To be honest, I hate commenting on such games. It is deeply rooted in the author's personality, it is evident. This is why anything I will say is almost meaningless, as the experience was an authentic look of one person. This is where the brilliance of the game comes from. I enjoyed the whole experience and can say that it is GREAT work. Visuals, text and general mood, the whole package is amazing, touching. The only criticism of @shadowcast, which I think he probably should wholeheartedly ignore, is that the dialogue feels just a little rushed, hopping from point to point and the metaphors are just a little clumsy. I love what you did, I feel like you found your game design style and it is wonderful. I wish all the best in refining it to perfection, as I see amazing talent behind this game. P.S. If you feel like talking about game design, art or anything else, I would be delighted to have a conversation.