Everything here was top-notch. Great art, audio, humor, and interesting story. The only critiques I have are: a) it wasn't clear at the beginning that I'm supposed to be "bad", so the first option felt really forced. Later, I understood the purpose more, so it made sense, but maybe it could be more clear that you're "giving in"? b) Personally, I didn't like the rhythm game at all. And I like rhythm games, I've even made one for a previous jam, but this one was boring, unintuitive, and really felt like it took away from the game. I dreaded each time I'd enter the elevator thinking "Please no rhythm game".
Those critiques aside, I really enjoyed the game and the ending felt good.