Ouroboros Paradox by TolMera 2020-10-27T04:59:46Z
I really love it! Your team did a great job, maybe I could join your team.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → Users → MrchickenBoy
| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2023 | 52 | Harvest | Farm Patronum! | jam | 290 | 3.64 | 3.83 | 2.84 | 3.81 | 3.92 | 3.31 | 3.66 | ||
| 2022 | 50 | Delay the inevitable | Terra Defensio | compo | 267 | 3.50 | 3.75 | 2.59 | 3.50 | 3.68 | 3.81 | 2.24 | 3.25 | |
| 2021 | 49 | Unstable | Unstable Avoidance! | compo | 2.50 | 2.75 | 2.50 | 2.87 | 2.75 | 2.50 | 1.66 | 2.62 | ||
| 2020 | 47 | Stuck in a loop | Evo-loop-tion | Ludum Dare 47 | jam | 1614 | 2.58 | 2.56 | 2.40 | 2.66 | 2.33 | 1.95 | 2.42 |
I really love it! Your team did a great job, maybe I could join your team.
Ah, okay
That was one of the best clickers I've played, though, you should add an instructions menu or somthing like that, so, good idea, and also, you don't have to but you can also make it easier to gain money at the start
I love the idea! The looping music soon gets boring, maybe you can change it? But overall, really fun game
love the game man! How did you pull such good music off?
I love how the chicken just slides
I love the game, the sound of the broom really kept me going!
I really love it!
I like it, the controls though could be improved, it took me time to figure out how to start the game, though, overall, fun game
Haha! Really epic game, very clever
36.16!
I like the game, the graphics could be improved, I love the simple sounds, though
I like the idea, though, the hitboxes could have been improved, you can make them shorter. Also, the level design, you can really work on polishing the levels, quality over quantity, always remember that. Other than that, epic game!
I think you should get more feedback when you collide with the walls/obstacles, otherwise, good game
I really love the graphics, and the camera, it's so chaotic and I love it!
This is so much fun, the only thing I could say was a llittle annyoing were the screaming noises, everything else was great, also, you could work on the camera.
It's good, could be improved, but the sound and music could be better, it lags, a lot. my laptop isn't that bad, it can be a bit more polished
Finally! Finished my game! All art was possible with my brother and the code is me, I am exahasted!
https://mrchickenboy.itch.io/evo-loop-tion
Okay, thanks for the feedback! I will change the things you said :D
Yeah, I think I could add a guide, you actually press a lever in the 1st level, but snowin is right, trial and error is the point of the game, I will try to update it when I have time.
Thank you so much for the feedback, guys, it really means a whole lot to me!
Thank you marbles for the suggestions and your opinians, I will definately keep that in mind when I next update the game
@grizzliusmaximus, haha, yeah, it's not that polished, I ran out of time, that's why I couldn't write the instructions, I will definately do better next time, thanks for all the feedback, it's really great to see people enjoy and give constructive criticism.
@ninnec, huh, did you see a platform appear? If so, you had to go and touch the green thing
@etrealjunior, sure!
@etrealjunior, thank you ao much :D, it warms up my heart look at all these comments!
@toulou @james-dunlap @thomas-volpato, thanks so so much for the advice, I am not able to edit the game anymore, but I am so happy thar you all commented, I will keep that in mind next jam!
Thank you =D, I will keep that in mind next time :)
@honey, Thank you ever so much for your detailed comments. I love the feedback I'm getting. As for your advice, I completely agree. However, not only was this a new sofware for me but also my first jam, so it wasn't 100% on spot. I mainly did it for practise and fun. As for my brother, well, he preferred to be anonymous :)
@kuviman, thanks! Yeah. I was in the stream, really confusing...
Haha! Thank you a whole lot, means a lot to me!
@honey did it :)
@peace-of-cake-games, thank you for the nice comment!
Haha, thanks!
@pee-thief, thanks! I will do that!
The hitboxes of the enemies in my opinion were a bit big, and like others said, it gets repetitive very easily, you could try adding platforms or increase the speed over-time. Also, the feedback when you loose a heart could be better, but, not bad for a fist game, not bad.
@melvinng, it's all good, everyone starts somewhere
haha
Wow, that's great man, I checked back in and you got a whole lot of comments!
it is a good game, but the art looks out of place, it is not the same style all throughout the level, I really could not figure out what to do, maybe add a how-to section. The audio is good, but I feel like you should've addded some sound effects, but, that is fine. Also, the collisions are not the best, I often got stuck and had to go down, the looping music was fine, but it could've been better. Lastly, you should get more feedback if you die or touch a spike. Good job with the game and bye
Really awesome game! I like the atmospheric music a lot! It's good to see that you could finish this game in time. :D Mind sharing a version of your art and music apps?
This is a really cool game! I love the simple artstyle. That doodle effect really is quite nice. Some things I don't like: I don't like the fact that when you've killed the enemies, the option "kill red blobs" still comes up, if you could add a check to see if the enemies are destroyed, then stop showing that message, that will be awesome. Cool
Thanks @zachary-shah. I totally agree with all of said. I was going to add pictures today anyway, yesterday I had no time, as for the enemies, I didn’t realise I made it hard, I’ll keep it in mind next time!
@silkworm-sweatshop Yes, now that I think of it, I did in-fact make the enemies a bit too fast. I'll definitely keep this in mind next time.
@cymansap I agree, but the whole point of the game is that it's random. But yeah, I see what you mean.
If you set your page zoom to something really small, the framerate increases and you can do the jump, lol. Definitely a delta time issue.
