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MabraX

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YearLDThemeGameDivisionRankOvFuInThGrHuMo
202149Unstable👥1000 Shellsjam13343.002.783.322.452.482.67
202046Keep it alive👥And weep above an endless gravejam21383.032.333.013.353.863.78

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Comments by MabraX

LD46 — Keep it alive

The Storm by NvrSkipGameDay 2020-04-27T21:26:13Z

Hi, I did not undestand the game really. The art design was cool. :smiley:

Chocolate: The Fantastical Adventure of the Doggy Walk by Anizian Games 2020-05-05T12:51:51Z

Pretty nice puzzles. Nice entry!

Attack on Lizilla by drkr 2020-05-02T21:46:20Z

Fun game!!!. Need some polish... it was fun the nuke mechanics.

My Balloon Friend LD46 by Seraphina 2020-04-30T14:31:51Z

Nice game. I liked the idea; I think everyone has played in real life the game of not letting the balloon touch the floor. It is a challenging game. Some improvements: background music, to have a better atmosphere. The balloon could have been more rounded. Other than that, it is a very nice entry, good childhood memories (yeah, I'm old, so I had to play with what I had at hand :P).

Cactus Care by west 2020-04-29T19:09:24Z

Nice concept!. I missed the sound. It is a challenging game to play. I had problems with the jar that got stuck inside the sink more than a few times. I liked the low poly graphics. Nice entry!

Cells by Gaming Night 2020-04-26T15:30:09Z

The game is really polished. I liked the splash screen, menus etcetera. I played the original version, by trial and error, I was able to figure out the amount of immunity level that I needed. It is challenging enough. Nice job!.

Keep Him Alive by Lamossus 2020-04-28T14:02:29Z

A keep them alive game!!!. Nice mechanics, cool atmosphere, and music. Hard too!!!. Maybe higher resolution settings for the short-sighted older people could be an improvement. Nice work!!

Operations : KIA by zyapimstudios 2020-04-23T14:28:45Z

Plain and simple. The problem is that I caused a lot of tunneling effects, meaning I went through the walls :(, but despite this is fun tu play. Congrats. Check our game too :) https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/46/and-weep-above-an-endless-grave

Defend the Loot! by ArtemFTW 2020-04-29T12:59:43Z

First, at all, let me congratulate you as a fellow engine developer for coding this in C++ from scratch; that's a challenge by itself. The UI was good, and gameplay too. It was a fun retro game. Very nice work!!!

Vine and Void by JUSTCAMH 2020-04-26T15:01:00Z

The music is so relaxing; it feels nice to play and relax. It's intuitive to understand what to do. The game difficulty is ok. The procedurally generated levels are cool because it gives you repeatability.

What I really like about this game is that it gives me a happy mood when I'm playing it, I don't care about winning or losing. Really nice work!.

Enduring Toddel by WhyNotYT 2020-04-25T23:58:46Z

You got me laughing with this game. It is hard to keep the baby alive... I ended up using my left hand with the arrow keys and the right one with the mouse. Maybe the cars could have kept the same drawing style. Congrats!.

Enduring Toddel by WhyNotYT 2020-04-26T15:03:34Z

@whynotyt my old brick phone you mean :joy:

Flower Secret by Fvafhae 2020-04-24T12:30:31Z

Nice concept. I enjoyed the water system, I was like Oooohhh shh**t I have to hurry, or the plant dies. I would have liked more levels. Nice pixel art. Another thing to improve is to add some sounds to make it more immersive. Nice work!.

Keep the party alive by Daniil Tcyvakin 2020-04-29T00:03:44Z

Loved the music. Nice game, I makes you want to party :P

Save Bob by Boaz 2020-05-05T18:05:46Z

Killer birds!!!. Cool looking game. Very easy to understand how to play it. Nice work!

CrossWalk by WilliamCarter 2020-04-27T21:37:51Z

Cool idea, but I couldn't fully enjoy it because of the bugs. There was no music or sound either. I liked the low poly graphics. You should definitely fix the bugs and add some sounds ;D. Good work!

And weep above an endless grave by MabraX 2020-04-18T22:54:50Z

Preview of the main character

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And weep above an endless grave by MabraX 2020-04-19T02:35:38Z

Another character

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And weep above an endless grave by MabraX 2020-04-19T05:19:23Z

Adding some colors

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And weep above an endless grave by MabraX 2020-04-20T02:37:27Z

The Gentleman!!

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I need coffee!!!

