Wow, there is a lot of work and a lot of love going into this one!
First of all, amazing job on the narrative design. I loved how immersive it goes leading you more and more into the story, it feels natural given the complexities of the story and how much text there is - which btw, I love as I come from point and click days. I so did not expect a game like this on a jam entry
The music was great, and I kinda wished there was more of it. Some of the dialogue scenes could have had some sort of ambience to it to give it more of a mood, but regardless, fantastic job combining this into the design. I am not one for rhythm games, but this was really fun
And last but not least, my favorite part, the art. The backgrounds are mad lovely, the characters are great, I love the aesthetic and the artwork style - hands down what drove me to check it out and quite frankly glad I did, because it's perhaps the most charming game I have played today
Voted, loved it - and congratulations on your first Ludum Dare ♥