Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD22 → Kaylin Norman's Generic Series: Platformer
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| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Audio | 18 | 3.47 | ||
| Mood | 32 | 2.88 | ||
| Theme | 76 | 2.47 | ||
| Humor | 77 | 1.86 | ||
| Overall | 87 | 2.59 | ||
| Fun | 101 | 2.18 | ||
| Innovation | 130 | 1.76 | ||
| Graphics | 131 | 2.29 | ||
| Community | 519 | 2.00 | ||
| Coolness | 560 | 20 |
Good fit for the theme, and nice work on the audio track. The music is both well done and lonely sounding. Some of the controls were a bit fiddly (especially jumping when on the moving platforms), and the game froze upon touching the 5th fragment. It's a compelling story, though, and I believe some polish and plot closure could make it quite interesting!
For a LD Game, the intro is waaaay too long. It would be fine normally but in this context of playing dozens of games a day to rate, it's too long ^^.
Good music, good atmosphere, but awful controls on moving platforms : difficulties to jump, and something crossing through the platform.
Also, the music stopped itself after a while. don't know why :(
difficulties to jump while on moving platform
music stopes
Audio track didn't play, latest Chrome Win7. Gfx felt a bit jerky, not sure how the game related to the theme.
The intro was so long I almost skipped it. Cool sound and ambience. Sometimes I was unable to jump on platforms for some reason, and that got me killed.
Thanks for the reviews guys. Sorry for all of the bugs and errors. This being my First LD and all. This will obviously be the last time I work with "Construct 2" for a while.
Decent effort but as others have said the game feels a bit broken. Nice music though!
The intro was a bit too long, and it's impossible to jump off moving platforms (or land on them sometimes, resulting in death). The music was good, the graphics meshed together nicely. Overall, it could use a bit more work on the gameplay working better.
The intro wasn't that long for me (maybe because I read first that it was way too long). I really liked the music! And the jump seems to have a problem with the moving platforms. And an ending would be cool.