And weep above an endless grave by MabraX 2020-04-20T14:28:08Z

The girl

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We all slept like 3 hours

And weep above an endless grave by MabraX 2020-04-21T12:39:56Z

Thank you very much for your comment. We agree with you about the environmental detail. There is so much you can do in 72 hours, U.U. We will polish the levels with time because we enjoyed the jam (our first) and want to improve... About the slowness of the girl, it was intended (imagine testing that girl over and over :P), but of course, it is a game design parameter that needs to be balanced out with the opinion of you guys, the players. So again, thank you for the feedback.

And weep above an endless grave by MabraX 2020-04-24T12:21:01Z

Thank you for your comments. We will take into consideration about the last level, I think we can add some clues of how to solve the puzzle to make it more fun ;D.

And weep above an endless grave by MabraX 2020-04-26T14:39:23Z

Thank you, @justcamh!. We loved your review. Yes!, the characters knew each other; there is an implied story between them. We know we failed with the lighting of the levels.

We believe that games should bring out emotions, so we tried to reflect that with the atmosphere (sound and art), and frustration ;D. We decided to give the players something different, but within 72 hours, U.U. Of course, the level design could have been improved, and for the next jam we will have in consideration all the reviews that you guys give us. Thank you very much.

And weep above an endless grave by MabraX 2020-04-27T00:17:20Z

Thank you very much for your review. We definitely will improve for our next jam ;D.

And weep above an endless grave by MabraX 2020-04-29T19:03:55Z

Thank you for playing our game!!!. It is a nice feeling watching other people play the game. We will definitively take into account your suggestion. :D

And weep above an endless grave by MabraX 2020-05-12T22:02:16Z

Thanks to all the people that voted and reviewed our game. See you on the next Ludum Dare!!!

Battery Life by Morriekken 2020-04-27T21:32:00Z

Fun game. I missed some background music. The graphics were simple, but at the same time, nice. It was a little bit hard to control the robot, but I think that was intended. Nice job!

Torch Runner by Equivocator 2020-04-26T00:09:26Z

Fun game, hard too. The controls need a little bit of work maybe, sometimes the wall jump is not that responsive so I end up dying U.U. Congrats!!!

LD49 — Unstable

Candle Lights by saintheiser 2021-10-05T02:12:41Z

For me, it is a good game. I love puzzle games. The art and the music are so cool, like an old NES game. One thing that is my opinion of course, is that the battle with the bats should be something like turn based so that the game only focus on puzzle solving and not on hand coordination skills. Very nice submission.

Unstable Ground by gamepopper 2021-10-10T14:57:17Z

The game looks polish, the UI fits with the graphics perfectly. The music and sound are aligned with the old school graphics. The in-game instructions are a very nice touch. I don't like tutorials in games. It is not an easy game, and for me that is a plus. The weather is a nice touch, it makes it stand out of just beign a simple try to find balance game. And of course the people too.

About the graphics, there is some horizontal misalignment of the structures, but if I were to guess must be because of the rotation of sprites and the rendering order. The full screen is a little pixelated, but that is just a detail that of course can be fixed with more time.

I know that is difficult to code and fine tune a physics based game, and for that you did a great job. I could go on so more, if you want you can pm me. This entry is in my top 10 for this ludum dare. Congratulations!

-Y- by Iluvatar 2021-10-05T01:27:30Z

Very nice game. I like the old point-and-click pixel art-based games. Too sad it was too short.

Hun's table by Justine D 2021-10-08T18:47:03Z

Fun game. I liked that there is a tutorial, but at first, I did not understand how to prevent the Huns to flip the middle table. I could not find a pause menu in the middle of the game. The other thing the game could have used a piece of background music to give a more fun vibe. I enjoyed playing the game, it kept me laser focus to keep the customers drunk :P.

Eudora by EdevJogos 2021-10-05T21:35:12Z

The graphics are terrific. The night effect is so cool. The music is perfect for the desert-like vibe. The "unstable" theme is totally in the game. Well done guys!!!

Perilous Potions by Deprecat 2021-10-05T16:22:39Z

Nice game. In my humble opinion the only issue that I found since it is kind of a puzzle game is that you can brute force the solution if you have the memory to recall the order of ingredients.

Core Meltdown by sockpuppetcow 2021-10-09T22:51:05Z

Interesting entry. It is an engaging game. The music and the sense of urgency kind of make you be focused on the game. I found it a bit hard, especially when you have to jump to get the claw. Not that this is a bad thing. The instructions were easy to follow. Overall very polished game for a jam, the only thing (like in my case) was that the UI was not polished. Nice job!!!

