curtamyth 2020-04-21 09:27
This game is great in all categories. I like the music a lot. The controls seemed a little slow to respond at times but otherwise it's fun and appealing.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD46 → Mr. Cheesy
By savvu
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 310 | 3.92 | 276 | |
| Fun | 166 | 3.96 | 278 | |
| Innovation | 1172 | 3.31 | 277 | |
| Theme | 503 | 4.00 | 277 | |
| Graphics | 668 | 3.99 | 281 | |
| Audio | 273 | 3.87 | 273 | |
| Humor | 65 | 4.18 | 279 | |
| Mood | 690 | 3.67 | 267 |
This game is great in all categories. I like the music a lot. The controls seemed a little slow to respond at times but otherwise it's fun and appealing.
The visuals look very nice and funny, simple enough for ludum dare and still very fun, also the idea is super creative, the controls need a bit of tweaking
Haha the longest cheese grater in game history :D :cheese: The mouse must also be careful not to land on the plate. Nice music and graphics aswell.
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After spamming A and D at the beginning of the game, I was able to fall off the cheese grater and get an infinity highscore, hehe.
Aside from this bug, the idea of the game is great and I love the music and sfx! Sometimes it seems like the player rejects my keyboard inputs and so I died because of wonky controls which is pretty sad. My "real" highscore is 4690 so I think that's pretty good :smiley:
Overall great game!
@curtamyth @hamzeh @talia @sn4pi π Thank you all for the support and feedback! It really warms my heart. I will rework it and hopefully it fixes all bugs
This is such a creative and well executed idea! It fits the theme and the jam perfectly. Two things: (1) slow to respond sometimes; (2) could scalate difficulty slower.
Very funny game. Controls sometimes don't work but nice game
Fun game, nice theme and looks great!
Nice game, the idea is very fun :laughing: The art is good, well done !
Liked this. Fun little game. My suggestion is you can add some power ups to collect like shields or speed boosts.
@bziarkowski Thank you so much! You are right power-ups are definitely a must have but I work alone on this one so the time was not enough π. I thought about implementing the ability to jump when at some point all lines are covered with traps!
Fun game! It's simple but it's works perfectly, and the idea itself is clever!
i love this aesthetic, it's so fun! I also like how you were able to apply the theme everywhere, including the UI elements like the score bar and menu. well done!
Really loved the game. Very nice idea fun and well executed. Good job at all :D
Cool graphics and art direction. The background suits the cheese colour. Would be great as a web game too. Who knows what's next, maybe cheese wire obstacles you could jump.
One of my favorites from this LD. Good job!
This is so far the best I have seen around. I saw some of your progress during the weekend and wanted to try it. Now I have that, and I love that! Amazing idea, great execution! Thank you
Simple yet so nice! Very fun with great graphics and sound effects ! I liked it a lot, it's a great job !
The theme/fantasy/setting of the game is brilliant. I also love the dish animation when the Mr Cheesy gets damaged! I think it gets repetitive super quickly, but there's definitely room for all sorts of weird powerups, gimmicks and crazy moments there.
@arinyl Great to hear that it worked perfectly! Such a relief haha.
@vulgaris Thank you for noticing and mentioning the UI elements! I really put a lot of effort in them.
@henriquecanella Thanks for all the kind words! By all you mean only me haha since I am a solo developer. π
The game is super well executed and is a fun infinite runner. The whole concept is morbidly hilarious, especially the hand popping out of the side with a plate of pasta. I feel really bad for Mr. Cheesy.
I found the game a bit hard to focus on visually in full screen, perhaps pulling back the camera a bit would help. Otherwise fantastic entry!
@eldogg I actually thought about making it a web game but decided to go with a downloadable verion since in the future I will definitely add achievements, leaderboard and other great stuff to look forward too! Thank you.π
@dsn I couldn't have a better support than this! You made me sooo happy.π₯³
@jin9310 Awesome I am so amazed you watched my progress over the last days! Thank you really really very much!π
@framboisedodue About the graphics it was a quick decision to use pixel art as I thought I would be more fun! I have to thank you for complementing that!π€
@superpatch hahaha so awesome to hear you guys saying Mr. Cheesy! I don't know why but I love it. Huge Thanks β
@ryannielson I have to thank you so much for that kind words! Maybe it is hard to focus because of the fast moving pixel art? I will try movingt he camera back a bit! Great suggestion. π
Saw this game pop up on the feed a few times during the jam and the little Mr. Cheesy character stuck in my mind, so I came to check up on the game now that it's done. This is the most polished game from this game jam that I've seen thus far! Even though the core gameplay is very simple, it's executed well and feels good to play. The art style is consistent and I'm really digging the music!
Kinda cheesy :/
I really like the art style and the music and sound effects are really cool. It would be cool if you could damage the mouse by tricking it into hitting the spikes to make it go back more
Great idea of combining infinite runner with something real-world related :D. The game was really polished and I had a fun playing it. And the hand with the spaghetti was a great idea :D.
@arttu-halonen The simple gameplay mechanics gave me a lot of room to play around with all the other great thongs! Thanks you for support during the jam.π
@hruy-gashaw π§π§π§
@somethang123 That's a great idea of pushing the mouse back! This could be implemented when I introduce the jump mechanic. All 3 lines will have an obstacle that slow down the mouse!π
@banzi haha so happy you likes the spaghetti idea! Thank you so much. π
A fun infinite runner!Perfect to pass your time during quarantine. Some problems with the response of the keyboards, but overall great game. Great work @savvu !!!
What a GRATE experience. Would have been even CHEESier if the hand was a Monty Python-like real-life hand that comes in when you do an oopsie.
Very distinct, pleasurable aesthetics!
I smiled through the whole game, thank you for that. :D
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@csst Nice to hear that Mr. Cheesy helped you out during your quarantine. Stay safe! π
@trexxak Thank you so much for the feedback. You made me smile as well! Great Highscore!π
Nice one!
