moonblast 2023-05-02 10:34
Interesting concept, a little meta-flavored immersion
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD53 → Message Delivered
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Overall | 540 | 3.61 | 53 | |
| Fun | 551 | 3.48 | 53 | |
| Innovation | 153 | 3.90 | 52 | |
| Theme | 727 | 3.77 | 53 | |
| Graphics | 763 | 3.40 | 53 | |
| Audio | 457 | 3.41 | 52 | |
| Humor | 601 | 3.04 | 50 | |
| Mood | 202 | 4.01 | 53 |
Interesting concept, a little meta-flavored immersion
Oh this is certainly not a take I was expecting to see for this theme! Nice one!
I love games like this and this one is a unique was to interpret the theme! Nice job!
Very unique take! I enjoyed my time. Good job!
Liked the take on this :-)
These types of games always have a mysterious/creepy atomosphere. I thought that part was great. I would have liked for search results to pop up as I typed and not after typing that would have made this a little easier (in my mind.) But yeah the atmosphere was great. Great job!
I enjoyed this, I wasn't expecting any webpage-based games like this but I really like how it's executed
The search being delayed (and only showing 4 results) did kind of mess with me, I thought it was broken until I searched "sequence", and after that I figured it out and solved the puzzle as intended
thanks @bobbie in theory we would create more content so to make it more fluid for people navigating the stories and finding information gradually about the plot, since we could not do that, I just wrote here the key to finding the most important part of the plot so people could see the ending.
thanks for playing @cole-hutson oh it kinda works like that, but takes a few seconds to load as we made A LOT of content lolol
Interesting game. I like the investigative feel and the 'hacker' concept.
I'm really a fan of Telling Lies and Her Story, so this really hit home! Nice job to make it work under this theme, good job! :)
Very nice ! I enjoyed the theme and the plot twist. I had to cheat and used your keyword, but it was nice. I quite liked being put in the action and having to figure everything out. [SPOILER] If I had the option, I think I would havel liked to not send the code. So the plot twist completely validated my feeling! [/spoiler]
thanks a lot for playing @hopla I would like to the discovery process more fluid and all, but I was really in a rush to solve the bugs to at least make it playable :laughing:
Great work on the music, love high tension soundtracks. Goes well with the story as it throws you in the deep end. Good job!
I really like this type of game. In my opinion, the puzzle was a bit too convoluted, and I had to use your tips to find the code. The atmosphere is really great tho. Makes me wanna try to do a full UI game on next LD.
Congratulations on making it to the LD53 !
Wow ! Everything about your game is so perfect for the mood and immersion. I like the UI, the broken link/images are a great idea ! I wont spoil anything in the comments but seriously, thats a solid entry ! The music is perfect for the mood, its not easy to compose something that fit the gameplay, you nailed it 100%. Great work <3
Good puzzle. I personally liked the limited search and the search strings being a bit janky to show results, it added to the feel of the game and the feature of other emails sometimes flashing up for a second added something extra to go back and figure out, and ended up being what led me to the solution. And I really like the twist!
thank you all for playing! @greenwooddrive I was aiming at something slow and glitchy and minimal with the soundtrack, I was only able to start on it in the last few hours, so I am really really glad some people liked it, thanks! @oter some of the buggy features were due to me not being able to create enough content to make a full UI, so I thought, maybe the broken UI can be a thing, maybe it is a feature, not a bug lol ... I am very happy that I was able to convey some feelings with it. @fluffy-kaeloky yeah I got very frustrated seeing I could not so easily find the solution myself and ended up creating several emails that say the codes and the email, but even then they were a bit hard to find in a fluid manner. With more time I would work more on that part, making sure there is enough content that would make any investigation path intriguing.
@velvetlobster I quite understand the rush ! Looking back to it, I wish I had spent a bit more time beefing up the story of mine ! I think I'll work on it on the post game jam.
btw just noticed I haven't played yours @hopla seems to be a really nice narrative game, gonna play it right away
I am a big fan of Her Story and this game really scratched that itch for me. Great work! It was fun to dig around emails, I was laughing hard when I realized that the spam emails were from other players.
Lots of ambition for a game jam, keep it up!
This is super cool! I love this type of game :) There's a lot of potential here! Feedback: I was stumped for a bit but then realized there was the "search" feature. After that I was able to proceed and find the right information. A technical issue is I think that a search for apple, should also bring up results for apple.banana. I think right now the words are delimited by space, correct me if I'm wrong? Wish: Would have loved to see more of an ending, and maybe multiple endings depending on the information you find and what to do with it. The plot twist was cool!
Really liked the game (and the twist)! I agree with the others here that the immersion is great. Nice to see a narrative game for a change.
I really love this immersive type of game where you piece the story little by little and only your own knowledge allows you to progress. Extra points for originality!
Seems fun but I couldnt figure out where the codes were.