NEKONOVA'S NOT HOME by LeYamez 2021-10-05T01:49:03Z

Nice game!. Very difficult to play and for me, that is always good. One consideration could be to think of a solution for the RNG because even if one gets good at the game the randomness is too high. Still, I enjoyed it a lot, great work.

Last Mile by kurrik 2021-10-04T23:04:27Z

hi, enjoyable game. Maybe you could add more distractors to the scene to make it more unstable. :)

Cat-Saving Werewolf by OlegKlishin 2021-10-05T00:58:56Z

Nice pixel art. There is a bug I think, because I can go outside the room for some reason.

1000 Shells by MabraX 2021-10-05T01:51:34Z

Thank you. We tried to aim so that the rules of the game were presented in the early levels by discovering them. Of course, we can do better but the lack of sleep and too much caffeine didn't help :P.

1000 Shells by MabraX 2021-10-05T19:05:13Z

thank you @slimmerburger @masterfulmonkey @not-tomo @transylvanian-blacksmiths. All the feedback is welcome. We wanted to finish the UI, but we ran out of coffee :P.

1000 Shells by MabraX 2021-10-07T22:39:41Z

@rookrules with @almagor, we enjoyed watching you suffer while solving the puzzles :P @albyk, @edevjogos, @lucasglass thank you for taking the time to understand the rules. One thing we acknowledge is that the difficulty increases too fast (in our opinion, of course). Thank you all!!!.

1000 Shells by MabraX 2021-10-08T14:02:55Z

@bluishgreenpro first of all, thank you for the interview and playing our game. We are aware of this issue. We want to develop an off Ludum dare 49 version introducing these types of levels. For the Ludum dare, we built the game from scratch, so we ran out of time to test the balance of the learning curve. Thank you again for the feedback, we appreciated it a lot.

1000 Shells by MabraX 2021-10-10T14:14:01Z

@python-b5 Thank you for the feedback. We did not use a tutorial on purpose, the concept behind is that the player figures the rules out. Still, we know that the levels scaled in difficulty too fast, but as I said before we did not have enough time to do the fine-tuning in terms of difficulty balance. We want to publish an extended version that does a better job at this. About the theme, the idea was that if you made mistakes under the rules of "shells cloning" then you will start to have more turtles on your puzzle and therefore the solution will become more stochastic and therefore unstable. Again we are very pleased that you liked it, and for the next jam, we will try to take all feedback that we have received and improve the way that we try to expose the ideas to the players.

@geckoo1337 thank you for playing the game. Even though we did not model the character and turtles, we try to come with a good color palette and post-processing effects to give this look and feel.

1000 Shells by MabraX 2021-10-10T14:24:25Z

@hiisileiri Level 3: "crossroads" was supposed to introduce the cloning rule to the player. And then level 4 tried to solidify the concept. I think the levels are too tricky and so maybe the player can not focus on: "AAAA so the rule is this...(no spoiler :D)". And then from 5+ things get crazy. I hope you can give it a try again and maybe give us some more pointer on what you have issues with. Thank you very much for the feedback.

1000 Shells by MabraX 2021-10-10T16:11:12Z

@hiisileiri thank you so much for the detailed feedback. @gamepopper we wanted to add the rotating animation, butwe ran into some weird bugs therefore we had to remove the feature. I see that the controls can be a little tricky, so thanks for the observation. When you test it so much, it becomes second nature, and then one can lose sight of what it feels if you are new to the game. Thank you a lot!!!.

Topple Tower by Kroporo 2021-10-05T00:09:59Z

Nice art style.

Cleaner of the Crumbling Keep by andy593 2021-10-05T00:36:39Z

I like the idea, no time to stop and think!. Nicely done!.

Unstable Alchemy by sarahs7 2021-10-05T00:50:59Z

Cool game. A little complicated at the start, but it was fun to solve the riddles and don't explode in the process :D

Witches Brew by wertyyytrew 2021-10-05T00:43:49Z

Mixing potions is always fun. One thing to consider, controls for left-handed users. Nice work!

Lonely sailor by quackBehavior 2021-10-05T19:53:24Z

Nice submission. It was easy to understand. I would have liked some background music. Good work!!!

Unstable Genius by Doc Kaos 2021-10-04T23:16:46Z

I really liked the intro. Good old times xD.

Pillars of Faith by bunnybones 2021-10-04T23:29:52Z

Interesting The game becomes difficult as you progress. I don't know if this was a bug, but there was no music playing.