Augmented by johnryanaudio 2021-04-27T17:30:47Z
Interesting entry! I think it would have benefitted from more interactivity earlier in the game. I personally just get bored reading dialogue. For people who really like story games this is great!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → Users → Cole Hutson
| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Mo | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2023 | 53 | Delivery | Cold Pizza | jam | 438 | 3.71 | 3.79 | 3.75 | 4.18 | 3.35 | 2.90 | |
| 2021 | 48 | Deeper and deeper | Deep Space | jam | 1112 | 3.41 | 3.52 | 2.94 | 3.76 | 3.12 |
Interesting entry! I think it would have benefitted from more interactivity earlier in the game. I personally just get bored reading dialogue. For people who really like story games this is great!
The music is kinda buggy! It stutters alot. I don't understand the controls but I managed! Not bad!
Hey just a couple of things. Thought the art was great. I think when you hit spikes it should bring you back to where you fell from or maybe boost you up so you don't take continuous damage.
Great Game!! I think the oil tiles appear a little too infrequently. Which causes the player to lose to no fault of their own!
I really like the idea and am impressed you did this in so little time!
I like the idea. It's a unique take on the theme. I was kind of confused about what I was supposed to be doing? Making as much money as I can or as little?
Also I don't know if this is a bug or not but you can still click the shop after the button disappears!
I thought this game was really good. The sound gets better the deeper you go.
One problem to me is that fish at deeper levels just don't yield enough money for the time it takes to get down there.
Fun little arcade game. I have some feed back! If the little guys are too close to the bottom you actually cant see them and don't know where they are moving! Other than that it was pretty good!
Interesting game! I definitely had fun running into all the things.
Nice Game! The audio is wild haha but in a good way. Is there not a lot of combos or am I a dummy. I could only find like 5 or 6
@rawb it should be working now!
@Cryptonesic I think it should be working now
Hi everybody! The speed upgrade was intended to be a way to blow up small meteors but I didn't have time to put it in!! :( Thanks for all the feedback!
Also I wanted to add a sound track but that had to be cut as well!
I am glad people could reach the end!
@hassan-abouelela Thanks for all the honest feedback! I 100% agree with the speed upgrade being a down grade it was meant to do something else but I ran out of time!
Also you are right about the death screen which was up there on my list of things to do but once again had to be cut for time. :(
@fuzzy-lobster thanks man that really means a lot.
@milano23 Thanks friend! I'm really sad about it not having audio. :'(
The mini map was very cool! That was really impressive. I managed to make it to the bed after 2 tries!
It was a fun 5 minutes thanks!
Hey enjoyed the game I think I got lost but I tried hard to find all the nuggets.
Obviously you know about some issues. I was also getting frame drops when I chopped a bunch of blocks in succession which I think is a me issue but I am not sure.
Also I think the dirt might benefit from being a bit brighter!
overall good game!
Thought your game was nice! Controls were hard to get used to as they seemed sort of delayed. Played a couple of times and had a blast once I got used to that
Hey! Thought the game was great! I think it would benefit from a higher difficulty curve. Like it starts spawning more enemies faster or they move in different patterns. There is potential for a fun hyper casual game here though.
I got stuck in the puzzle where you have to but the rock in the whole after crossing the second tree or I would have finished! I think that smoothing the camera would have helped this game a lot it was a little jarring for the camera to follow exactly. I also would have like to be able to hold the key to continuously move but other than that I liked the idea and the art worked!
WOW! The loop here was phenomenal. I had my doubts at first but I was blown away I was sucked in to this! The art was great! The sound reminded me of the Tamagotchi online games (completely random but thats what it reminded me of) just a great and chill game not a stressful as it seems! I survived to day 8!
Now I know how difficult it is to be a mother. Thank you for teaching me something. Great game and one I hoped to see at theme annoucment!
@louiejams @moonblast I see the game I don't know if it was just uploaded though.
