Hamster Bowling by tfendall 2012-05-14T00:44:00
Overall: 5/5!
Innovation: 5/5!
Fun: 5/5!
Theme: 5/5!
Graphics: 5/5!
Audio: 5/5!
Humor: 5/5!
Mood: 5/5!
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| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | Cm | Co | ||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2014 | 29 | Beneath the Surface | Whale of a time | jam | 729 | 2.31 | 2.34 | 2.19 | 2.93 | 2.30 | 2.66 | 2.58 | 2.77 | 84 | |||
| 2012 | 23 | Tiny World | Most of us live in a tiny world | jam | 260 | 1.75 | 1.28 | 2.26 | 2.57 | 1.27 | 2.16 | 1.90 | 2.58 | 100 | |||
| 2011 | 22 | Alone | Things you do alone... | jam | 125 | 2.24 | 1.95 | 2.65 | 3.34 | 1.83 | 2.56 | 3.44 | 2.26 | 3.00 | 100 |
| Year | MiniLD | Theme | Game | Rank | ||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2014 | 49 | Non-Human Player | space sailor | |||
| 2014 | 48 | Face/Scheme/Conspiracy/Deceit | GRANDMA'S DECEIT |
jeffz leaves an average of 62.7 feedback comments each event.
Overall: 5/5!
Innovation: 5/5!
Fun: 5/5!
Theme: 5/5!
Graphics: 5/5!
Audio: 5/5!
Humor: 5/5!
Mood: 5/5!
brilliant!
well done on the game and the amount of games you've rated, would have enjoyed some music with this one though.
Unfortunately I don't have an android device.
fun, collision detection was a bit off, had to flick left/right quite a bit on edges, congrats on your entry!
Interesting if not a little hard to control due to low resolution.
Hmm... no executable? Packaging after the deadline is allowed. Shame I can't run it, I don't have python installed. Also, you would save *a lot* of space by using ogg instead of wav for the sounds and music.
Loved the music.
novel idea, nice little story.
would have liked to see something closer to the theme, still cool though.
The silence was deafening.
amazing, but frustrating.
The dialog made me annoyed I wanted to just skip it because I read so fast. Otherwise very impressive.
Just crashes on start like the first comment.
fun, good work.
good work on the graphics and the music, the platformer itself I became bored of. Sometimes the graphics would shimmer, not scroll smoothly (float rounding?)
great music
the motion with the shaking made it feel unsmooth, otherwise a good entry.
reminds me of doom, i fragged and i had fun.
The static sound is very distracting, I had to turn the sound off completely.
The music sounded generative, like one of those cell based music making programs, I think it worked. The artwork was lovely but the gameplay felt a little empty, would have benefited from some sound effects. 5/5 for graphics.
Looks really neat and clean, some good potential here. Let down a little by lack of music, but shows a lot of promise!
good fun, could have used some music!
could have done with some music and better movement
fun a but a bit of a clickfest, looking forward to your next entry!
Good first game, keep at it!
rated due to kvisle!
let me jump over the houses!
interesting take, well executed, shame about the lack of audio.
froze for me after awhile, otherwise very cool!
I think you've nailed it.
not sure if it was stong on the theme, but otherwise good game!
original concept well executed, my hat goes off to you.
congrats on making something, good luck with your next game!
1206. Is that music original?
Found the lighting distracting but interesting, controls felt a like they could be tweaked a bit. Would have been good to see how you could make it relate to the theme if you had more time.
nice concept, bit of a clickfest in the end though
Great music, original idea, congrats!
great music, great titlescreen, loved it.
frustrating... sometimes I'd mistype the first letter of one word but be looking a different word I was trying to type.
didn't like the stock sounds... would have been better if there were original sfx
disappointed you didn't invest the time to actually turn this into a video game, could have been great!
I think I get it but I'll agree it's incoherent.
hard and the sound effects made me cringe.
I had fun.
love the grass.
nice graphics, all that clicking was a bit taxing, could have done with some cheats to increase the number of red blue things and keyboard controls!
I liked the graphics and how it responds to input, but didn't find it brought out the theme that well.
one of the best entries I've seen so far, love the vocals, keep up the great work!
Dig your use of charcoal, it certainly has a knack for conveying negative emotion/terror/ugliness.
The art style had a very washed out feel to it, not sure I liked it with so much motion, otherwise congrats on this excellent piece of work!
I dig the art style and the idea, could use a bit more onscreen instruction/hints.
I like the graphics, even though there is no music they give the game a unique feel. Enjoyed stomping the little white men.
I liked it overall but it was repetitive in the end, I wanted to overcome the humans.
