
-WitekWitek
Interesting and unique Game! The only problem i had with the character is the character, Instead of an low-poly charcter, maybe it could be a person? The rest of the game is fine.
Interesting game, this game is one of them "It's ok but could use a little bit more work". It's somewhat moody the audio is great, the graphics are ok. Here are my complaints:
1. This game does not have a tutorial on how to play it, I seen so many games with this problem, maybe perhaps you could have it on the side of the screen? Usually what i will do is put the tutorial in the game, not the page itself. I was pretty confused on how to play the game
2. It would be nice of there was an indication when I was paused because I got confused when i pressed the esc key.
3. The exit button dosen't work
Overall, this is an ok-ish game
-WitekWitek
This game looks nice! looks pretty good. it's somewhat moody, the graphics are great, but i feel like the puzzles are too hard and it isn't really fitting.
Overall, Interesting game.
-WitekWitek
Intresting Idea! I liked you game but here are some of my complaints.
1. Is the Text supposed to be small? If not, Make the UI Scale with the Screen Size 2. The Back button wasn't working 3. I don't really see the Impact the spacebar is doing. 4. I would recomend you putting a cooldown on the "Flammy Impact"
Fun Idea, but it could use a little bit more work :)
@leggy Hey there! Here are some things that i am going to say about your game
1.I can understand rushing and finishing it but usually i dosen't really give a good effect on your game. 2.I think it was 1800x900? I don't think that it shows what Reolution you are playing on 3.Yes, I did see it but what i meant by are the effects of the "Flammy Impact" (ex. The duration of the fire wasn't really that diffrent)
This Is one of them "It's ok but it needs improvement" type of games. I like the mechanic of the game and I think It would be better if the execution was a little better. Not really moody or humerous, It somewhat fits the theme, also here are my complaints
1.The text Is hard to read 2.There wasn't really a proper tutorial level 3.I feel like the graphics were rushed 4.The audio isn't so great and there is a bug where at the beginning of the level where a annoying sound plays for 5 seconds.
Overall I feel like this could have potencial if all of the critisism was fixed.
-WitekWitek
This game is alright. The theme fits very well, the music is pretty good but also i have my complaints. 1. The ground is too slipery 2. There could have been a tutorial level the the start. 3. The art is ok on the player but not so good on the levels, They are somewhat ok.
Overall. Very fitting and good music.
-WitekWitek
Interesting idea. I like the mechanic on how you can throw loops But i have my complaints. 1.The lack of backround audio makes it slowly boring. 2.The Art Sprites aren't that great. (Maybe spend more time on the assets?) 3.There wasn't really a proper tutorial.
Overall, This is one of them "OK" Games.
-WitekWitek
@peace-of-cake-games Thanks for reading my comment! I do understand that you needed to rush things, Yea it does finish your game but you can finish the assets later. Also here is some advice: "Simplify". What i mean by that is making things more simpler like: (Cutting stuff). Cutting stuff away is the way to go, here is also a video about the thing i am talking about:
https://youtu.be/xe2X0WJgI-4?t=164
@peace-of-cake-games I totally respect that. You can go whatever you like. Also i do have a game jam game, here it is:
https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/47/stuck-in-a-hoard-while-looping
Very interesting! I am very impressed on how you pulled off the leaderboard system in just 72h. The audio is alright, pretty fitting. The only thing that could use some work is the UI
Overall, Pretty good.
-WitekWitek
Also PS: It's kinda hard to tell where the obstacles are coming from.
Very Interesting Game! I do like the little cutscenes you put in the game. I like the graphics, pretty calming and exiting at the same time, Even if you did not make the audio you still made a good choice on choosing a song.I like how the game changes everytime you finish. But I also have my complaints
1. "Tutorial Inconsistencies". What I mean is that you didn't show a little tutorial in the fist level and the last level. Yea you did say what the controls are but you didn't say what is the objective in the first and last level. I suggest you put test that show up for a few seconds and then makle it go away. 2.The ending ends kinda akwardly. Maybe add an endcart at the game? (I am guessing you are supposed to play the game again) 3.In the First level when you pass the 50 second mark, The ending was too long. Maybe shorten it potentially? Now this is optional but, it would be nice if there was a button to skip the cutscenes or just proceed to the next one.
Overall it was pretty fun and interesting! I hope you like my feedback :)
-WitekWitek
The game looks great! The music and the game overall looked pretty calm and chilling. There was one bug that made it so you fell out of bounds. Here it is:hkguh.PNG Rest of the game is fine.
