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Timestamp	Since previous	Game		ToonTeamJ's comment
May 1 13:20:29		It's square to be a cube	♥ 1	The physics are a little weird, but that's what makes this game fun. Personally, I think that you should remove the forever scrolling aspect of the levels to make them smaller. This would help it fit the theme of "A Small World" better. Overall, great game.
May 1 13:33:26	12m 57s	Rise of the Termites	♥ 1	Very fun, although sitting around waiting for rooms to finish could get to be a little tedious.
May 1 13:46:23	12m 57s	Harry Inks Shrinks	♥ 1	I wasn't quite sure what the objective was, but you may be on to something. I got stuck in the small town. The game needs for intractables.
May 1 18:51:19	5h 04m	Mind The Gap (First Ludum Dare)	♥ 1	The aim does not sync with the mouse very well, but it's fun once you get the hang of it.
May 1 18:58:31	7m 12s	Mallows World Adventure	♥ 0	Very interesting. The music works well with the game.
May 1 19:03:36	5m 05s	Little Eco Planet	♥ 0	Great puzzles, and the tutorial helps you understand how everything works.
May 1 19:10:50	7m 14s	Destroy The Dome	♥ 1	Very nice concept, trying to repel monsters while destroying the dome can be a fun challenge.
May 1 19:19:03	8m 13s	Moon Dozer	♥ 1	Playing pinball on the Earth is actually quite fun. I'm not sure if you made the music, though. Perhaps you should opt out of the audio rating?
May 1 19:24:17	5m 14s	Water Bear World	♥ 1	Most of my activity was spent just trying to get the tardigrade to move. It was enjoyable, although I've no idea how to get points.
May 1 19:32:45	8m 28s	Troll Castle	♥ 1	Very fun, although trolls moved a little slow for my liking (you'd think a hungry troll would move faster towards food).
May 1 19:37:47	5m 02s	Suds of War	♥ 2	Very fun, has a sort of puzzle-like quality to it.
May 1 19:42:44	4m 57s	Way Out	♥ 1	Very fun, although the controls are a little hard. Those rats are very hard to fight.
May 1 19:48:50	6m 06s	Classical Conditioning Cooperation - [CCC]	♥ 2	Very good puzzles. The gameplay is unique to me.
May 1 19:52:17	3m 27s	Grow Little Planet	♥ 1	Interesting, although I got lost in the expanse of space.
May 1 19:56:38	4m 21s	Karma is a Bitch	♥ 1	The controls didn't really work for me, but overall it was fun to see your own ax fly around the planet.
May 2 13:24:10	17h 27m	Colorfly	♥ 1	Very pretty music. Interesting how the butterfly seems to lean to the side and flip its wing backwards when moving.
May 2 13:31:48	7m 38s	World of My Own	♥ 1	It's fun, but it would be easier to collect for the portals we could readily see our inventories in-world.
May 2 13:41:41	9m 53s	50ft by 50ft (or How I Died In Space)	♥ 0	A very interesting story, although I'm not sure if it's a game.
May 2 13:53:59	12m 18s	Ant Forts	♥ 0	This game is surprisingly addictive.
May 2 19:46:03	5h 52m	Horizons	♥ 1	Playing around using the gravity of planets was fun.
May 2 19:57:09	11m 06s	Petri World	♥ 0	This simulation was really enjoyable. I liked how they all raced to the food and had to grow to a certain size before they could reproduce.
May 2 20:04:31	7m 22s	Floppy McFloppyface	♥ 1	Very fun, and the music helped set the mood. McFloppyface seems a little...spazzy.
May 2 20:09:50	5m 19s	Bug Attack!	♥ 1	Fun game, although the small size of everyone made them hard to keep track of.
May 2 20:39:15	29m 25s	What Remains.	♥ 1	Great game. Putting everyone to work for their own survival was very addictive.