Art looks great! I like the big mouse. The cheese marks Mr. Cheesy leaves behind when he slides and the pasta bowl are a nice touch. The collision behind Mr. Cheesy feels a little weird sometimes. I hit a few holes that looked like I should have cleared them but I might be mistaken. Different power-ups would be an awesome addition. I think it's a creative use of the theme and a fresh take on the infinite runner. Definitely going to play this one again. Awesome entry!
Awesome Game! Love the CHEESE :D
The art and expressions are amazing! I love your entry, and playing it just makes me happy :D
@emcio969 Thank you so muchπ
@daltonleavey Thanks for noticing the details! I am already working on power ups and a jump function as well.π
@the1 And Mr.Cheesy loves you back.π
@mantaraytv-games That really makes me happy too! Glad you likd that funny expressions. π§
hahaha i like this entry very much, it has a happy tone to it. Can't wait to see more features in the future, great drawing and good old platform fun. Wish there was a mobile version. If this was made in tne 90s, i bet you'd be rich today
my winner of the jam <3
First try and 1441 for my score, that was fun and cute at the same time, nice entry :)
Great job on the game! It had a very solid presentation with good art and music, the gameplay was fun and fit the them, and overall the game was extremely Gouda(please forgive the cheesy puns, I couldn't resist)!
Went all out on sticking to one theme. Took a bit to get used to his long hitbox but once I understood, I got a score of 4018. Good job!
@d1str4kt0r I am already working on the mobile version! Thank you so much for the feedback.π
@pixelcrustpunk You just win my heart! π
@siryakko Not bad at all! Thanks for playing and sharing your score!π
@john-snyder hahaha that Gouda joke got me good! Thank you!π§
@nillard Wnat such a high score? I have to go back and check my own now! I will make the hitbox smaller at the half of Mr. Cheesy. π€
Lol its just good, really nice game, i enjoyed the gameplay as much as the graphics, and the sounds and the music, they just fit perfectly. Very well done, as for me this seems like a proper game for mobiles for example, if polished a bit more, kills time really good. Good job! Keep it up!
The game is really beautiful and the idea is really nice !
The controls have a little lag, and more mechanics could be nice to keep the interest through the game, but it is a really nice entry and really polished !
Great and funny)
FUN ! music is good, theme is good, graphism are tastefull, easy play, and as French person, i'm very happy to play with cheese
Really funny idea, I laughed out loud when I realized what's going on. Nice one!
Awesome idea, awesome execution! As others have noted, the hitbox seems to be a bit bigger than expected. Everything else runs absolutely smoothly. The graphics are cute and fun and the music IS ABSOLUTELY THE BEST!! My highscore was somewhere around 2600. Very, very well done!
@teinree Thank you for the kind words! I am already working on the mobile version and it will be released before ludum dare ends.π€
@dodormeur Working on the mechanics to make them even better! A jump feature will be introduced as well! Thank you.π
@x-c Your feedback is much appreciated.π
@miradore hahaha sooo happy a French person like you loved Mr. Cheesy! Means so much to me.π§
@halflemonstudios Thank you so so much! More content is on it's way.π₯³
@purrseus True the hitbox will be half as big. That's a great highscore I am impressed.π
Amazing game. I have no complain literally. Nice job!
Very nice game, and quite amazing too considering you worked it on by yourself! I really love the music too, definitely spot on! Nicely done!
Fantastic game. Really well polished. Probably played too long XD but at least I got 2400 I think. Had lots of fun playing. Great entry.
really nice game! i could play it forever :smile:
the game feels really polished and the music and sound effects are great.
Really good entry with nice music and challenging gameplay! Well done! :clap_tone1:
@alkis Thank you so much about the great feedback! π
@ahistyap Thank you for appreciating me working alone! This means so much to me.π
@convg haha that's a really good score for sure! Thank you very much for the kind words.π
@linluk Awesome then stay tuned until I realease the final mobile version! You can play whanever you want!π
@stefan-jovanovic Glad you enjoyed it means a lot!π§
Really strong entry, well polished and very complete. A great time killer to pick up and play at any time! Well though through and animations and planning has really made it a great game! Great job!!!
awesome game :smile: love clever ideas like this, very well executed too!
Hahah that's some unique idea, executio is perfect. Music is super catchy and on spot, the graphics and animation are GRATE. That's one bad luck cheese right there. It'd been cool to see the blades hurt and slow down the rat so you can make some risky moves trying to hurt it and escape a little bit from it. Amazing entry!
@yeti-kid Your kind words made me so happy! It means so much to me. π
@kostasvs thank you so much appreciate the support!π
@webox hahaha Mr.Cheesy has really bad luck! What would you think if I told you that I am working on mousetraps that will push the mouse further away and you can jump over them!ππ§ Thank you so much for the great feedback!
Could we please get a WebGL build?
Je me suis fait "rat-rapΓ©" AHAH! (French people will get it) Nice game!
Great submission! I love this game!
Theme is fun, there is always affair between cheese and rat just like those old cartoons,music is nice band put a little bit of pressure on players which is niceeee, graphic is nice as well, but triggers is bigger than that you actually seen.
@docgeraud hahaha had to google translate this! Thank you so much!π§
@emicb Thank you so much for playing and your feedback!π€
@pomelouncia Much appreciated and yes ina new version I have already adjusted the triggers!π
A simple idea, but executed very well. The graphics were awesome and well drawn with some great pixel art. The music as well was super. I also perposefully went over the grinders some times XD cus the cheese's reaction and seeing a plate come under was hilarious to say the least XD. You have a good mobile game on your hands here. Nice job overall
The idea of playing as a cheese is peculiar and fun. The game feels nice and well polished. Good work!
