COME ALIVE! by Angela He 2021-10-21T10:46:42Z ♥ 1
wtf how is it POSSIBLE to develop THIS MUCH CONTENT in the time frame. u crazy fr!!
loooved the story here! it feels absolutely like some shit i'd want to pull on my friends for fun if only it were actually feasible to become a vaguely-formed disappearing shadow lol. the characters were all super relatable imo, and with the w i l d amount of detail regarding each of their hobbies, personalities, identities, etc, it's a wonder you were able to even get to the art at all! the vast majority of the dialogue was smooth and realistic imo (at least, as a liberal arts college student, this is basically the kind of discourse i'm surrounded by every day). there were a *few* moments that called for a bit of suspended disbelief—like i don't think i'd expect a pine-type student to casually name-drop susan sontag and notes on camp the way it was inserted here? i also wish there had been a bit more clarity in the prank reveal scene, since it took me a moment to realize what was actually happening there, and i feel like that kind of plot twist reveal should be instant and visceral for the greatest effect. but, for the most part, everything was super smooth! i'm like 90% sure i've heard my housemate have that exact conversation about girl in red with oblivious friends before lmao
aside from the characters and dialogue, i thought the development of suspense and tension here was also super well done. i'm definitely more a fan of psychological horror than straight-up jumpscares, so i'm glad there was only one and it was early on in the game. left me wondering when the next one would be, tilting my computer screen and squinting as tight as possible while still being able to read every word of the story. i'd like to shout out the horizontal bar effect when you enter the kitchen as being one of the coolest parts of the game! (although i'm a bit confused about what the flying vampire pav-head was doing there or what it was supposed to represent in the prank?) A's gradual turning around at the end was a super nice touch, too. good stuff all around!
anyways tl;dr this is a ASTOUNDING wow. love the representation, love the characters, love pine's plushies. can't wait to see what you get up to in future LDs!!!
edit: i can't believe how ahead of the curve you were on squid game holy shit
edit 2: idk if you'll see this BUT i also wanted to mention how cool the shifting black screens were!! loved that effect. it would be so easy to slap on a fully black screen but this made the transitions between scenes so much more ethereal
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Yellowbean Bog by Flightless 2022-10-06T17:55:57Z ♥ 2
really cute game! it had a neat vibe; the graphics were adorable and it felt like you created your own little world. the gameplay was a bit limited in scope, but that actually motivated me to figure out how to optimize my strategy, so i restarted once or twice. cool stuff!