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| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Mo | |
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| 2025 | 58 | Collector | Total Recall: The Written Fragments | jam | 446 | 3.44 | 3.05 | 3.40 | 3.21 | 2.86 | 3.80 |
As a fellow developer who also created a text-based game, I tip my hat to you. It’s a pity that due to time constraints, I couldn’t see the fully completed version of your game. The UI looks really clean and pleasant — it’s simple yet elegant. I can see a lot of potential for further improvement!
I really think you can add a sound effect, at least some background music in this game. They can help to create the atmosphere.
Really like the art style of your game.
After playing this game, I understand why do comment say the game feels a little wired. For the movement part, the player’s movement works like the command input: press the key once and move a space. Unlike free 3D movement, this can feel a bit strange. Also the font is a little bit difficult to recognize. Luckily, I a furry, so it's a good game for me :)
To be honest, we don't usually call this a game. We called this a masterpiece. The art, the music and the story, they are all wonderful. I hope this game could be number one in this event.
To some extent, I think this kind of data collection could also be considered consistent with the theme of “collect.” Back to the topic. In this jam game project, I tried integrating a pre-trained Distil BERT model into the game to interpret player intentions and create a small text-based puzzle game. I’m really curious — did you also integrate an AI model into Unity to build your LLM simulator?
Simple and fun. I like this game, I wish my car could jump like this.
You made this in three days. Incredible.
Good game. Really funny, I think the guards in the zoo are all deaf.
To be honest, I think you'd better make a guidance in the game. It's a little bite confusing .
I like the art of this game. A main menu would be better.
The guy who made this game must really hate breakfast.
Truly amazing. Really like the atmosphere that been created. Can't believe this could be done in just three days. You guys are monsters.
I really like this kind of game, like the "milk inside a bag of milk..." this kind of style. Let the people see another form of the world. But I don't think it's a good idea to make it incomprehensible. Here's my own opinion: what makes the uncertainty attractive is the certainty. Maybe to add some certainty in this game would make it much more attractive.
Good game. The content in the store looks like it's written by hand.
I really like the idea. But I have to say the UI design of the book and the document could be better. You can see the letter on the book squeezing and the hole on the document paper block the first letter of the sentence.
I really like the art of the game and the idea of reducing the game’s file size. My laptop doesn’t have a GPU, and it usually lags when running 3D games. But it didn’t happen with this game — that’s really great. Maybe it would be better to add some background music in this game.
Sorry bro, but no background music or any sound effect really influence the game play experience. I have to use my phone to play some background music when playing this game:>
这UI是真的无敌。真的是两天做出来的吗...叹为观止
Simple and interesting rouge like game. Here are few suggestions: 1. Add some appropriate audio cues, such as hit sound effects when the player takes damage, and a coin/pickup sound when collecting money. 2. Experiments show that in this kind of roguelike game, the player’s attack direction isn’t particularly important. Taking Brotato as a reference, you can simply auto-attack the nearest target, leaving the player to control only movement. This makes the game more confortable.
Brilliant idea,
The mood of the game is great. I believe a background music would be better. By the way, do you use ai for creating the sentences. It feels a little weird when reading the context.
I really like the graphic and the darkness of creating the atmosphere. However, the atmosphere seems to be too dark that I can not see the environment clearly. I know this may be the design that you can only use the flash light to see it clearly. But I don't think this is a clever desgin.
I like horror game. I think if you add some Milestone goals or levels in the game would made it much more interesting.
I think I need a bigger shopping car and more stable item. I just make a turn in the shop and all the products were thrown away:<
Really like the background music. Great atmosphere.
Great game. If there's a background music, it would be better.
Really like the hand made painting.
I really hope there would be some sound effect for this game. It would help make the game to the next level.
超赞的视觉小说，画面和背景音效都配合的很好，特别是点击物品之后出现的黑白画面，我个人特别喜欢这个画风。
I think time limited your creation.
Is it just me, or there's no sound in this game.
The art of the game is amazing. Cooperate with the background music it creates a great atmosphere.
I like the floating fish.
@maxiney Thank you so much for your comment! If there’s ever a chance to collaborate, I’ll be happy to work with you!
@baluj Thank you for your suggestion. I’ll try to compress the file size tomorrow and see if I can make a web-embedded version.
@boncebon Thank you for your suggestion. I think I'll simplify the game.
@porcupine-sashimi I have the same thought about the AI. The truth is : for offline games, only small classification models can be deployed. Large models like LLMs require backend support to run.
@redwolf-entertainment Thank you for the suggestions！
@w1tche I'm sorry that my previous expression was not clear. In my previous comment, when I mentioned that you used pre-made assets, I didn't mean to say that this is not okay. What I meant was that since you used pre-made assets, you should have more options and more time to create more diverse content. You asked us if there is anything that can be improved. The reason why we all answered that you can do better instead of specific suggestions is because this game has too many flaws. The beginner's guide, buttons or monitoring sound effects, and I don't know if it's my computer's problem, I need to press Q, S, Z, D to control movement, which is really weird. Also, as I mentioned in my previous comment, since you're using pre-made assets and the exterior scenery is useless, why did you choose a small town instead of an enclosed room? This not only saves file size but also gives you more space and time to polish the scene. This way, the clipping problem as shown in the picture may not occur. 1.png 2.png
We need more cats!
very interesting game with brilliant idea.不过话说回来，我觉得可能做成关卡的样子会更加合适，这个游戏的模式我总感觉有点贴近魂游地图的感觉，对于我这种手残党就不是很友好哈哈。
I believe the backstory of this game with the art style in the title scene has the potential to become something truly exceptional. When I see the words "childhood dream of flying through the night sky", I came up with the story: The hospital is kind like a prison that built in your mind. The paper airplanes contain fragments of your memories — collecting them helps you recover those memories and overcome the shadows of your childhood. At last the moment you collect all the airplanes and let it flying through the night sky. It will bring the sunlight which is also the symbol of you accept your childhood trauma and ready to move on. Sadly this is just a little running game. It's also a good game but not the kind of style I like:)
Same problem. The link is broken.
Simple but really interesting. Like your game.