tomk32 2013-08-26 07:26
Took me a few runs to get through to the last floor and had none to spare. But then I got it right :)
Good idea, good looking theme but I feel that sounds to accompany the text are missing, specially with those short lines.
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD27 → The 10 (other) Seconds Journey
By paperblurt
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 1 | 100 | ||
| Humor | 306 | 2.71 | ||
| Mood | 559 | 2.72 | ||
| Innovation | 694 | 2.78 | ||
| Overall | 878 | 2.71 | ||
| Audio | 951 | 1.37 | ||
| Fun | 962 | 2.38 | ||
| Theme | 1003 | 2.57 | ||
| Graphics | 1119 | 1.84 |
Took me a few runs to get through to the last floor and had none to spare. But then I got it right :)
Good idea, good looking theme but I feel that sounds to accompany the text are missing, specially with those short lines.
Hi man.
Thanks for playing the game, and kinda enjoying it. You mean I should add in sounds too?
Delightfully bewildering.
"Jew Bet". Heh. You're a bad person.
creative take on the theme, i like it!
Quite deep, but in a good way.
Surprisingly fun text adventure. I might have just restarted the game from the current chapter instead of restarting the game as replaying multiple chapters is a bit annoying.
That's, hum, odd. And a bit boring, to be frank. You should at least add some music to it.
I felt like science dog :S
Was amusing. Worth Playing. Good Job.
Interesting! Great use of twine!
Huh. Fun. It has those little hints of feeling deep. It's good.
Good entry :) Congrats
Nice work!
It was very nice and fun to play, some music would help to settle the mood.
Very interesting little text adventure
Hmm.. Seems like music would've added that little extra..
Great mood. Quite strangely poetic, bit frustrating starting again each time though.
At first I was like.... uh... ok... I guess... and then I was like... Heck yeah!
I found it amazingly thoughtful. :)
That was off-the-wall, and I thought it was great. :-)
Wow! I made it in one play through and didn't understand to much of the jokes as I am dutch XD Hilarious :P
WTF
this stands on the line between quirky and I have no idea whats going on.
Interesting
Liked a lot !
...wh... what. Rock Hudson? Titanic.. My head hurts. This is hillarious, but so, so confusing... And my sides hurt too. And my eyes are full of tears. :D
My hat off to you!
Wow, that was surreal. Thanks for making this, as weird as it made me feel at times ;)
An interesting and amusing idea. Not bad!
Lovely! It really does get you to think about life and choices... The burning people part is incredibly visceral. Congratulations! I admit I got curious about your personal story. :)
Ahaha.. Enjoyed this one, feels like an interactive poem. Nice work!
Great writing. Took a few times, but I got there! Good job :0)
I enjoyed this. I love all the fast switching I have to do mentally each time I get to a new (second) story. Kind of like quickfire trivia, where I felt I had to answer fast but the questions were always totally from left field.
You've done some very cool stuff in Twine here (speaking as someone who has Twine but is very far from having learnt all the tricks). Nice use of colours, visuals, timers, etc.
Some of the story snippets were pretty good (the war zone bit was probably my favourite), and I like the story/story pun, but as a whole, this seemed a bit too incomprehensible for me. I've got nothing against absurdity and symbolism, but here, it all seemed too vague to add up to much.
Hard one to rate: I enjoyed playing it, but I can't quite put my finger on what I was doing.
Very original concept
Hi @Christina.
Like your comment and I understand it. This is not for everyone, but I haven tried to make a game that excludes anyone either.
Glad for your feedback..
Funny twine game, if a little disconcerting :D Managed to beat it on my second run though, felt pretty good. And all in all a very nice experience, really different!
I liked the idea, but I felt that some desicions were sort of random, while others actually did have meaning. Made it on my second try :P (I just had to punch that guy in the face)
Fun, quirky and thought-provoking. I breezed it on my second playthrough. :)
I really like that so many actually finish the game. Permadeath can be a bummer!
Appreciate it!
I enjoyed playing this. Made me (happily) frustrated and I almost quit, but managed to win. Fun text game!
Interesting approach.
Well written, could have used some sound or music. Each level felt unrelated and the choices felt random - instead I would have liked your story to create a world and for my choices to relate to what I'm learning about your world as I play.
Interesting idea and one of the first twine games i've played ever.
Crazy pink quest) I like it!
A bit confusing and most of my stuff was just guessing/luck really. Nonetheless still enjoyable.
Awesome entry, loved the take on the theme!
Very interesting. I like it!
Some music really could've added to the eerie atmosphere.
Funny game, great humor and creative interpretation on the theme. Great!
Very unique.
I specially like how it works with your imagination.
I don't get it.
I don't really know how to interpret and/or rate this. It's interesting but also so so very weird .
Really nice game!
Oh, a text-based game! Nice narration, but i don't like trial&errors system in this kind of game, sorry.
ohh, got "wrong" around past half.. but it was interesting to try again and then... sooner or later :)
Interesting idea
Very frustrating when I get sent back from near the end, I wish you'd put some checkpoints.
Interesting. I failed the first couple of floors, then finished all of them in one go, generally just not being a dick :) As I got closer to the end I was like "pick right, pick right!" because the fear of failure took over.