Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD38 → Secluded
By nikkilak
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 401 | 3.33 | 23 | |
| Fun | 561 | 2.82 | 25 | |
| Innovation | 402 | 3.09 | 23 | |
| Theme | 440 | 3.31 | 24 | |
| Graphics | 170 | 4.09 | 24 | |
| Audio | 1 | |||
| Humor | 266 | 2.94 | 21 | |
| Mood | 258 | 3.47 | 21 |
Cool! This is a great little interactive experience, and I love the scene transitions.
I might have found a bug. When I say "Okay" to my partner offering to get something for me, I seem to get stuck in a loop. Is that intentional?
@simonhutchinson It's not really intentional as much as it is a compromise I've made to avoid going to far with the branching! Every third option causes a scene transition and I built the narration around that there are around 3 points in the game where the dialogue is looped :) Thank you!
Whoa that ending really threw me off. Great job!
Nice drawing style and flow. I like the ending, but can't really say why without making a spoiler.
Such a dramatized and theatrical narrative it is, I felt like I was watching a play unfolding. The chalk font you used suits your style well, it's a shame there is not much to do except for choosing options.
I would love to see more of your projects in future as you're a great artist, the contrast of those lowpoly models and their colors looks perfectly smooth.
nice dialogue, audio and graphics. No bugs at all I think.
Whoa that ending tho
Now that's just depressing. At least I enjoyed it.
Nice clean graphics, bravo! I don't know if it was my phone lagging, but the text apparition was a bit too slow for me!
I love the minimalist style of your graphics. Only concern about the style is that I was confused sometimes who was talking. Maybe placing bubbles on different part of screen would make scenes with multiple characters more clear. Overall really interesting story based game!
Interesting and a bit weird.
Interesting and unique idea, I like the graphics of the game, simple but good. I don't really have suggestions on how to improve it, I think it's pretty solid game, I would say you can add more content or maybe illustration for the characters while they talk. Good job!
I liked the unique idea you had, instead of copying something- good!
Ilked the story idea and drama, there is nice dept in this game. Rooms what tell different story. what an hard idea, but still you pulled it off. I liked the graphics, the mood could have been even stronger. Ilked the crazy ending also. Hope you continue the project.
Nice Game, got curious about evolution of the story during gameplay. Attractive graphics, soundratck fits in well. congrats! If you have the opportunity, please rate my game: NUKEBALL - https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/38/nukeball . it is WebGL.
Scene transitions are weird. Are they supposed to be the same characters, or different ones each scene? Am I one of them? I don't get it. Graphics are cool, and the game seems like an interesting idea. Keep it up!
This was weird but i liked it! :) Cool stuff! If you find the time also rate our quirky little "game"! :) https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/38/whats-the-point
A good game. Has very nice graphics. Keep up the good work! :slight_smile::thumbsup:
Hey guys, please take the time to rate me https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/38/survival-game
I really enjoyed the experience! I think the shining moment was the first room when I accidentally clicked the TV attempting to choose a dialog option and the TV turned on. Great job!
Cool game! It got me pretty engaged and I wanted to see what happens next. Some typos in the text. My ending was weird, made me think that there are no meaningful choices, but it's just my impression, there might be different endings based on your choices. If you have time, please have a look at our game https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/38/atomic-clicker
I liked the mood of this game, it was kinda calming despite the rather complex and deep conversational topics. I felt like I was looking into the lives of these people, and I got really attached to some of the people in the scene. The narration was done well, and the character were well defined. I would liked to have seen some sort of physical representation of the characters within the world, as whilst the environments looked really good they felt kind of empty without it. I also felt the ending was just weird and didn't work, even if it was a prototype the ending just felt out of place, as if done from a completely different game. I look forward to seeing if this develops
Nice rooms and game! I included it in my Ludum Dare 38 compilation video series, if you’d like to take a look :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uo0eF_2kFRY