Really fun game with sweet graphics and decent music! I felt that the graters diagonal angle helped add to the difficulty in a great way. Its nicely designed and well polished :D good job!
Scored 3229. Fun little game. I'm not sure if the controls are delayed or if the hitbox on the cheese is a little bigger than expected, as it did feel like I was hitting graters when it visually looked otherwise. Otherwise the game seems to run smooth. And the whole concept of it is quite funny. Nice job all around!
Very nice, polished game. This could be first level of something you could publish on the app store for sure. Art is great, music and sfx fit the theme.
Sometimes when taking a turn Mr. Cheesy would get grated, even though he wasn't really touching holes from the path he was previously at. Colliders could be a bit more forgiving :)
Cheers!
Very funny game and great work with music and graphics :) Well done!
This idea is really funny! I love it! Especially topping the grated cheese on pasta is hilarious. Also the music is catchy and cool. Great work!
@badpiggy haha glad you enjoyed being grated! A mobile version is already under production! π
@artyom-volkov Thanks a lot! Your feedback is much apprecuated!π
@curleyrach You are the first to mention the diagonal angle of the game! Thank you so much!π
@thecritterscove This sore is really high well done!About the hitbox you are right and I have made the changes in a new version of the game!π
@ryzy27 Made them more forgiving as other players saud the same! Thank you sor the great feedback! π
@naca Thank you very much for mentioning this!β
@notan-lemon haha seems like the pasta was the highlight of the game! This means so much to me!π
Nice, simple but polished game! Also love the cheese so kudos for that
muy buen juego, super divertido! y los grΓ‘ficos en pixel son geniales
Super funny and nice art.
You adapted a very simple gameplay by wrapping it in an original and well executed skin. Special mention for the spaghetti plate bellow, nice touch. There isn't much to add or criticize in this case as it's simple but polished :) Though it would have been nice if you added an html version. I guess that for a simple 2D game it would be fitting
Obviously made with love. Very polished, packaged well, and adorable on top of everything. The pasta dish is a wonderful touch and so were the seamless restarts.
I don't understand why this doesn't have a web build!
Man I really would love to play this game. It seems very fun. Any chance of a HTML or MacOs version?
@nosfer Thanks for liking Mr.Cheesy haha much appreciated !π§
@sirredo Hola Muchas gracias! π
@zaiuspanda Thank you for the great feedback!π
@adinimys Glad you appreciated the spaghetti haha! I will upload the HTML version today and I will continue working on leaving the Ludum Dare original entrt available for download!π
@cheesepencil Thank you haha your name is aswesome!π§ The web build (as a better version of the game will be available today)! Stay tuned!
@trigueiro HTML is going to be available today. It will be a better version of the game I continue working on! Next week I will also release a better version for mobile! π
Very fun game. Good runner, looks and sounds nice. I also included your game on my list https://wans24.itch.io/he-needs-healing/devlog/140983/what-ludum-dare-46-did-to-me
Well what else could I add, amazing job you did here pal. Humor, theme, graphics... well done ! Even if i'm not fan of endless game just suggesting to add more sutff like bonus, stage and character (basic to improve gametime). Nevermind 5 *
Simple, yet fun! I spent some time trying to lure the rat onto the grater spaces - but it didn't work out :laughing: Some more cheesy powerups would make it even more fun!
I met no bugs or strange behavior. Very impressive for a solo game!
Cute and fun game! I love the whole style around the cheese, and the music is very catchy. It's really nice to see such a finished and polished game within a Jam. Well done!
Great take on the endless runner genre. The difficulty increases at a constant rate, but the rate is a bit too slowly for my liking. My highscore was 3405 (first attempt).
Very nice entry! Am not always a fan of runners, but this one has a touch of humour and sprites that make it quite appealing. Only thing that might lack is more variety in the grater patterns, maybe also an increasing number of them as time passes.
@wans24 That is soooo awesome! Thankyou really much for having me on the list.π I feel really honored!π€
@randdir Thanks a lot for the amazing feedback! I am already working on an updated and better version for HTML and mobile devices!π₯³
@fabula-rasa Powerups as well as traps are under construction right now! I will have a new release very soon. Thanks for the amazing feedbackπ
@albertnez This mreally means a lot! And I am so glad you loved the game!π
@mika-la-grand That's a great score for sure! I will change the difficulty a bit and adjust the traps as well!π
@jmad Thanks for the kind words! You are right I need to have more patterns. They will be introduced with even more trap styles in the new verion of the game for HTML and Mobile.π§
Really funny little game! Love the sound effects, and the whole idea is just.. splendid. :D
Would be nice if you could add builds for other OS like Linux and Mac
My highscore 4433. What can I say: Simple concept, well executed. Would work great as a mobilegame.
Very nice idea, very good execution.
cheesy.png Like others have said, solid idea. Can't wait for you to expand. Nice touch with the youtube videos. Well polished game by way of menus, tutorials, links to social media, etc. That mouse was ready to capitalize on my every mistake and it added a lot of tension. The Perspective was surprisingly easy to grasp and the gameplay intuitive, love the spaghetti collecting the cheese when you take damage, nice touch. You have a good production quality all around, and a good social media presence. People could learn a lot from you, keep it up and I expect good things from your 'studio' I wish you all the best in your game development endeavors!
I enjoyed a lot the concept and the art this game. The gameplay is good too. I remembered an old windows's game about ski. Great !
It is a simple runner game but the idea of the cheese is just so much fun! The graphics and music are cool, I had fun trying your game, well done!
