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Oct 5 22:15:22 Untiled Runner Game ♥ 2 Didn't really know why it was a loop until playing a couple of times. The hands looked pretty funny!
Oct 5 22:36:50 21m 28s oh shit i'm dreaming again. ♥ 1 The game looks pretty interesting! Very nice for 3 days! I'd suggest switching the colors of the options, because I assumed the darker color was the confirm (yes and no turned around). I also found a small bug, I accidentally clicked again when brushing my teeth and got another pop up. This kind of broke my game, whenever i tried going into the toilet I saw this: Screenshot_1.png And it would just put me back to tiny mode.. Hope you get this fixed so others won't have the same issue! Again, looks very nice!
Oct 5 22:45:32 8m 42s HONK II ♥ 1 This was very fun, gave me some enter the gungeon vibes! Didn't know I could press the red button until after a couple of deaths
Oct 5 22:54:31 8m 59s Loopocalypse ♥ 1 This was really fun! I loved the homer simpson and other refferences! It did get quite repetitive after a while, this could be fixed by maybe adding a lose condition
Oct 5 23:04:34 10m 03s Fearcle ♥ 5 The mood was set really well with the sound and graphics! I got quite lost after a while not knowing what to really do. Still, a very solid jam game!
Oct 5 23:18:06 13m 32s Return 0; ♥ 4 Was pretty fun, the floating character was really smart! takes a bit less time and looks really cool! Didn't really see the theme but still, nice job!
Oct 5 23:36:52 18m 46s LOOP ♥ 1 The art is very cute, I really like the premise of this. It's easy but it works. Very well polished too!
Oct 5 23:44:27 7m 35s The Jolly Journey of J.J.'s Jelly-Jamventure ♥ 1 Very well polished! well done!
Oct 6 00:09:43 25m 16s Looped Chaos ♥ 3 Very well done, the game looks very polished and fits the theme well! I would recommend ramping up the speed a bit more, because it is a bit slow to get back when you die.
Oct 6 11:02:00 10h 52m Loop Wave ♥ 2 Well done!
Oct 6 11:19:55 17m 55s Peter Carlson: PC Adventures ♥ 2 This was really fun! I loved peter, he was a very fun character! I did encounter a small bug where I got the box stuck on the other side of the door (reset fixed this). Very nice job!
Oct 6 11:28:53 8m 58s Anything For You ♥ 2 THis game was really nice! Everything fit together nicely, the art looked good, the music sounded chill and the story was pretty interested! Very good job for a 3 day jam!
Oct 6 11:57:21 28m 28s Loopomotive ♥ 0 This was really cute, really loved just upgrading my track. You could kinda manage your own difficulty by doing so which was really well designed!
Oct 6 13:56:07 1h 58m GravLoop ♥ 2 I liked it! It was a lot about trying to improve your own score. What I would like to see is a highscore counter, to see how far your best attempt was ^^
Oct 6 17:23:10 3h 27m Loop Industries ♥ 1 Seemed pretty polished! The dialogue looked pretty well worked in and it was fun avoiding the monsters!
Oct 6 20:34:52 3h 11m iLoop - the 2D endless runner game of a robot stuck in a loop :) ♥ 1 I liked it! It was very simple and well polished, but the points were nicely implemented, I liked seeing my rank changed! Maybe some future improvements: - A little variations, right now it seems like the same jump and same speed and the difficulty doesn't really change. So it would be cool to see some different enemies like flying enemies (jetpacks?) and some flying points! - Seeing your rank change during game! Maybe you little notification on the side saying your new rank
Oct 7 09:42:33 13h 07m Stuck in a Soup Loop ♥ 3 I liked it! It was well polished, the dialogue was pretty fun and the minigame was easy to understand! Well done!
Oct 7 09:44:07 1m 34s Gelato HRMS ♥ 1 This was quite fun, some of the mails were really fun to read (especially the mails to fire someone). Well done!
Oct 7 09:53:14 9m 07s Loop Room ♥ 1 This game was pretty nice! I liked trying to take down the enemies! It was a bit confusing that my player went a different way when I pressed right, but other then that everything was pretty well worked out!
Oct 7 10:05:37 12m 23s Lucky Lefty Loves Loops ♥ 2 This was very nice! I loved how the end looped back, very well polished! I got 33 seconds!
