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Lianne Booton

Games

YearLDThemeGameDivisionRankOvFuInThGrAuHuMoCo
201533You are the MonsterDeath Mettlejam2843.513.443.413.894.463.733.603.71100
201430Connected WorldsDoggy Diallerjam433.963.753.863.164.694.053.874.0266
20132710 SecondsNarcoleptic Chicken Kidjam84.123.873.803.804.574.203.734.1279
201326MinimalismMillion Dollar Manbabyjam563.743.603.161.954.323.323.893.3166

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Comments by Lianne Booton

LD26 — Minimalism

ASCIIvader III by CataclysmicKnight 2013-04-30T05:10:00

You did a great job with the ASCII art and the game itself is very fun! I can tell I've played too much Binding of Isaac when my immediate thought was the Envy boss :p

Guiding Light by cageinabird 2013-04-29T22:58:00

Nice and simple, but very effective. Great work :)

Nirvana Quest by dremelofdeath 2013-04-30T05:51:00

Really really cool. One of my favourite games I played here so far :)

10 Second Language by Loren 2013-04-30T05:30:00

Really really cool! This is a pretty great interpretation of the theme :)

Pix Lore by HacksawUnit 2013-04-30T04:04:00

Just a heads up that Bit.ly is giving a warning when clicking so you may want to change your URL so we can play :) Good work on finishing your first LD though!

The Parasite by jahlgren 2013-04-30T06:06:00

This is very very well done. Audio and graphics are superb, and I really like the gameplay too. Great job :)

Somsnosa by Mase 2013-04-30T04:13:00

Oh WOW I love love love the art style. So bizarre and awesome. Some of the scenery reminds me of a cross between Darkseed and FF7. Do you have a Twitter? I'd love to follow your dev stuff cos your art has me super intrigued :)

Minimaloon by StMatn 2013-04-30T04:32:00

The graphics are quite nice :) I like the gameplay too, but I think a cursor graphic for the fan may have helped quite a bit with directing the balloon.

Not Complex by NuSan 2013-04-29T23:01:00

I really like the art style and the way the player forms a more complex shape as you move. Would love to see something like that in a fully fleshed out game!

Snake In A Cube by OU GDA 2013-04-30T05:55:00

Found it difficult to visualise the 3D space, but rotating the cube a whole bunch was pretty fun :P Very nice presentation, if it was a bit easier to line up to dots I think this would be pretty fun.

Million Dollar Manbaby by Lianne Booton 2013-04-30T01:09:00

Yes there is a last boss and an ending, however it's a bit difficult. The end boss is definitely worth it though. Thank you all for the lovely comments :)

Million Dollar Manbaby by Lianne Booton 2013-04-30T07:26:00

The title is a reference to: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0405159/?ref_=sr_2 :)

Also re: Minimalism -
The thing is this was my very first Ludum Dare, and as an artist I was really kinda disappointed that minimalism was put out to be my first theme to tackle. I felt it would be a waste of my ability if I went the route of squares and simple shapes, so we tried to go a different route so that I could still have fun creating something. George is a Flash programmer, so we couldn't do something with 3D space, it had to be 2D and striking.

Personally I think the gameplay mechanics are still quite minimal, basically attacking and customising is carried out via one click, and the game takes place in one area. Perhaps the window dressing of the game makes it appear a lot more complex than it is? In reality it was a very quick project and we finished quite ahead of schedule :)

Million Dollar Manbaby by Lianne Booton 2013-04-30T10:27:00

hahahhhaha <3 ^^^

Integrate by Bloated Hippo 2013-04-30T10:26:00

Cool concept! And well done on your first LD and first game :D

Zip by Chronodrax 2013-04-29T22:54:00

This is absolutely fantastic, great work! Zip is such a great little character for having so few pixels :3

28 Pixels by TobiasL 2013-04-29T22:34:00

VERY awesome! Great work :)

Small Tale by hitchh1k3r 2013-04-30T06:00:00

Got an error when downloading packages sadly, looks like it would be pretty awesome to play too.