This game is so cool and very fun. I love the two characters and the music! hhh.PNG
@very-dark-lord Thank you very muchfor the excellent feedback! π€
@feingehacktes I will work on it since I have never released for MAC and don't actually know if there is something special needed!π
@kaappis Thanks a lot for the support! If you follow the itch.io page I will announce there the mobile release!π§
@galactic-chimp Thank you very much for the great feedback!π
@boboman That was so haert warming to read! It really made me so so happy. I appreciate your time and nice words. I am already working on an update that will be playable on browser as well as on mobile devices! ππ
@rodrigo-castro haha that ski game must have been great for sure! Thank you!π§
@solah I am so happy you had a great time playing with Mr. Cheesy!π
@monkeydvrus WoooW now that's a Highsore! Thats even diffivult for me haha really well done!π₯
Hey fun little concept! As a cheese lover I appreciated the humor and the details. Like the cheese skid marks and the hand coming up to collect the grated cheese (no cheese wasted)! After awhile it became a bit repetitive, so It would've been nice if there were a few new obstacles or surprises to encourage the player to keep playing rather than just high score. (Maybe like combos, or doing a different moves, or super speed or something). But understanding this a game jam, this has great bones that could be built upon :) - J
Great little game for the jam. Love the humor, especially the salad that collects cheese gratings! I did get bored quickly, maybe something else to collect while sliding might make it feel slightly better. - S
Your game is really polished! A simple concept but really well executed! Honestly this is almost release-ready. Add swipe-controls, make an Ad appear after each round and publish on the playstore. Done! I really liked it :)
@teamjs Always appreciate such awesome feedback from cheese lovers haha! You are right and I am already working on some new obstacles! (If you can suggets something feel free to mention it). This means so much! π§
@finnhax Thanks for the encouraging words! I thought about having left and right buttons on mobile and no swipe controls since more features will be added such as buttons that throw a mouse trap behind you! What do you think about that?ππ
@savvu I would probably do both. Swipe controls and buttons for left/right/trap :) Can't go wrong with that :P
Really liked it! Character looked a bit like spongebob to me
Good fun... I grew up playing games like this on pocket LCD games and the like. I got 3239 on my first play... I think it was a little too easy. I'd like to see either some levels, so there's a goal to reach, or for the game to get increasingly faster and more difficult. (I think it _may_ have been getting faster, but if so I think that needs to ramp up a bit quicker) Graphics and sound were great. Well done!
This is the bestest, cheesiest, game I've ever played. Had a real blast sliding down that infinite grater! My daughter loved it too, which I can assure you is high praise indeed! Awesome entry :raised_hands:
@finnhax I will try to implement this system today and hopefully I will release it soon!π
@willypa haha now that you say it you are right! Never thought of it before!π§
@garys Thank you! Your score is really high! I will increase the difficulty faster and I am also planning in introducing new obstcles and a mouse trap that you can throw behond you just like mario carts!
@oddsocks Thank you so so much for playing Mr.Cheesy together with your daughter! You can give her my thanks as well!π
The concept is really funny and clever, nice ! I loved the art style of your game, it is a well crafted pixel art !
Almost everything is excellent, except the collisions, indeed, I was a bit frustated, because sometimes I was hit on my cheese head, whereas I was sure that I dodged well. I think that it might due to the isometric view which prevented me to be accurate at 100%.
But, overall very nice work !
I love this game! Super polished and fun, challenges my nerves ha-ha. Great graphics and music, cool interpretation of the theme. Iβm not even sure that something needs to be changed in it, this is a full-fledged project. Great entry!
A nice concept that fits the theme! It felt polished and the visuals are consistent and nice, however I did feel a bit motion sick towards the end (I get that from time to time with some pixel games so that's nothing on you). I like the cheese pickups and the game had some good music. I'd like to see an updated version with more trap variety, such as knives maybe? But for the time given you made a brilliant game that felt very well polished. I'd love to see a mobile version !
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I think I did kind of good! The feeling when you go over the holes is incredibly awful :D (it's like experiencing the thing for real)
This was super clever entry! I really liked the gameplay and graphics. Also the devlog was entertaining!
Loved the music - it sounds like you used an authentic Yamaha YM2612 chip. Loved the lead sound, reminded me of many a hour playing on the megadrive.
If you pursue post-jam, I'd maybe round off the floating point for the scroll position, so the 'grater' slider is crisper, and maybe some animations of the mouse chowing down on the hapless Mr Cheesy.
The mouse overtook once I 'died' in the version I downloaded, which was a bit dissapointing.
Top marks for humour though, especially the pasta plate collecting the grated remains of Mr Cheesy. Brutal.
Lol, it's insane game and I loved it. The music is just amazing, graphics and animations match everything perfectly. I really liked the humour and enjoyed playing it. It very polished and it shows seasoned GameDev. Really, really good job.
Rafal from 4Boa Team
Definitely worthwhile to play! Simple and straightforward and I like that a lot. However, it also can be repetitive.
I think that one way to evolve the concept is have the rat go down with you in the cheese grater as in a race. Placing rat traps and other obstacles with different effects to stop the rat maybe would be interesting.
It is fun!
Awesome Entry! Just missed the hot plates and blowing torches to avoid getting melt, "adaptation" of the Rotary cheese grinders being used by the rats like motorcycles trampling over Mr.Cheese with their grinding wheels!
What a loveable avatar! He run for his lifewhile sliding and having fun! Also love the pasta plate that appears when you take hits. It is red so it reminded me of blood, which is fitting. Good job!
