Haris Mujkic 2012-08-26 23:23
Nice art. I was hoping to enter that cave, so hurry up with new levels. :)
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD24 → Dissolution
By krides
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 1 | 100 | ||
| Graphics | 124 | 3.64 | ||
| Audio | 128 | 3.20 | ||
| Mood | 136 | 3.14 | ||
| Humor | 286 | 2.32 | ||
| Innovation | 442 | 2.68 | ||
| Overall | 472 | 2.78 | ||
| Theme | 476 | 2.62 | ||
| Fun | 525 | 2.48 |
Nice art. I was hoping to enter that cave, so hurry up with new levels. :)
I will! I will add the cave level for LD72, I think (given that I still have some life in me come morning). Thank you for checking it out!
A very cute pixely look at evolution
Thanks mate :-) Adding more content for the jam as wee speak!
Art is very neat and the game sure is funny to play. But i want MOOOORE!!
Thanks for checking out, and really glad you liked it! I did everything I could in 48 hours, working on level two for the Jam.
I actually worked for full 44 hours of those 48, so I did everything I could :-) But don't you worry, there will be moar!
Took me a while to realize the color was killing me.
Yeah, I'm thinking about making the first tip more clear. Most people figure it out after a couple of deaths though. Like you did, for instance :-)
Very nice ambiance, great art and interesting concept, too bad you didn't have time to do more (and you know you really have to eat a LOT when ludum-dare-ing =P)
Thank you for your kind words :-) I am working on a post-compo version, you can the progress so far right here: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/9956376/Dissolution_Web/Dissolution_Web.html
And I'll go make pasta now :P
Looks really good!
Thanks :-)
Very short but great mood!
Yeah, I'm going to expand it later :-) It's short because I wanted to make it polished to create the mood. Thank you for playing!
great mood, great graphics. WAAAY to short :-D but well done!
I liked the pixel art style, that combined with the audio gave it a nice atmosphere. Would be interested in playing a finished version if you do one
Good graphics! Took a while to figure out what to do, you get killed really fast. It was annoying that I had to read that text box every time I played from the start. But seems like a good start to build it from there. :)
Thank you for playing, y'll. I _will_ continue working on this game. I can assure you, and my jam entry is evidence to that :-)
Cool graphics. I was glad to play it and will be glad to play a post-compo version if you ever made one.
Pretty short (played the compo version) but I like the direction you're going, it definitely shows promise. I really like the visual style you've got going on here too.
Lots of jumping to avoid filling up with color! I think the only time I wasn't jumping was during the quiver cutscene, which you might want to address since the player has no control then. Overall, I too want more levels :)
@sev_inf @codesavage Thank you guys :-)
@Cake&Code Thank you too :-) The Compo version has a bug where you get filled up with color during cutscenes, which wasn't meant to be and got fixed the next day ;-)
I'll play more games and then continue working on this one :-)
I really liked this game - I liked the atmosphere - would love to have played more of it!
@sampyxis Glad you liked it! Is it safe to assume that you have evolved? :-)
It doesn't work when I click. :( any idea what causes this?
Click what?
A like the ambiance! But it's so short, it was really frustrating for me :-(
Really cool retro game! After I reached the cave I couldn't seem to progress, but from the comments I guess you're still building it
@Yakka Sorry, I did the best I could >_< This mechanic doesn't exactly take an hour to implement, so I had to make some choices as to what should be in priority: a short chunk of gameplay that plays nicely or a bigger one that feels "prototypey." I am working on it, though, so, hopefully, you will hear more from me ;-)
@eyehawk Thanks! Yeah, the compo version ends at the cave, the jam version end in the cave.
Neat start; I really like the artwork, and the theme is mysterious and engaging. You might want to make the green color more obviously hostile (red, purple, brown, icky); I didn't know it was hurting me until I died, and then the message was that I'd lost color, even though it seemed like I was accumulating it. I found myself having difficulty clicking when it said click, and in distinguishing the different items; the white stuff gave me XP, and some of it reduced my color level, but I didn't really know what the flowers did. So, cool stuff, but not so much of a game yet.
I think you need to change the wording to "Press" instead of "Click" because I, too, tried clicking where it was telling me to. Great game though! Excited to see what you do post compo with it.
The artwork is really nice. I don't understand what I'm supposed to do though. Is the cave the end of the game? Did I win?
At first I found it REALLY confusing when the arrow said "CLICK". I kept clicking it with my mouse and couldn't figure out how to click it.
Okay, I get it, "click" is not a synonym of "press." I meant press, I'm sorry, okay? :-)
The reason I wrote "click" is that it was 5 o'clock in the morning and I'd been working on this game for about 35 hours non-stop. I'll fix that, obviously. And you are supposed to press down like on an icon above the thing, so it's not really that unobvious :-) And yeah, cave's it for now.
@cadin yeah, you won :-)
You should expect this game to eventually grow big, epic and full. Just stay tuned and thank you all for playing!
NEed more contennnnnnnnnnnnt! :~D
Okay guys, has anyone here seen Indie Game the Movie? Well, if you did, you'll get the referece: I'm kind of beginning to feel like Phil Fish here, except I didn't win IGF and get a grant from Canadian government, and haven't been working on this game for 4 years :-)
Anyway, thanks a lot for playing!
