FoonLudum Dare ExplorerLD53 → Ice Break Delivery

Ice Break Delivery

By sneakyfox and arsher

View on ldjam.com

CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall4403.71111
Fun4693.56111
Innovation4513.51111
Theme2664.21111
Graphics4213.94111
Audio2863.71110
Humor3883.42106
Mood4483.68104

Comments

fermingimpel 2023-05-02 02:29

i like penguins

chii 2023-05-02 02:31

The game is actually quite hard! (maybe I'm just bad) I especially enjoyed pushing naughty penguins into water.

duncant 2023-05-02 11:56

Those sneaky penguins stealing my fish :). Took me a bit to figure out I shouldn't eat the fish when I pick them up. Cool game, good work.

answer21 2023-05-02 11:56

Very, very nice. I like this kind of game and the mechanics are good, in short I like everything.

innocuousuk 2023-05-02 11:59

Innovative! The idea is great, execution is very good, awesome game!

danknstein 2023-05-02 11:59

that was fun! great visuals and the music fit the vibe nicely too. when i realised i could lead the pack of hungry penguins into the water it was a great moment. nice work!

tommeh 2023-05-02 12:08

Cool game with really great art and presentation. Was on the easier side but still an enjoyable experience. Nice job!

sneakyfox 2023-05-02 12:09

@fermingimpel @chii @duncant @answer21 @innocuousuk @danknstein @tommeh

:penguin: **Thanks for feedback!**

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Eat feature only added for fast remove if you pick wrong fish

Also you can return fish back to you again, if you collides with penguin that holds fish :)

astrocookie 2023-05-02 12:12

The concept is really fun and original! And it's great to be able to play on a browser. Well done! Controls are a bit complex to handle, though.

rigel 2023-05-02 15:54

Cool!It's great to deceive penguins into the water.I like this tense and exciting rhythm.Love your visual style and the music,and the sound effect.

sneakyfox 2023-05-02 18:59

@astrocookie @rigel

:penguin: **Thanks for Feedback!**

@astrocookie Can you tell why controls are complex? What causes problems?

velvetlobster 2023-05-03 04:17

ok, not sure I got the mechanics and rules right but this surely reminds me of penguin club, that game that went down in history in the early years of the internet.

this was penguin club

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after a long time I read that these are supposed to be my enemies, they surely dont look like it, I thought they were friends and I had to take the fishes to them

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sneakyfox 2023-05-03 10:28

@velvetlobster

:penguin: **Thanks for Feedback!**

I didn't know about penguins club, but I like it, must check now) :punch: Thanks, I am really appreciate it

This penguins is just hungry :D Don't judge them, you will do everything when it comes to survive like they do

ruslana 2023-05-03 10:30

I really like this concept. Penguins are funny and the gamplay emphasizes it. I like how challenging it is to give fish to the right penguin as others are trying to get it first :D cool idea! It is a very nice game for 3 days with nice design

badcop 2023-05-03 11:00

the waddle is really cute, and it was definitely a "ooooh, i get it now" factor when I finally dumped a bunch of penguins in one of the holes :D

ruruie 2023-05-03 11:06

The penguins going into the drink is absolutely the top part of this game. I was getting some input bugs that killed me a couple times though - direction keys getting stuck and so forth.

sneakyfox 2023-05-03 23:21

@ruslana @badcop @ruruie

:penguin: **Thanks for Feedback!**

I added some fixes and hope it helps

chompdev 2023-05-04 05:20

Fun game! The music and sfx are really nice, and the gameplay is solid. There's something really satisfying about the back-and-forth of trying to steal a fish back from a big mob of penguins. It's also really fun to dash around the edge of a pond and cause all the pursuing penguins to fall in. Very good work on this one! :)

zeit 2023-05-04 05:51

Great Game dude! Those little penguins are so cute!!!

sneakyfox 2023-05-04 10:01

:penguin:** Thanks for Feedback! **

@chompdev Wow, it's interesting idea, i didn't think about edge dash, I need to try on my own)

@zeit You rock! :)

lillatorp 2023-05-04 10:04

Very cute entry. The graphics are very thought through and I quickly empathize with the little wiggly walkers. As mentioned earlier I didn't immediately identify who's on my side and not.

kohcepba 2023-05-04 10:22

This is the most complete game on this jam so far, with huge commerce potential. You should definitely polish it a bit and make mobile or something. I have a lot of fun.