@edalbung @tom-stephenson @giulio-bottari Thank you so muchfor your awesome feedback! I have adjusted the hit box and added power ups as well (lucky boxes and a mousetrap). The game is now playable in the browser so you can easily test all he new things! π§π
@daria-toni Thank you so much for liking the game as it is! I have added new things in the updated WebGL version such as new backrounds, poweer ups and mousetraps! Fell free to check tyhem out! π
@jojopalambas hahaha so you better avoid being grated! That highscore is top well done and thank you!π
@sypdev Thank you very much for watching the Devlog and leaving a comment under my video! This is much appreciated!π₯³
@johnnysix Thank you very much for your kind words! I will definitely work on the game post game jam and add new features in the WebGL version I uploaded yesterday! π
@morriekken Glad you had a great time playing and that you liked that kind of humor haha! Thank you!π
@eduardogacn Thank you very very much!π€
@ivan-garcia-filho That's an insane idea having Mr. Cessy melt down haha! I definitie;y find a way to implement it soon! π₯
@jonathan-lorenz Neve thought about the red being blodd haha but yeah you are right now I see everything coming together! Thank you very very much for playing! π
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This is awesome. The music is so good! and the art is very cute. I love the mouse. Pretty fun and simple game! There is not much else to say haha I would have loved to be able to jump or maybe even jump between graters or like have a transition between levels where you do a dramatic jump from one grater to another. Anyway very cool thanks!
@peterfiftyfour Best Highscore I have seen, that's crazy! That idea of jumping from one grate to another is really dope and I will try to implement something like this..mayb before the LD ends! Thank you so much!β
An excellent game. Cute graphics, and a well-executed game mechanic. The graphics and audio felt very well polished, and the music does not feel too repetitive compared to a lot of other games. Well done - 5/5
@savvu Yay! Finally I can play it :smile: . Very funny I really enjoyed it very addicting, great graphics, good humor, music is fitting. No doubt, one of the best entries on this Ludum Dare Jam.
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I think I may have found a bug (or maybe it is a feature :wink: ) Sometimes the mouse stayed on the wrong lane as seen in the picture. I found I could somewhat force this if I quickly changed lanes repeatedly when I had clear path forcing the mouse to stay on different lane. We would only be back to the same lane as me if I went to the side lane that he is. For example, in the picture I share: if I keep on the top 2 lanes the mouse will never hit me. But If i go 2 times down then I will be back on the same lane.
Really liked the music on this one!
I really liked this. It's really fun, music and sfx fits very well, as well the game fits the theme. Good job here!
@noxbuds Thank you from the bottom of my heart! π
@trigueiro haha I knew somwone would call out that bug! (Nope not a feature, but it couldπ€£)! I have already found a solution to this and in the next update it should be fine! Before that the mouse could fall from the grater haha so it is an improvement. Thank you for the detailed feedback!π
@panagiotis-iatrou Thank you so much ΟίλΡ ΞΌΞΏΟ ΟΞ±ΞΉΟΞ΅ΟΞ―ΟΞΌΞ±ΟΞ±! π
@rodrigo-denubila this means a lot appreciate that! π
Nice entry! The graphics are cute, the sound is fitting and it is really fun to play. Congratulations!
Grate game! Had a lot of fun! Good job!
A perfect entry, great humor, graphics, and gameplay. Very well polished and extremely impressive this was done by a solo developer!
Great job of turning fairly simple mechanics into something really interesting. Great character work. Music and sound are great as well!
fun graphics, great sound thanks for the game.
I liked the game very much, such a great character and idea. I wish there were more secret powerups per time played and I dont know if I ever reached a point in the game when it gets faster or harder. Cheers!
Super simple, super fun! The music rounds up the whole experience. I really don't know what else to say... Really well done!
This game was super fun and very polished! The audio, visuals and sound effects all worked together to make a funny solid game that fit the theme well. I think I cannot say a bad thing about this game except it not being that original gameplay-wise. Other than that great job!! My girlfriend loves mr. Cheesy :)
@pedro-miranda Thank you very very much about your feedback! π€
@dankar So glad you enjoyed playing!π
@disperse Thank you very much for mentioning that I did it on my own! This is very much appreciated!π
@eran-haas I am so happy that this idea is well received! Thank you!π
@matt-greenbury And I have to thank you for playing!π₯
@23edsa Thank you for the feedback! I guess you played the browser version with the new Bonus Boxes! I desogned them that way in order to introduce over the next days even more power ups and not just the mouse trap! Stay tuned!π
@andidebob I really appreciate that thank you very very much!π§
@shakedimus I have to thank you and your girlfriend very very much! Mr. Cheesy loves you both too! π
Great stuff, really loved this. Cool idea, nice execution feels great. Only criticism I have is the collision is a little unforgiving on the back end but it's a minor thing. Great work!
@designernap Thank you for your kind words! Have yoy played the download version or the HTML? in the HTML the collision is a little bit improved!π
Great fun! Really enjoyed the concept and the execution of your game.
This game is really fun! I love the animations, and the sounds he makes. I would have liked the game a bit more if you didn't show the mouse eating the cheese, that upset me slightly; but overall it's really good!
Had fun playing this :smile:! The only thing I wanted to say is that I felt like the difficulty ramp was very subtle and perhaps a bit slow.. but right when I thought that I hit a few bad spots :sweat_smile: So no, best not to make that more difficult :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: Really well done, congrats on a great one-man job!
Wow great job! This is my favorite idea so far and very well executed to. I didn't find any issues at all really. I'd love to see this game expanded to add more variation. Its a great variation of the classic runner games. thanks for making this!
@minnka Appreciate that very much thank you!π
@karcode Sorry you didn't like Mr. Cheesy being eaten! In the new Update twith the mouse trap you can take you revenge by placing mouse traps! Thank you for th feeedback!π
@evert Thanks a lot! I was playing around with the difficulty a lot and it looks like it needs more adjustments!β
@1punnyguy44 This meas realy a lot and I have to thank you! I am definitely planning in udpating the game frequently and also port it to mobile with a lot of special extras!π₯
Awww yes! Thanks for the html version! This is a really funny game! The idea is simple and mindblowing! Additional respect for music. Awesome!
One of the most well-rounded entries I've seen in this jam so far. Hilarious and innovative idea *(humour++)*. Really addictive gameplay * (fun++)*. Fitting music *(++)*. And so on.
It's kinda strange, but somehow I couldn't find much to complain about this one, overall its just really solid. Great work!
I agree with most comments that the web version is very appreciated. I think now that it's a must have for Ludum Dare.