Parabox by Jon Fischer 2013-04-30T05:01:00

This is rad, I love the audio and it controls nicely. Great puzzle design too :)

Pongless by Otoris 2013-04-30T04:38:00

I like the audio and concept, but like a previous commenter said, I do feel like the opponent had a better control than I did. For a first project in Unity this is impressive though, so kudos :)

Hipster Annihilator 9000 by deige101 2013-04-30T03:58:00

Super cool! Had to read the comments to figure out how annihilating worked, but after that it was very fun :)

ColorMeld by ThreeUp 2013-04-30T05:48:00

Neat idea and such an interesting starting point in terms of the data graphs! Kudos for a unique approach to the theme :)

Katana Adventures II: The Reckoning by Jed Mayberry 2013-04-30T05:58:00

I can't tell if it works or not :/ There was nothing to attack and having block as RMB was annoying when it'd bring up the Unity menu each time.

Min by ekun 2013-04-30T04:42:00

This is a beautiful game, great job to you both! Reminds me a little of New Zealand Story :)

Highway 00101 by r3d5 2013-04-29T22:24:00

I actually really like this, in terms of an art game. I think it would perhaps be more moody if set on an industrial freeway with the potential for traffic jams so that you can reflect on poor decisions :P I think the ramps maybe take away from the experience a little, but overall, great effort!

Where is my Bone? by Uhfgood 2013-04-30T06:03:00

Yay good ending :3 Better than getting run over the first time!

Just Because by bigbazwa 2013-04-29T23:03:00

I like your approach to the minimalism theme, and you did a pretty good job capturing the core essence of JC2 :)

Super Clutter Blaster 2013 by Homletmoo 2013-04-29T23:07:00

Rad art and music, the movement was pretty tight too. Great work :)

Minimalazor by Robotic 2013-05-01T00:03:00

Really awesome work and great fun. Good job guys!!

LD27 — 10 Seconds

Fugit by jerombd 2013-09-12T03:10:00

This is a beautiful game and I thought the art and audio was spot on and made me feel like I was playing a true old oooold game. I'd love to see an offline version uploaded, I could see myself playing this a lot.

Out Of Time by spliter 2013-08-27T00:22:00

Yup same as the previous commenter sadly. Can't run your game :(

SliP by Sakuyan 2013-08-27T01:48:00

This is rad, it's a very well executed entry overall. Got caught in platforms a few times, but hey, that's to be expected when dealing with the quirks of a platform engine in a small time frame. I think the only thing I would change personally is having the possess skill home in very slightly.

Forever 10s by jujule 2013-08-28T03:46:00

Really cool style, the flickering made my eyes hurt a lil bit, but I really enjoyed what you did here. The amount of effort put into it really shows :)

The Compass by IonProgramming 2013-08-28T03:03:00

I was guilty of not reading throught the instructions first and wondering where the theme fit in - then I went back and read it. Very interesting mechanic :) I suspect you might catch a bit of crap for theme interpretation, but personally I think it's a pretty imaginative direction to go in, so high marks for doing something different!

Button by Back to Browse Entries 2013-08-28T03:11:00

I killed Phil Fish but only because I started laughing the second I saw his name. I think this is a pretty interesting entry, I like that the text taking a while to fully load is intentional and done to see if people will impulsively hit 'kill' the second they see rape/murder/etc. Well I hope it was intentional :p

For an artistic statement, this is pretty cool :)

Ten Ticks 'Til Termination by CharlieL 2013-08-27T00:23:00

Doesn't seem to be working, unless there's a key that needs to be pressed to get past the Love screen? Really interested in playing this entry :)

Arson Investigator by Josh Riley 2013-09-12T03:17:00

Tough game but really enjoyable. A full version with nicer graphics and different settings would be quite fun I think :)

untitled no.10 (seconds) by Cosr 2013-08-28T03:47:00

Couldn't unzip the windows file for some reason :(

Dungeon of the Ten Seconds by ramoncb 2013-08-27T00:39:00

Not sure if I'm entirely convinced this adheres to the theme ;) It's a very pretty and interesting game. One change I might suggest is having the mouse control turning, since that is the goto method for any PC FPS and I kept trying to do that and getting frustrated.

