You Have One Job by LeReveur 2020-04-30T17:48:38Z
Hi! Nice game! I like the "simon says" mechanic but I miss some background music loop to keep the atmosfere and some more animations for the "experiment" thing. But great job!! Congratulations :D
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| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Hu | Mo | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2020 | 46 | Keep it alive | Mind Defender | jam | 1991 | 3.13 | 2.92 | 2.69 | 3.50 | 3.07 | 3.19 |
Hi! Nice game! I like the "simon says" mechanic but I miss some background music loop to keep the atmosfere and some more animations for the "experiment" thing. But great job!! Congratulations :D
I really appreciated the effor in making the autoadjustable keyboard to trigger the different actions and the quite IT humor. However it's quite inbalanced since if you keep pressing your canon in the middle of the screen you can go on for a little long time and get three levels just by keep pressing a button. Maybe a cooldown sistem will help in this aspect.
Congratulations for your entry!
Hi!!!Very nice game!! I love the aestetic and the music notation theme <3 I would like some in-game tutorial that hints you where to go next or that introduces to the narrative, but overall it a GREAT entry :D Congrats!
Good job!! I like the aestetic of you game and I found the hint of the "attack zone" very useful.
Really nice game!! I got sticky playing :) It was quite difficult to see the mouse hints at the very beggining and some targets in the level. Overall a really good game to be done in a gamejam!
Hi! I really like the game I stay sticky the whole game. The only con I found it's that i was annoying to switch between the mouse and keyboard for continuing the dialogue. But it's a great entry. Congratulations
Nice tower d3efense, I really like the concept of having a hero but I missed a tutorial that explains you how to put the traps and some hint to keep an eye in the timer. Congratulations for your entry :D
Nice work with the tutorial and the simple mechanics. About the graphics The colors of the tentacles hurted a little bit my eyes, but I'll recover :P overall is a well size game for a game jam. Congratulations!
Hi! I like the concept behind this game, but I think there are some points of improvement: - Missing audio loop for creating atmosfere. - The woman used as canvas should have inner clother otherwise it could be confused with an adult game. Also really like the screen shake, you use to give the effect of shaky hands. Congratulations for your work!
Hi! It's a really good entry, relaxing but I miss something like fade out of te narrative text with the time so you don't keep a huge "I stroke the flame...." several times at the right. good job! Congratulations!!
Hi!! I really like the game, I would like it work online too but the button didn't respond to me. Anyway I had fun. Congratulations!
Nice job!! It's the game with the looongest gameplay I have rated.
I love the graphics it's soooo magical :D The only points to improve i see it's the readability of the letters (the first one has a font that is hard to read), some in-game tutorial not only researching in the book. And also if researching in the book stops the time would be a great help! Congrats for this amazing entry!
I really liked the concept of the game!!! Good job!!
Yey!! Another Gamejolt entnry :D I like the ambientation and the level design was good enoguh to guide the player. congratulations!
I really liked the story !! I prefer the games with a in-game tutorial or some intro that catchs you in te story. But it's a really good game. Congratulations
Thank you for the tip @pilarius
Thanks for the feedback @eva I'll work to improve after the rate phase and your feedback it's really welcome!
@louis-denizet I'll work on the game after the Rate phase. Follow me on gamejolt or in Twitter (@LauraLaureus) to keep track of the game!
Thank you @notexplosive ! I'll fix it as soon as the rate phase is over :D
Hi great game! I love the tower defense theme but I really had some troubles with the trayectory. And I appreciated the tutorial, many games doesn't have one. Congratulations for your work.
Nice game! However I feel the level design should be quite rethinked in order to invite the player to find the stairs and get easily to the top of the towers. However the game has a in-game tutorial that is a feature that a lot of entries don't have. Congratulations for your job!
Hi!! Great job!! I like the game :D I would like it has a background music loop but I think it's the only con it has. Congratulations for your job!
Really nice game! I love the graphics but it cost me like 3 times to understood the goal of the game. However REALLY NICE JOB!