P.S. Not sure how to flip the iceberg.

gigichef 2023-05-04 10:27

When I play this game I'm thinking, low poly penguins must be a thing, their so cute :3 The loop is very intuitive, it's clever of you to put the color of the direction, display the keys and have the fish picked up automatically. For me despite the difficulty, these smart details make the game very accessible and it's great

the-martijn 2023-05-04 10:36

Fun idea! This is the second game this LDjam I play that uses pinguïns, haha.

Stealing the fishes back is a bit hard to get used to.

rabbert 2023-05-04 11:17

I had a lot of fun playing this game! I was surprised there was upgrades and everything. Very cool game. Only issue I had was with the dash sound effect which I would associate with dropping an item, so I kept thinking I dropped the fish, just a minor nit-pick. Other than that great job!

noskro 2023-05-04 12:00

I have the strinkt assignment to bookmark all games involving penguins for my wife... so her review will be incoming soon :laughing: :penguin:

mrscom 2023-05-04 12:17

This is a very cool and cute game. The mechanics and the theme are revealed to the max! I did not find any bugs. I will recommend your game to my friends. I liked the game very much.

freshbone 2023-05-04 13:48

cute as hell and the upgrade system makes it worth a while

ping78 2023-05-04 14:05

Really cool game, enjoyed it quite a bit!

nikaz 2023-05-04 15:31

I like this game! It's so fun when I push the penguins into the holes.

0x-void-x0 2023-05-04 19:05

Cute game you made, I think the gameplay is pretty easy to understand and leads to funny situations, the the style of the game mixed with the camera angle has a professional vibe to it, the restart after falling in water felt too punishing though, but I had fun experimenting with strategies around the army of penguins!

sneakyfox 2023-05-04 20:41

@lillatorp @kohcepba @gigichef @the-martijn @rabbert @noskro @mrscom @freshbone @ping78 @nikaz @0x-void-x0

:penguin: **Guys, you all rock! Thank you for your feedback!**

ghodan 2023-05-04 22:36

This is so cute. Well done! I like the contrast of the chill music to the absolutely not chill penguins trying to keep me from doing my job.

cabjhegas 2023-05-05 00:16

Nice entry!! I liked a lot the experience. I think it would help to know where the fishs are (all the time). I would prefer to throw the fish instead of push the penguins (but it can be just me). Good job!

rakowu 2023-05-05 10:14

Fun game. I find the concept of them being greedy funny. The most fun is when they all fall into the water. I find it very successful.

weirdbitgames 2023-05-05 10:46

Hehe "tittle"!

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I like the low-poly design of the penguins and they look so CUTE with the fishes in their beaks! Such a great concept too, I bet a lot of people are kicking themselves for not thinking of it! Great work!

zhiteng-chen 2023-05-05 14:03

It is pretty fun game. I like the feeling that those "silly" panguines are coming to block your delivery. However, at first I don't get that the colorful point on the screen is to tell my goal (to pick a color and go there). More guide can be added. Welcome to play my game as well.

aschab 2023-05-05 15:11

This game reminds me of the classic moment in SM64 when I used to throw the penguin off the cliff, and my inner child loves it! It's incredibly fun, Great Work!

neshtyak 2023-05-05 15:12

Hehe funny penguins! So cute :heart: It was a little hard at first, as the other penguins immediately took the fish as soon as I encountered them. As I understand it, in such cases you need to have time to quickly use the dash and not to forget about, but it was not clear how to replenish the charge, there is not enough tutorial more than just specifying the keys But once I figured everything out it was pretty fun, great job!

kitira 2023-05-05 15:58

Fun game! Nice that it is indicated in which direction you have to deliver. I like the pushes - even though I always pushed the one I was supposed to bring the delivery to into the water as well. ^^ The penguins are very cute.

saltysa 2023-05-05 16:58

At first I didn't know what to do but once I got it it was quite enjoyable! I loved running away from greedy penguins and watching them fall in water while they were trying to catch up with me to eat my fish. I also tried to bring them to the fish reserve thinking they'll be happy to eat the fishes there, but they only wanted MY fish. So I drowned them.

weeping-rupee 2023-05-05 17:12

Very cute! If you’re interested in my feedback here is a VOD of me playing it: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/1811761064

arsher 2023-05-05 18:38

@weeping-rupee thx. Really interested. It's always nice and useful to see a live reaction of acquaintance and gradual understanding of game mechanics.

yasmeen 2023-05-06 10:35

Love the cute low-poly penguins and relaxing music! And really like the idea of having to dash past a horde of hungry penguins. The instructions are good for the jam, but afterward it could be helpful to add a basic in-game tutorial since it took me a couple of tries to figure it out. Nice job!