May 2 23:19:54	2h 40m	Naziverse	♥ 0	Trying to dodge the bullets was challenging, as they were coming very quickly (especially when there was more than one enemy), so trying to move forward was tricky.
May 3 19:50:20	20h 30m	Superbugs	♥ 1	I'm no good at puzzles, but these were just challenging enough to be engaging without being too hard. Well done. My only concern is that some colors, such as red and orange, look very similar.
May 4 20:35:28	24h 45m	Strangeness	♥ 1	Nice puzzles, although the enemies were hard to interact with. They'd often remain stationary in one place and not let you past, but they wouldn't kill you, even if you touched them.
May 4 20:41:21	5m 53s	A Small Wheel	♥ 1	Nice concept, but the controls are a little difficult. For example, I seem to struggle with jumping while moving the wheel. Also, are the obstacles randomly generated? I got to a point where I couldn't progress because there was a tall obstacle with nothing else to jump to, which proved problematic for getting the last carrot.
May 4 20:50:01	8m 40s	The Deific's Guide to Creating, Exploiting, and Destroying Pocket Worlds	♥ 1	Very fun, although the whole element thing is a little hard to understand. Other than that, the gameplay was good and the sound effects were very light-hearted.
May 4 20:57:13	7m 12s	Dream World	♥ 1	Throwing the player into a 3D war zone is a little bit to wrap my head around. I liked the game, but a tutorial level or something like that may be helpful.
May 4 21:03:03	5m 50s	Moon Eat Moon	♥ 2	Good concept with a soundtrack to match. I should know, my browser froze during the web version and replayed the song for five minutes while I tried to get my computer working again.
May 4 21:08:03	5m 00s	Shrimp Tank	♥ 1	The camera needs to focus more on the player, but other than that the game was good. One thing I'd suggest is a bar or other visual display showing how much you've eaten or how much more to eat for the player to keep track of progress.
May 4 21:13:32	5m 29s	Hugely Unpopular President Simulator	♥ 1	Interesting. My only problem was how slippery the controls were, such as when I'd jump once while moving and fly over the entire world. The signs were fun to read, although I wasn't given much time to read them.
May 4 21:25:22	11m 50s	Little Asteroid	♥ 1	Nice resource management, although I wouldn't recommend red and green on a white background. I'm partially red-green colorblind, so trying to tell the two resource sites apart was a pain for me.
May 5 20:42:24	23h 17m	Asteroid Survival	♥ 0	Nice resource management game, although it's a little difficult to catch on. A few labels would be nice.
May 5 21:07:07	24m 43s	Slice of Life	♥ 2	The great soundtrack with bright colors makes this a very enjoyable display. The gameplay is challenging but solid.
May 5 21:36:52	29m 45s	The Burrow	♥ 0	Very well done. Kudos to the art department for making the fish and worm cyan (makes them easy to see in dark areas), although a cyan bird against a blue sky was a little hard to see.
May 6 00:24:10	2h 47m	Puny World	♥ 2	The compo version is indeed a little short. Just a little. This could be fun with some expansion.
May 6 00:29:19	5m 09s	Polar Protector	♥ 0	Trying to collect the correct elements is challenging, but that adds to the fun.
May 6 00:44:17	14m 58s	A Tower in the Mists	♥ 1	Nice story. Your analogy of the attack types to rock, paper, scissors was very useful while learning how to play.
May 6 23:41:11	22h 56m	A small fungal genocide	♥ 1	It's a little hard to play, but it's doable. One of the main challenges is that attacking requires throwing your knife and then retrieving it. Maybe there should be a way to attack without throwing things, like a weaker punch if your knife is gone?
May 6 23:53:54	12m 43s	Train World	♥ 0	The game crashed while I tried to exit the third car. I wasn't sure how I could heal, as I only got one package of rat's meat. The dog was an excellent addition.
May 7 00:00:30	6m 36s	Tabletop Arena	♥ 1	Very fun game. The laggy attack was challenging to use, but had a nice feel to it.