I like the game, the idea is good and the movement feels snappy. I only think that there isn't much to explore in your game. Perhaps a simple story or changing enemies. You've mentioned achievements and leaderboards, that would improve on the game.
Music and sound effects are perfect for this style. :musical_note: So are graphical assets. :crayon:
Good stuff! :slight_smile:
@alexey-kuzovkov Such feedback makes me very happy! I appreciate it very much!π
@justmars Sooo glad you liked everything abot Mr.Cheesy! I am very grateful for that! Stay tuned the the mobile release very soon!π
@sprotex Thank you so so much! I am so happy about your feedback and your interest in the game! Spoiler Alert: In the next vesion that will be available for Android one addition will be a damaged sprite for Mr.Cheesy when having under 50% of life. In addition to that every time you catch the mouse, a new and different coloured one will appear to chase you! Much more soon...π§π
Definitely an addictive game! It gets really fun once the speed starts ramping up! The art is good, the music is fun, and Mr. Cheesy is a funny character (he seems like a big nerd because of the sound effect, reminds me of Steve Urkle haha). I love the pasta plate that comes out whenever you hit a shredder. Good job!
Here's my score: cheese score.PNG
A lot of fun to play! I had a bit of trouble at the beginning to find all the important bits of information on the screen - I would move the powerup / trap icon somewhere next to the player or closer to the bottom right since that's where the player's eyes are going to always be. Really loved the background color changes, the game got faster just at the perfect rate, but subsequent plays are kinda slow at the start.
I think it's great the track pieces are preset and not absolutely random, to make the game more fair and the "skill" factor can be higher by learning the patterns. Changing the lane was sometimes a bit iffy around the holes, and I think I got the hit effect when just the tail-end (behind?) of the player was ever so slightly grazing the grater holes.
Music fits the game perfectly too, and I didn't notice anything odd in the sound effects which means they worked perfectly as well :) Nice and simple jam game!
Nice concept! The cheese's hitbox may feel a bit too "long" sometimes, but overall it's really fun, i like the idea of the mystery boxes giving you traps and stuff, and the health system really original!
Nice little game. Love your concept.
Not really too much gameplay, but the setting is very original.
Graphics and sound is also very good.
Keep up the good work.
@thebreakfast That's awesome your score is really high! Even I have a hard time reaching that haha! Well done and thank you! π€©
@hegemege I thought a lot about having the traps at random pisitions but finally I decided to have patterns! Thank you for noticing that! This gives me more room to create more patterns with different traps in the future (I implement them in the mobile release first)! As for tyhe trap power-up icon T guess you are right..especially when there will be more power-ups and you have to see what you got from the box! I will test other positions for it! Appreciate your well written feedback very very much. Thank you!π
@asfdfdfd Thank you very much for playing!π§
@kaisean-games Wait for the mobile update! A lot of extra gameplay and features will be available! Thanks a lotπ
The game is wonderful ! That's nice how an endless runner can be wrapped into a story of a cheese piece sliding on the grater (reminds also a guitar neck). A few thoughts occurred when I was sliding: whether the obstacles cause different damage and what's the way how these obstacles are generated - somehow I found myself sliding mostly on the left pane. It's great that you're continuing development and to see how much involved you're into the project !
Original and fun concept, and I thought your audio and art suited it really well. Solid gameplay too, with sharp movement and an intuitive goal. The collisions seemed a little off; sometimes the cheese would lose health even when I was sure I'd cleared the grater. The balance could have been a bit better too, as it started off very slow and easy, but even when the speed increased the difficulty didn't. Being instakilled by the mouse after hitting an obstacle twice in a row also seemed a little unfair given how easy it was to avoid obstacles. Awesome effort though, a bit of improvement and it'll be super addictive :)
The game was AWESOME! I loved it. The graphics were great. The game was one of my favorite games I have played so far. I loved the intuitiveness and game play mechanic though I have played a lot of games like this; non quite like this. The audio was pretty good, but I do not like that the background music does not persists between scene reloading(I am not actually sure if the game`s background music persisted on reload of the scene or not). Over all great job, and keep it up!
I LOVED the concept and the execution was mostly great! The hitbox seems to be a bit off and I frequently get confused with the directions because my right is the cheese's left and there's an angle that make it less obvious. Had fun playing it a couple times and got a 3000 something highscore.
I saw there's a new build with additions to gameplay (and maybe interaction with the mouse, which was a bit lacking) and I'm sure it will add to replayability, just wanted to rate and comment with only the jam version in mind.
It's obviously very innovative and the idea of a cheese slice sliding down a grater and risking being used on spagetthi is deliciously silly and fun. I hope it's sucessful in mobile!
I just loved it! Super cute! And the sound that cheese makes is very funny! A delicious experience
Super fun and addicting, and I love Mr. Cheesy's design! This is one of the highlights of this jam, and the level of polish and creativity stands out. I do feel like the cheesy chunks should of restored a little bit more health each, but that's a very minor issue in an otherwise amazing game.
Nice pixel art. The feedbacks are really funny.
@other-wb Thank you very much for the feedback! Currently I have 5 prefabs with grater tiles variations that I randomly spawn. I am wroking on adding more kind of obstacles like fire with even more variaitons! And yes the obstacles cause diferent damage according to theur size! I may have a damage indicator whenever you get grated! π€
@anuradha Much apprecyated feedback! Well yes in the new version that will also be available on mobile I have adjusted the difficulty and collision detection! With more obstacles that I am going to introduce it will be hopefully balanced! π₯³
@nathalia-hohl Thank you very very much for voting based on the Jam version! Indeed in this version the hitbox is a bit bigger than it should be! The new version is way better and improved as it also features power-ups! Your score is really high Well done and thank you for playing!π
@francisco-lucas Thank you very much for that nice words! I am sure you will love the mobile version a lot!π₯
@mental-inaction I thought about the same about the life! I may increase the amount you get or even introduce a new item for better healt restoration! Thanks a lot!π
@khaoz-fang haha thank you very much! So glad you liked the pixel art!β
Very fun simple game, with a great feel and amusing graphics. Could see this being really addictive. It could do with a tiny bit more variation or difficulty ramp-up. Once I got going I found I was able to avoid damage for a really long time, until it sped up quite a lot. Perhaps the speed could ramp up a bit earlier or there could be one more kind of challenge/obstacle to deal with? I liked that the hitbox was pretty brutal (most of my damage came from switching lanes too early rather than too late, and catching on a grater just behind me).