Bored to Death by jwin 2013-08-27T00:28:00

With a little more polish this would be pretty fun! The controls in the tutorial seem to be inaccurate - it says WASD but WS does nothing and space jumps. The missiles are a little finicky as well, but like I say, with a bit more tweaking this would be a neat little game :)

The Breacher by DrZanuff 2013-08-28T03:01:00

I think you have a really good concept here, the only thing I would alter is the camera movement, as the sudden shifts can make it very hard to aim if you happen to be in the wrong spot. Overall though, good work :) I think I was still able to shoot through walls (if the bug was referring to the green walls)?

Lodestar by folmerkelly 2013-08-27T01:33:00

Really really pretty graphics, a bit more polish and this could be something special :) I applaud the amount you managed to pull off in the time frame though, so good work!

Astro Nomics by NgonGames 2013-08-27T00:36:00

"There should be 'AstroNomics_Data'
folder next to the executable" :(

Viking by Back to Browse Entries 2013-08-27T00:39:00

I don't have any friends to play this ;_; Looks cool though!

10 Seconds to Save the World by HacksawUnit 2013-08-27T00:48:00

The offkey music made me laugh :p I like it regardless of the tiny window, but will give it another play when it's fixed.

Haraka by gikdew 2013-08-27T01:52:00

Can definitely pick up on the SMB influence here - but it's done right where so many SMB style games go wrong. There is a definite sense of urgency in reaching checkpoints, and you've used the theme really well. The minimal graphics are really nice too.

Kittens Go! by xhunterko 2013-09-12T02:55:00

Do they get sent to the glue factory if they don't cross the finish line? ;_; Good entry, and only the second game involving kitten death I've played this LD!

Narcoleptic Chicken Kid by Lianne Booton 2013-08-27T01:05:00

Thanks for the bug reports guys, checking them out now. Looks like Game MAker is playing a bit naughty with resetting ;)

Narcoleptic Chicken Kid by Lianne Booton 2013-08-27T01:24:00

Ok, new version uploaded. Problem should be fixed, or at least most of the way fixed! :)

Narcoleptic Chicken Kid by Lianne Booton 2013-08-27T05:17:00

@link2x101 it was probably around the time I held the 4th broken body of a dead chicken in my tight fist that I realised it's actually really difficult to record realistic noises of a chicken having its skeleton punched through its body. Also expensive. Very very expensive.

@Crowbeak luckily there's at least 300 games about the end of the world to satiate the blaring obvious unimaginative interpretation of Ludum Dare themes to play, for those users with a more discerning taste :)

Parallel Panic by Jyrkface 2013-09-12T02:15:00

I can't stop seeing the character as George Costanza D: Really cool little game and impressive for the time frame. I like the animations/graphic style

Life is too short by ayame9joe 2013-08-27T00:41:00

It's very cute, but a little buggy with room transitions and text overlapping. Animations would really bring this entry to life I think :)

Broken Road by Back to Browse Entries 2013-08-27T01:36:00

It's good to see another Game Maker user, and I honestly couldn't believe at first that the 3D was that robust, so high marks for that! Really good effort, maybe not as fitting to the theme as it could be, but it's a fun little game.

10 Seconds Before the World Ends by Lustdante 2013-08-27T01:45:00

This is a great take on the theme, the controls are nice and there's a lot of potential there. The only issue I have is that there's a bit of disconnect with the art styles going on - the low fi pixel art works well, but then you have MS Paint type stuff for some elements and it takes away from the beauty of the game a little. Overall though, good job :)

Wappansai! by 5outh 2013-09-12T03:07:00

Would love to see this developed further - I totally agree that attacking needs refining, but you've said this is your first LD and you've done a solid job on your entry so well done :) I hope the experience inspired you to take part in future LDs!

Crazy Genetist by ratalaika 2013-08-27T01:57:00

Fun game - music reminded me a lot of Flying Battery Zone from S&K :P

Noah's Tasty Confusion by ghostmaple 2013-08-28T04:07:00

Gives me an error saying it's not a valid Win_32 idea

Core 10 by Towanime 2013-09-12T02:32:00

Very cool entry, the turrets that target corners felt very unfair later on because there was no way to protect against them. I'd totally play a full game of this with different types of levels though.

10 Seconds Before Flush by Geeks-n-chicks 2013-08-27T00:46:00

As someone who makes generally vile games I love this. The graphics are lovely too. I won't nitpick the lack of animation, cos the cardboard cutout style works REALLY well here. Great work :)

Bob Won't Be Late by TeamBob 2013-08-27T00:50:00

I really like the style of the game and the take on the theme buuuut the controls feel really really off, like the directions don't quite match up with how an isometric character would move. That's really my only criticism, but unfortunately it does bring my rating down a bit.