May 7 00:09:06	8m 36s	Leucos	♥ 1	Nice game, the music fit it well. Let me tell you as a biology student that your interpretation of the immune system isn't as inaccurate you may think:)
May 7 00:27:05	17m 59s	SORLD	♥ 1	The cooperation aspect was a little unclear at first, but it's a good concept. The message at the end was very charming.
May 7 00:32:22	5m 17s	Sunken Mystery	♥ 1	i never figured out that you could reset the oxygen meter manually, so I had to do it the hard way. The puzzles were mostly challenging because of the floaty control scheme.
May 7 00:48:56	16m 34s	Johi Farm	♥ 1	Very fun, although the worm swarms were a little overwhelming.
May 7 00:56:09	7m 13s	Rocket Roller Space Polo	♥ 0	It took me a little bit to figure out the rules of the game, but it was fun once I did.
May 7 01:00:39	4m 30s	Chuck and Bull	♥ 1	The music was fitting, but it would have been nice if there was more to interact with.
May 7 01:28:23	27m 44s	The Taker	♥ 1	A good concept, but it lacked a few features to make it challenging, such as a cost/reward system so I can't spam tanks. Also, I had trouble with the camera system. Following castles doesn't seem to work for me.
May 7 01:42:43	14m 20s	Sillyzilla Rampage	♥ 0	Nice mood, although the slow movements are a little hard to use. The health bar is so high it took me nearly two minutes to notice I was being drained by the ground units. It would be helpful if they were more obvious than some little black things on a little black stage.
May 7 01:48:07	5m 24s	Think About Quantum Thinking	♥ 0	You really need a tutorial. The controls I found are hold space to begin play, use arrow keys to move. The concept is good, but the keys are a little hard to use, so I'd recommend slowing down the timer a little bit.
May 7 16:01:58	14h 13m	Until Tomorrow	♥ 2	Your story was very emotional for an indie game. Good writing!
May 7 18:54:14	2h 52m	ANA	♥ 0	Nice game. Eating blocks you touch is a very interesting game mechanic.
May 7 19:00:46	6m 32s	Environmental Control	♥ 0	I like the take on environmentalism. My only problem was that the planet would sometimes stop scrolling once you reached a pole and made you rotate a bit before you could continue.
May 7 19:07:26	6m 40s	Aim for the Star	♥ 2	Kind of reminds of mini-golf, but with more black holes. The music set the mood quite nicely.
May 7 19:18:22	10m 56s	Aces High	♥ 0	Very fun dogfight simulation. Personally, I think it would be easier to control if the camera were set to first-person, but that may be just me.
May 7 19:26:45	8m 23s	World Collector	♥ 1	It's a good game, but a tutorial might be nice. The controls take some getting used to.
May 7 19:34:34	7m 49s	It's a Small World	♥ 0	It's a nice resource management game, but as water replenishes on its own, building new factories isn't hard as long as you replace them right away. Your dialogue was too fast and high pitched to understand.
May 7 19:39:06	4m 32s	IN CHARACTER	♥ 0	Interesting drawing program. My only complaint is that we have to create login information, which seems tedious for something so small.
May 7 19:43:57	4m 51s	Arctic Memories	♥ 0	I didn't really understand how to play. Even when I thought I did there appeared to be some rules that I didn't understand. A tutorial level, or at least an intro explaining the rules, would be helpful.
May 7 19:50:17	6m 20s	Ascension	♥ 1	Hit detection was problematic, but otherwise the game works nicely.
May 7 21:32:27	1h 42m	Save the Banana !	♥ 0	This game is simple but fun. Part of the appeal is a simple mechanic applied to challenging gameplay (Shapes fall faster and faster).
May 7 21:37:08	4m 41s	PathoGems	♥ 0	Fun. Following the mouse is a good mechanic for this game.
