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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | TheGreenWorm's comment | |
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| Oct 6 14:29:47 | ORBIDRONE | ♥ 2 | UI is definitely broken, but the overall gameplay is great. Lacks polish overall, but lots of content ! | |
| Oct 6 16:00:39 | 1h 30m | T O R O I D I R | ♥ 1 | Nice concept, played it for a bit. You can get quite good at predicting the actual path of the particle after a while. Love the overall aesthetic and sound! |
| Oct 6 16:18:06 | 17m 27s | WHILE(ALIVE) | ♥ 1 | Amazing ambiance, nice gameplay. Great job, loved it ! |
| Oct 6 17:15:01 | 56m 55s | Stix | ♥ 1 | Can't seem to interact with stuff, or maybe I'm trying to interact with stuff that can't be interacted with. Maybe add some tutorial/introduction ? |
| Oct 6 17:18:36 | 3m 35s | SNAKE SNAKE SNAKE | ♥ 1 | Great twist on a well known concept ! Overall a bit basic, but it works great ! |
| Oct 6 17:23:50 | 5m 14s | Conundrum | ♥ 3 | Can't seem to understand what the goal of the game is ! Nice graphics, I like the walk animation. |
| Oct 6 17:48:31 | 24m 41s | Lööp Runner | ♥ 1 | This is weird, I like it |
| Oct 6 18:12:36 | 24m 05s | Box Hole | ♥ 1 | I'm glad I continued playing ! This game is really funny. To new players, there's more to this, keep playing ;) |
| Oct 6 18:26:25 | 13m 49s | Stuck in a Soup Loop | ♥ 3 | You managed to make soup making awesome, great job ^^ Love the sound design ! |
| Oct 17 19:54:36 | 265h 28m | Cercle funeste | ♥ 0 | A true brain twister. Overall aesthetic is a little uneven in my opinion, and adding a "ghost" that shows where you'd end up if you pressed space could help ! |
| Oct 20 17:43:35 | 69h 48m | Get Stuck In The Loop | ♥ 1 | Short game, but the player model and animations were smooth. |
| Oct 20 19:11:33 | 1h 27m | Escape A Curved World | ♥ 2 | Quite good for a first jam. I could nitpick on a lot of things but i feel like they've already been brought up by previous players. |
| Oct 20 20:07:32 | 55m 59s | Zgulls | ♥ 0 | I like the aesthetic, very clean. The UI is a bit unpolished though, and the game might need a few more fish at the start just to build a bit more and not get wrecked in the very first wave. |
| Oct 21 12:41:12 | 16h 33m | First Try | ♥ 0 | Adding some controls other than WASD (arrow keys maybe) could help me beat the game, not everyone has a qwerty keyboard ;) The puzzle game is great in itself and the "0 death" joke gets across. The main thing with me is the "move/walk" sound, very agressive and loud, gets old really quick. |
| Oct 23 20:19:16 | 55h 38m | Group Chat | ♥ 1 | Trippy ! |
| Oct 23 20:25:03 | 5m 47s | Hide and Seek | ♥ 1 | This is super solid for a game made by two people! Mood, audio and Art were on point, great job ! |
| Oct 23 20:32:46 | 7m 43s | TimeSplitters 4 | ♥ 3 | There's some nice puzzles in there ! You should definitely add some indications on your itch.io page so people can enjoy it outside ludum dare ! |
| Oct 23 21:12:44 | 39m 58s | GunTron | ♥ 1 | Played all the way to the end. Nice loop, I got the basic concept quickly. My main critique would be regarding sound design, I feel like the SFX were a bit to "violent" or "distorted" and quite loud compared to the music. Still had a fun time playing the different rooms though ! |
| Oct 23 21:18:34 | 5m 50s | Lights | ♥ 1 | I don't think I saw this concept elsewere, simple but effective ! Some sound could be nice. I like the fact that you can experiment with the controls and mechanic during the intro/tutorial. I'm sad I didn't have time to read the entire end message, went by a bit too quickly. |
| Oct 23 22:26:54 | 1h 08m | Looping | ♥ 1 | Got stuck at the inner loop part, but the "puzzles" where quite funny ! Be careful with flashy images though, you might seriously hurt some players. Nice music, repetitive but quite clean overall |