Really nice game, well sized for a game jam!! I actually love the game and the character design!
Hi!! Really a good game for the first time you use godot! I really like the "slide" effect of the character however I feel the animation was really slow when walking. I found the bug when you grab the egg looking to the left and you try to move to the right. the egg doesn't keep in you arms so definetively I keep loosing one time and other. But It's a good game!! Congratulations.
Nice game but the controls are too difficult to use! it's also quite difficult to say in wich point you can use every "interaction" maybe adding some carpets in the floor will help and a in-game tutorial serving the first customer will also ease the game experience. But good job with this entry!
I like the game but it was too short. Is it base on the goose game, isn't it? Congratulations!
Nice game! It reminds me the game I made for my first game jam. I liked the radial axe feature but I would add some in-game tutorial explaining the generator.
I liked the concept to scort back the princess but i didn't understand why I shouldn't kill the enemies. But it's a nicely done game! Good job!
HI!! Nice game! I miss some audio background howevers it's a great entry for the jam. Good job congratulations!
Nice game! I got a quite annoyed because have to make an extra click to start the level after I finish the previous one, I prefer a count down but It's a great game. Good job!
curious concepta haha. I missed some in-game tutoral to explain the controls but it's a really nice game with a great work in the audio side (I really love the sound when the spider is moving). Nice work. Congratulations.
Hi! I missed a loop background music that engages into the story. I also agree that some UI elements would help to keep track of the relation ship and the status of the room.
I see you put a lot of effort into the narrative, leaving the art quite apart. For next jams, I advice you to spent a couple of hours gathering art from opengameart, itch.io resources and other pages of free resources.
But It's a good concept of game. Congratulations.
Good job!! I like tower defense style, however I would like a better lighting positioning, it was so dark in a side of the table and enough light in the oposite. I miss also some work on music, I recommend to search for a background music in freesound for the gamejams. But a great entry. Congratulations!
Nice game!! I like the concept. I dounf weird to use x instead of space but it works :D Congratulations for your entry.
I like the idea of an ecosystem simulator, but I add some hints and/or tutorial explaining what are the elements in the scene and the goal of the game. But Good job ¡Congratulations!
Hi!! Yey!! Another tower defense game, I like the building cooldown but it feel quite weird that your character moves smoothly in a pixel-squared world. I think that it was pretty cool by the way. congratulations!
I like the experience,but as mentioned before, make a hint of how to change the "room" would be well. It's a really really good job. Congratulations!
Good job for your first entry alone! I advice you for the next time to check in places like opengameart, itch.io for graphics and check that the result is not a mix of styles! In the sound side, I like the background loop it's catchy! However the volume of the sound when you are caught ruins the game experience. I advice you to make a "pre-release" before submitting and share with friends and family, they would catch these little mistakes before submitting. Overall good job!
Nice game !! I enjoyed it :D Maybe quite too long for me but it's ok! Congratulations for your entry!
Hi! Nice game! I really need a in-game tutorial to play this game, remind that in a game-jam with rating like this it's quite tedious to play a a game, don't understand have to roll back to the instructions, it's better to have a tutorial. However I notice all the effor tin this game. Congratulations :)
Hi it's a good idea, however i really miss a tutorial in how to get the party alive :/ I see the icons but i doon't know how to help the them, and pressing E just make me dancing. But I like the aestetic, good job!!
Nice idea, I missed some audio and sound effect but Congratulations on your entry!
It's a good concept but I think that with a better UI layout would be better since having the stats separately from the characters makes a redundant information displayed in the game. Also It would be nice to have a in-game tutorial to introduce the controls, I have to guess how to perform the spell on the characters. But it's a good entry! Nice job.
Hi! Nice good entry! I likes the art graphics and the music, however I have to look in the comments in order to get help for axe the trees, so maybe a tutorial was needed. But It's a really good entry! Good Job!