I quite liked this, the Dude is quite an endearing fellow. :) I think the idea of a black and white character in a colourful world is really quite interesting, and it seems like this could be a really good game if you had more time to work on it! :)
@Mach60KAS You've got it all wrong! It's not "if," "could" and "had," it's "when," "can" and "will have" ;-) Thank you for playing, anyhow, glad you like the Dude :-)
I really liked this game! the art is wonderful.
Good game. A little bit short maybe.
Nice game :)
Nice one! Jumping was a little strange but loved pixel art! Also great background audio!
Thank you guys! Yeah, jumping was implemented fast and without giving it much thought, frankly. Will be fixed, thanks for feedback!
I was disappointed by the abrupt ending :( Hope to see more of this later.
this felt very atmospheric, and it seems like you put a lot of work into it. looking forward to seeing how it develops.
Obviously very short, but really well-made. Gonna go play the Jam entry now, see how things progress!
nice work.
The jam version really improves a lot on the compo version, I like the idea you've got behind it and I can see it being really compelling if you get chance to develop it even more.
Nice, would probably pay for the full version of this.
The few problems pointed out by other people (Jumping, 'click' instead of 'press') don't distract from the lovely mood.
Great game idea, and really cool art. Perhaps some kind of animation of the pixels flying from the landscape onto you would help make the mechanic more understandable.
Too short for a real judgement.
Nice idea (as everyone said, sad this is so short, we'd like to play more ^-^).
I only played the 48-hour version, so that's what I am judging.
I was a little bit lost in the game, not knowing what the things were that I was picking up, and dying the first time through. It also ends abruptly, before I even had time to figure out what was going on. I understand you wanted to fit a certain mood, but I'm sorry that I didn't find it.
I wish you the best in the future for this game and others.
More! Give us more! The sound is nice and the graphics do their job.
Take me a time to understand how it work but funny game ;)
Thank you for playing, everyone! I'm seeing some really great suggestions for the game, and I will make sure to make the appropriate changes to Dissolution in future. I think I'm going to extend my jamming to one month and see if I can come up with a fully playable demo for IGF in time for submission.
At some point the camera stopped following with the character. I'm assuming that's a bug and that I didn't do something wrong?
@Evil Cult Yep, that's a bug that has already been fixed post-compo. Sorry about that.
'The colour went out of me' while I am filled with green? Strange.
I really like the basic idea, but there are too few grey stuff to collect to make it work. The enlarged pixelated look is really nice.
So I went ahead and tried the compo version. Took me awhile to figure out how to survive longer. I had to read some comments to figure it out. The concept is interesting which I believe can be improved upon. Maybe a helpful tip is to make sure that the feedback is easier to notice, on my first try, I was walking and assumed that the changing of colors is part of the gimmick. I didn't know that it was already hurting me. :D
Thank you for playing, guys, and thank you for the feedback, I'm taking it all into consideration as I'm working on the next version of the game.
Cute but short. I though the "click" message meant that I was to mouse click on what the arrow was pointing to.
Fascinating concept - it's a shame you didn't get to do more with it in the time allowed!
I hope you continue to work on it :)
I really want to know what happens in the cave! Nice music and art!
Your game is sure short, but quite promising. I like your basic idea of black and white. The pixel art and music are nice.
I thought I had to click and not press the down key too...
Good job anyway.
(Also, don't forget to remove https for the dropbox link for the jam version ;))
I love how it plays and feels. It seems really promising, it's a shame it's so short. I haven't tried the post-compo but will soon!
Good job!
I don't really know what to say. This game looks really great but is unfortunately unfinished. You have done something great so far, that's a very good point. Try to continue this game later and post an update on the home page :)
This game is so FREAKING GREAT! I love everything about it, and just its general vibe.
I cannot wait to see the game more complete and will be playing it for sure!
Nice job with the ambient sounds and love the art style! Could've been longer though but I understand how you were pressed for time! :D
A good start- not much to play though. Has potential with the upgrade path options etc. could make for a fun little adventure game
I can understand why Dude can't stand the world if its trying to kill him. Interesting little game.
Cool mood.
Using the word 'click' is incredibly misleading. Make the key prompts look more like keys and you can remove the word altogether.
It's very pretty with a great sound track but it doesn't quite make sense, is far too short and being forced to jump in order to not die isn't explained at all. Not to mention all the items that aren't explained at all.
I was really excited when the game first started and was a bit dissapointed. Overall I feel your ambition for this game was above and beyond what you were able to put out in time for the compo but I hope you will keep working on it and I can't wait to see where you take it.
A good start, but the compo version was indeed a bit short.
At the jame version I found out what the evolution bit was.
Looks promising... although very short. But compelled me to play the jam version as well so kudos... :)
Smooth game, liked it but yes like everyone else it was too short to get a really feel for it. I think it has a lot of potential. I really liked the art.
I kept dying for some reason I could never figure out.
You are #1 in coolness.
In all of Cool city, you are the coolest cat around.
Hahahahaha :D
Oh man. I wish I had found out during the compo that click meant press. I just now saw your post. I would have rated it :( It was a pretty cool game though.