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Terminally ill

By sebastian

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Mood244.02
Coolness1100
Audio633.71
Overall1023.77
Innovation1193.77
Fun1983.44
Graphics2083.65
Theme3583.74
Humor4282.42

Comments

voxel 2013-04-29 07:03

Well, that was stark and harrowing. Never been so sad to play pong in all my life

kiwiboi 2013-04-29 07:08

Intense! The story and the layout were really entertaining.

cason 2013-04-29 07:09

Awesome game. I really like, its super challenging. I'll try it after sleep I guess...

How'd you get that cool effect on your text?

waynetron 2013-04-29 07:12

I liked the filter that you applied to the screen. It really made it look like an old CRT.

jhrrsn 2013-04-29 07:14

That was freakin' AWESOME! I was kind of expecting a text adventure, so it was an interesting surprise when minigames started piling on. Very cool idea, and very tough.

morbidbuilder407 2013-04-29 07:31

Very cool reminded me of Joshua..

chobrah 2013-04-29 07:40

Wow, how do you make a console-based game the most immersive game I've played so far. So dark, so moody, so hard... loved it.

brian-corr 2013-04-29 07:46

Very neat mate

titi987 2013-04-29 08:40

Unity do not work on Linux, I can't play.

sol_hsa 2013-04-29 08:41

Telling player to enter commands with keyboard and then suddenly requiring mouse input was harsh. Having the web player steal the mouse required me to alt-tab outside to kill the game.

sebastian 2013-04-29 08:57

Thanks guys, glad you're enjoying it!

titi987: I'll try get a linux version up soon.
sol_hsa: Press esc and move mouse out of window, sorry I should have mentioned that. Added to main post.

mrspeaker 2013-04-29 09:02

Woah - nice concept! Creepy!

hnjslater 2013-04-29 09:24

Wow thumbs up, a beautiful harrowing game.

manabreak 2013-04-29 09:57

This is quite kewl, got quite difficult when the second game was launched. :) So nice mood laid out with such simple things.

cmayhem 2013-04-29 10:05

Rather cerebral game. Maybe I'm just too tired after LD but this seemed like yet another game that was quite difficult. The music was very nice and fitting.

tiffi 2013-04-29 10:21

really cool game. thought i am a better pong player..

Oh and FYI, the highscores on my game is working, there is a submit score button on the GameOver screen!

linuus 2013-04-29 10:25

One of the best games I've played so far! Good job! ^^

the-jack 2013-04-29 12:12

It seemed to crash after losing at pong, just a black screen & audio. Full points for mood. Nice visual work.

lucasncv 2013-04-29 12:19

Very intense and extremely hard, haha! Great mood.

zaszx 2013-04-29 15:40

Very nice story. Also a good game to practice multitasking :)

rzfmzn 2013-04-29 15:44

Game for Asians! =OP
Nice work!

tiago-ling 2013-04-29 16:13

Excellent game!

artifex 2013-04-29 17:50

Excellent idea, very hard. Great sounds , art and interaction. Only thing is the globber part of game doesn't respond very well. Excellent game.

ptsnoop 2013-04-29 18:04

So not satisfied with making one game in 48 hours, you managed to make about seven... Nice one.

And the rapid-multitasking was both fun, and played nicely into the mood of the game. Not so keen on the generally depressing theme, but you still managed to convey it well.

fuzzywuzzie 2013-04-29 18:11

Very entertaining! I loved your menu system too! The second round was impossible for me as the ball just flew by!

It was a lot more intense trying to play two simple games at once than I thought it would be. Great game, if a little morbid :P

nekith 2013-04-29 19:14

Disturbing, to say the least. And I thought Pong required no skill... :)

Great job !

anjack 2013-04-29 23:14

Awesome game! It really got my heart pounding!

cahman 2013-04-30 13:48

Very nice game! Games switching between keyboard and mouse can be a little jarring...

fullmontis 2013-05-01 08:10

Very hard, and the story actually gives playing these little games some intensity :) Good job on the mood!

whitetigle 2013-05-02 13:22

Well made, fits the theme, gfx and sfx were great and for your information my brain just blew up. But it's ok. So that's a very nice game you made there. Congratulations!

meta87 2013-05-02 17:49

super stylish great writing nice job!

almax27 2013-05-02 19:02

Amazing atmosphere for such a simple concept, nice one :D

martin_monosys 2013-05-02 19:06

Great, music was good, liked the filters you put on things, gives it a cool, gritty look. Nice story and gameplay, too!

taro 2013-05-03 02:09

"Added a new game while you play Pong."
Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu-

janmavzla 2013-05-03 03:47

The concept of multi-games was awesome! It got my brain working and sweating to even coordinate in both games.

Y thought it would be a more text-y adventure based on the terminal interface, but it was good nonetheless.