Nice RPG, But it took me a lot to discover how to exit the initial city, maybe some tutotrial at the begginig should be nice. Congratulations for your entry!
Hi!! Good job with this entry!! I miss an in-game tutorial that explains the blocks. But really like the graphic style. Congratulations!
Nice concept!!! I miss a tutorial that explains you the elements in the game. Send my encoragement to your daughter to become an artist ;) It's heartmoving a collab between father and daughter. Congratulations!
Nice game! I liked the idea and the graphics are curious :) The "battle" dinamic in the computer was fantastic. I miss a audio loop to keep the atmosfere but overall it's a really good entry. Congratulations.
I really liked the game the only thing I didn't understand very well is how to protect the flame with the rest of the team :) But the music made really epic this game. Congratulations :D
I really like the concept of this game, it's amazing!! I cannot credit that a team with only two people can achieve this amazing game. Congratulations!
Nice concept but I think I miss something to have fun. I think it's due the slowliness of the characters , maybe a speed up of the main character will help. And maybe a tutorial to teach the craft system and the available resources would help to play the game so hintless. As possitive point I really appreciate the warning message. Good job! It's a quite difficult game to be done within a jam time. Congratulations
Hi! Good job for your first game jam!!! I liked the concept but It's quite difficult to control the character. Also Take care the contract between the animated character with the black outline and the rest of the enviroment that hasn't this outline. It feels like two artist working on their own. However, good job, congratulations.
Really nice work! I love the art but I missed some in-game tutorial that explains the controls and the UI elements, it's quite difficutl to play without these knowledge. But good game ! Congratulations.
Hi!! Good job with your first gamejam entry!! For the next time I advice you to add some background loop music and to play the game in order to do a level design that goes from easy to difficult level. In this case I didn't go to far since the platforms blocked my jumping. However, I would like to congratulate for your first entry :)
Nice game I love the color palette and the music!
Good job with the in-game tutorials! It's a feature that most of the gamejam games miss or leave to the end and it's really important. I really love thea nimations of the main character and the movement of both characters. The only con for this game, it's that I miss a background loop music to get caught with the game. But the steps and the jump sounds where done nicely. Congratulations for this entry!
Hi! I'm more fan of in-game tutorial, rather than the wall of text with the instructions and the controls. Also, It's quite awrkward that the player isn't looking in the direction that he/she is moving. In the audio side it's very completed with the bits sounds and the atmosferic loop. Nice entry!
I like the concept, but I miss some sort of tutorial that hints me I can move things like the boxes in the first level and a sound when I activate the buttons or for the arrows moving. Despite of this It's a really good entry. Congratulations.
Hi!! I have fun with this game :D Nice intro and nice tutorial (those features are usually missing in the ldjam games) So my congratulations!
Nice game! I think that the gameplay it's really consistent but the game loses in graphic quality since the background (what represent the floor in this top-down perspective ) it's quite bigger and contrast a lot with the maze elements. However good job!
Nice game! I miss a background audio loop and a in-game tutorial that explains how to control the mouse but it's really well done game :D Congratulations
I agree with @majadroid the game it's hard with the graphics and audio side are pretty cool. Congratulations for your entry.
I like the game!!! I miss a tutorial in-game to explain the mechanics but it's a great entry, congratulations!
Hi!! Nice game! I like the mechanicss and the inn-game tutorial was great. A lot of gamejam entries miss the tutorial. The little con Ifound it's the font of the tutorial, it was difficult to read! But Great game Congratulations!
Good game but I continuosly miss time to save the earth waiting for the camera to focus the character. But overall it's a really good entry :)
Hi! Great job with this entry! I like t he graphics, but I need more intro to the story. As advice for the future do not set the action key in the keyboard in the control, use E or F instead, it's quite weird and the browser was asking me to save bookmarks lol. Congratulations for your entry :D
I like the idea but I miss a bar telling you the energy (or whatever parameter you use as criteria to end the game) also some tweening to help you to highlight the antennas from the background. However I would like to congratulate for your first game :)