Anthony's Psyche: Escape by Martoon 2011-08-27T19:45:00
I liked the music and the mechanic of revealing the story a bit at a time. Reminded me a bit of Today I Die also (http://www.ludomancy.com/games/today.php if you haven't seen it). I agree that the mechanic of following the figure with the text to uncover it got repetitive. I can easily imagine a situation where you show a scene (e.g. a room) and have to move different words/phrases to different areas to reveal them. Maybe that could replace the main figure?
I think the biggest change I would make to the story would be to reduce the number of statements that hint at a violent end. Ideally with a game like this it would be one of the very last sentences that completely changes the player's view. I could even imagine having the music change a few times through the game, from sad, to fond memories, and finally to a sinister conclusion.
It got me thinking anyway. Good job!
LD25 — You are the Villain (1)
CYBERQUEEN by Porpentine 2013-01-07T05:37:00
After playing this game it was having Octavia Butler smash my head open with a robot arm. It was THAT GOOD!!