The Newspaper Deliver by jk5000 2023-05-01T07:02:49Z
nostalgic
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → Users → aushijo
| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2023 | 53 | Delivery | soul sender | jam | 826 | 3.35 | 3.27 | 3.13 | 3.51 | 3.73 | 3.06 | 2.73 | 3.08 |
nostalgic
idea is very cool!
i like the gameboy style graphics and music, but idk how to play, it would be great to have a tutorial on the goal/ mechanics rather than a text asking me to press X
nice physics based game, you could make the boxes a little heavier to make it more easy
so fun and innovative! i like the natural difficulty of having to juggle, or bounce, 2 things at once. i like the pixel graphics, good job! :)
kinda hard to understand, a tutorial instead of just instructions wouldn't hurt, great idea and concept tho!
nice idea
hey miziziziz, great game again! watched the live streams of the development (and cant wait for the post-mortem) and i need to say that the music and the art are fire! but the movement system takes a while to get used to, you could add more health pickups to make it easier. overall great game, love the environment and the lore! and you might wanna change this lol
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interesting interpretation of the theme and nice game
nice idea!
aw man, hope you can get your game to work after pressing start, menu looked pretty cool tho
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cute idea with more content than i expected, nice!
it doesn't open on windows 11
interesting movement system
gerat game, lots of fun and a good aim trainer
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yoooo sick game! nice music and gameplay!
nice game
cute rats
add a little music and this game would be a great time to spend a boring afternoon with
I rated 5 stars in all categories
wooo nice game! good job on the art, music and idea! never seen an idea like this before, which makes it so fun and engaging for me!
NICE ART and music. though it took my a while to learn what was happening, you could add an indicator like a sfx to show that you've already picked up the package. i like the idea and the particles when you complete a delivery. good job :)
I love the art style and the idea! This has to be one of my favorited games for this LD, great work. Great idea, nice job :)
very innovative, but add some background music
COOL GAME! this is the type of game i'll play once i die in a game
fun speedrunning game!
interesting idea!
love the art of the character
nice art!
i quite like the art and the music, so cute and calming
nice art and good driving mechanics but a tutorial would be good
hahah creative interpretation! i like the graphics!
thanks everyone for your helpful feedback!
@vaps1k thanks! i was trying to do that but i did not know how to, the video could help!
@adamcyounis Alright thanks for the feedback! I'll add your improvements in a future build :) And yea it's my first LD game
cute idea, fun
i like your creativity, you should make more of this game!
nice idea! you could add sfx for an indicator that the babies are put into the box, that would be good. i also took a while to figure out what was going on, you might want to add how to play it in your LD game description :) baby sprites and music are nice, good job!
nice looking and nice sound effects, but background music could make the game feel more fun. the third level was difficult tho, but i learnt the mechanics easily which is good. keep it up!