| Oct 23 22:34:17 | 7m 23s | Jungle Jam | ♥ 1 | Man, the graphics were superbe, and the music... love the music, you did a great job, so groovy |
| Oct 23 22:42:14 | 7m 57s | Time Crash | ♥ 1 | Might be the best art and sound I've seen so far. Gameplay seems a bit simple at first, but get's hard quick (or I have very bad memory...) |
| Oct 23 22:47:08 | 4m 54s | Looped Dodger | ♥ 1 | Simple, yet effective. Some sort of score counter would be nice ! |
| Oct 23 22:58:30 | 11m 22s | Stuck In A Loop | ♥ 1 | To be fair, I got stuck. Without any clear goal I didn't know what to do. Camera is a bit weird, and having the "back" button be on the escape key is quite unnatural. I think the game might be more confortable in first person. |
| Oct 23 23:07:56 | 9m 26s | Loopy Loco | ♥ 1 | Felt really weird to have a "Quit" button at the end of every level. Feels not that challenging because every tile is "swappable". Sound is a bit too loud too. I still finished it, so it's fun still ! |
| Oct 23 23:18:19 | 10m 23s | Stop Motion | ♥ 2 | This is a cool game ! And the intro is suuuper weird, love it ! great job ! |
| Oct 24 12:26:38 | 13h 08m | Shape Escape - A minimalist strategy game | ♥ 1 | Reading through the comments, maybe you could "charge" an intersection, the more you hold it the longer it will stay "open" after you release it. Was fun, clean looks and sounds. Some kind of difficulty curve would definitely improve it. |
| Oct 24 17:44:51 | 5h 18m | Office Routines | ♥ 0 | Collisions are sometime a bit weird, but the game us forgiving enough. Nice that you put some options for sounds too ! + Extra points for non-wasd controls. |
| Oct 24 18:00:01 | 15m 10s | Dreamin' Cat | ♥ 1 | I find the difficulty a bit too hard towards the end, but I'm not a big platformer fan. Those walls with pike on top and bottom are evil. Still, love the sound and the art is cute and solid ! Really good for jam ! |
| Oct 24 18:06:37 | 6m 36s | ReBeat | ♥ 1 | This is a truly unique game. Some easy levels with only 1 instrument could help understand the mechanic, the first level is quite hard, since there's no tutorial or anything. But I quite enjoyed it, and it's cool that every level has it's own music track ! |
| Oct 24 18:58:24 | 51m 47s | Edge of Ludum Dare | ♥ 1 | Well you know this story is kinda based on a true story, and it's quite funny ! Lacks some polish here and there but still, complete and coherent for a compo game. Thanks for making an english and web build ! |
| Oct 24 20:13:42 | 1h 15m | Woofice Chair! | ♥ 3 | Love the universe you managed to create in such a short time ! Super clean polish everywhere, and the gameplay loop is solid. |
| Oct 25 11:42:42 | 15h 29m | DJ LoopMan | ♥ 0 | Maybe there's a few issues with the WebGL version, or I'm an idiot, but I didn't get it. I managed to record myself punching the red blob to the beat, but nothing more. Adding some kind of tutorial would be nice ! |
| Oct 25 11:51:49 | 9m 07s | Deja vu | ♥ 0 | Having te re-read every dialog when you restart a level is pretty annoying. The rest is pretty cohesive, and to be expected for a first game made by a single person ! Got frustrated at level 4. My small piece of advice would be to try and make the game easier and add other hazards/platform types. When rating games, your player's patience is very low, so they'll prefer novelty over difficulty. Die and retry game get frustrating really quickly if there's not some amazing twist on the idea or mechanic. Take that with a grain of salt, that's just my unfiltered opinion :) Congratz anyway, you're a jammer now ! |
