Once Inside by TautNerve 2014-09-12T07:31:00
I love it! 5!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → Users → alvivar
| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | Co | ||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2015 | 33 | You are the Monster | Primer | jam | 303 | 3.48 | 3.62 | 3.81 | 3.06 | 3.49 | 79 | |||||
| 2015 | 32 | An Unconventional Weapon | Drybreed | jam | 141 | 3.71 | 3.41 | 4.10 | 3.69 | 3.56 | 3.85 | 2.41 | 4.04 | 79 | ||
| 2014 | 30 | Connected Worlds | Onanigan | jam | 268 | 3.39 | 3.13 | 3.17 | 2.24 | 3.58 | 3.05 | 2.13 | 3.68 | 96 | ||
| 2014 | 29 | Beneath the Surface | Helevenium | jam | 107 | 3.66 | 3.79 | 3.26 | 2.58 | 3.59 | 3.21 | 2.27 | 3.56 | 100 | ||
| 2013 | 27 | 10 Seconds | SILX | jam | 322 | 3.05 | 3.34 | 3.44 | 1.43 | 3.19 | 2.80 | 2.03 | 3.18 | 100 | ||
| 2013 | 26 | Minimalism | minimalistherain | jam | 278 | 3.12 | 2.87 | 2.96 | 3.85 | 2.86 | 3.29 | 1.73 | 3.60 | 94 | ||
| 2012 | 24 | Evolution | You ARE the RAIN | jam | 165 | 2.87 | 2.79 | 2.70 | 2.30 | 2.54 | 3.14 | 2.03 | 3.44 | 100 |
alvivar leaves an average of 27.3 feedback comments each event.
I love it! 5!
lovely music.
amazing!
awesome, very original, i did have a good time playing this.
enjoyable, good mood.
It throws me an error :(
http://www.dropbox.com/s/o0r5vg23007qndz/20140830150341.PNG
196 meters! :) A runner with mini games, cool idea.
the gameplay feels really good, the movement and pushing stones.
i play both versions, pretty cool the post compo, it shows where you want to go.
good work!
Very polish. Lovely sounds, awesome music. Superb.
I love it.
I like the idea, and the graphics are pretty cool.
I have trouble jumping near walls, though.
I won!
(16 years old, wow)
excellent work!
Lovely idea, telling some kind of history while puzzling around.
good idea for an arcade.
when i appear up, most of the time I get killed, probably the spawning zone for the monster should be placed somewhere else... i think.
i'll play this game a couple more times :) you have something cool here!
bonus for a card printable game! :D
beautiful.
i like a lot the song.
Solid work! Great gameplay, sounds, mood! Good job.
you are gonna win the noodle dare.
love it!
i think you can improve the walking on the platform side by decreasing the slippery a little.
Excellent idea & execution. Probably with more variation and rooms types this could be an very interesting roguelike.
Lovely mechanic, innovative and fun.
i love this idea, also, the gameplay feels really good.
it's highly enjoyable.
Ambitious project! and a chicken! cool!
I believe adding sounds when something of the world moves could improve a lot the general feeling of the game.
Cool game, the movement feel really good.
I believe using checkpoints or some kind of hp could fit with this design.
(btw, i also did a wall walking mechanic on my game!)
full arcade experience. fun++
great idea. also, i really like the visual concept.
N e a t !
True that!
Great game! The dash, the robot, pretty cool.
I think that shooting using the mouse cursor as direction could fit in this game. I found myself trapped in the caos wishing to shoot in all directions.
Really good audio and fx. The sun, the mood. Great!
Solid gameplay and overall consistency. I like it!
Good for a first game! Adding more sounds will probably help you a lot to improve the game.
haha! that was fun! good job.
Cool idea. Definitively have potential.
The chains are pretty cool!
From opening doors to going outside, all actions feel great.
a really cool idea, with the potential of being an introductory game to Ludum Dare and/or twine.