Oh very cool! I don't think I solved the puzzle fully but I was able to see the end by searching sequence as intended. I loved the atmosphere of this!
I really like exploring the narrative in this manner. Chrome also wanted me to save my password for the game which is probably an immersive happy accident but very cool.
Cool idea, I always like games like this.
Awesome game, creepy ARG-like vibe, I loved it. I have managed to find and send the code, the AI answered, but it wasn't so obvious for me, that it was the actual solution to the puzzle :/ So I kept searching, if I have to maybe make some arrangements of the code letters, etc.
It would be awesome to see this game expanded, requiring you to login to different accounts and changing the servers with address bar at the top. Plese let me know if you'll ever make full game out of this :D
thanks a lot for the feedback @lisek-gagatek actually the idea of this game was kind of a dream project for years, perhaps I need some help to expand this and make it look more 'professional' so to say.
@bangkerpow oh yes that is purely accidental but I loved it :laughing:, there was a password we tested that chrome even says it was found in a leak and that using it was dangerous, but then we already had so many emails containing the current password (and a full thread of investigation concerning that) that would make it complicated to change the password lol.
@francis yeees actually I had another ending planned ... but could not execute it, in case you get the email right but the codes wrong for instance ... wanted also to include an ending screen or something like that but was far too late lol
@eric-nguyen thanks for playing, and I am extra glad to find people that like Sam Barlow's work and played this
@triangle-point , @perryseity
if you look for sequence you gonna find an email that looks like fish.bail@gov.us, the emails contain conversations leaked about codes to start a nuclear strike in case of national threat, so sending an email to that address will initiate the protocol.
So when you send the code, the contact you have been talking to (and that requested the job) reveals itself in a very subtle manner (but anyone that has ever used CHAT GPT will be familiar with that type of response).
In fact the one that requested the job is an AI that is trying to create a nuclear and requested your help to do that, in the promise that you will be protected in the new AI dominated world.
If you close the windows and see the background you can see that the character (the hacker) that you are might have a tendency to be more "pro AI", as he/she has a robot arm in the background (I know that was subtle but we had no time to find a better free image lol)
thank you all for playing I will be looking into everybody's games shortly
Impressive for a weekend jam! You really nailed the atmosphere and added a lot of cool menu functionality here. The minimal music and sound is great. And you even added window open/close animations! Very well done.
Woah, the way this one looks and feels is incredible, you really nailed the federal government software interface! Lovely work!
Unique approach and concept :3 Also, very good job on the UI!
That was unexpected :smile: I was wondering if my computer was glitchy or if it was intended, so we can say that your design was convincing.
Felt a bit lost at first.
Thanks to this game, I began to look at games differently, because this is a real masterpiece. I recommend this game to anyone who is looking for an interesting and action-packed game. She's definitely worth a try!
This is a clever approach to the theme, I loved the "glitchy" UI style that is not flooded on the screen, the vibe is clean and effective. Would love to see more, thank you
I like the setup and layout of the game. Some of the icons/visuals were a bit jarring to look at but overall it all worked and it was interesting to see what information I could find. Well done!
The idea is very cool. And the idea of spam is a cool feature. It would be nice to have some more musical variety.
Had a great time playing this!
At first I didn't get that there were more messages than the base 4/folder shown, so I was super confused and thought I should find the information from only these emails. After I read here a bit and figured out there were more, I eventually found the codes without using the "cheat".
I was a bit disappointed that I couldn't find any easter egg (searched for : easter, egg, ludum, dare, jam, delivery (maybe cat email was one?), velvet, lobster). I also wish we could find more foreshadowing of the ending in the emails, but from what I've read it's not a topic that's ever mentioned.
It's a shame that the ending doesn't differ if you send the right code or not, the first time I thought I had figured the code out I was wrong.
I actually think the amount of ways to get to the codes is very reasonable to keep it both feasible and challenging, and the music is perfect for the atmosphere.
Great job, super original entry!
Good vibe with a solid mechanic. I like the setup and layout of the game and its graphics. Well done ++
thanks for playing folks :smile:
@kler your analysis is precise. I planned to have all of those but could not do it in the end, the only easter egg I managed to have there was the fact that all spams are actually emails from other users, when they send emails to wrong addresses.
also the intention was to have multiple endings and better balancing in the ways the users could find the sequence thread, but I was kinda worried cause its ludum dare and people do not spend much time in a single game so just decided to leave lots of emails with that tip to be safe.
btw you gave me very good ideas for easter eggs there and I now feel stupid I was so in a hurry I did not think of them.
such a interesting idea！！！
This was certainly one of the most unique games I've played! I was honestly getting into my email-searching mode while trying to solve the puzzle! Really cool takes with fleshing out the characters through their email interactions, and any awkwardness is easily explained by the fact that you're hacking into an old email client. I love it :grin:
I was confused at first and needed a liiittle help from the comments but as soon as I got on track the game blossomed into a really interesting and uniwue experience that I really enjoyed. Great job!