digitaldude555 2023-05-06 11:33

Like the penguin design, fun to play, gets really challenging really fast. Like the music, a bit repetitive my only complaint. Overall good job.

kerri 2023-05-06 12:18

such a fun game! Love the theme, music, mechanics and trying to keep fish away from those greedy friends. Would be nice to have an option to restart the level for clumsy delivery penguins and if the coloured circle was a more thematic shape more like an arrow or fish to make it clear where to go. Overall, great effort, had a lot of fun!

notdepressedeveloper 2023-05-06 12:24

As a penguin lover, this game was a real treat! Delivering fish to the hungry penguins was so beautiful. I loved the dash and push features, and the levels were cleverly designed. I highly recommend this fun game to all penguin fans :penguin: :penguin: :penguin:

kujoen 2023-05-06 12:25

Nice submission :), here's some feedback: - I find it really harsh that the entire game resets when you land in the water and it quickly kills the fun for me. Perhaps tying "game over" to another aspect, such as having too many open deliveries left at the end of the day would be better. This would also allow you to remove the penguins from despawning, which is really annoying. - Some of the mechanics, such as you being able to take back fish from penguins, aren't very clear. - Your art and music is fantastic. - Impressive that you got an upgrade system working, that stuff takes time.

All in all a good submission, great work!

milkyjoe73 2023-05-06 12:26

Waddle animation :ok_hand:

themule 2023-05-06 14:11

I like your game! Unforgiving AI and color coding :P Satisfying mechanics and the addition of radar dots to direct you was a helpful feature. The music has a nice chill vibe to it, kind of reminds me of Donkey Kong Country tunes. Very cool

sneakyfox 2023-05-06 14:27

@ghodan @cabjhegas @rakowu @weirdbitgames @zhiteng-chen @aschab @neshtyak @kitira @saltysa @weeping-rupee @yasmeen @digitaldude555 @kerri @notdepressedeveloper @kujoen @milkyjoe73 @themule

:penguin: **Thank you all for Feedback!**

I'm glad that you all had fun, I hope you really enjoy it.

I am listening to all the negative and frustrating moments of the game (positive too xD ), and I will try to find the time to make a small but improved version of this game based on your reviews for mobile platforms, also I want to run it smoothly in mobile WebGL. I think that's where this game must belong :) (maybe do, it all depends)

ryabchik 2023-05-06 22:29

Cute game about penguins) I really liked the music and sounds, there are sounds for literally any action, which is very pleasing. And nice 3D graphics

nature-pixels 2023-05-07 00:29

Nice game!

fear-games 2023-05-07 10:01

Great looking game, Love the little penguins. Good fun too

praccen 2023-05-07 11:36

Was fun and addicting! Liked the overall experience, great looking, nice sounding, good controls! I spent some time eating fish thinking it would replenish my charge, which I think would have been a nice addition. Would also like to be able to just restart the day if I fell into the water, instead of completely resetting from 0.

olddog 2023-05-07 15:08

cute game ,spent some time on this game ,while I feel little confused at begin,good job

svenerik 2023-05-07 18:53

Cute, addicting and maniacal- gotta push all of them into the water for extra fun. I really loved the game-play and the overall aesthetics of it, everything felt like a single coherent unit. Awesome game!

ausstein 2023-05-07 21:52

Thank you so much for dropping by My stream! I really enjoyed the game :)

lomby 2023-05-08 02:00

Thanks for submitting your game on the stream! Here’s the stream if you wanted to re-watch initial thoughts (timestamps in the description to jump to your game!) [youtube link](youtu.be/jljB3XXZHcg)

2023-05-08 07:59

Cute game! I included it in my Ludum Dare 53 compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look. https://youtu.be/d5bLQmuzzPs

aviv-levy 2023-05-08 20:08

Ok this is really cute! I like the graphics and the nice music which fit together really well. The addition of thieving penguins as an obstacle / challenge combined with breaks in the ice is a fantastic idea. The addition of upgrades is great. I have a *bit* of feedback:

- I thought eat replenishes my charges, and took a moment to realize it's a "get rid of the fish you're holding so you can pick up another one" button - Grabbing the fish back from the thieving penguins could be a bit finicky - LMB "Push" says hold but it seems to do exactly the same when just clicking. Unless there's an upgrade I missed? - It took me a moment to realize there's a timer, I think it should be a bit more visible (brighter color, and maybe a number of seconds remaining) - Since this is ice we're talking about, it would be cool if you gained momentum as you go forward - Falling in the ice resulting in a total game over was a bit too much - I took a moment to realize the colored dots meant "deliver here", I think they should be arrows with penguin next to them