The visuals and sounds are pretty solid.
Beautiful graphics.
I liked a lot. The walking feels pretty cool.
everything fits, i love it. i enjoyed it alot.
Sólido, buen ritmo, buena música, me lo imagino en una tableta.
Nice first Ludum Dare! I like the mood of the game.
Things to improve:
+ More tuning/polish on controls and collisions
+ Sound Fx (https://freesound.org)
Cool idea.
I recommend:
+ More direct feedback on the actions.
+ A fast way to play it again, it's so easy to lose.
+ Sound FX.
It's a very good game! I play it for a long time, the base mechanics are enjoyable, it's a fun game.
Some screenshake (like you said) & feedback sounds are my recommendations. Also using the mouse scroll to change between powers.
Cool graphics, particles and mood. The game lacks a challenge (i am guessing time issues) but I can totally see this game becoming an arcade (every time harder survival kind of game).
FUN. Solid gameplay, good difficulty, polish + slow time. It *feels* really good.
Beautiful, enjoyable ambient & mood. The graphics, the audio. Nice.
I recommend to check the collisions, some of them felt weird, i did get stuck several times on certain places.
FUN[5] game! Highly Enjoyable.
(Shame on Apple).
It's very good.
I had to use the walkthrough a little *shame* but it was a really fun experience.
Fun and innovative!
I don't have any particular recommendation. I found the thief on my 3rd try!
AWESOME!
Great! Love the mood and details. The camera, the sounds. Very polish. +Overall
No feedback for you, i love it as it is. Is the kind of game you want to play again to see if you can do better :D
Nice graphics, cool idea, great mood and audio.
I recommend, work a little more on the move and jumping, it feels a little loose.
Good job.
Innovative, really interesting. My team died :( with 4 turns left :) The ambient sound does a good work.
I recommend to make the rounds faster, maybe 8, or configurable (easy, medium, hard, infinite).
Good work.
Could not rated :(
Error: http://goo.gl/HfIOjT
Great work, the gameplay feels really good and the game is very polish. It's also fun to play :D
I don't have any recommendation for you. Solid entry!
Nice environment, mood & graphics. Some audio (ambient+fx) could totally improve the experience.
Sexy graphics (the killing, yeah!), nice mood. I like the concept. It has potential.
I recommend:
+ More worms! :D One after another, every time harder.
+ Consider using the mouse as source for the attack/roll.
I like the idea. Feed something by dragging food (?) from killing things. If you add some fx, it could be an interesting arcade.
Two recommendations:
+ Make the bullet bigger.
+ Screen shake when you shoot/hit something.
Nice writing. I did enjoy particularly the Mech Pilot stuff. It was really interesting (and clarifying) the use of so many tropes as the core of the game. Tropes Are Scary Tools.
Totally waiting for the post-compo version!
Hi @TobiasW!
Done! http://goo.gl/NedmdM
Really cool game, I did enjoy all the puzzles. At the end I was desiring more levels to play :) I can see myself enjoying more of this mechanic if you create more content.
Only one advice: the creation of a level 0, where the player can learn to go up to climp stuff without the possibility of dying.
Thanks for winning my game! I know it's hard, punishing and caotic, so it's awesome when someone beat it!
Keep making games!
BOO rules!
5/5 + 420 approved.
very good gameplay.
fun + mood.
fun++
sexy.
beautiful art.
the music was awesome. i felt like a hacker.
really enjoyable. the music make the mood.
5/5
hardcore + fun.
great theme!
the osx version does not work :(
nice gameplay!
a w e some.
i defeated myself :(
i give you 5 stars in everything. AWESOME.
in my mind i was naked all the ride.
i found a million of rainwalkers, maybe. beautiful game.
beautiful!
The wed edited version is my favorite!
The camera and controls need love, but nice art and sounds.
Amazing. The camera needs love but the concept is really cool :D
Fun bonus!
YES! Nice overall... I really enjoy this game.
