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DON`T DIE STAY ALIVE!

By penguinbob

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall16263.31100
Fun11263.36100
Innovation21082.7899
Theme18363.3498
Graphics19093.03101
Audio10793.1698
Humor17692.3185
Mood20052.8790

Comments

thedashdude 2020-04-20 20:11

I got a 185. Reminds me of my all time favorite highscore game Mr. Oops! Music was nice. Penguin could look penguinier. Difficulty scaling seemed a little harsh.

thjsmith 2020-04-20 20:16

A good, simple idea - well executed. That music is relaaaaaxing.

werlock 2020-04-20 20:19

Very cool game. My record is 194. I can't get more)))

dick-claus 2020-04-20 20:21

I've got 211. The game gets harder. I would add the indicators where it will appear next. This way you can plan your moves better.

Well done. The music is so relaxing that I can play that addictive game forever.

penguinbob 2020-04-20 20:39

My record is 207 good job for beating my my high score @dick-clause. The Reason why the screenshot`s high score only says 142 is somehow I deleted my high score.

penguinbob 2020-04-20 20:39

Thanks for playing @thedashdude.

penguinbob 2020-04-20 20:39

Thanks for playing @thjsmith.

matt2728 2020-04-20 21:38

A nice and peaceful game.

constructive feedback: There were a few times where the fish was on the edge of the map, which seemed to get me killed as I had no time to react to spears. The the back of the spears also would hurt me when I would walk into them, seems like should only be the spear tip. Super minor things, but I feel like I need to give something constructive.

positive feedback: The art was super cute. I like the little pixelated fish. It was really easy to pick up and figure out the goal too. Thanks for providing an HTML version! Overall great little project!

penguinbob 2020-04-20 21:55

Thank you @matt2728 and the reply to your constructive feedback is I tried making only the spear tips kill, but it made the game to easy. I might try again later. I was going to make the fish on the outside of the grid be worth more points, but I got kind of tired working on the Ludum Dare project.

kto-to 2020-04-21 17:16

Good game. Great job!

ygrichman 2020-04-21 17:37

Fun to play, I was rubbish best I got was 87. I kept getting unlucky at the edges, living life dangerously :smile: . One suggestion would be to have extra tiles around the edge that you can't walk in but to show the spears approach.

aaiko 2020-04-22 00:59

real fun to play with

the-iddmeister 2020-04-22 11:26

Simple but very well executed game. I'm really bad at it though

elvaka 2020-04-22 11:33

I got 235 :D It's simple and fun, although it's a bit unfair since you have very little time to see spears coming from the edges when you have to collect fish on the outermost squares.

naughtybird 2020-04-22 11:34

Simple funny game, the penguin looks so awesome :) It was quite strange when I received some points just because I stay in one place and spears are flying by. Also it is very difficult to avoid the spears if you stand at the edge of the map. Maybe it will also be more convinient if only the spear point can damage, not the whole thing. Several times I died because I move into the spear edge which is not sharp.

xdsilentstorm 2020-04-22 11:34

Nice fun little game, though I think the colliders on the end of the spear might be to big which caused me to die once or twice. Still a good polished fun addictive game!

batswinger 2020-04-22 11:36

Very fun, great for mobile. Could probably be a lot of fun with a bigger grid on pc :-) Good work

d5r 2020-04-22 11:39

A bit on the simplistic side but does it really well. Agree that map could be bigger and spears spawn too fast at the edges. Perhaps a warning indicator outside the grid whenever a spear is about to spawn on a cell would be good.

literal-games 2020-04-22 11:41

I agree about making the backs of spears not kill you - maybe just the very back quarter or something? But the music is great and doesn't get annoying, and I like the cute little penguin! I played through a few times and got 179 which apparently isn't as good as lots of players here! I actually disagree about the edges of the screen - I think it makes moving there an interesting risk, but I would make the grid bigger so there's more room to move around inside. Cool game!

okkolobr 2020-04-22 11:41

Highscore : 122 ( 3 tries ). Music is nice but it kind of didn't match the game for me. It's too peacefull while there is some intense action :) Anyway, I enjoyed it. Nice work !

kirsty-lee 2020-04-22 11:43

Simple yet fun! It would be great to have an indication of where the arrows are coming from so you can plan ahead a little.

justuspan 2020-04-22 11:43

I love the peaceful tune.The pixel art is cute.I usually hit the handle of spear LOL. Nice work.

azagaya 2020-04-22 11:54

Hi, I enjoyed this game! simple mechanics, difficulty scales up nicely.