This is a really cool game! I like your approach with the theme. It's very frustrating but still fun to play, nice job! The sliders could have better contrast with the background to make them more visible.
LMAO hilarious game, simple gameplay. Had fun. Good job!
Cool game! The core idea is brilliant, but the gameplay could do with some spicing up. Right now after you get 5 cars, they stop spawning, and after they collide the gameplay gets a bit dry. I do love the art and the effect of the buildings. Solid game!
Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback everyone! I’m glad you enjoyed playing my game and I’ve noted the criticism and advice given to me :D I hope I do even better next compo!! Again, thanks so much everyone!
Hey @saintchristopher777! Thanks for the amazing feedback! Yes, I'll get to rating more games, I've been busy as of late, but now I'm free, imma rate some games!
I thought I had fixed the bullet bug, I guess not! I'm not sure why that's happening lol. I was considering making the power ups physical, so you had to go pick them up, but I ran out of time!
I couldn't actually find the toilet lol, I had fun with this game though! Nice SFX
Great game! I had some fun playing it, amazing art!
The music did not play for me, also holy heck this was hard. I'm not the best with rhythm games but this was a whole level of hardness. Nice idea though!
HOLY crap this game is so fun! It's a shame you didn't have enough time to add the sound because that would make the experience so much more fun! The upgrades kept me going for a long time. The flying's a bit too floaty too. Overall, really fun game, and good job!
the audio and art was amazing! Gameplay was a bit lacking but still fun nonetheless :)
Hey, nice game! The music and story is very nice! The UI can be quite buggy at times, and the Z order isn't always correct. I think I also broke the game because I can't go to sleep if though I did everything. But stull, I really enjoyed playing it!
Nice music, but oh damn this game is excruciatingly hard! Perhaps it would be not as hard if the mechanics weren't as clunky as they are. But, I love the concept, and all the cute art!
What a fun game! The idea of harvesting gold is definitely not as innovative as it could have been, but does not imply that this is a bad game! On the contrary, I really enjoyed playing it! The sound effects are nice and the art is simple but works nicely. I LOVED destroying the castles. It gave me a real sense of power. On thing though: if the fireballs had splash damage that would have been the icing on the cake. Good work!
Very nice idea! The surroundings could have been more interesting, but that is totally fine considering this was for a jam. I get hooked for a long time, trying to shoot that tiny fruit! Well done.
crap this is one well made game! Also Viktor, how are you! I got so excited when I saw you were a team member :) The pollen collecting does get a bit boring after a bit, so maybe a shorter time would have been better. I love how the music starts to grow as you get closer to the flower. Also, the difficulty was perfectly managed, I'm not the greatest at rhythm games but I still managed to have fun and actually win!
Oh and the puns make this game a five star without a thought :p
@fluburbio Thanks so much for playing :)
@avian Thanks for playing :)
@hacktrout @bartalomew Yeah, I didn't do much playesting. Totally my bad! Anywho, thanks for playing the game!
@chompdev Ayy that's a nice score! THanks for playing! I'm also pretty proud of the swaying crops :)
@ninnec Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, it does seem I messed up the difficulty!
@yopox @kekkodude Thanks for playing! As I said earlier, I had plans of adding more variation, more enemies so you would have an incentive to move. Alas, I ran out of time. Also holy shit nice score Kekko!
@dgo @tukisboolukis Thanks a bunch for playing, I appreciate it!
@ninnec Thanks for playing! Yeah, I love some o' that JOOCE XD
@rrsmtz Wow, thanks for the kind words! Yeah, I was planning on a wave system, but I totally forgot about it lol! I added the dash in because it makes you immune to the enemies for a bit. But, yeah, it's not needed to play the game.
@the-vecter Thanks a lot! Yeah, I was on the fence on whether I should make the bullets bigger or smaller. Come to think of it, I could've just made the hitboxes bigger lmao
@adamwigs @ekaktusz oh damn completely missed that! I'll patch it up later when the jam's over :)
I couldn't succeed in finding the son, because I got too damn scared lol. Very immersive game with amazing art! Great work :)
Oh wow! I honestly had a blast playing this game! The graphics are perfect, the sound effects are great, and the music brings it all together. I got confused in the start but after a while, I got the hang of it. Nothing really to complain here except the z-ordering of the cursor sometimes messing up!
Damn this is one hard game! I still had fun though but the controls and player feel could be improved :)
I love the idea, the music and the art! But the massive deal-breaker were the physics and the collisions. I think what you did was used the collision box of the actual model itself, which made the player prone to sticking to platforms. The physics itself for the player was also not the greatest providing for a bad experience for what I am sure would otherwise be a great game!
@hulya Well, usually when you're dealing with 3d models, what I'd recommend is to use a sphere collider, and increase it's height, so that it's elongated. Basically a bean. This prevents the player from sticking to the platforms, and instead it slides down! I think just making that simple change will really make things better. Also, I'd recommend using a character controller if you're not already using one.
@hulya No problem :)
Nice little game! I think I encountered a bug though. I had painted everything, including the background, and made sure everything was filled. but, the percentage was still stuck at 99! I had to quit after that but MAN this game is fun. It made me sit down for at least 30 minutes. The music is just amazing and the SFX is also great. All in all a very well put together game! :D
DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNN this game's SOOO well made! The music, sound effects, voicelines, all just perfect!
Oh my god the yipyaps! Taking advantage of over-fishing being a problem and turning that into a mechanic was smart! Nice game overall, but it does get a bit boring after a while!