The Three Sisters by dollarone 2020-05-11T13:28:20Z
This game has some potential. I liked the writing, especially the world-building of it. I also liked the inclusion of a map. It helped when making decisions. That being said, I wish there was more decision making instead of just "pick a direction." The map holds the best potential for this. Including interesting landmarks on the map, like the cave, or adding something like a hut in the forest would have better given me a goal to shoot for. (The opposite could also be said if there were hints of dangers alongside goals on the map like the bear so there's a risk-reward choice that the player has to make)
There also seems to be a resource management element since it counts your people and rations, but I didn't see any opportunities to use them or gain more. You could incorporate these into the decision making by making each choice present what resources are needed (like when you go into the cave, you send a guy, it would have been better if I knew that I would end up sending one guy, or have the choice to send someone or go myself).
The mood was setup well enough, but it maybe could have used some simple background music to really set the mood.