Oct 7 10:15:00 9m 23s AndreOL Revenge ♥ 1 I like the idea of the game, but I didnt fully understand it. After a couple deaths I figured out the button was Q but I didnt seem to be able to hurt the boss. Either way, well done on finishing the jam!
Oct 8 21:06:00 34h 51m O O O ♥ 1 This was very nice! loved the take on pong, didnt get far yet but definately will try later on
Oct 8 21:08:05 2m 05s A tale of Loopism ♥ 1 Was a fun game, definately very difficult but fun nontheless!
Oct 8 21:09:40 1m 35s Among Stars and Robots ♥ 3 This was pretty good! THe puzzles and maps were nicely designed but a bit difficult
Oct 8 22:09:38 59m 58s Caterpillar Dissent: Deliverance ♥ 1 This was an interesting little game, reminded me of donut county. Maybe add a speedrun timer to see how fast someone can eat everything!
Oct 8 22:12:11 2m 33s Ghost Jammer ♥ 1 I really liked this one, the visuals and sound just fit together so well with the gameplay. Maybe remove the gameover text and go back into the game right away? (with the timer still there)
Oct 8 22:13:49 1m 38s Stuck in Office Routine ♥ 2 This was fun! I loved finding the bosses and they were very fun!
Oct 8 22:17:32 3m 43s Grabby - The Ultimate Grabbinator ♥ 1 This was really nice! I loved the custom made song and the game was pretty cool, reminded me a lot of Carrion!
Oct 9 00:07:52 1h 50m Loop's Way ♥ 4 This was a very good puzzle game, nicely balanced and everything seemed pretty clear! I did find a small bug where the cubes clipped through the ground. Very fun puzzles, well done!
Oct 9 00:13:05 5m 13s Phil Alone ♥ 1 This was pretty interesting! there were many hints to figure out. Some things were still a bit unclear but for a mystery game its nicely done!
Oct 10 20:30:54 44h 17m Stagnatum ♥ 0 This was a very good entry! I loved the visuals with the sound! The gameplay was a bit easy I think. As long as you spammed Z you'd get through it. Other than that there wasn't really much to do to dodge stuff. Well done within 3 days!
Oct 10 21:19:54 49m 00s Fish Balls ♥ 1 This was a really cute game! Loved the claw machine vibes. This could work really well in an arcade! I'd recommend making this game into a browser version since Unity can usually be very easily be ported over. (There is a bug in 2020, so I'd recommend building the browser version in 2019.4) Some small points of feedback: - I didn't really understand why some duckies were more expensive than others since they gave the same amount of points back. - You could maybe put the store into the UI of the game and then reset the duckies with a button or something, so the player won't have to go out of the game the entire time. Loved this game! keep it up ^^
Oct 10 22:26:58 1h 07m 5 Minutes Before Halloween ♥ 1 This was a fun game! The characters had fun dialogue and findings the masks was pretty enjoyable! The movement seemed a bit weird but it did work for the game. Well done ^^
Oct 10 23:22:05 55m 07s Free The Rollies! ♥ 1 This was nice little game, well polished! The only bug that I found was that the creatures went through my lift. Nice game!
Oct 11 00:02:36 40m 31s The Curse of Cattenburg ♥ 2 This was really well done and a lot work for 3 days! The art was amazing and was very fun to play. Maybe add info when you hover over the stats in the card game to show what it does.
Oct 11 00:19:30 16m 54s Who Knows ♥ 0 This was nice! Pretty difficult to get the hang off, but fun to try and get the highscore! Maybe add an option to change how to long is. So you have 3 minute, 5 minutes and 9
Oct 11 00:28:13 8m 43s Paper Planes ♥ 1 I really liked that! It was kinda difficult but very easy to understand! I could see this becoming a very fun mobile game ^^
Oct 11 00:49:51 21m 38s Beyond Death ♥ 4 Nice job! The story at the start was nice to have together with the small puzzles. Could do with a run mechanic to let the player move a little bit more quickly
Oct 11 19:18:12 18h 28m Challenge Accepted ♥ 0 Was a fun game! I didn't really see the theme in the game. Just seemed more of a quiz to me. The theme might have fit better if you were sent to the beginnen when missing a question. With this you could also speed up question so you didnt have to wait for the announcer to speak or for the music to finish playing (Because that took quite a while)
Oct 11 19:34:18 16m 06s Where's my glasses? ♥ 1 This was a good game! Very very difficult to move around tho, The enemies red bar seemed more like a danger zone but hit you right away. Nice entry!
