shivanhunter 2014-04-28 04:50
Great writing, and very unorthodox. Nice one!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD29 → You Don't Want That
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 1 | 100 | ||
| Humor | 305 | 2.86 | ||
| Innovation | 354 | 3.37 | ||
| Mood | 526 | 3.02 | ||
| Theme | 980 | 2.65 | ||
| Overall | 999 | 2.71 | ||
| Audio | 1056 | 1.32 | ||
| Fun | 1135 | 2.22 | ||
| Graphics | 1244 | 1.67 |
Great writing, and very unorthodox. Nice one!
Hi. Not entirely nice to have no choice, well one... I enjoyed your writing.
The writing was nice, but there should be more of user control.
I regret cheat code DIE!
I'm still not sure if there are any codes or not...
Very unique approach. Something really different.
Short and sweet. I felt I was transported there if only for an instant.
you want dont that
I was really confused until I figured out what was going on. . . then I was like "ohhhh, that's neat! :D"
Compelling writing.
A Ludum Dare creepypasta as a game? Neat - and pretty well written on top of it! Sadly it's a bit hard to me: I found out the first cheat code by reading the comments here, and I found out why death is useful, but now I just feel like a failure. And I don't want that.
I also found out how to restart the game without deleting my cookies, but I don't want that.
I loved the mood, it was good and compelling, but eventually I gave up after 30 minutes of not figuring it out. I wish the intro text were not so long, it makes me feel like I have to reread the whole thing to make sure I didn't miss anything.
I love the idea and the fact that you went through and implemented it. (I do rather enjoy creepypasta...) Unfortunately it seemed like after a while I got stuck, or I didn't know what to do, or something. It felt like I was at a dead end and, though I wanted to know how it turned out, I wasn't able to. (Yes, I checked the source code on some of the pages at least.) Still, good work!
Great concept, it was very fun and especially enjoyable because I love creepypasta. However, it was hard to find the codes so I was constantly looking back at the walkthrough (the real one, obviously).
Also, I can't get to your author page. If that doesn't make the game even spookier, I don't know what does.
A bit... obtuse. Thanks for writing a walkthrough, I needed it.