This is very fun and well executed. Rather polished too. An absolutely great entry for your first game jam! It's my first as well, and I'm quite jealous of what you made here. 😍
The most unique entry I've reviewed thus far. Thanks! I really like the premise. I'd love to see how it would play if the static document was instead a list of search results from the info you fill in. Maybe you could have wildcard character to represent what you're not sure about when filling it out. That's not a critique as much as a brainstorm. 🙂
There's a lot of fun content here, great job! The whole idea (gear, manpower) reminds me of logi in Foxhole--a game I've played for years.
I felt the UI could have been better. The music/sfx sliders could have been smaller. The blue hex highlighting where you can move blended with the green tiles a bit. The end result was hard to make out sometimes. Mostly, though, I would have loved an indicator showing me how many turns until a unit ran out of supplies.
Like I said, this was a lot of fun. And I love the concept!
The box was erratic at times when bumping it into stuff, and it once glitched through the level wall (happened on 2nd level). Maybe slightly tilting the drone to represent it's momentum would help the "feel" of movement, but that's nitpicking. Solid entry and I enjoyed playing it! It's my first LD as well, and I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did. :)
As others have touched on: the movement could be better and the purpose of the different floors wasn't clear. I did like the graphics and the idea of objects having different move distances and abilities.
I called it after 500 rounds. I had 2224 remaining money.
I loved the atmospheric music and the graphics fit the mood. The signposts were a big help--I had a hard time finding the chef after delivering his dish. Good entry
While I was playing I wished the sensitivity of the catapult was a bit lower (as in you'd need to drag your mouse a longer distance). Other than that I really enjoyed it.
Great game! I think the jumps could be a bit more powerful, but that would be my only critique. Overall, I think you nailed the difficulty by requiring two different mouse inputs all while controlling the bike.
You listed your itch.io page as source. Just thought I'd let you know in case that was by accident. Music was good (maybe a bit loud), but I really liked the concept and difficulty.
I'm assuming it was by design, but in level 2 (Draco Vienna) it was really difficult to tell where I had been before. Other than that, I really enjoyed your game. The space dragon noodle was great!
I've played several times and I'm still not sure I understand how to deliver the packages correctly. 😆 I really enjoyed the opening sequence and had fun overall.
I liked the tutorial being included in the game, and the opening lines did a lot for the mood. I thought it was a bit too fast (without pausing) to have enough time to switch between adding and removing lines, but I enjoyed your game overall and thought it had the right amount of difficulty.
LD53 — Delivery (30)
RELEASE THE MEAT by NuiN 2023-05-02T05:19:52Z ♥ 2
This is very fun and well executed. Rather polished too. An absolutely great entry for your first game jam! It's my first as well, and I'm quite jealous of what you made here. 😍
Decrypting Handwriting by pauljs 2023-05-02T03:52:08Z ♥ 3
The most unique entry I've reviewed thus far. Thanks! I really like the premise. I'd love to see how it would play if the static document was instead a list of search results from the info you fill in. Maybe you could have wildcard character to represent what you're not sure about when filling it out. That's not a critique as much as a brainstorm. 🙂
I had fun and enjoyed playing.
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Bad News Inc. by Frogravity 2023-05-01T22:47:58Z ♥ 2
Your voice acting really fit the game. The writing was great and the character art very good as well. Solid entry!
Baby Juggling by BridgeOnAStick 2023-05-01T22:19:53Z ♥ 1
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This is a simple (but very fun) game. I started to toss vertically offscreen to make doubling them up easier. Good entry.
Supply Line Simulator by mlists 2023-05-01T21:43:23Z ♥ 3
There's a lot of fun content here, great job! The whole idea (gear, manpower) reminds me of logi in Foxhole--a game I've played for years.
I felt the UI could have been better. The music/sfx sliders could have been smaller. The blue hex highlighting where you can move blended with the green tiles a bit. The end result was hard to make out sometimes. Mostly, though, I would have loved an indicator showing me how many turns until a unit ran out of supplies.
Like I said, this was a lot of fun. And I love the concept!
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Drone Delivery Service by jclardy 2023-05-01T21:02:49Z ♥ 1
The box was erratic at times when bumping it into stuff, and it once glitched through the level wall (happened on 2nd level). Maybe slightly tilting the drone to represent it's momentum would help the "feel" of movement, but that's nitpicking. Solid entry and I enjoyed playing it! It's my first LD as well, and I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did. :)
Andromeda Delivery Service by lisyarus 2023-05-01T19:40:59Z ♥ 1
The whole thing felt very cohesive. I struggled for a minute or two building my first ship but quickly figured each block out. Great job!