A great idea well executed, enjoyed playing this.
great to see you finished this :)
nice polish overall, but started feel a bit grindy by the third.
great music, I love jazzy tunes with platformers
hmmm why do I feel like I've just played a starwars game?
very cool, enjoyed the music and the concept
haha, this is cool
Nice job overall, liked the graphics ;P
5/5 for audio :)
nice work, liked the music, gameplay could probably do with some progression... disaster or something
Nice work, felt like an original game :)
awesome game, played the bonus level for quite awhile too.
You nailed the music for this one.
original, nice work!
Original, music is a nice touch, however it gets a bit repetitive. Nice work on rating so many games too.
nice entry, well done on rating so many games too!
Found it confusing, wasn't sure what I was supposed to be doing, got a little frustrating.
couldn't find the upper path or what was supposed to be north-east before getting bored, found some gates...
I won!
nice artwork, not sure the music fits entirely but it's still good, reminds me a bit of Descent I think. The movement is nice and I like how the stars flicker a bit.
a neat little game but not sure it's really strong in respect to the theme.
shame there was no music, running or jumping :( good luck for the next LD though.
playthrough video so we can rate?
I was sad that we could not see in the kitchen or the toilet.
Got a bit impatient having to travel so far to some arbitrary x/y coordinate... brings back awful memories of Far Cry 2.
Win 7 64-bit. Entered '5' Bunch of windows flashed, then one window which wouldn't let me drag it without it resetting its position?
If you make a playthrough video I can give a rating.
would have liked some music and automatic level progression, but otherwise cool!
lack of music is a real shame
nice game, music reminds me of twinkle twinkle little star a little too much.
cute, esp the title screen.
Submit what you had, not a jpg.
It's made with Java 7, which isn't for general use yet, so we can't run it.
no windows and no gameplay video...
neat
Yeah, don't want to install, Kelly's comment is spot on.
Couldn't open the 0.3 zip, winrar says the archive is damaged.
Amusing audio.
registration is a bit of a downer...
Had to find and download OpenAL (missing OpenAL32.dll), neat little game.
Nice polish on the artwork, worked fine on my i7 laptop with integrated graphics. (HD 3000)
fantastique!
Comments much the same as everyone else, still a very good effort.
great voice acting, 5/5 on Theme!
I couldn't be bothered installing the latest DX redist, on slow net connection so downloaded the missing dll instead. Nice retro feel, scored my first touchdown ever (non-american)!
Would have liked some sound, esp for a platformer.
can't play, no windows build.
need an exe...
Audio track didn't play, latest Chrome Win7. Gfx felt a bit jerky, not sure how the game related to the theme.
nice sound bites!
no windows binary, no play...
too hard for early morning xmas hangover brain... watched the playthrough video instead. okay... :(
keyboard doesn't work at main menu
could you explain how your game matches the theme?
Win 7 64-bit, i7 hd 3000 intel graphics, installed the VS2010 runtime, tried running your game, it never starts, just seems to go in an infinite loop without bringing a window up.
a few minor qualms about controls and registration for jumping on things, an otherwise nice attempt at LD, well done.
executed well, congrats!
I got trapped in a wall in the first room or fell off the screen? I don't know. Would be nice to be able to skip dialog. I can read faster...
I like the aesthetic, shame about the lack of music, would go towards making a brilliant little game.
really cool, I played some of the level more than once!
great piece of work, very polished.
nice work on the music and artwork, I only wish it progressed a bit faster!
bit of a strain on my eyes to play, otherwise quite inventive!
Bleak, I love it.
frustrating. need radius damage, sword slashing, magic spells and bombs. damn rabbits!
nice attempt, not sure that it really matches the theme though
played all the way through, quite good!
fun and adrenaline packed action!
The jumping sounds make my laptop speakers sound like they're popping and scratching, had to stop after the third screen.
nice sfx and music, physics remind me of bart and the beanstalk, has just the right amount of difficulty :)
I wish you'd done something for the actual theme, cute game though.
Fun but not very challenging, great idea though. Hope you extend it!
original, I like it.
nice game, could have done with some music + sfx which would have complimented it well
Similar to Redwind, with a bit more work, this could be quite nice. Personally, the player speed feels too slow, jumping too high and the mouse movement feels off. Keep at it though!
great use of colour!
my girlfriend says that your game is really cute! such a nice idea.
LD29 — Beneath the Surface (32)
DownDown by mrexcessive 2014-05-05T07:04:00
I enjoyed the piano piece. Well done!
The Dead Beneath by Myyyvothrr 2014-05-05T03:42:00
Classic. 184 points. You could probably expand on this into more areas. Well done!