10 Seconds Warning by pvwradtke 2013-08-27T00:57:00

Really cool game! Had to look further down to see if anyone mentioned the music... I honestly thought it was some old AFI for a moment ;)

Every Ten Seconds A Kitten Drowns by matthias_zarzecki 2013-08-27T01:41:00

Cool game, reminded me of some sort of minigame that would be in Saints Row or GTA :)

Boyfriend Simulator: Feed My Boyfriend by leafo 2013-08-27T00:55:00

I laughed so hard,
I fed the tard,
in the end he's gotten even fatter~

BECOME A GREAT ARTIST IN JUST 10 SECONDS by mcc 2013-09-12T03:02:00

I am in love with every part of this entry. I really hope you get placed high in the ranking, cos even though this isn't a traditional game it's absolutely wonderful. I can't mimic the computer worth a damn, but I feel like I'm creating a dark and fucked up world compared the computer's pretty pastel weirdness

Decim Dungeons by pighead10 2013-08-27T01:38:00

hahaha neat concept! I almost went with an OCD stopwatch game but I couldn't think of any way to fill the idea out. You've done a great job though :)

LD28 — You Only Get One

Lestac by almightysuit 2013-12-17T03:46:00

This is so beautiful, awesome work :)

M'Lady and The Tramp by Pixelbear 2013-12-18T21:28:00

The connection to the theme is you only ever get one virginity ;)

LD30 — Connected Worlds

Hypnagogia by Cake&Code 2014-08-26T09:07:00

This is a gorgeous game and so incredibly well polished. Good luck in the rankings, though I think you're gonna get a really high score :)

Our World by Loren 2014-08-27T19:48:00

Gorgeous game, super relaxing and the exploration is fun :) The style is simple but it works so well here, I love the subtle colour shifting.

Doggy Dialler by Lianne Booton 2014-08-25T22:22:00

FYI- Hardmode is intended for people who do data entry as a day job, because the game is way easy for them.

Doggy Dialler by Lianne Booton 2014-08-26T09:20:00

@Coopnasty the number scrambling is intentional (it's tied to demon suffixes, so some demons are naughtier than others) however there is a slight bug in that the scrambled number doesn't turn black along with the real number underneath. Hopefully this is something I can fix later on cos I think it requires redoing the UI. The scrambled numbers were an afterthought when I realised programmers and people who deal with Excel daily were way too good at it :P

If you see the fire particles above the scramble it means you got it and can move on.

NECLiD by 0x0961h 2014-08-26T09:00:00

So so beautiful, great job :)

Data-Man by Hyoga-3D 2014-08-26T08:53:00

This is pretty awesome work! I can totally imagine it as a fully fledged game.

Isles in the Sky by Tanner 2014-08-26T08:26:00

Not entirely sure why it kept asking to disable my mouse cursor (in Chrome), but this is a pretty cool show of how strong HTML5 can be so good work :)

Dominions'n'dominoes by Benjamin 2014-09-15T09:49:00

This is really awesome, love the audio and graphics. Really well polished entry!

Color trip by stasss 2014-09-15T09:55:00

Really beautiful game but the mechanics and controls need a bit of refining to be less confusing

Expedition by holgk 2014-08-26T08:30:00

Really good job, I concur with the other comment asking for a way to speed things up a bit :)

Salvation by 43iscoding 2014-08-26T08:45:00

Really interesting concept!

R-elink: A link between worlds by RaycoSantana 2014-08-26T08:38:00

Really neat concept, I think you should take a harder look at it after LD and think about turning it into a full polished game, I think you're onto something good here :)

Close Your Eyes by nonetheless 2014-08-26T08:34:00

Simplistic in style but really wonderfully effective. This is a great entry, my only gripe is to spellcheck it, and you have a legit awesome game on your hands!

Human and Alien by BoskoSokolov 2014-08-26T08:21:00

I'm a bit dubious about how legit the comments are on this and the speed you're 'rating' games at. This game isn't particularly polished or unique in its mechanic. The art is mismatched so I assume assets were taken from elsewhere, which means this shouldn't be in the 48 hour section.

