Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → Users → Yasmeen
| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | |
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| 2023 | 53 | Delivery | 👥 | Panda Express | jam | 1089 | 2.98 | 3.18 | 3.08 | 3.84 | 3.03 | 3.08 | 3.02 | 3.33 |
Fun! Gives me old-school Zelda vibes. Like the segments where you enter trees. Can be a bit tiring to keep pressing the same key to move in a direction - maybe allow the player to hold the key to move in that direction? Good job with your game!
Nice, an easy to understand and fun game! The art has a lot of personality. Some funny sound effects and music would be a good addition in the future.
Incredibly polished art and game overall! Fantastic job! For the UI I would sometimes get confused, for example I would see the down arrow and press down to drop something off when I should have actually pressed right - maybe try using different symbols for the pick-up/drop-off?
Great work, very impressive considering you made this alone! I liked the idle animation of the bee, and the instructions on the carpet in the intro area were a smart idea. With the combat it would be nice in the future to add some other options other than running away while the auto-shoot activates. For example maybe you have a bar you can fill that when activated gives you temporary invincibility? But overall amazing effort!
Good job, really unique idea! Did not expect to see a delivery game with Mario Galaxy-style physics. The worldbuilding in the description about the vegan burgers made me chuckle. For next steps it could it be fun to add elements such as a limit on the number of burgers or a time limit, and add challenges like moving planets or black holes that suck up burgers.
Absolutely love the look of the map! And the atmosphere created by the haunting music.
Love the cute low-poly penguins and relaxing music! And really like the idea of having to dash past a horde of hungry penguins. The instructions are good for the jam, but afterward it could be helpful to add a basic in-game tutorial since it took me a couple of tries to figure it out. Nice job!
Very impressive that you were able to add a cutscene and flesh out the story so much! The game is quite challenging - maybe add a super-easy mode/ mode with infinite lives where players can practice?
Nice! The music helped me get into the rhythm. Maybe could try highlighting the upcoming road intersection, to make it easier for the player to react?
Nice! I really appreciated the coherence in the presentation in terms of the retro graphics and audio. The controls are a bit unintuitive for the first time player (or maybe just me I don't know too much about boats XD), so I think a practice mode or tutorial would be helpful.
Thank you everyone for playing and sharing your feedback - so happy to hear that people enjoyed the pandas and music! And thank you for the suggestions to add more levels/mechanics and fine-tune the late game difficulty (we want the experience to be challenging without being impossible).
Thank you @cinterre and @longv for the feedback! We have updated the description to recommend that people play in full screen mode.