I Remember Alice by Linus Lindberg 2014-05-05T03:28:00
Very cool, but once I've walked three times, I think you could do some fade transitions to the eating and sleeping and text change. I went to the end anyway. Well done!
Pressure by Nezzhil 2014-05-05T03:20:00
This is crazy. Well done!
Hungry Dolphin by FrozenCow 2014-05-05T02:57:00
Nice dolphin movement. Good sea gradient. Scary fast moving fish. The blocking UI notifications could probably be integrated into the gameplay to make it a bit smoother, like arcade style centre of the screen messages. Well done!
Mermaid Scientist Massacre by pancakecity 2014-05-01T06:36:00
Fun. Impending sense of dread trying to escape. Well done!
AHH LAVA! by Dreii 2014-05-01T06:26:00
I like the opening guitar sounding out. Great game overall too. Well done!
Geology Rocks by theengineers 2014-05-01T06:01:00
I enjoyed cheating through this one since it was still challenging to ride the block I was moving. Well done!
The Captain's Holiday by qualia 2014-05-01T05:56:00
I love that this Twine entry has graphics and music. Well done!
Triumph Of The Diver by teambrookvale 2014-05-01T05:54:00
The music really pulls together the artwork and mechanic. Excellent work!
Killer Without Color by GlowingSnail 2014-04-30T05:39:00
I had some trouble playing with a touchpad, but otherwise it was cool. Well done!
Firefly by KevinWorkman 2014-04-30T02:37:00
Looks and sounds very nice, but I can't tell if I'm playing or just tilting looking foolish. I sat my android device down on the couch next to me and won a few levels without any interaction. Definitely an interesting direction though, well done!
Go Below by GagaPete 2014-04-29T23:29:00
Looks great, except I couldn't see the portals for like 2 minutes. I don't think they have enough contrast or my screen isn't that great. Otherwise, well done!
Wormonger by lasagnegames 2014-04-29T23:09:00
Super cool. A very fast mood. Well done!
Quantum Tunnelling by Toby Pinder 2014-04-29T22:50:00
Interesting concept. I agree with some of the other comments re sound and a little more help on instruction. Maybe the game speed could be increased (turbo mode?) Well done otherwise!
Ground control to major Tomashevsky by drnick 2014-04-29T22:40:00
The site appears unreachable here. I'll try to check back inc case you upload to dropbox or something.
Beneath The Surface by adamwoolridge 2014-04-29T22:31:00
Visually pleasing. Felt like I needed stronger weapons as it progressed though. Well done!
Diamond Diggers by chocobyte 2014-04-29T22:25:00
Cutest game yet. Well done!
You Don't Want That by Dark Arts and Sciences 2014-04-29T22:21:00
Short and sweet. I felt I was transported there if only for an instant.
Beneath Europa by Intoxicatious 2014-04-29T22:14:00
Brilliant choice of audio. Well done!
Ostrich Simulator 9001 by kivifreak 2014-04-29T22:09:00
Hilarious idea. For some reason the audio didn't work on chrome (latest version) so I have rated n/a for audio.
Surface Runner by OniiRam 2014-04-29T22:05:00
The dropbox link is not working: 404 not found.
All is one by Erkberg 2014-04-29T22:03:00
Interesting fog of war. It felt like it took too long to uncover and move around though.
Sneak-Easy by allurious 2014-04-29T12:58:00
Solid music and artwork. Would be interesting to carry more than one dish (and balance it without toppling) to customers. Maybe a bar above the customer to show their satiety decreasing too. Well done!
Color Graphics Adventure by Eniko 2014-04-29T12:41:00
Incredible artwork. This has quite a lot of promise. Looking forward to an update if it gets sounds and music. Well done!
Read Between the Tropes by Crowbeak 2014-04-29T12:29:00
Well done. I did start to sense the feeling of being in a movie while reading. Damn tropes.
Fort Kraken by OmegaVesko 2014-04-29T12:25:00
5/5 for that opening sequence, love it!
Down by SonnyBone 2014-04-29T10:17:00
Great work with the music and the occlusion effect. It worked well.
Gorilla 2100 by leparlon 2014-04-29T10:08:00
My heart soared when I saw what this was. I think you should definitely add the terrain destruction. Very cool idea and execution.
Metal Meter Madness by mrspeaker 2014-04-29T10:00:00
If only I could come back at night when the surf patrol had gone home. Nice work overall.
Anthill by gre 2014-04-29T09:47:00
excellent fun, especially the music!
Willow The Whisp by Paul-Etienne Bardot 2014-04-29T09:31:00
the zip file is corrupted..