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| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | ||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2022 | 51 | Every 10 seconds | Rhythm of the World | jam | 3.00 | 3.50 | 4.50 | 5.00 | 3.50 | 4.00 | 3.50 | ||||
| 2021 | 49 | Unstable | 👥 | Frosty Wobble | jam | 992 | 3.34 | 3.37 | 2.63 | 2.54 | 3.48 | 3.57 | |||
| 2021 | 48 | Deeper and deeper | DICE - Demolition Into the Core of the Earth | compo | 789 | 2.91 | 2.64 | 2.93 | 3.67 | 3.45 | 3.25 | 2.34 | 2.50 | ||
| 2020 | 47 | Stuck in a loop | League of Ultranormal Detectives | compo | 61 | 3.93 | 3.61 | 3.76 | 3.54 | 3.67 | 4.19 | 4.31 |
Ghuyajil leaves an average of 15.2 feedback comments each event.
It worked fine, but I would have liked a bit more feel of logic why shots sometimes fired and sometimes they would not. And I don't want to repeat too much but I missed a lot of audio indeed. Other than that, well done all by yourself of course!
It was fun, I just would have loved to have more smooth movement. Good job all by yourself!
I couldn't really get through the tutorial with the jar version, the window scales really weirdly, so I had to go off the video mostly. A bit repetitive, and it's not completely clear what the win condition was. Other than that, great job and a complete game!
The download link isn't working right now... - Ah, your domain is blacklisted by my antimalware protection. I'll bypass it for this but might be good to know (NETGEAR Armor denied access to this potentially harmful website)
Nicely done, too bad the robot doesn't rotate going on ramps but other than that nice polish as well.
Agree with the others before me that the start was a bit slow, especially level 3 took forever; I think a gradual increase in the speed of the carts might feel better; also maybe just leave the speed up in level 5, it's a lot but the slowness feels like a step back. Hard to balance, but nicely executed - only thing is I don't really feel the theme in there but that's minor.
Good work for your first jam, though some indication of where the checkpoints are would be nice; it's a bit difficult ;) Btw @martin183 you can fire bullets with Ctrl.
Funny take on modern times, too bad there isn't a high score; or maybe that's the whole point, that you can't see the actual number? ;)
Hey, the Mac version doesn't work for me... with or without giving permission to open, It tells me it's damaged.
Great stuff! I hope you get that one more rating that you need! Loved the vibe, the music and the shader.
Agree with the people before, I need a purpose... But it is a nice start to something.
Nicely done! I dont know what to say that has not been said already... Looks good, I personally think the small voxels are a nice style!
Nice little game, I do not think I have more feedback to add to what others have already said ;)
Totally agree with LRVStudios up here. Nice to read its a family project!
Nice work! Too bad the Bandots dont really seem to scale along (enough?), I could one shot them at a certain point...
Yup, I figured it out too, but they are too hard ;)
It works! Once you see the holes, the trance really gets you! Very nice! Screen Shot 2021-04-26 at 10.19.00.png
There's nothing I can play in the output.zip - and if I try running the html in the export folder from Github, it needs a web server (cross origin requests). Maybe you can put it on itch.io? Otherwise please put a Windows (and possibly Mac) build in there. I'll come back if you reply to let me know it's fixed!
Can't play, there's a javascript error loading the Unity framework... I'll come back if you let me know when it's fixed!
Nicely done! Is there an end, though? I just stopped at a certain point because it also didn't seem to be getting harder over time.
Interesting idea, I like the way the sound gets hypnotic very quickly. I think the most important issue here is that the player lacks agency: there is not much you have influence over, and because the enemies don't really chase you there also isn't a lot of skill involved. You could definitely change or add a few things and it would be a very nice game to play as well - I feel some more puzzle elements could also help. But all in all a neat job for compo.
Nice idea, feels like the movement could be a bit more polished by simply going all the way up to the cursor. A little bit more story would have also been nice, I don't really know why I'm doing this or what those enemies are. But it works without issues, and the challenge feels balanced enough.
Nice little game! The jam version worked fine at my end, no issues. Well done!
Nice little game, too bad there was no music... and hard to see where exactly the pickups were indeed. Good entry, especially for your first jam!
That was nice, the gravity shift thing done in a proper way that allows for interesting puzzles; you could take this way further by working on it more. If I have to give some feedback to improve/continue with this, the music was indeed too short, therefore repetitive. Also some more sound would help as well. But well done.
