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Particulate Planet

By jedi

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Coolness1100
Mood1002.98
Humor1122.48
Graphics1323.24
Audio1582.33
Fun2142.08
Theme2172.31
Innovation2202.13
Overall2232.33

Comments

mrho 2012-04-24 11:34

The messy art style is quite interesting.

lidfrid 2012-04-24 12:33

That sounds is disturbing :O Good art style in the beginning!

jeffz 2012-04-24 12:36

Dig your use of charcoal, it certainly has a knack for conveying negative emotion/terror/ugliness.

christinaneofotistou 2012-04-24 12:40

Lovely intro, reminds me of Francis Bacon a bit.

catman 2012-04-24 13:42

Cool graphics, love the style!

suese 2012-04-24 13:50

It could have been improved by... everything being better. I think a lot more effort could have gone into this.

Thanks for trying.

taugeshtu 2012-04-24 16:46

Yay, that was fun!
I found a "cheat" - there's a point on the screen where you should aim and click endlessly - and you won't get any troubles. That was weird, but acceptable)

Overall game is good - it's fun, funny and has tons of mood! Now I want you to make another game with that style)

I do agree that it could be improoved, but to do so you got to improove every single piece of it, because for now it feels soooo complete.

tcstyle 2012-04-25 18:18

The gameplay is just too simple for such a great art style and sound mood. I like the drawings and surreal story.

xeeko 2012-04-25 20:34

Sounds horrible, in the annoying way, but a good effort, I can see what you were trying to accomplish with it.

rhy3756547 2012-04-25 20:48

It took a long time to get used to the shooting style. I don't like the art style either, it's too messy. Good concept though.

bonezoner 2012-04-25 22:08

Very artsy but what would be really cool is a win condition and more of your weird illustrations to go with it :)

pinkmonkeyhead 2012-04-26 00:19

This game is very disturbing. Mood +5

r3ason 2012-04-26 06:58

Well that was different...art style and sound were top notch :D Thanks!

permanent7 2012-04-28 08:26

Interesting! Loved the art style.

ointment 2012-04-28 08:34

The disturbed mood really sets it apart from other entries. Never got a hang of the targeting, though.

cjke-7777 2012-04-28 09:38

Really different - excellent art style!

jhelle 2012-04-28 12:50

This game made me feel uneasy though the graphics and soundeffects.

Spotline 2012-04-28 16:27

Nice, too bad it becomes real easy after a while =(

sanguine 2012-04-29 12:25

I really liked the intro

jedi 2012-04-30 07:37

Hey everyone, thanks for all the great comments! It's really encouraging to know that the game is getting played! :)

I've noticed more people are rating the game without leaving comments. Please try to leave a comment if possible, even if you're repeating what others have said; it's really helpful to get the extra feedback of how many people feel a certain way.

Lastly, there's now a post-compo version that addresses some issues everyone had with the initial release. Can you please say which version(s) your comments are relevant to?

THANKS guys, you rock!! :)

brighterorange 2012-05-05 20:35

This is a really odd game. :) But it hangs together and that is a good thing. The pills coming towards the house on the right are hard to hit. After they start getting closer I couldn't find any way to hit them. But fortunately once that building is dead I was able to stave off the ones coming for the buildings on the left. Glad I didn't have to go for 5 minutes! ;)

thotep 2012-05-07 06:50

Great art style in the intro, but the gameplay isn't engaging at all.

chrismcr 2012-05-07 09:19

Loved the intro and b-movie weeeeird sound effect throughout :)

alex-k 2012-05-07 09:24

I played the post compo version.
Interesting art style, I had some problems to hit close targets, projectiles sometimes seemed to go through them...

deejorg 2012-05-07 21:45

The intro is quite nice but the gameplay seems to be lacking something.

davidwparker 2012-05-08 13:38

I liked the beginning, with the somewhat chaotic style/storyline... but then the gameplay didn't match that whatsoever. The shooting was a bit off too, but not too shabby.

gjarble 2012-05-09 07:32

The shooting is very difficult without depth perception; the player has no way to tell exactly where (along the Z axis) a bullet will go (the cursor may change size with depth, but that only tells the player a given cursor depth's *relative* position to another cursor depth, without showing how close/far the cursor is to the pills). This might be better as a 3D game, if you can figure out a simple enough way to implement that- perhaps two side-by-side views where the player has to cross their eyes? Also, as far as the control scheme is concerned, make sure to have alternate controls for people playing on more limited systems (like laptops)- for instance, not everyone has a mouse wheel.

That said, I like the artsy/eerie aesthetic this game has. Some of the graphics (the people in the intro, the buildings you defend) are a bit too messy to tell what they are/what's going on, but I definitely wouldn't take out the "messy" aspect wholesale; that's one of the game's strengths. I applaud the decision in the post-compo version to keep that high-pitched drone confined to the opening cutscene, but the new gameplay sounds sound more whimsical than eerie. Even so, some audio feedback for the player's actions is better than no audio feedback, and I don't know if you plan on swapping those sounds.

murilo 2012-05-12 20:59

The art is pretty good. I liked the intro!

firstrowgames 2012-05-13 04:01

its really wierd,but thats good!
I also like the art style.

jellyfame 2012-05-13 20:50

Weird

skullsoft 2012-05-13 22:18

Looks interesting! I always like a unique art style in a game.

...Crap! The executable crashes on me after showing the Unity splash! :(

PS OK you were right...I should've removed the dropbox link after several people said their virus scanners told them the file was infected. I fixed that now. Thanks for playing my game!

scgrn 2012-05-13 23:23

Totally weird. I like it!

skullsoft 2012-05-14 03:10

OMFG!!!

Thank you Jedi!

I scanned with the program you reccomended and found 33 files infected with Paramite A!! I have been violated! Raped! Infected! Betrayed! I will never trust anyone again!!!

Luckily it also removed all the infected files. One was an early version of my current project, which made me very glad of my compulsive habit of saving a backup of my work every 1-4 days.

Thank you for bringing it to my attention... I shouldn't have been so naive about viruses, but I have this other really old computer that refuses to let anything work and often gives things like false virus warnings, and I guess it desensitized me.