May 7 21:46:54	9m 46s	Say Something	♥ 2	The mechanics are well made, although the attack is too laggy for fighting swarms of enemies. The music sets the tone quite nicely.
May 7 21:53:49	6m 55s	When Resizing	♥ 0	The concept sounds promising, but the gameplay needs work. Supposedly I can "double-jump", but I can't even get off the ground.
May 7 22:02:57	9m 08s	Planet Hopper	♥ 0	The game looks good, but the mechanics need work. Jumping feels too unnatural and colliding with the undersides of platforms gets in the way of things. 2D platformers can be tough because you need more complicated physics like gravity. Keep at it.
May 7 22:12:35	9m 38s	Secluded	♥ 1	Now that's just depressing. At least I enjoyed it.
May 8 00:24:52	2h 12m	The Treachery of Game Dev	♥ 0	Very interesting. Your Smallworld mini-game was unique, in a way.
May 8 00:29:15	4m 23s	Make Alien Planet Great Again	♥ 0	Interesting concept. I nearly laughed out loud at the mention of "retard units".
May 8 00:35:13	5m 58s	PogoPogo	♥ 1	Making everybody dance was a good idea. I found that crowdsurfing was the only way to move when you're boxed in by fans.
May 8 00:47:13	12m 00s	Den	♥ 2	This game is amazing. I like how the beast looks like it was made by drawing a bunch of hairballs stuck together by code.
May 8 00:51:50	4m 37s	Against The Void	♥ 0	Good game. The balanced build, graphics, and audio are very impressive for a Compo.
May 9 21:05:13	44h 13m	SadLittleSmallWorld	♥ 0	Dos a seis jugadores? Pero que si no tengo amigos en mi casa? Un juego para un jugador es mas bien para esta audiencia. Lo siento, no hablo espanol muy bien.
May 9 21:15:27	10m 14s	El Mandamás	♥ 0	This game simulating the role of a leader was very enjoyable. My citizens were very happy and remained that way once I fixed their problems.
May 9 21:21:10	5m 43s	Mr. Fishy's Small World	♥ 0	It's a nice game, but sitting around waiting for something to happen every game hour was a little unstimulating. Maybe you could add a few background animations as random as your text bubbles.
May 9 21:25:02	3m 52s	Trashman	♥ 0	The game was fun, but I had no idea was was "right trash". I tried changing the trashcans a few times, but somehow my score still dipped down to —3600.
May 10 20:57:33	23h 32m	Bamboo Life	♥ 1	Your slow progress through the game does a good job of teaching the player how everything works. Its actually a little addictive.
May 10 21:07:37	10m 04s	Brew Up	♥ 1	The game concept is nice, but the floaty physics make the game seem awkward and unnatural. Also, it would be much less suspicious if the game link were included in the description instead of in the comments.
May 10 21:13:47	6m 10s	SubAttack	♥ 0	The concept is great, but the controls are too hard for me to master. Too many buttons to keep track of.
May 10 21:25:55	12m 08s	Shrinker	♥ 0	Very good game, although your textboxes sometimes got in the way. Maybe try making them transparent?
May 11 20:40:45	23h 14m	Dinosaur Protection Program	♥ 3	It was a fun game, although the turrets were a little hard to aim with.
May 11 20:50:26	9m 41s	D4RK and the Small Worlds	♥ 0	The game was very fun, although the enemies were a little hard to fight. I usually had better luck avoiding them.
May 12 00:34:42	3h 44m	A View from Above	♥ 1	The breaking-the-fourth-wall thing seemed a little dull, but I must admit the sudden explosion of goats was unexpected and hilarious.
May 12 23:02:22	22h 27m	Petit Prince	♥ 1	I like the concept, but I think that if you added a few obstacles this game would be more of a challenge.
May 12 23:14:41	12m 19s	AETHER CRYSTAL	♥ 0	The music fit well, but I had trouble understanding what I was supposed to do. The tasks are not always very clear.
