egor-ae-game 2025-10-07 10:26
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Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD58 → Antiquas
By Astriatauria, w1tche, , , and
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 3.31 | 10 | ||
| Fun | 3.31 | 10 | ||
| Innovation | 3.21 | 9 | ||
| Theme | 4.12 | 10 | ||
| Humor | 3.14 | 9 | ||
| Mood | 3.25 | 10 |
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To be honest, it’s not so good. You used pre-made assets. And if you only need an indoor scene, you could choose an enclosed one instead of the one you use now(you didn't even make the sky).
Good can be better👍🏻
@daniel123 that's why we didn't ask to be graded in graphics. We were only game designers and we just don't know how to do assets and we are not the only one. I don't think not being able to do your own assets forbid you to do a jam. Anyway, In my opinion your comment is irrelevant, if you have something to say about the gameplay or the mecanics, we'll listen happily.
@liu-qinying if you have any advices or anything that you dislike, please let us know, we would be happy to have your opinion.
@w1tche I'm sorry that my previous expression was not clear. In my previous comment, when I mentioned that you used pre-made assets, I didn't mean to say that this is not okay. What I meant was that since you used pre-made assets, you should have more options and more time to create more diverse content. You asked us if there is anything that can be improved. The reason why we all answered that you can do better instead of specific suggestions is because this game has too many flaws. The beginner's guide, buttons or monitoring sound effects, and I don't know if it's my computer's problem, I need to press Q, S, Z, D to control movement, which is really weird. Also, as I mentioned in my previous comment, since you're using pre-made assets and the exterior scenery is useless, why did you choose a small town instead of an enclosed room? This not only saves file size but also gives you more space and time to polish the scene. This way, the clipping problem as shown in the picture may not occur. 1.png 2.png
@daniel123 Thanks for your advices, for the ZQSD it's mainly because we use azerty in our country but we should've think of wasd players. For eveything else thank you for this feedback we'll take all of this in account for the next jam.