I would like that the wooden part of the spear stops the pinguin instead of killing it.

Music was relaxing. A bit short, but not annoying at all.

I would try another color palette, but that's just personal preference.

Cool game!

kassjak 2020-04-22 13:14

Nice and simple game! I would've wished that the wooden parts of the spears didn't kill the penguin and would either let the penguin clip through them or block the penguin from moving towards the spear.

kjscott 2020-04-22 14:36

My record was 257, a few times got trapped in almost inescapable situations. Also felt that being killed by the rear of the spear limited my ability to move around as the spears would then take up between 2 to 3 tiles at any one time which considering the 5x5 board represents quite a bit of space for each set.

ctran13 2020-04-22 17:28

The spears are a bit unforgiving (as some others mentioned, people get killed by the wooden part of the spear). Overall, good job

junber 2020-04-22 20:40

I managed to get 202 points after some tries. The penguin is cute but the spear hitbox could be a bit smaller so you don't get killed by their shafts so much.

mathias-van-hooreweghe 2020-04-22 20:41

Nice and simple game. 144 was my record. A bit of a shame that the wooden part of the spear kills you as you get trapped in some corners.. Graphics were a little too simple (a more detailed penguin would have been nice). But definitely a game that gets you to want to carry on playing.. Well done

polymars 2020-04-23 02:59

The short play sessions and simple gameplay make this perfect for a jam game! Sound effects would've been a great addition but the chill, relaxing background music makes up for that. Awesome job overall, the game is polished and really fun to play!

nonon 2020-04-23 10:20

Easy but effective, my best is 302. If my teammates manage to beat my score I may come back to play some more :P Nice entry!

fakefrogsonly 2020-04-23 12:07

Simple but fun. It sometimes felt a bit unforgiving walking into spears slightly too early but this was a good time, nice work!

ben657 2020-04-23 12:14

Good fun, as others have mentioned the hitboxes on spears could be a bit more forgiving though.

blackopsben 2020-04-23 12:15

I like it! Has potential. I'll admit I read the title wrong. I thought it said, "Don't stay alive" and that really intrigued me, so I was a little disappointed that it wasn't about trying to die as quickly as possible. haha! But seriously, well done. I would recommend making it a little faster and feel a little snappier.

lorwon 2020-04-23 12:16

It can be annoying to be killed by the wooden part of the spear. Nice little game by the way. Good work !

delph 2020-04-23 12:30

The music and the gameplay being so dissonant is actually really charming.

It's a simple game, but it's balanced / progresses in difficultly well, making you want to keep playing.

Would be nice if there was a little more forgiveness on the moving into the space of an square and arrow has *almost* left.

snowirbis 2020-04-23 12:31

That's more fun than I would have thought, good game !

The major improvement I can suggest is to work on the audio, the music add some contrast with the game, but does not fit well enough with your theme of a penguin hunting fishes

And I would have liked some audio effects when you grab a fish or when you get hit

fernando-tonon-de-rossi 2020-04-23 12:34

Nice game, it resembles those old nokia phone games! I missed some annoying SFX like playing a bit to every move... :laughing: I liked it, a really nice concept!

maksym 2020-04-23 12:35

Okay that was great game. Nice highscore.nice.PNG

But honestly there's a good concept and pleasant graphics. Would be nice if you had for example 3 lives but that's just a suggestion. Good job!

antti-haavikko 2020-04-23 12:51

Yeah, this seems to be as high as I can manage.

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Pretty cool! It was kinda unforgiving. The fact that there was no telegraph at all where the spears would be coming from made being on edge extremely dangerous. And if you're trying to just hang in the middle, the spears will pretty quickly drive you to the edges and your impending doom. Adding something like a brief danger icon on a spot just before the spear would appear there would help immensely.

I'd also like to see the tail end of the spears be less dangerous. Something like 10% of the tail of the spear could be non harming to make squeezing between spears more possible. And actually that could be taken even further and added to the tip too on a lesser scale. It would create more of these "close calls" (so actually instances where the player should have died but didn't) which are always fun and make the game seem more fair. Sure it would be very stack towards favouring the player but when you die and even have a slight inkling that you didn't hit the spike, it feels bad. A classic shmup mechanic which just makes the game feel better and less unfair.

Game development is full of these little tricks that stack the favour towards the player just to seem fair and to be more fun. Stuff like jump button buffering before actually hitting the ground from a previous jump or the so called "coyote air" which lets the player still jump for a tiny bit of time even after running off the ledge. That's what the player is trying to do, don't punish them for their silly slow human reflexes.