May 12 23:19:27	4m 46s	Small World of Mine	♥ 1	Very well done. I think I got a good ending, although it's not easy to tell. Some of the results of my choices were a little...unexpected.
May 13 01:13:01	1h 53m	Proxima Centauri b	♥ 1	I like it. The cursor is a little buggy, but I made do, even if disasters kept destroying my explorers and equipment.
May 13 01:24:43	11m 42s	Bored scientist	♥ 1	The game is nice, but could use a few touch ups. Some more feedback from actions would be great. Also, the sword attack is too laggy with not enough range to be effective.
May 13 01:29:00	4m 17s	Smaller and smaller and smaller world	♥ 0	The concept is doable, but the game needs work. The controls are not at all responsive, making it very difficult to move around or even shoot.
May 13 01:33:20	4m 20s	Uncharted Dreams - Fate of the Miniatures	♥ 0	The animation is wonderful, although I feel like more should be left for the player. It feels more like a guided tour than a game.
May 13 19:32:10	17h 58m	RSV Resourcer	♥ 0	It was pretty good, although not everything was very clear. I couldn't figure out how much RAM I had or how CPU was calculated, so I wasn't sure why everyone was dying and I still couldn't add any more objects.
May 13 19:40:47	8m 37s	It's A Small System	♥ 0	I liked it, although the constant backtracking made it a little tedious. Maybe travel could be shortened by warping, or some other method of travel so there's no need to sit in one place waiting for the next planet to zoom by?
May 13 19:46:16	5m 29s	A Small World	♥ 0	This has promise, but the goals are not very clear. "You have to focus! Stop fidgeting" didn't give me any clues as to what do to next.
May 13 19:54:43	8m 27s	Runed Bones	♥ 0	I played alone. There was no audio and the creatures would not die. On the bright side, I wouldn't either. This game could be fun if it was made more interactive, such as the ability to damage swarming monsters.
May 13 20:02:04	7m 21s	Disasterz	♥ 0	The mood seems kind of depressing. I didn't get very far before getting trapped in a room of emptiness.
May 13 20:09:08	7m 04s	Small medicine	♥ 0	The controls are a little hard to use, but the experience was pretty neat. I'd recommend transferring steering controls from the mouse to the keys.
May 13 20:13:18	4m 10s	Lost in the Woods	♥ 0	This game was fun. I'd recommend adding some limitations of some sort so players can't just camp in a corner the entire time.
May 14 01:07:05	4h 53m	Small Schifo Prince Planet	♥ 0	The game was simple but fun. It took me awhile to figure out how it works because the text was so hard to read (WebGL version).
May 14 01:16:24	9m 19s	Tiny Planet Corp	♥ 0	It's pretty good, but the grappler is too difficult to maneuver. Also, there's some kind of bug in the jar file that prevents rendering if I try to use any window size other than default.
May 14 01:22:47	6m 23s	The Dwarf Planet	♥ 0	It was interesting to play, but I have no idea if I actually managed to craft anything. Some more in-game feedback, and maybe even instruction, would be helpful.
May 18 01:37:21	96h 14m	Acquaintances	♥ 3	I liked it. It actually reminded me of my own social life. I think this would have been more fun if there were more levels, because otherwise it feels a little short.
May 18 01:42:36	5m 15s	My idea of A Small World	♥ 1	I liked it. The music set the mood well and the blinking mechanism was an excellent development choice.
May 20 01:26:46	47h 44m	Live or DIE!	♥ 1	It seems like a pretty interesting game, but I had trouble figuring out how everything worked. I think an in-game tutorial would be be very helpful.
May 20 01:35:46	9m 00s	Bee World	♥ 1	It seems like it has some good potential, but some feedback from collected pollen or damage taken would make the game more enjoyable. My best score was 1800 before I put the poor worker out of its misery.