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The Overlooker

By geckoo1337

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall1003.8332
Fun1243.6632
Innovation2033.3332
Theme854.1632
Graphics1223.8532
Audio2552.9429
Mood813.7832

Comments

geckoo1337 2023-04-30 23:48

Just in time :/

vladadamm 2023-05-01 05:37

A rather simple game but that goes straight to the point. As you said in the description, it gives a bit of a Papers, Please feel with it being simply approving or rejecting letters in a dystopian setting. There's a good difficulty curve with various kind of rules that makes you have to adapt each day.

The graphics work pretty well with the setting and have a simple but identifiable look, with the game being pretty easy to understand.

One thing I think could be improved is that it can be a bit (too) stressful as you have no pause in-between days + you lose a significant time at the start of each day just reading the new rules. Having a small screen that tells you how good/bad you did during the day + what the rules are for the next day would be nice.

Also, the approval/rejected sound doesn't work for the first few letters in the later days.

velvetlobster 2023-05-02 16:16

I like the paper's please vibe to this game

but just noticed its windows only, will check it later at home

adam-jenness 2023-05-02 16:27

Will check it out when I’m back home

wouter52 2023-05-03 18:46

I consider this a classic Geckoo game. The style is very unique! I like it a lot, and the game really put a smile on my face. It gets complex very fast! Great job!

smoky01 2023-05-05 06:02

Very good and interesting idea))

the3rdhunter 2023-05-05 17:41

Cool game. Very clean and easy to play. Nailed that bureaucratic vibe with the art, and the repetitive task that you have to complete under the pressure of the omnipresent timer that's constantly ticking down. I really felt like a cog in a machine while playing. I agree a bit with Vladadamm that having a pause between days where you can catch up on the rules for the day would be nice, but I also think the fact that the clock just keeps going adds to the feeling of working under an uncaring bureaucracy. Figuring out your job is your problem, not theirs! They just care about having the mail sorted in time, and if you don't get it done, then you're out the door. Great work!

taxol 2023-05-06 03:09

Your template is really cool which makes your game files so small. But I think the single mechanism of the paper please is boring. It's the events in it that makes the choice meaningful and then make the game popular. Maybe you can add some unique and different events in your game or just change a way. Best wishes.

helekopeter 2023-05-07 11:52

Great, feels like a speedrun version of papers please. And while the graphics are simple, they are consistent and well-executed.

rayqdr 2023-05-07 13:19

Cool little game ! Reminds me good feelings from Papers Please so I enjoyed playing it. Well done !

2023-05-07 16:38

I really enjoyed the game, it created a stressful environment, and a challenging few minutes for me. I liked the imaginary city names. And well done for doing it in C++!

larsievl 2023-05-08 07:22

Very good raising of the difficulty very fun!

yoddaa 2023-05-08 08:02

@geckoo1337 very cool game. good job :)

caeonosphere 2023-05-08 17:33

Not a lot of letters making it to their destinations in Zakousta, huh? I managed to finish with 5/5 reputation, just barely. Difficulty seems well tuned!

skleembof 2023-05-08 20:46

Simple. but very difficult. I like how the difficulty ramps up significantly with each new rule. You get a false sense of security with the timer early on, and then quickly realize you have to be quick. Overall, it was a fun experience and I enjoyed the challenge.

squareronin 2023-05-09 06:34

Fun, just the right amount of difficulty. The changing rules was good to keep you on your toes. Wasn't quite sure what the clock was for though. Played very smoothly :)

tom-oak 2023-05-09 08:47

It began overwhelming me a little bit at day five but I guess that's kind of the point! Great aesthetics, and your story adds to the experience.

On a technical note, the clock didn't seem to stop for me and I never reached a fail state?

Nice project overall, congratulations!

geckoo1337 2023-05-09 13:58

@squareronin @tom-oak in fact, if you don't finish your day work in the time (60 seconds) you lose one point in your reputation score. So you cannot stay 4 or 5 seconds on a letter if you want to reach a good final appreciation. Just a way to increase a little bit the difficulty. Thanks for playing ++

lereveur 2023-05-10 21:05

It was difficult, and I finished with a… Let's say : "meh" reputation, but I finished, and I think I would do best if I train a little more. Simple to understand, simple to play, well balanced (yes, even if I'm bad I can see when it's balanced, and I think it is), so, as often : well done!

rolly 2023-05-11 18:24

Really nice take on the theme. It gets difficult quite fast, but it really got me wanting to play again to improve. Of course I did worse on the second attempt, but it was fun anyway :)

Good job!

lee-haochen 2023-05-11 23:20

Very nice game. I like its simplicity, but it still requires some practice to pass. It is a really good mental exercise.

fnkee 2023-05-12 22:30

Tried both versions of your game! I would say that compared to paper's please, this feels way more arcade-like! Very fun and challenging, with just the right amount of art and sound effects. Definitely a game I'd replay a couple of times to end at 5/5 in rep! Great job! :)

trexxak 2023-05-16 05:07

The difficulty curve is just right - challenging, but never frustrating. The authentic touch really shines through, too! Keep sharing your unique perspective, it's a joy to experience! Thank you for this amazing compo! (I also liked it a touch more than Papers Pls, btw :D)

ardorugus 2023-05-17 05:26

Yep, difficulty curve is quite good. Have to pay attention to the details. Maybe, needs more entertainment being a game, but is a fine sim of some real life routine. Can get addicted to this one, even)).

tygrak 2023-05-18 20:51

Cool game! I liked the aesthetic. Also very cool you made it in C++ basically from scratch :). I don't know if I got lucky, but it actually mostly got easier near the end, because close to the end almost everything got rejected which was quite interesting. The government was probably really cracking down on those letters :D. I can really see the papers please inspiration :).