-WitekWitek
I love this game! I like the concept overall. I was cool that you can interact with the "cannon" in the main menu. The only problem i have is that it dosen't really fit the theme
@loligxp Hi there, Can you be more clearer? The game has camera movement. I think that you mean by "Smoother Camera Movement" You can correct me if i am wrong
-WitekWitek
@henrik-ganard Hi there! Thanks for the feedback, Do you have any problems/issues with it? If so please let me know!
-WitekWitek
@aviv871 Hello! Thank you for the feedback! I will take some things into consideration. 1. I will try to make the song less repetitive (longer) 2. I will try to make the camera bigger
If i would, I would always notify you when i will finish implementing all the things you mentioned. Thank you!
-WitekWitek
@henrik-ganard Thanks! I hope we got that cleared up
@loligxp I will try to implement that, If i will be able to implement it, I will let you know. Thanks!
-WitekWitek
@kevin-mooney Hi there! I will try to implement that but orignally it wasn't supposed to be there. If that's what the people want, then i will try to implement that. Thank you!
-WitekWitek.
@guimoliveira Hi there! I am currently working on the requests that either feature additional stuff to balance and the music. I will try to improve the music As soon as possible. Thank you!
-WitekWitek
Hi people! If you are reading this, I made some updates to the game for example: -I fixed a bug where when you fall off, nothing happends -I added obstacles. -I added more tutorial elements. More updates are on the itch.io page. Thank you!
-WitekWitek
@etrealjunior Hey there! I can understand that you need to use Google translate or any other translation program to send your message but ,either i can't impelemnt some of the things you mentioned or some of them were too confusing. What i will say are the things that i do understandd and can implement:
1. I will try to lower the friction of the ground
2. I will make the camera bigger.
Also i feel like energy is an bad idea since I don't really want the player to make pauses every 30 seconds. I feel like pauses kind of break the fast-pace experience.
Also one question, Where are you from? I am very curious to know, Thanks!
-WitekWitek
@keith-wang Thank you for the feedback! Do you have any negative feedback about the game? I am just making sure you didn't miss something. Thank you!
-WitekWitek
Hey @coleslaughter. Thanks for playing my game! I will try to fix the things you said needed to work like the highscore. But i will do it later. Thanks!
-WitekWitek
@rafaelgiordanno Hi! Thanks for the feedback! I will try to make the things you asked me to. Also the icosphere was *supposed* to launch you randomly, not upwards. Thank you!
-WitekWitek
Very Unique Game! I didn't see any Text games in that jam! My only problem Is that It didn't really fit the theme though. Overall, It was a pretty interesting game!
This game looks alright. I like the music in the background. I like how the game takes place in a tunnel and I really like the spinning effect you added when you turn either left or right. The leaderboard are a nice touch. I like the character that you play as.
Maybe make a button where you go to the game instead of pressing a keyboard key. Overall, Pretty nice game.
I think this game is alright. I like the pixelart. I like the music in the background. It's fun getting a new score.
At first I was confused how this fits with the theme but after you explained it it somewhat makes sense. Not really humorous.
For a jam game, It looks great.
-WitekWitek
This is one of the more fun games I played! The game reminds me of similar games Warioware. I also liked the extra details (like the clounds looking at the cursor). The audio is great and fits with the style of the game. The graphics look nice and pretty. But I also have some suggestions:
For example, I felt like "Clear the sky" was too fast in terms of time, maybe make it longer I couldn't really understand how to do the spin minigame since I was spinning the mouse cursor and It counted as a fail. I wish I could turn off the Post-Processing (PP) since I had a harder time completing the minigames.
Overall, Great game
-WitekWitek
This game is great. The graphics look nice and polished.
The OST/Soundtrack is fitting and sounds great.
It was really fun trying to get a new score.
I like how you interpret the theme uniquely.
Maybe could've had more minigames.
This looks great for an game jam game. -WitekWitek
I like that the game takes place in a browser. • The game fits well with the theme
• I like the brightness of the color decreasing as you go further downwards.
• I liked that you can turn off and turn on the music.
• I think the ending message was funny and a nice touch.
• The graphics were too blurry.
• There could have been more enemies.
• But there is nothing preventing you from using the scrolbar and skipping all the way to the bottom.
Overall, This looks good for an game jam game. -WitekWitek
This game looks nice as a game jame game.