Still, a fantastic submission. Congrats :)

dreamerflow 2023-05-09 07:07

Nice entry! I like the art and mechanics, don´t like thieves penguins lol, gets a little hard to give the fish to the right penguin while the other penguins chase you but it was fun, nice implementation on the theme, cool work!

macdoom 2023-05-09 17:32

Excellent jam entry! Loved the lowpoly graphics and the cute penguins. Awesome music too! Is overall a fun and original game. Good job!

oscar-berry 2023-05-09 20:52

Hi guys! I really loved playing your game! The concept is really cool, and overall, it's very original to play as a penguin! The fact all the others penguins want to steal your fish is so funny!

Really nice job to you! :smile:

island-jam-2-group-3 2023-05-11 20:49

Very polished and cute. Congrats!

rodrigo-denubila 2023-05-11 21:43

Interesting concept, and seems very polished. Interesting take on the theme. Good job!

pralista 2023-05-12 01:24

cute game

mateusboga 2023-05-12 20:21

Very nice game! Thanks for submitting ^^ Here's the VOD: https://www.twitch.tv/videos/1818241664

justinsix 2023-05-13 11:24

OMG,it's so cute! You play as this little penguin delivering fish to other penguins on different colored dots around the ice. But watch out, because these other penguins will try to steal your fish! You can push them away or dash to escape, but if you fall in the water, it's game over.

Overall, I had a blast playing it. The low-poly graphics are adorable and the music is so calming. There are even upgrades you can get to make your deliveries easier. The only downside was that it was a bit hard to figure out at first, especially with some of the mechanics like grabbing the fish back from other penguins and using the "eat" button to drop your fish and pick up another. But once I got the hang of it, it was super fun and addicting. Definitely recommend giving it a try!

sneakyfox 2023-05-13 17:54

@ryabchik @nature-pixels @fear-games @praccen @olddog @svenerik @ausstein @lomby @jupiter-hadley @aviv-levy @dreamerflow @macdoom @oscar-berry @island-jam-2-group-3 @rodrigo-denubila @pralista @mateusboga @justinsix ** :penguin: Guys, Thanks all of you for feedback! **

I'm glad that you really enjoyed playing our little game :)

sakii 2023-05-14 11:07

Cute game, well polished and great humor value. Loved it

0mbre 2023-05-14 14:07

I love this game ! It's cute, easy to understand, it has penguins. I didn't notice the time bar before the second day, i wish it was a little more visible. I don't know if it's my screen or if it's because i didn't play in fullscreen but the money is practically above one of the amelioration for me so i can't buy it. Overall it's a really good entry to this jam, good job !

jhax 2023-05-14 19:21

Nicely put together game! Really like the low poly visuals and the sort of bouncey back-and-forth walk animations. Music is really chill, and I can't quite put my finger on why, but I really like the tinkly time running out sounds.

Had quite a lot of fun getting a bunch of enemies following me then leading them into an ice break rather than pushing them in - but definitely got a bit too bold with it once or twice and just ended up falling in myself!

trexxak 2023-05-16 04:46

cute, fun, challenging! Feed fish, enjoy visuals & sounds.

jordantanner 2023-05-16 22:17

I think the graphics were my favorite part of this game. I found it difficult to feed the correct penguin. I think it may be slightly easier if the other penguins didn't immediately snatch the fish away. If there were a short "forgiveness" delay, even 0.25 seconds, it might make it a bit smoother experience. I also think it would be a nice touch if you didn't have to restart when you fell in the water, but maybe just a time penalty. A little forgiveness on the player goes a long way I think. This is a really solid foundation though and a very memorable entry. Nice work!

jadener 2023-05-17 07:51

Very nice and fun idea with graphics that fit well ^^ I especially enjoyed getting rid of the greedy penguins

haymakercoding 2023-05-17 12:31

nice game with interesting idea. Kinda wish the penguin would face the direction I am moving. Seems like he faces the next objective? just feels a bit strange walking left and facing right

sneakyfox 2023-05-17 12:35

@haymakercoding The player penguin look to mouse) And face to mouse direction

sneakyfox 2023-05-17 12:36

@sakii @0mbre @jhax @trexxak @jordantanner @jadener @haymakercoding

** :penguin: Guys, Thanks all of you for feedback!**

We are really apreciate your feedback! Also you can check the post-jam edition, where we fixed and improved most common issues

magus77 2023-05-18 08:25

see pengui's, must play, must vote!

ping78 2023-05-18 11:48

Hi again. It ain't much, but it's honest delivery.

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