Very nice game! Played this game a few times, but still wasn't able to win. Is it even possible?
I really like the concept, but I think you needed a bit more time. A few more diverse / personalised small talk options would have been nice. On one occasion two cats died in one night...
It's also irritating that the cops and cabs don't show up, unless the game lets you. One night Amy (If I got the name right) was telling me she was under police protection and to call the police if I knew anything, but nothing happened. Also telling the kid to get out didn't really seem to work
Then there are some minor bugs, like not being able to restart the game, the barrel on the bottom being below the bench, or there being tiny white outlines around the objects, some small spelling mistakes (I think one time you wrote in instead of on). One night I didn't have any customers at all, which was also a bit annoying.
I quite like the vagueness of the you got killed game over statements outside of the bar, as it lets you play the game again, and try to figure out what you missed. However the one were you are just in the bar with (no spoilers) that person and get killed should maybe have a bit more of an explanation, since it was a bit out of the blue in my opinion...
Apart from that, it is a really nice, visually stunning game with an interesting story.