Oct 11 19:39:43 5m 25s Angriff ♥ 1 This was fun! I loved the randomly generated stuff and that looked very smooth too. There wasnt really a difficulty curve, maybe give a time limit and make it so that the player has to be at the next loop within that time limit.
Oct 11 19:49:11 9m 28s Coin Cavern ♥ 1 Interesting entry, The view of the game was very different from other entries but it did look a bit trippy I'd say. It was fun to get the coins but I didn't really feel any danger. Well done within 3 days!
Oct 11 20:14:30 25m 19s Troubleshooter: A Drag and Drop Adventure ♥ 1 Loved the voice lines. Would have been nice to have known about right clicking cards and such when started but was a very polished game!
Oct 11 20:34:23 19m 53s Topple Tower ♥ 1 That was a cute game! Liked the concept a lot, I did get a bug where I put one of my stones into the tower so I couldnt finish it. I did on my second go, I liked the ending. Other than the ending the theme didn't really fit I think. Still, well done!
Oct 11 20:52:28 18m 05s Pre Call ♥ 3 This was very very good! I could see this being a big game with a bit more content! I did notice a couple inconsistencies with the dialogue and subtitles. For instance when he said astrologer the dialogues named someone else. Something that I'd recommend adding: - More levels, make each longer and more difficult, maybe add less connectors so that we have to put them together more. Very good entry, hope more people find this!
Oct 11 22:46:44 1h 54m LoopChan ♥ 3 This was a nice little game, Right now it feels very random. What I'd do is put the action list somewhere on the screen so that the player can anticipate their moves.
Oct 12 00:45:43 1h 58m MonkeyVM ♥ 2 This was really well done! The level design was nicely balanced and has been alot of time into! it would be cool to see stuff like if-statements into the game!
Oct 12 01:52:57 1h 07m Loop ♥ 1 This was a fun game! Loved the narration, had me laugh quite a bit. The camera did rotate me around a bit weird at times, but other then that it was very fun!
Oct 12 01:58:34 5m 37s Secret Agent Thumb in Stuck in a loop ♥ 1 Well done ^^ Had an interesting mechanic, but could do with a bit of polishing. Maybe a quicker restart screen because I'd had to wait a while before restarting
Oct 12 02:02:05 3m 31s Countercl0ckwise ♥ 1 This was very fun! Was pretty challenging to reach the end. Nice entry!
Oct 12 02:12:19 10m 14s Tickets, Please! ♥ 2 This was very interesting! trying to find out where everyone had to go was very fun. I did encounter a small bug after a couple stops that a passenger left and I couldnt exit the UI anymore. Well done for the jam!
Oct 12 17:50:52 15h 38m Memoirs ♥ 0 Amazing art style! Didn't really see the goal in it, and not sure how the theme fit into it all. Liked the story a lot and the mood was set really well!
Oct 12 18:01:55 11m 03s This Will Be My Cycle ♥ 0 I liked the idea a lot! It could be nice to also see some rooms you could benefit from (health rooms for instance). Well done within these 3 days!
Oct 12 18:13:57 12m 02s Not Enough ♥ 1 I rated everything a 4.5 because it was not enough!
Oct 12 18:20:33 6m 36s Welcome to Station Alpha ♥ 1 This was interesting but I felt like it was missing some gameplay, maybe making it a bit more challenges to escape the loop ^^
Oct 12 18:26:05 5m 32s RunPower ♥ 1 Pretty good idea, well polished too! Maybe add more kinds of enemies that you'd have to jump over
Oct 12 18:33:15 7m 10s Looper - The Last Mission ♥ 1 This was fun! Maybe make the tutorial part skippable so that we can get right into killing again ^^
Oct 12 18:41:55 8m 40s Re-Version ♥ 2 This was nice! I liked the puzzles, but the time could have went back a bit faster imo. Other then that pretty polished!