The Envelope by DzejPi 2023-05-01T19:24:53Z ♥ 2
I wish the walking sound changed when you sprinted. This game has an awesome atmosphere though, and great art!
Delivery Dungeon by Buni 2023-05-01T18:21:34Z ♥ 1
I really like the gameplay loop and the map. I'm not in love with the movement, but it wasn't necessarily bad. This is a solid game.
Super Pizza Kid by CaliceDev 2023-05-01T18:08:44Z ♥ 1
Just challenging enough without being frustrating. The quick restarts helped. I really liked it. :)
PRECIOUS CARGO (and some aliens trying to steal it from you) by jdah 2023-05-01T17:57:15Z ♥ 1
I loved it! And, as many others pointed out, it's amazing what you accomplished without an engine.
Rollin Express by yellow attic 2023-05-01T17:39:20Z ♥ 1
Wonderful art. I agree with the other commenter about transferring some momentum. Nice entry
Delivery Sim by Bad_B4DGuy 2023-05-01T16:34:17Z ♥ 0
As others have touched on: the movement could be better and the purpose of the different floors wasn't clear. I did like the graphics and the idea of objects having different move distances and abilities.
I called it after 500 rounds. I had 2224 remaining money.
Spirit Mail by Fabian Denter 2023-05-01T16:08:54Z ♥ 2
I loved the atmospheric music and the graphics fit the mood. The signposts were a big help--I had a hard time finding the chef after delivering his dish. Good entry
Slalom Pizza Delivery Service by SpeakWithPlants 2023-05-01T07:38:22Z ♥ 1
Great graphics, difficult but fun. My top score was only 45 points, but it felt like I did much better than that :D
Deliver Them by baknik 2023-05-01T07:29:39Z ♥ 2
Cool concept and sort of relaxing. I'm not sure I'd say their planetary defenses are puny though 😆
Pizza Puzzle by Paroxysmal 2023-05-01T07:16:17Z ♥ 1
Solid entry and I'm a big fan of the art style!
Pet Delivery by tanis 2023-05-01T07:00:48Z ♥ 2
While I was playing I wished the sensitivity of the catapult was a bit lower (as in you'd need to drag your mouse a longer distance). Other than that I really enjoyed it.
Pizza Rush by rjerez192 2023-05-01T06:24:09Z ♥ 0
Great game! I think the jumps could be a bit more powerful, but that would be my only critique. Overall, I think you nailed the difficulty by requiring two different mouse inputs all while controlling the bike.
Urgent Delivery by Tom Cumpsty 2023-05-01T06:13:31Z ♥ 1
You listed your itch.io page as source. Just thought I'd let you know in case that was by accident. Music was good (maybe a bit loud), but I really liked the concept and difficulty.
Neverending PetriChore by snakemuho 2023-05-01T05:54:47Z ♥ 1
I love the art style! Combining dash and double jump mid air felt a bit inconsistent.
Stand and Deliver by lathomas64 2023-05-01T05:35:45Z ♥ 2
The character art was ok, but the UI needed a bit more time I think. Nice to see an entry use the ursina engine!
Its All in the Delivery by Glove 2023-05-01T04:37:10Z ♥ 1
The art was really good! And I enjoyed playing something without deliverables in it 😆
Stork Exchange by Payaosito 2023-05-01T04:24:29Z ♥ 1
Fun game and it matches the theme perfectly. It's very simple in a good way.
LD53 - Constellation by AStrayRae 2023-05-01T04:10:02Z ♥ 1
I'm assuming it was by design, but in level 2 (Draco Vienna) it was really difficult to tell where I had been before. Other than that, I really enjoyed your game. The space dragon noodle was great!
Infant Interceptor by voidraizer 2023-05-01T03:47:06Z ♥ 1
The slurp sound effect on pickup was 10/10. I enjoyed the isometric art style as well.
Icy Porch by jebouin 2023-05-01T03:33:09Z ♥ 2
I loved it! Tricky delivery took a few more attempts than I'd like to admit. 😆 Great level design and a very polished game.
Packontra by CaptainDreamcast 2023-05-01T03:10:09Z ♥ 1
I've played several times and I'm still not sure I understand how to deliver the packages correctly. 😆 I really enjoyed the opening sequence and had fun overall.
Energy Delivery by Gzalo 2023-05-01T02:49:05Z ♥ 2
I liked the tutorial being included in the game, and the opening lines did a lot for the mood. I thought it was a bit too fast (without pausing) to have enough time to switch between adding and removing lines, but I enjoyed your game overall and thought it had the right amount of difficulty.
LD53: House Delivery! by burnedkirby 2023-05-01T02:36:06Z ♥ 2
It really gets moving! 😄 Fine job!