The graphics were great! I thought the letters were funny especially the ones that were addressed to anybody. Great little papers please casual mode type of game!
The music and the visual everything fit so nicely here. The puzzles were well balanced and the difficulty curve well thought how I really enjoyed playing it!
These types of games always have a mysterious/creepy atomosphere. I thought that part was great. I would have liked for search results to pop up as I typed and not after typing that would have made this a little easier (in my mind.) But yeah the atmosphere was great. Great job!
Bruh, I am to slow for this :( good game I just literally suck a games like this.
I like the flavor text on deliveries nice and funny touch especially when you hit pedestrians. I know you were going for frustrating and that's what this made me haha. But really good entry!
I am a little dumb and didnt realize that the line of objects at the bottom was what was coming next and I thought it was just completely random. I finally figured that part out and I had a lot of fun. I really like games where you can upgrade things (by merging or otherwise) So this type of game was right in my wheelhouse. It was fun, I wish the smog clouds were a little more predictable. Otherwise a great entry in the game! Congrats on finishing!
Pretty good! The crates were pretty hard to place accurately I made me not one to try an get three stars. I think this was because it felt more like luck to get the correct placement than skill. Might just be me though. Otherwise the graphics and audio were great! I really enjoyed the atmosphere of the game as well.
I felt like the braking was a little bit slow especially if you picked up any moderate speed, but other than that i really loved this one! great job!
@weirdbitgames I appreciate you saying that! I really wanted music but with my music skills it probably would have taken away from the experience haha thanks for playing!
@weirdbitgames You can actually pick them up with right click now! Sorry if that wasn't clear I included some text in the level before this that said it :( It's hard to say these things with out a wall of text players have to read.
@weirdbitgames Haha, I see where you got confused. I am now feeling like I should've just made it left click. That might have made a lot more sense. :laughing:
Audio was a little rough (I muted I'm sorry). The game was fun though. I noticed that you move faster when moving diagonal (don't forget to normalize!). Great entry!
I enjoyed it quite a bit and the controls were unforgiving but I like things like that. Great experience.
This is crazy if not a bit too ambitious for a jam! I thought the physics worked well and the graphics were cool to look at! The arrow that points to the next drop of point could be a little bit bigger I think.
Wow! This was great I am impressed even for a team your size this is impressive. Great experience. I played until the end and had a great time the entire way!
Wow! I killed probably 100 people to deliver a single package... all jokes aside incredible loop here and the boss fight was really well designed I thought. One thing is that in the shop I would have like it if it didn't roll the same thing twice. I never got to use the minigun because of this mechanic and I knew it was there because I rolled it before I could buy it. I would have really like to try it. That's my only complaint, great entry!
I thought this game was great and pretty unique. It was so hard to not hit the poor guy in the head. He hated me by the end of it :(
The space bar to speak mechanic does not seem to be working or may be I was misunderstanding which bubble to press space in. I would have like to be able to win :(
The music and sound effects were great! I like a good story based game too and this one has a good story for a jam game I definitely see what you were trying to do!
Its good! and I really like the spiderman swinging mechanic but it feels really bad to completely lose control of your character when they are in the air. I beat the game and enjoyed it but that was the one complaint I had!
Nice game! Since you are asking for feedback, I think I would have gone with more a 'twin stick' shooter as they say where you shoot towards the mouse. I found the shooting to be unnecessarily frustrating because I couldn't shoot along diagonals and I could only shoot in the direction I was moving.
A couple of Quality of Life things you could implement next time is just a simple pause menu or a way to exit the game with the escape key.
As for art I think the art was pretty good and the music was good if not slightly repetitive. All in all really good for a first jam game.
It was fun! I was so frustrated when I kept dying but then I figured out it was because you had to refill. The part where you have to keep going back and forth the keg was kind of frustrating.
I beat the game really easy the first time I played it and then I couldn't beat it again. As everyone is saying the art and music are really nice, I would've liked some animations and little bit more depth in the gameplay but the art alone is great.