A Walk To The Finish Line by jk5000 2017-12-10T09:07:04Z
Impressive, you managed to make all those puzzles in such a short amount of time. The graphics were nice too.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → Users → Hayzar
| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2020 | 46 | Keep it alive | Not a demon | jam | 3.50 | 3.00 | 3.00 | 3.00 | 3.50 | 3.00 | 3.00 | 3.00 | ||
| 2017 | 40 | The more you have, the worse it is | Apparently I'm a detective | jam | 737 | 3.26 | 2.90 | 2.87 | 2.84 | 4.04 | 3.56 | 3.01 | 3.60 |
Impressive, you managed to make all those puzzles in such a short amount of time. The graphics were nice too.
I tried few paths but I couldn't beat it yet, Infact I'll make sure to try every single path. The narration was soo great, I loved the atmosphere, I even got kinda worried at some point. Was soo enjoyable overall.
I suggest adding some sound effects to some of the actions such as footsteps.
Thank you for your inspirational work
Loved the idea and the concept! I enjoyed my time playing it(Had no issues with the HTML5 version).
I lost due to not doing my homework in time, just like in real life lol.
I don't know if it was intentional but I had a really hard time figuring out which homework is due soon and which just came in later when I had 3+ homeworks at a time.
There is a huge room for improvement and I believe you can even make it commercial after adding illustrations.
I am inspired. Congrats!
I like the idea and I had a lot of fun playing it, simple and elegant.
Something you could add in the future is screen shaking when you hit a wall I imagine that could make it more impactful.
(thanks for reminding me to go back to school)
Really loved the idea, the art, the atmosphere. Congrats!
Was really fun, I had a blast when I get beat up after all those trials. Love it.
The idea is brilliant and funny. Unfortunately you didn't have enough time to add sound effects(you could glitch those too lol). I loved it, congrats.
Loved the game, the idea and the graphics, I'm really enjoying it.
I don't know if that's how it's supposed to work but I wish if there was more informations given to the player such as the % reduction once you build,ect.. We can figure it out after few trials though.
A cool feature you could add in my opinion is to add upgrades to the buildings and/or add new threats overtime.
Aside from that, I loved the game, nicely done.
I had a blast playing the game, the idea is brilliant, the pixel art looks really nice, The dialogue was funny. Inspiring, keep it up.
hi
I messed up, forgot to make it compatible with all resolutions, right now it works right only on 1280x720 :(
Thank you so much!
thanks a lot for the feedback everyone
@cymansap and I apologize for the sloppy gameplay, the art took me so much time that I couldn't work on the story neither the code well, I wasn't available the whole time too :/ I appreciate the feedback and from now on I know what I'm about to face in my future game jams.
I liked the idea, the level design seems well though through.
One thing that didn't appeal to me is enemies being at the edge and having to jump, hit them and fall over and over.
This has a lot of potential, keep it up. I absolutely loved it.
I went for a wake-up call all the way! It was really entertaining, The graphics were really nice too. aside from that, I thought that the default music was kinda loud(wasn't an issue though, since you gave the option to change the volume) I really enjoyed it overall, I got kinda inspired by this. (how is the score calculated by the way? I got a 4/6)
This was an enjoyable game and has a lot of potential for sure! The atmosphere, the art, the sound effects they are all on point. The gameplay is chill and addictive.
1 thing I'm not into is having to go back everytime to change the tool, I wish if I could change in between 2 tools at the same time.
You should definitely keep working it! Congrats
I kinda enjoyed the music and the gameplay, the atmosphere was on point.
I suggest adding camera shake effects, particles in combat so we can feel the impact.
I loved it, congrats.
The idea is brilliant, the music was great too.(Gotta get better at multitasking)
Congrats, Keep it up
Took me quite a bit to fully get the hang of it aside from that I had fun playing. I FELL IN LOVE WITH THE GRAPHICS TOO!
I'm really impressed by this stunning work! the graphics are amazing, I'm amazed.
Once I got used to the controls I had so much fun, charming pixel art. Loved it! congrats
Brilliant idea and it's really well done, voice acting was great. Loved it, congrats
The game is really charming, I loved the idea. I was getting addicted. Congrats!
Nice little game you got right there, the music was really nice, The idea of controlling the spawning using the music was brilliant. Loved it, congrats.
The concept is genius, Loved it.
I had a lot of fun at first but at some point I didn't know what I had to do, was kinda lost lol. It's a great game overall and has a lot of potential! Congrats
Was really fun, great idea for the theme. The camera positionning could be a bit better. UI was looking nice as well. Nicely done overall.
I had fun trying this out with my little brother, he loved it! The art looks too good, the idea was brilliant as well. I'm inspired, Keep it up!
hi ! I really liked the art and feel of the game. Your voice over was almost perfect with the mood of the game. I wish if you had more time to make nice puzzles out of it.
I somehow got out of boundaries (my char jumped really hard and I pressed left). But that aside, the game is really nice, really well polished, I LOVE the way the ground physics works! really nice job.
I absolutely loved the graphic and the atmosphere, The idea is brilliant as well. Well done
I see what you did there
I loved the game! The idea is nice and has a lot of potential to become really addictive. I had a blast when I could buy infinite amount of boxes with real $. Things you could add in the future is having a catalogue of the items so the player can have things to look forward to even after playing for a decent amount of time and maybe item rarity. You could also add so the player can drag the items around and drop them wherever in the scene. Sound effects would make it more enjoyable too.
Overall I had fun trying it out!
I had fun experimenting various strategies to grab as much score as I could, my best shot was by dragging only 1 cop and dodging his bullets.
I like the character's style and animation.
I would suggest adding slight screen shake effects and excessive particles when being shot, you could make that if you dodge a bullet and it hits another cop he gets damaged/killed, maybe a timer when the player gets away and is not targetted by any enemy to add some intensity, adding some cartoonish chase music while being chased would make it more fun too I think.
Overall it was enjoyable and I had a blast trying it out. Keep it up!