Oct 16 08:34:43 85h 52m Countdown Trap ♥ 1 This was an interesting game! I liked all the Among Us like minigames! The tasks could use a bit more of a tutorial, since I didn't quite get how some of them worked. The 4 spinning circles were kind of weird, as I didnt really get to figure out where to really click. Sometimes it worked and sometimes the click didnt work. The keypad one with the lever was unclear too, I couldnt figure out what to do, its not pressing 1-9 (or 0-9) and when i press the lever the sound goes off but nothing actually happens. Overall very nice game, loved the details and story in it! Games being a bit unclear in game jams isnt a big deal so well done!
Oct 16 08:39:37 4m 54s The Wizard's Trip ♥ 1 Congrats on finishing the game! It took a while before I figured out how to move and some things are still very unclear but I like the premise a lot and the music is really nice too!
Oct 16 08:44:40 5m 03s Sushi VS Burrito ♥ 0 This was pretty fun! Pretty repetitive but well polished!
Oct 16 08:49:57 5m 17s Among Me ♥ 1 This was a pretty interesting mechanic! Kind of unbalanced since you could basically wait until only the imposter is the only one left but fun if you get it before that point! Maybe set a timer to kill the right person
Oct 16 08:58:46 8m 49s Help! I Set Off a Bomb! ♥ 1 This was fun! Reminded me a lot of keep talking and nobody explodes. I'd suggest making the colors stand out a bit more from each other, especially for color blind people (or also put letters on them to get this: "Press button Green B).
Oct 16 09:13:20 14m 34s 11:59 Pm ♥ 0 This was a very fun idea! It feels a bit unclear on what every customer wanted, I got the bob drink but for the rest it was a bit weird to me. The tutorial also took quite a bit, at one points I thought I had to click to continue but this just cancelled the entire tutorial. Maybe make this quick and clickable so that people can go back to it when they want. I loved the characters and art, was very nice!
Oct 16 09:29:05 15m 45s Loop of Doubt ♥ 0 This was fun but pretty difficult! It took a lot of hits before something went down, doable in 2 minutes ^^ Well done!
Oct 16 09:36:43 7m 38s Blood Drive ♥ 1 This game was a bit rough, the camera controls and aiming seemed a bit off but the game was easy enough, after you have 4 turrets you just have to get the blood and fill it in your tank. I did love the look of the health bar, that was really nice!
Oct 16 09:43:10 6m 27s Metamorph ♥ 1 Loved the graphics, I got a weird bug as moth where it stopped flying and just wanted to go down (I think it wanted to turn back to being a bug maybe?). Nicely designd map, nice game!
Oct 16 09:48:29 5m 19s Wake Me Up ♥ 1 Liked the visuals, but didn't really get on what to do. It didn't restart after I missed my meeting. I'd love to see a more in depth game about this ^^
Oct 16 09:52:14 3m 45s Cat | Stealth | Box ♥ 0 The visual and idea of the game seem really nice! I just wasn't too sure on what to do after I picked something up, the robots started coming for me right away. I tried running and dropping the item but I'd still get spotted. Well done for 3 days!
Oct 16 10:57:35 1h 05m Resurrection ♥ 1 There was a lot in this game! The first game was my favorite and the other two were also very polished! I'd suggest speeding up the third game a little bit, so that it becomes a bit challenging on how many flowers you get. I also didn't quite get the theme in this, it mostly felt like the game was just restarting. Lots of work has been put into this and you can really see it payed off! congrats!
Oct 16 11:13:57 16m 22s Paper Loop ♥ 0 I loved the visual style and was very nice to find the best route to get the most points! It would have been cool to get like a set up stage where you can set up your first route before moving your character. that way you have a bit more control over your stats. Impressive work!
Oct 21 19:51:19 128h 37m The LoopHole ♥ 0 Interesting game, wasn't sure of what the theme had to do with it but was fun to play. Could do with some directions. Well done!
Oct 21 20:22:04 30m 45s The Last Henchman ♥ 1 This was very nice! Loved the looping around the tank mechanic. Very well designed!
Oct 27 15:36:59 139h 14m FIREWALL SURFER ♥ 1 pretty good! It was kinda difficult to control the player's movement but it was fun to challenge myself with this!
Oct 27 15:43:34 6m 35s Super Looper ♥ 1 This was really interesting! The puzzles were fairly easy but that isnt a bad thing during a game jam. Was very fun to get through and the mechanics were well designed! Good job!