Amazing work man!

jorjon 2013-05-03 05:28

Nice game! Reminds me of another one I can't recall the name. You should upload the Unity project as the source, I want to check the effects you added.

gravel 2013-05-03 09:54

Awesome atmosphere!

gungnir 2013-05-04 06:18

Great minimalist gaming and storytelling. Both highly effective. Triumph!

bender 2013-05-04 07:27

Pwwwwetty hard... require some multi-task :)
Loved it, sound & music, screen effects, that's rad !

orni 2013-05-04 18:12

wow, this is hard - but amazing fun !

one of my favourites :D

I love it

sudorossy 2013-05-04 22:08

I really liked that. It was so difficult, but brilliant. The story telling was a nice touch.

patrickward 2013-05-05 16:55

Tricky game. Playing the multiple games was challenging on a laptop, but in a good way. Some of the graphics were hard to see (such as the red pong ball). But, overall the graphics really fit the mood and storyline. Audio played well with the game itself. This was definitely one of the more innovative games I've played. Well done.

floko 2013-05-06 05:56

VERY interesting. Multi-tasking isn't my idea of minimalism, but I had fun anyway. Loved the mood, its so solid!

granada 2013-05-06 11:50

Great take on the theme! Amazing!

casimps1 2013-05-06 15:51

Wow, all around great work!

I actually toyed with a similar idea about playing multiple minigames at the same time, but I'm pretty sure mine wouldn't have been nearly this cool.

Love the special FX, the static and that glow that takes me back to the days of old CRT monitors. Also, great work on the music.

sebastian 2013-05-07 18:36

Thanks a lot for the comments and feedback so far guys, I'm glad most people are finding it to be an interesting experience!

mildmojo 2013-05-08 04:23

Unity? Could you please push the button that makes a build for Linux? Thank you!

sebastian 2013-05-08 05:24

Hey, mildmojo. I've uploaded a Linux version. Hopefully someone can let me know if it works?
The reason I haven't uploaded it before is because when testing downloading my mac build from dropbox it wouldn't run. Hopefully this is a problem specific only to mac..

lanoiadimuu 2013-05-08 15:12

Cool entry! Nice effects and atmosphere!

finefin 2013-05-09 11:37

oh wow, this game is hard. can't stop playing :)

turbodindon 2013-05-10 09:48

Great sound and visual atmosphere. Harrowing.
I used French keyboard so it's very hard with the WASD move... I couldn't survive for a long time. x)

- SEPHY (@sephyka)

Jeremias 2013-05-11 10:01

Great shaders. I like the game, but what you should fix in a post-compo version: Everytime a new game is introduced, you will die because it is too hard to read the text fast while playing another game. I think you should pause the game and let the player progress by pressing any button.

madball 2013-05-11 18:35

Very sad story. Nice atmosphere from both the computer and storytelling.
I saw a similar concept before: http://www.kongregate.com/games/IcyLime/multitask
Pong is imbalanced. The mouse sensitivity is too little, I swing my hand as far as I can and I can`t cover the whole field without moving the arm. And the ball (did I just say 'ball'?..) sometimes gets too dark to see... and too fast to hit. And I need to read rules for new minigames meanwhile, so make a tutorial about minigames or something outside the game.
Oh, it seems that if you lose a life while rules are being writte, they stop.
Also, at the "R.I.P" screen you have to write 'r' twice.
2:57 was my best time... Did I just lose 2 lifes in a row in pong? I think the ball flew to my direction after the serving veeery fast... with me being hell knows where... Make it slower!

sebastian 2013-05-12 07:10

Thanks for the detailed review Madball, and well done for surviving that long :)
I've only managed a little over 4 minutes myself.

@TurboDindon Sorry I'll make sure to add support for other keyboard layouts next time around, completely overlooked that!

euske 2013-05-12 10:23

Clever twist on the story. Like it!

ethankennerly 2013-05-12 18:41

Moving Mouse to Pong and clicking to jump in a platformer interested me. The dismal music and static noise shader deepened my interest. If you continue to develop this: Reading instructions to the second game while playing the first game annoyed me. Playing two games at once that seemed to have no relationship to each other also distracted me.


The story was humorous, yet really implausible. I could imagine a lonely computer AI that might die if I didn't play its game, I wouldn't think I might die if I didn't play Pong well.

davedobson 2013-05-12 20:08

The setup and feel here are awesome - I love the VT100 style interface. I kept getting pong as my first game, and it was nearly impossible to keep pong going while running whatever the second game was. Also, for the color match one, which I got a couple times, the instructions were truncated, so all I got was "Press spacebar when" - this was with the web version. Music, sounds, visuals are awesome, although the dark faded colors made it harder to do pong for me. I ended up dying rapidly all the times I tried it, only once surviving to the third game (pong really killed me) - sometimes the launched pong ball was really, really fast and right at me, so I'd die three times in a row or something. So, some minor frustrations, but a really cool underlying idea, and the concept of playing two games at once just completely folds up my brain (in a good way).

minionstudios 2013-05-15 02:38

Awesome experience!

lightnarcissus 2013-05-15 13:13

Smart idea and engaging gameplay to back it up. A job well done!

sylvain-p 2013-05-15 20:07

Nice concept, but the Unity web player's mouse are too nasty, so too difficult for me.

paulsb 2013-05-18 15:07

Well yeah that was all sorts of moody and depressing! Pong and Gobbler were a nightmare to play together O_O

Also like the screen filter effect and the concept. Great job!

pinothefrog 2013-05-19 00:02

Great interaction metaphor. Love the way the text looks, is lit.

cambrian_era 2013-05-19 15:14

Multiple games at the same time is a pretty neat concept, but I had a hard time with even playing pong because it was hard to see the ball with the screen vignetting and the white page background doesn't help. Otherwise, it's pretty solid.

2013-06-01 20:33

Wow, seems s cool and I can't play it because the Linux version just stays in 1024*720 or something like this on my computer :'( .