The sounds are great, fits well with the theme.
This games reminds of other games like Downwell.
It's fun playing the game and trying to get a new score.
The graphics look polished and nice.
Some music would be nice. Not really humorous or moody.
Overall, Good game. -WitekWitek
I like the artstyle of the game! It fits with the music. The music is chill and calm so you can take your time.
I do somewhat understand how this fits into the theme but at a first glance it's hard to tell. The game isn't really humorous.
Overall I think this is a good game. -WitekWitek
Hi @eboatwright . I will try to fix the HTML version soon. I will fix it tomorrow since I don’t have any more time today
@eboatwright I fixed both the HTML and the Windows version, Check it now.
Hi @jk5000 I fixed the HTML and the Windows version, It should work.
Hi @eboatwright, The weird camera angle wasn't supposed to be there, I fixed it so you should be able to play the game properly now.
-WitekWitek
Hi @zombree I fixed the bug where you don't get crushed by the deathwall, should be fixed. If there is anything wrong please let me know :).
-WitekWitek
I like the character i think he looks cute and pretty nice I think this game can have potencial, but i have some issues: 1. I couldn't get over the first level since I couldn't really understand or it was too difficult to get to the second level. 2. I think it would be better if you put the story (The story on the bottom left corner) to the next scene when you press the start button. 3.The sounds were alright but some music woudive been nice since the player might potentially get bored over time. 4.It's hard to tell how this is related to the theme
Overall I think the game could have potential. -WitekWitek
I like the artstyle and the storytelling elements of the game. The music is calm and chill with fits with the game. The dialogue was nice. The game looks polished in terms of graphics.
The intro is too long, maybe shorten it a little. The audio was cracking but I don't know the cause As many people said before, in the exploration part of the game, it was too slow.
Overall I think this is a good game -WitekWitek
I like your interpritation of the theme. The art is fine. I like the BG music aswell. I find the game to be somewhat moody and humorous. It was fun trying to take over the world.
I wish i had more time to read the events though. Overall, nice game. -WitekWitek
• I like how there is a high risk-high reward factor when you want to use more power.
• It felt fun and satisfying shooting down the enemies.
• I liked the artstyle and the spooky music.
• The game looks polished.
• The theme fits alright.
• At first i was a little confused, but i managed to understand the game more after a second try.
• I don't really know what turning on the filter does, i can kinda see that it's brighter but not very much.
Overall, this game is great. -WitekWitek
I like the reverse 3 concept of the game.
I like the little details you added (for example the blocks exploding when you match 3)
The graphics look alright.
The game is somewhat humorous but not moody.
Could use some music though.
Overall, good game. -WitekWitek
I like the spin you decided to take with Tetris.
I like the artstyle and the whole idea.
It was fun trying to align the pieces properly.
Although not humorous, It is somwhat moody and atmosphereic.
The game was a little hard to play though.
The HTML5 version dosen't want to go fullscreen, It only goes to the top left corner.
Overall, great game. -WitekWitek
I like your interpritation of the theme and how it's fitting.
I liked the element where you can collect cassette tapes.
I like the SFX and the music in the background.
I like the artstyle of the game (especially the player).
The game feels polished aswell.
I like how the tutorial was presented in the beginning.
I wish the character was a bit more floatier.
Although i don't find the game to be humorous, I do find the game to be more moody though.
Overall, good game. -WitekWitek
I love the idea of being in a computer and trying to delete the viruses.
The graphics look polished and nice.
This game is actually somewhat funny and moody.
The game fits to the theme.
The SFX and music in the background sound nice.
I like the extra details you added in the folders(stuff as in memes, polish references, etc.).
I like the idea that you needed to find the passcode to the antivirus.
Although i do find the game to be a little hard since i only got 2 minutes before the antivirus activates.
Overall, great game. -WitekWitek
The artstle looks alright.
The movement of the ball is good.
Could use some polish.
I don't really see how this fits into the theme "Unstable"
For me, it kinda felt a little boring without any music or SFX.
I wish there were more block types.
Not really moody or humorous.
Overall, this game is fine. -WitekWitek
I really like how you said it's like an escape room.
I haven't really seen real life elements mixed with video games.
I liked the humor and the mood in the game. I found the game to be pretty funny.
I like the sounds effects that play when you try to run the LD winner program.
I liked your interpritation of the theme.
Overall, Great game. -WitekWitek