This game hooked my up from the start! Love the soundtrack :D
Well done! simple idea but well executed! Liked everything from the graphics to the sounds, but the controls sometimes seemed slow.. Anyway, well done!
Great job, I love the concept - cheese man, cheese grater, mouse; it all makes sense! Excellent pixel art, too. It would be nice to navigate the menu with the same controls as the game - the game doesn't use the mouse, but the menu requires it. Got a 3910 on my first go.
Loved the humor in this one, made me laugh. The gameplay was simple yet addictive - the visuals, music and sound effects were great. Nice job!
really really nice!!! god job!!!
very well executed and really fun to play. great job! I also watched your youtube video on how to make.. nice man!
my score is 3435 first try ! I will replay this later!
@hgcummings Thank you for the great feedback! I am already working on more variations of the grater and may introduce a jmo function!π
@tommy So glad to hear that! It really means so much to me!π
@taran-unraveler Apprecyate the feedback! I am so close in releasing the mobile version and the touch controls there are so much better and it feels awesome! Stay tuned for that!π§
@bmacintosh That's a nice idea about the menu! I will try to change it thank you for the feedback! Your Highscore is excellent!π
@mharring Thank you very very much for the kind words! Stay tuned for the mobile version where the addicition gets real with all the new stuff I have added! On the FB page I have listed in the description you can find everything! π₯³
@gameovermexico Much appreaciated! Thank you very much!π₯
1998 on first try! Not terrible not great :)
Fun game, well done. Awesome music!
Haha, I love this! Great idea, well executed, nice balance of difficulty, and the pasta when you get grated was hilarious, really nice job!
i love this game :). It's so fun and an online highscore would be great so i could compete against my friends. theoretically it would also be a good mobile game.
Pretty fun, but I found a bug. If you die on the same frame as moving left or right, the mouse can overshoot you and just run past you.
Awesome!
This is so darn great! And gruesome! Haha! I love it.
What else could I possibly add? How can you not love Mr. Cheesy?
Almost hit 4000 points! Gets really fast at the end...
Nice music track, is this VRC6 or something? The pitch bends are really great.
It's almost a complete finished game! All is perfect in this concept except that it's not really in the theme. The menu, the pixel art, the Level progression are very polished. And the idea to be a cheese of a giant cheese grater is very funny (The fat mouse behind you too) ^^ Congratulation. It had a lot of fun to play it.
@marcusnystrand I am sure you can do better haha! Thank you for playing!π
@darkfrost Thank you for appreciating the pasta! In the next update there will be a new food available as well as other amazing features and a mobile release!π
@turritom You are totally right! I am tryong to have an online Highscore Leaderboard for itch.io and the mobile release will be announced in the next couple of days on the official Mr. Cheesy Facebook page: You can find it here: https://www.facebook.com/mrcheesy π§
@dps2004 Thank you for mentioning the bug! I looked into it and in the ext update it should be fixed! π
@bkmld Thank you very very much!π
@starerik Haha so glad you liked it a lot! Thanks!π₯
@nick-biglin That's awesme to hear! Mr. Cheesy loves you back!π
@ddrkirbyisq That Highscore is for sure one of the greatest here! Really well done!π
@matootsy Thank you for the very kind words! You will love the next update and the mobile release for sure! If you managed to keep Mr. Cheesy alive from being grated and eaten from the mouse it must be in the theme haha! π§
Very nice game! I really enjoyed it and it caught my eye while I was about to close my tab and I am glad it did. Nice work!
The pasta plate made me really laugh, very funny! The whole game has a really nice old school vibe, like a NES game soundtrack wise, very cool. I also like that you went with that perspective, not straight up to down or left to right, refreshing. Of course the game itself is also fun :D
Simple, straight forward and very easy to pick up and play. I enjoyed it a lot though would be nice to have a bit more variation of different challenges to face along the course to give it a bit more replayability. The minor bug I was going to mention has already been picked up so don't need to comment on that.
@asixjin Glad Mr. Cheesy could make you stay for a coupe of minutes π Thank you!
@rongo-matane Thanks for noticing the perspective! It was not only a visual choice but a functional as well since for the movement I only unse physics (gravity + friction materials + rigidbody2D)! I mention all of the development process in the devlog videoπ
@kjscott Thank you for the feedback! A lot of variations will be available in the mobile version with new traps and power-ups! The minor bug is fixed!π
Really nice. Add some level progression and maybe the odd extra gameplay element and you suddenly have a full game, incredible effort for a Jam!
I didnt manage to cross 1800 But it is a fun game to play. I enjoyes Love the animation. Well done Keep it Up. :v:
Cool little game!
i get 2800 score points and so glad this game, very fun!
I think this may be dictionary definition of what should a jam game look like Simple yet addictive nice tunes at background and last but not least a little humour great work!
Simple concept and funny graphics. Quite well executed. Nice entry!
OH so much comment .. I did 3495 ;) great game ;)
Amwesome game. It really reminds me of Subway Surfers.
Very cute little game! Well done overall!