So funny! Nice music and graphics, I like the style.
Funny +1
Awesome! Cool level design.
My first Ludum Dare (previous to this 24) I learn to use Unity but can't finish the game. The next one you will create something better! Good job!
The controls need a tuning, but it's fun. I like the minimalist art.
A really nice idea, a lot of potential, there is to much that you can do with this puzzle. Innovation +1
Wow, the tunning of the controls of the post-compo version make a really funny and playable experience. Nice work.
A cat with lasers, mood +1
I really want to know what happens in the cave! Nice music and art!
AWESOME, I love it! The most funny game in the 50 games that I have rated since the beginning of the me rating stuff here, great mood and theme also.
Awesome concept/idea!
Awesome art!
Really funny, cool graphics, great mood.
I like the way you tell a short story.
I like it a lot! Great Overall in my case. The problem were the controls, they need some tunning.
Great music also.
Remind me of Mario Kart 64 :D
Neat concept!
I like it! A 60 seconds game.
Cool idea. I really would like to play an extended version of this!
I like how the acceleration works with the jump. This mechanic have potential.
Nice art! Really funny.
With an infinite game are this game could be awesome.
Really FUNNY.
The janitor is an awesome idea!
Really funny puzzle.
A little to hard, but really funny.
I was a little lost at the beginning but I like the core idea a lot!
Awesome!
You got a bonus of Innovation & Fun!
We have similar gameplays :D
It's fun and have a lot of particles, that's nice. Yes.
I recommend a little tuning on the controls and character movement!
A lot of potential!
In Firefox, on OSX, I can't see anything, everything overlaps :(
LD32 — An Unconventional Weapon (19)
L.O.V.E by sputnik 2015-05-08T00:33:00
The gameplay feels really good (Y)
Udom Nebdon by pLaw 2015-05-06T22:43:00
Beautiful, the camera, the graphics, highly enjoyable.
Glasses Protector 2000 by leafo 2015-05-02T03:28:00
Fun! Excellent audio, pretty solid.
Star Driller Ultra by Omiya Games 2015-04-30T10:52:00
Love it! Really fun, played it several times.
The auto target was really cool when you hit several objects in chained, nevertheless, it would be interesting an option to deactivate it and fly free!
Solid entry (y)
Geisterblut by nuprahtor 2015-04-30T05:36:00
Superb
Badass Inc by deepnight 2015-04-30T04:37:00
Beautiful, the laser firing mechanics feels great.
I'm Only a Ninja! by herniewise 2015-04-28T08:38:00
Pretty fun, and the music was refreshing :)
Cheeseburger (in Paradise) by Just_delete_it 2015-04-25T09:01:00
This was awesome!
respire by zillix 2015-04-25T05:47:00
I always enjoy your games! <3
A Knife Made Of Whispers by managore 2015-04-24T09:07:00
I do admire a lot your work <3
The War Dog by Xinelu 2015-04-24T06:23:00
Loved the dog motion and the music.
EXECUTION by stray 2015-04-24T05:35:00
That was great! Loved the ending.
Copycat by Terry 2015-04-24T04:48:00
Wow, I'm gonna replay this game a lot.
Score 14 :)
Sun Wukong by Mr. Jif 2015-04-24T03:22:00
Solid gameplay and fun! The level design is pretty good.
I play if for a long time without getting bored, the jump feels great!
Floppy Man by Selzier 2015-04-24T03:00:00
So much fun! I play it several times :P
An Evening of Modern Dance by jplur 2015-04-24T02:39:00
This was really fun! <3
Quiet Riot by GeorgeBroussard 2015-04-23T08:29:00
Great game!
Ultra Hat Dimension by Crowbeak 2015-04-23T08:25:00
I highly enjoyed this game. All the elements fits together really well. The art, the concept, the mechanic, the writing. Solid work.
Project Pizza by PizzaPortal 2015-04-23T08:15:00
Loved the melody <3