LD33 — You are the Monster

Fright Night by Grouflon 2015-09-14T09:09:00

Quite interesting! Love the graphics and colour choices.

Lil' Drake by bombjack 2015-09-14T09:08:00

Interesting game mechanic, and you've made really good and intelligent design choices. Great work :)

Kerberos by lcarpentier 2015-09-14T08:40:00

Interesting idea, I felt the control scheme could be improved though - it felt a bit unnatural for some reason. I like the player sprite :3

Stallman Quest by n42k 2015-09-14T08:42:00

hahah, what an odd entry, very good work though :)

Darklord by lightsoda 2015-09-14T08:45:00

You have a really good base to work on here. I like the style you've gone with :)

Morrzone Fling by TheColorMan 2015-09-14T08:54:00

hahaha very cute and silly game, well done :)

Swarm by Cosine 2015-09-14T08:57:00

I haven't got the foggiest clue what's going on in this or what is supposed to be going on in this, sorry :<

Monster Huggers by Kiwiboi 2015-09-14T08:59:00

Very cute, well done on the entry :3

DAMNED by NickZangus 2015-08-26T10:27:00

Really really cool and the art style is fantastic. This is such an awesomely polished entry. Made me feel like wanting to play a red riding hood murder sim as the wolf, being pursued by a huntsman :p

Excluded by Tanner 2015-09-14T08:25:00

Web version is a little dodge with DB trying to disable the mouse cursor, and the resolution not fitting on my laptop screen, which makes it hard to control. Good job finishing an entry though :)

Monster in the House by Jani Nykänen 2015-09-14T09:37:00

oh my god

Flying Spaghetti Monster Idle Clicker by UltraRat 2015-08-26T10:29:00

points for your take on the theme :p

No Credit, No Problem! by Razoric 2015-09-14T09:53:00

Great take on the theme!

Oranges In Love With My Fly by ViliX64 2015-09-14T10:18:00

extremely interesting concept and game. Graphics are lovely and unsettling somehow (in a good way). great job!

Ghost Duck by chikun Dev Team 2015-09-14T10:44:00

hahah very cool. The duck is so great :3

Super Monster Fighter 1 by TomOlivier 2015-08-25T11:55:00

Cool game, I think it could've helped to have a varying colour palette since the monsters kinda blend into the background, since everything is a bit green.

EVILATOR by vividhelix 2015-08-25T05:33:00

Really cool idea, I think I would've gone with 9 floors as 10 being 0 was a little jarring. Other than that this is a unique and interesting take on the theme, good work :)

Forest Monster by Geckoo1337 2015-08-25T05:23:00

Pretty game :)

Electro Magnetic Purge by Kuchalu 2015-09-14T10:47:00

Gorgeous lighting! Great work :)

Player Rush by Hot Box Games 2015-09-14T09:27:00

this is gorgeous work. Be proud, and good luck in the rankings :)

Memory of Psychopath by Givit Game Studios 2015-09-14T09:23:00

Bit finnicky but I think you put in a great effort, so well done!

A cup of tea with my Aunti MICROPHONE REQUIRED by Team Klappermann 2015-09-14T10:27:00

Pretty cool and I'm always a fan of unique control methods. Good work :)

Minion Army by aucguy 2015-08-31T07:47:00

lots of typos and not being able to exit out of instructions unfortunately ranks this lower than it could be.I think there's an interesting concept though, but it needs some polish to hold the player's attention, especially as it seems quite in depth.

Steal Alive by Pampattitude 2015-08-24T23:22:00

Love the graphics and animation, a lot of love has been put into this entry and that's always great to see. I hope you do well in the rankings :)

Sky-Worlds by Secret_Sage 2015-09-14T09:58:00

Very ambitious entry, but great work!

Monster Hunt by JK5000 2015-09-14T09:35:00

Good idea but I think the time limit may have hindered a bit. Keep going with the concept though, you have something promising :)

KILL ALL THE SEALS by pinkrobopanda 2015-09-14T09:59:00

Does exactly what it says on the tin

Monster(モンスター) by ArthG 2015-08-24T23:14:00

Very creepy! A reset button would be a welcome addition. I like the herding mechanic, having to refrain from slashing people was a lot harder than I expected!