Lovely graphics, and I love the food suddenly appearing :)
Lovely take on the runner formula, with tons of expanding oppoturnities
@personalurban Thank you for the advice! All this features and more are available in the Mobile Version!π
@lazzydev72 Thanks a lot! I am sure you can do better!π
@beforeeternity @flynn @rewzu @hadesfury Thank you very much guys for the awesome feedback!π§
@nothoughts That's a decend score my friend! Thanks for playing!π
@mlkvr Your feedback is much appreciated thank you! I am sure you will love the mobile version with all the added features!π
@mineiwik It's better than Subway Surfers! Thank you bro!π
@pietptr In the next update I will add some new food to get grated on!π§
@naamed True I can add soo many new stuff in this game and I definitely will! The mobile version already has a lot of updates!π
Really good game! Loved that the cheese had glasses hahahaha if it had more lines sometimes it would be even more awesome! Only problem for me was dying on top of a hole, it was funny at first because he kept screaching but it became annoying after XD
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Funny game, pretty good runner. The gameplay isn't too diverse, you know, but, oh well, it's a runner after all. But I'd like to see more weapons and some power ups or pick-up skills like dashing or else. Not a big fan of that pixel art, there are a lot of things to fix like banding and a lineart but you made all that in solo so I do not care too much about these minor mistakes. I liked the music a lot, I like chiptune and your soundtrack is quite a good one. I'd love to see further updates, keep up~!
High level execution of a simple concept to produce this fun game!
Congratulations for making this game ! This game is stunning... Animations are awesome, the mouse is so cute :mouse: Very good first entry !
I have no words all i can sya is an amazing game xD I am looking forward to see more contents in the future :D
The mousetrap didn't seem to do too much, maybe needs 1 more power-up or 1 more twist to the mechanics, still fun playful idea executed solidly.
such a nice endless runner idea!
Wasn't a fan of the main menu, but it is actually good in graphics, audio and gameplay. Well done
Great game!
I'm not reading over everyone's responses so some of this stuff may be repeated:
- Really good job with graphics! I really liked the color changing background; I felt that it showed off your attention to detail. One thing I might recommend, though, is some sort of tween or interframe between your motions and the mouse's motions. While I think that it's necessary from a gameplay perspective for motion to be instantaneous in an infinite runner, I think it would vastly improve the feel of the game. I noticed you made the cheese leave a skid mark whenever it moved to another column, but I think that a constant trail of cheese behind the player would suffice for making the transitions seem smoother.
- I didn't have much problem with the controls or how the game felt. It all felt pretty responsive when paired with the audio and visual effects. Good job!
- Some of the audio didn't really gel with the background music in my opinion. It seemed like there were two different styles, one of which was 8-bit and the other which seemed fragmented from it with the more realistic sound effects you used. If you found some way to merge the two I would've given you a full 5 stars for audio.
- More powerups!
Nice job with your entry!
@zebraatomica Thanks for the feedback! I will look into that when dying on top of a grater!π§
@thedancingyouth Thank you very very much! A lot of new updates, power-ups and variations are already available in the mobile version! Feel free to check it out!π€©
@hlo-world This meas very much appreciate that!π
@wakobu @kusaihana Love how you have a cat as a profile picture and mention the mouse!π€£ Thank you!
@r3d3r Thanks a lot! More content is already available on Android! Feel free to give it a try!π€
@joe40001 Now the mousetrap gives you more points, a new mouse appears and you a new power-up is also available! All of this in the mobile version!π
@franciszek-pyrc Thanks for the feedback! Appreciate that!π
@acr515 Thank you for the detailed feedback! It means a lot and I appreciate your time! * A trail is already there and I thought maybe leaving a skid mark could make the movement even more exciting! As for the mouse it currently has a slower response to the movement of Mr.Cheese to increase the feeling of being actually followed. * Glad the controls are smooth! * That's right I will play a little bit more in Audacity haha! * More Power-Ups, Traps, just 2 lines of the grater at some point and different coloured mice all available on Android!
Brilliant game! I don't think I've seen a runner this Ludum Dare, but it fits the theme really well! The cheese and mouse theme is implemented well throughout and makes this game unique! I found it entertaining, fun, and liked the combination of graphics and audio (as well as them individually). The game feel is quite good too! Some improvements could involve increased visual diversity and more powerups to spice things up. I know you've already got to work on a lot of that for your mobile version so that's great! Great game, congratulations!
Well done on your Google Play Store publication! All the best!
Wow this is great, and impressive that it's a solo entry! Love the concept, humor, artwork, and music. Nice work
An fun and silly game I enjoyed playing :) The idea is great haha, the graphics are cute and the animation sprites look nice :) Also the spagetthi scenes, made me laugh lol. I can magine this to be a succesful mobile game (I played the HTML Version, didn't experiecne any bugs) However, I would try to add a lot more features to keep the game exciting :) like maybe add a jump that you have to recharge to use it or something like that :) Good job on finsihing your game and best of luck for future development :D
Here is the VOD of me playing your game on stream: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JhXLQHA-5Z4
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This is a great game. It's fun, the art is great and there is a lot of polish. I could see this as a fun mobile game! Great entry!
A very simple yet very well executed game, the art and sounds created a nice lil mood, and the gameplay was pretty smooth. One detail I like is how the screen slightly shifts when you change lanes, which in my opinion really adds to the feel of the game.
The only two things I can nitpick on for me was that the game was a little easy, and there are too few powerups in the web version, although I see the latter was fixed in the mobile version.
All in all, i'd say it's a simple yet good entry.
The art, The background sound, the in-game sound, the polishing, everything was superb! And yes agreeing with @darylsteak the web version had only one powerup(as far as I encountered) and I haven't played the android version yet(which I will)
Some ideas to develop on for android: - Add some more power-ups with rarity of finding those powerups(mouse trap: found commonly, Super slow mode: rare and many more) - Add moving objects such as other mice running around the screen or a human hand cleaning the lanes
Otherwise it was a fabulous entry!