Restarting could be quicker. Sometimes the runs take just mere seconds, and it takes almost as long to restart and get the controls back to you.

Obviously there are stuff that could be improved. Sound effects for starters. It's a simple thing to add to make the actions seem more impactful. Then of course some special effects and (more) animations. You say there are cool animations but there were barely there and were very subtle. I'd like to see more. Maybe an idle animation for the penguin easily implemented with just by adding some squash and stretch. Fish too could be flopping around, just little position and rotation animations. The penguin could use some more black to be actually more easily distinguished as a penguin. Then the final visual thing I'd change is revising the color palette. I mean, so much brown.

Why submit to jam and not compo? Just for the extra day?

Anyways, good job! :thumbsup:

sztrovacsek 2020-04-23 15:43

Argh, this game is so addictive! :smile:

The gameplay is simple yet fun. What's not fun is even if I only touch the last millimetre of the wooden part of the spear I'll still die. And as other's mentioned above, some indicator wold be nice, so we can know from which direction to expect the spears.

With a little more improvement it could be a really good mobile game. Keep it up!

onnofal 2020-04-23 18:08

The game is genius in it's simplicity - in a way of old Nintendo game & watches. You can play it with 4 buttons, it keeps repeating the basic mechanic, but you can still have a lot of fun with it. Believe me if I'd have it as a kid in form of a handheld, I'd have played it all the time, and never get bored of it.

Single thing I'd tweak a bit would be having shafts of spears more forgiving your touch. Sometimes you really wait for the moment when you can already pass and I appreciate when there is more space for mistakes than being strict and exact.

And I love penguins.

lesslwo 2020-04-23 21:21

Simple but well done game. I wish that spears didn't kill with their blunt ends, though.

adonisdevs 2020-04-23 22:16

Very simple and clean! I really liked the simplistic style and the game play was great, too. This seems like a great time waster :D

pask320 2020-04-23 23:21

Simple game that got me hooked and mad at the same time. Good job

kayahr 2020-04-24 09:28

Very simple game. It's addictive to stay alive for a little bit longer than before. But what I don't like about it is that you can only move full squares while the spears can move freely. You can't squeeze between a small gap between two spears because of this and another problem is that you also die from colliding just a little bit with the harmless end of the spear. I think it would be a better game if the penguin could also move freely along the game board, maybe with a cute little penguin-walking-animation.

simonemueller 2020-04-24 09:35

cute little game, even though it's simple, it's a lot of fun. love the relaxing music, a "you ate a fish" sound is the only thing i'm missing. :)

sofy35 2020-04-24 09:57

I love the Pinguin ^^ your little game is very cute, simple, nice to play, fun. I love to collect the little fish

marcusnystrand 2020-04-24 10:36

I was approaching 200 and felt pretty good but then I accidently moved into the back of a spear. Made me surprisingly angry. I tried again and was hit by the first spear.

I suck, but well done!

sky-fighter 2020-04-24 13:35

I'm bad at the game, I only manage to just past 100. I love how simple, yet fun the game is. I really like the minimalist art style you have and the music is way too beautiful. Great Job!

kfischer-okarin 2020-04-24 14:26

Nice game with simple but addictive mechanics. The difficulty scaling over time is quite good but the spears coming totally randomly (I guess?) causes sometimes situations you cannot escape from... But in general it was quite fun!I got 139 points.... (By the way...... the tone of yellow for the beak was really hard to see on top of the white body for me)

sn4pi 2020-04-24 19:10

Really cool game and fun to play! My highscore was 240 so that's good for me. The difficulty scaling felt really polished and the game mechanics were simple und fun to play with. It was a bit hard to predict an arrow on the edge of the playground - especially when fish was lying in a corner and I wanted to grab it but died instead.

Still good entry with nice, funny music playing in the background!

izokia 2020-04-24 23:15

A really nice game that plays well. It seems to\ get difficult pretty fast, but others seem to like the scaling so maybe its just me. Arrows move real fast and are hard to predict as the come out of nowhere with no warning. The game was fun and quite addictive. Music sounds nice and wacky, but didn't really fit the theme to me. The game matches the theme pretty well, but the biggest killer to me was the static feeling art. I love me some smooth feeling animations. Other than that, Great job on your submission!

somniac 2020-04-25 03:36

Fun game but not much to it, great music and art though

joamd 2020-04-25 04:54

I got a 162, nice and addictive gameplay xD :see_no_evil: Good music and cute blinking animation xD

kevinworkman 2020-04-25 05:01

This was really cute, well-scoped, and it felt the most like a "real" game out of everything I've played so far. Like others have said, I kept running into the back of spears, but for a 72-hour prototype, this is really solid.

oune 2020-04-25 12:16

Pleasant experience overall. As others have already mentioned, it feels rather complete and well polished. However, it is a little too unforgiving for my taste. Dieing because you hit the back of a spare, which had already nearly left the tile is more frustrating than enjoyable. Adding a system of lives - giving the player multiple chances - would have greatly reduced the frustration feeling in my opinion.