Free Hugs Kraken by crucknuk 2015-09-14T09:03:00

haha I love the title :p

Scare The Shit Out Of That Kid by SomeAristocrat 2015-09-14T10:00:00

A+ title :p

Something Purple by Andrew 2015-08-25T05:29:00

Really like the shader and the audio fits perfectly. Felt a bit vague on what exactly was happening though, but not in a frustrating way.

Are You The Monster? by carle13 2015-08-31T07:44:00

movement is really glitchy, but you made an entry and you get a thumbs up for that :)

Subwonster by Chachedj 2015-09-14T10:05:00

bit broken, an update would've been cool!

BR34D by Swagg 2015-09-14T10:06:00

Interesting way to use RPG Maker! :)

I'm a Monster Rawr! by bakakyo 2015-09-14T09:02:00

Cute as heck!

Deicide by Abrexas 2015-09-14T10:10:00

ha, we had very very similar concepts! :)

Monster Mayhem by TEQ 2015-09-14T10:10:00

Super cute :) Keep expanding on it if you have the time and inclination to

Me by jofra 2015-09-14T09:34:00

Very pretty and unique art style, good work.

The Game Reaper by QuadCity 2015-09-14T10:14:00

Pretty cool, a bit noisy visually but I like the concept :)

Clumsea by Loutrattitude 2015-09-14T10:19:00

Really really cool job. Nice and colourful and well polished!

Tales of the Memory Dragon by raducumiczzz 2015-09-14T10:29:00

Crazy difficult, but I feel like there's a solid concept here if you look at the gameplay elements and refine them. I feel like it would work as a fast paced game, but you'd need to really tighten up visual cues and intuitive controls.

Kill Click by Mubox 2015-09-14T10:22:00

Cool idea. I think an expanded version would be pretty neat, with a more intuitive UI.

Doom, Death & Destruction (Tycoon) by WhoIsNoahGames 2015-08-26T10:23:00

The audio is really top notch and suits the feel of the game. I feel like the UI could be just a bit bigger/clearer for those of us on higher resolutions. The text was unfortunately unreadable for me without squinting. Really quality effort though :)

You are the Monst-hair by polskais1 2015-08-31T07:49:00

non-working link dude :(

Tentacle Rescue : Summer of Love by Casper 2015-09-14T10:24:00

Well I mean nobody can say you ignored the theme :p

Dude, Stop by Patomkin 2015-09-14T09:26:00

haha I'm almost inclined to believe you were in the gamejam irc I was in when we discussed a concept similar to this! Glad to see somebody did make this game

Bush Man by willchil 2015-08-24T23:39:00

Very simple but fun, love the concept and can see many ways it could be expanded upon. I think whatever causes the police to catch you could be a lot stricter though. I felt like I was getting away with snatching people right in front of them sometimes :p

15 by KanjiKado 2015-08-31T07:40:00

slick game, aesthetically pleasing and nice concept.

Monster ? Hero? by VVD 2015-08-31T07:53:00

interesting concept, with a bit more of a consistent design I think you could have something cool here :)

Monster Chips by derugin.s 2015-09-14T09:04:00

Bit confusing, stylistically cool though, good work :)

Kaiju Down Under by Hippomancer 2015-08-25T05:25:00

I wish NZ's defence force was this good

Motherflipin' T-Rex! by mantis 2015-09-14T09:21:00

Pretty cool entry, great job! :)

Jumping Mushroom Monster by Pavel M. Dlouhý 2015-09-14T08:34:00

The artwork is really adorable and it's nice to see something unique :)

Lecture Me by celsyum 2015-09-14T10:43:00

Ok, I think this is a pretty unique concept. Something I think would really add to this is if drawings were uploaded so people could check out what was drawn. I also feel like some of the picture sentences could be reworded, because it just felt like you were being a dick :p I actually think this could be an awesome idea if worked on and if responses were researched.

The Cauldron of Humanity by Lashiz121 2015-09-14T09:06:00

Cool concept. I think one thing that could have helped a lot is more consistency in the graphical style though. You have a good pixel style going, so it's good to not muddy it up with graphics that are aliased or of different pixel sizes. Just having that sort of coherence can go a long long way to making a polished jam entry :)