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| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | ||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2023 | 53 | Delivery | 👥 | Panda Express | jam | 1089 | 2.98 | 3.18 | 3.08 | 3.85 | 3.04 | 3.08 | 3.02 | 3.33 |
Yasmeen leaves an average of 11.0 feedback comments each event.
LD53 — Delivery (11)
All About That Buzz by ConradoClark 2023-05-06T15:55:38Z ♥ 1
Great work, very impressive considering you made this alone! I liked the idle animation of the bee, and the instructions on the carpet in the intro area were a smart idea. With the combat it would be nice in the future to add some other options other than running away while the auto-shoot activates. For example maybe you have a bar you can fill that when activated gives you temporary invincibility? But overall amazing effort!
Jitto by osullivp 2023-05-06T15:27:55Z ♥ 0
Fun game, simple yet engaging! I liked the art style and enjoyed the challenge of controlling 2 players at once. It would be nice to add some music during the gameplay, similar to the great music from the title screen.
Isles Express by Cinterre 2023-05-06T13:56:33Z ♥ 1
Nice! I really appreciated the coherence in the presentation in terms of the retro graphics and audio. The controls are a bit unintuitive for the first time player (or maybe just me I don't know too much about boats XD), so I think a practice mode or tutorial would be helpful.
Involuntary Nannies by xHadie 2023-05-06T13:17:54Z ♥ 2
Very impressive that you were able to add a cutscene and flesh out the story so much! The game is quite challenging - maybe add a super-easy mode/ mode with infinite lives where players can practice?
Salty Coins by Alexascher 2023-05-06T12:59:25Z ♥ 2
Absolutely love the look of the map! And the atmosphere created by the haunting music.
Ricardo's Busy Day by Floke 2023-05-06T12:45:44Z ♥ 1
Nice! The music helped me get into the rhythm. Maybe could try highlighting the upcoming road intersection, to make it easier for the player to react?
A Day In The Life of a Stork by kiguel182 2023-05-06T12:34:07Z ♥ 1
Nice, an easy to understand and fun game! The art has a lot of personality. Some funny sound effects and music would be a good addition in the future.
Rogue, fluff & nuts by Meta-link 2023-05-06T11:58:46Z ♥ 1
Fun! Gives me old-school Zelda vibes. Like the segments where you enter trees. Can be a bit tiring to keep pressing the same key to move in a direction - maybe allow the player to hold the key to move in that direction? Good job with your game!
Burger Galactic by Mals 2023-05-06T11:14:07Z ♥ 1
Good job, really unique idea! Did not expect to see a delivery game with Mario Galaxy-style physics. The worldbuilding in the description about the vegan burgers made me chuckle. For next steps it could it be fun to add elements such as a limit on the number of burgers or a time limit, and add challenges like moving planets or black holes that suck up burgers.
Heart-Warming Deliveries by Joscco 2023-05-06T10:53:15Z ♥ 1
Incredibly polished art and game overall! Fantastic job! For the UI I would sometimes get confused, for example I would see the down arrow and press down to drop something off when I should have actually pressed right - maybe try using different symbols for the pick-up/drop-off?
Ice Break Delivery by SneakyFox 2023-05-06T10:35:41Z ♥ 1
Love the cute low-poly penguins and relaxing music! And really like the idea of having to dash past a horde of hungry penguins. The instructions are good for the jam, but afterward it could be helpful to add a basic in-game tutorial since it took me a couple of tries to figure it out. Nice job!