fictions 2020-04-20 09:15
KAWAII! Amazing graphic novel, with lots of inspiration of japanese culture. I loved it :heart:
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD46 → Corporate Slave Rabbit
By joshuarabbit
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 385 | 3.57 | 22 | |
| Fun | 588 | 3.20 | 22 | |
| Innovation | 573 | 3.22 | 22 | |
| Theme | 205 | 4.00 | 22 | |
| Graphics | 246 | 3.82 | 22 | |
| Audio | 288 | 3.42 | 21 | |
| Humor | 150 | 3.57 | 22 | |
| Mood | 149 | 3.72 | 22 |
KAWAII! Amazing graphic novel, with lots of inspiration of japanese culture. I loved it :heart:
My screen is too small ... i can't read text :/ So i'm not able to give you any rating ... Fix that to scale on screen and i'll rate your novel
Really cool, I appreciate the story and the game play It's an interesting using of the theme, and it's original Story telling and graphics are really nice ! Great Job !
Cute graphics and the story carries a deep meaning. I think it is cool that there are multiple endings. Even for a small game it has replayability ^^
@kittennation Sorry for causing inconvenience and I updated the Html version on the itch. Thank you for pointing out this problems!
@joshuarabbit it's okay i was able to find the 3 ends of your "game" ! It's fresh and different, but i like it ! For the gameplay ... erf xD Is it an autobiographic game/novel ? I think you can make a full visual novel with more time
Good job ! and continue ! I hope you'll be present for the next Jam (and mister Rabbit too)
Cool little game, very short but still an interesting piece of 'interactive' fiction. Graphics are well done, and I thought you did a good job with the voice overs - kudos!
Very interesting entry indeed. The sound production is an admirable effort. The game is small and short but it can be easily expanded and enriched. Good job.
My first readthrough I managed to die within about 30 seconds. Poor rabbit. Love the art style! Reminds me of that paper cut-out animation style.
what a great concept. I wish you could add more "levels". But I know, that would hurt the dayjob ;)
It gives off an interesing vibe and really makes you think. I hope you will continue it some day!
i like the idea of black and white represent death in your soul. The graphics are beautiful.
Interesting game with a message that I find naive and self-defeating. Seems autobiographical. I liked the sound design, and the graphics are ok. Suggestion: after asking the player if they would rather sleep or draw, put "sleep" and "draw" as possible answers, not "yes" or "no", because the player is making a choice between two options, not answering a yes or no question (e.g. "do you want apples or pears?" will be answered with either of those fruits, not with a yes/no).
This Game was fun and hilarious. Loves the anime style voice acting and played through all three endings. Keep it up
I love the take on the theme! Cool game, and the artwork was cute.
Love the art style combining the photos and hand drawn
The sound FX are great xD, the game is pretty simple, but the message is powerful, great job, perhaps adding a bit more complexity in the mini-game area, such as doulbe life pillows or something like that could make the game to be a little more interesting. Great experience and a nice aesthetic for a jam, congratulations :)
Compo is so tough, there is just never enough time for everything you want, and often not enough time for just the things you need. This entry is endearing with its visual style and I am a sucker for compo games with a bigger story to tell. This game had it. I liked it a lot, even if it is short and sweet. I hope you do more Ludum Dares because I'd like to see more of your work.
i liked idea
Nice game! I liked the idea and the graphics are curious :) The "battle" dinamic in the computer was fantastic. I miss a audio loop to keep the atmosfere but overall it's a really good entry. Congratulations.
很赞的可爱画风，结合了现实拍摄的场景和简笔画，小兔子和绿色地植物是一个很好的开头，有些戛然而止，并且使用了很简单的分支，以及很简单的小游戏的设计，有提高的空间，音效蛮可爱的。加油！