Overall, it is a good entry. Good job :smile:

curleyrach 2020-04-25 16:50

Nice little game and its pretty addictive! Didn't manage to get any higher than 68 as I kept jumping on the back of the spears but it didn't stop me trying for a good while :laughing: Good job!

madalaski 2020-04-25 17:58

Surprisingly peaceful music and a great mix of turn-based and real-time gameplay. Had me really thinking throughout.

lairinlair 2020-04-25 21:07

Very fun and cute game. Really liked the contrast between the gameplay and the music. Loved how the difficulty escalates. Some sound effects would add a little touch to this game. Great work!

lapinchatware 2020-04-25 22:10

Fun and addictive! Maybe adding something to tell if a spear is coming from the edge would help survive a little bit longer without dying from random appearance when the player is on the edge of the stage will help the impression of mastering the game. Also, adding SFX will help engagement. You got a nice game there. Do continue working on it. Nice music by the way. I love those computer-generated stuff. Good work!

duke 2020-04-25 23:37

Simple but effective game play loop. Seemed to me like the spears spawn at random with an increasing frequency, which ultimately may lead to undodgeable combinations of spears at some point, I guess. That's at least what happened to me. The music had a nice ring to it and was catchy. Loved it! The art was basic but worked in this context. Solid job on a one man entry.

Keep it up!

fabula-rasa 2020-04-26 10:51

Very simple but polished well. You can get into kind of a meditative mood, going after the fishies with this relaxing music :)

holysparks 2020-04-26 19:20

Simple and fun. I'd just add some small sound effects, like for picking up fish and beating the highscore.

josephbyam 2020-04-26 22:12

Strangely addicting.

g-a-gamestudio 2020-04-27 03:08

The game could be so much better. I think that with the time you had you could have made a great game out of this, but you bombed it. I don't mean to be mean though. It was still kinda good. But I am disappointed.

boxedmeatrevolution 2020-04-27 15:42

Pretty fun, with calming music. I think it would be nice if only the spear tips killed the penguin. Every time I died it was from walking into the back of a spear. It would also be nice if we could see more around the edges of the board, so that going to the edges of the board would be less dangerous. Good entry!

bkmld 2020-04-27 20:54

Nice game, relaxing music. Having a slightly different sound on death would be a nice. The red penguin is a good indication that the game is over.

johnnysix 2020-04-27 21:17

Challenging ! Sometimes I'd end up in an impossible position where there was no escape from the spears early on. Maybe a bit of logic on the spear generation, to ensure that there's always an 'escape' would be good ( how thin / skilled you have to be to use it is another thing! )

ironpower 2020-04-28 09:27

Very cool game. Pinguin is linux, so we need to protect him :).

molpe 2020-04-29 01:53

Training penguins to dodge spears... I sense some evil plan... To take over the world... :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jvyp7QoFFlo

matt-greenbury 2020-04-29 12:36

I swear i know that song is it based coldplay or another similar band? Ether way was catchy :)

notan-lemon 2020-05-01 08:39

The mechanics is simple and nice. I think it's the simplicity that makes this game addictive. I love how challenging it becomes as the time passes. Well done!

vesper 2020-05-01 21:55

Well that became really addictive in a really short amount of time. Great example of how to use deceptively simple controls to maximum effect. That was fun, and challenging. Well done.

angelo-saez 2020-05-06 03:24

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I liked this game and I thought the music was a nice touch because it made me appreciate the cuteness of the game after every death

theblackfrog 2020-05-06 22:19

Super simple but I could see myself spand hours playing it :) Nicely done.

matootsy 2020-05-09 03:58

I really enjoy theses little concepts. Often, the more simple the mechanic is, the more we have fun to play it. And this is the case with this little cute game. I would say it's not really in the theme for me, because almost all the game consist to keep your character alive. But you have made an addictive game. And the art is clean. Nice entry.

fractal 2020-05-12 15:56

Very nice and addictive game! I got 274 as my best score. The music is nice, although quite strange given that it’s a game when you get impaled by spears regularly.