It looks promising, definitely not perfect but I don't need to repeat what others have said above. Good that you're getting into gamedev this way; you do indeed get a lot of good testers who actually give feedback here. I hope it encourages you to keep improving!
By the way, if the ratings will not very high, you should see that as a challenge to get better and keep going, and improve them in 6 months ;)
Nicely done, well animated and no issues, except that the last level uses what feels like an exploit to me, being able to double jump because you hit the ceiling...? Other than that, very decent entry!
Damn that was something... I was just going through my list of to play games and didn't really stop to think about the meaning of the title and the colors being gone, so I didn't see the bit with the grave coming: made me cry a little. Well done!
(By the way, my first try I was looking around and then went backwards instead of forward, which lead to me falling off the edge of the world. Maybe just putting up an invisible wall at the start so that you go in the right direction would be good enough.)
Interesting concept, the music fits well. It felt like you could have gone a bit more into puzzles by adding a few more items - you'd immediately have a much longer experience from everything you already have now. The dots were confusing to me as well; I didn't have an issue with the hold buttons controls, but it seems like a good idea to look into that for accessibility indeed.
I agree with what people have said above. Nice job for Compo, looks good, but the camera actually made me a bit dizzy. Theme is in there as well, I don't mind using it as a brainstorm tool more than it perfectly fitting into every core aspect of the game...
Whoa that was hard... Is there a finish, or does it just keep going forever?
This is very well done! Would be even nicer if you would have saved the state of the game to PlayerPrefs and make it impossible to play again unless you removed them - but that might be a bit too bold/risky I guess ;)
Nicely done, too bad there weren't more missions or targets in between the start and finish... But it looks very nice!
Nice writing, not sure if I was supposed to see more artwork but I only stayed at the train tracks after the intro. Also had the 4K problem: little tip, you might want to set the Canvas Scaler to Scale with Screen Size > Expand next time.
Nicely done; could have benefited from a few more rules and objectives, but it looks great!
Nice idea, mouse was a bit annoying indeed but with a gaming mouse not super bad. Last puzzle was well thought out :)
Nice way of turning branching storytelling into 'looping storytelling'!
Indeed a lot of levels! Good puzzling time :) I did play this game before though - or something very very similar.
Very nicely done! Great graphics, good enough soundtrack, very decent puzzles.
Nicely done! But... 42758? Sure there's no cheat code?
Nice job! But... Why can't I shoot the guitar played with the tranquilizer gun? The scene seems to be set up that way... Oh and I didn't really find a loop... Lots of 'interesting' interactions though. Nudge me in the right direction?
Made it! Level 9 was really hard... Got 20 points.
I agree with many comments above, it works nicely, looks nice, good fun!
So fun to see how many people mention the 'enemy AI' and apparently don't notice that they're following your previous path... Entertaining!
Just two words for you: Nice trip 😆
I love the way you used the tapes as keys, just curious if there is actually a way to break the loop, cause I could only open those 4 doors... should I keep looking, or is that the end? (Kind of tricky to judge for a lot of entries when they end, because of the theme 🤷)
Very nice idea and level of polish! I agree that it becomes repetitive, but I also think that is the whole idea of this being a nightmare so it fits fine! Too bad there's no audio, that could have set the mood...
Would like to have seen more as well indeed, but a great spin on tower defense given the theme. Interesting to think what you could build out from this with some more types and balancing!
Very nice job! All fits together nicely and seems like a decent design. Just enough humor for an LD game as well.
I actually didn't have trouble understanding what to do (rtfm haha) - nice mechanics, very original - I love it when simple mechanics turn out to be so emergent 😄 Pacing was the main issue, maybe changing the train speed faster would be a nice improvement. Or upping the rate of new materials (or adding more as the track grows).
Nicely worked out, a bit literal on the theme but that's probably everywhere ;) Could have done with a hint on how to change the time, but other than that solid.
Nice little idea, I didn't find a cactus and something unexpectable though... Should I have kept playing? (I had seen the same things 5 times already so tried going left but that whas it.
Nicely done, the puzzles are well thought out and it's well polished! Did feel like it made a bit of a jump in difficulty in 5, but that might just be me ;)
LD51 — Every 10 seconds (1)
Red and Black's Discommunicative Communication by chitoyuu 2022-10-04T08:34:53Z ♥ 1
Nice job, but indeed confusing; I didn't really get what I was doing and how the conversation related to the cards played most of the time... Maybe I should try again? Anyway, decent for Compo!