| Oct 25 12:13:58 | 22m 09s | Eloi's Adventure | ♥ 1 | Lacks polish, and I can't say the idea is groundbreaking, but I still played all the way through ! Some platforms were just high enough that I couldn't jump on them comfortably, and the camera lerping to the start position when you re-spawn is a bit unnecessary (but I get that that's just a byproduct of your camera control code). |
| Oct 25 18:11:47 | 5h 57m | A long day | ♥ 0 | I'm really surprised of how many people did a game about a janitor. The environnement is great and there's a lot of detail, but sometime the overall look is quite inconsistent (texture/no texture...) |
| Oct 25 18:23:23 | 11m 36s | quotes | ♥ 1 | A simple memory game, with a nice premise. My few nitpicks : I think the dialog box tween is a bit too long, and the UI doesn't fit the rest of the game well (maybe a more pixely look would fit in better) |
| Oct 25 19:52:03 | 1h 28m | The Claimants of Death | ♥ 1 | Impressed by the amount of level design in this one, it's huge ! And voice acting was a nice touch. Attack style is innovative and fun to control, but adding some kind of knock back when hitting an enemy could be a nice addition in my opinion. They have basically the same attack range as the player, witch makes it difficult to fight without getting hurt. |
| Oct 25 19:56:55 | 4m 52s | Lost in Space | ♥ 1 | Web version is a bit jittery, but works well. Flew a bit and it was nice, some background music would add a lot ! |
| Oct 25 20:14:06 | 17m 11s | CREATION EXCAVATION | ♥ 2 | Well, I was about to put my thoughts in this comments, but I 100% agree with @ismael-rodriguez, so yeah ! |
| Oct 25 20:24:59 | 10m 53s | Vrochos | ♥ 1 | That first part was very fun, but the rest felt unfinished. It's an uneven game with an awesome beginning. The mini game description could be bigger and centered, it would make it more noticeable and important (because it is !) |
| Oct 26 08:57:15 | 12h 32m | Hamster Death Loop | ♥ 1 | A funny game, difficulty and variety takes a little while to kick in, but I'm glad I played a bit more than what my attention span told me to. Not the most ground breaking experience, but the jokes were quite good |
| Oct 26 09:08:55 | 11m 40s | Sushi Scramble | ♥ 1 | Nice idea. There's some issues with sprite sorting and overall graphical cohesion, but the sprites are really cute ! The hitboxes are quite unforgiving, and the game starts with a really hard choke point (the hand on the right and the tentacle) wich made me rage quit after my 8th attempt. |
| Oct 26 10:03:09 | 54m 14s | Once More, Through the Desert | ♥ 1 | A short little narrative. I don't think the overall gameplay added much, after like 15-20 death i figured the game was going to advance wether I played or not, I just had to wait. Pixel art and text is tiny, makes it hard to read. Sound design and overall mood is great ! |
| Oct 26 10:26:01 | 22m 52s | Evolooption | ♥ 0 | The idea is great, and the little comments when you pick up certain objects are a nice touch, makes it a little less repetitive. To improve it, I'd move the man back closer to the left of the screen so you can have more time to see the objects coming, and I'd change the "rotating" animation. Currently, it becomes "thin" right when it's near the man, witch makes it difficult to see. |
| Oct 26 10:51:12 | 25m 11s | Exolvuntur | ♥ 0 | That title screen and the music are soo cool. Lacks polish/feedback in a lot of places (no hit/damage indication beside your health bar going down, no clear objective, you can still move around and shoot when you're dead) You clearly spent a lot of time on the vowel art, but I don't think the top down camera does them justice. |
| Oct 26 11:42:10 | 50m 58s | Bad Skeleton & the Time Police | ♥ 1 | This game is sooo underrated, it makes me sad. Super effective, loopy, fun to play, clean looking and sounding. Don't have much to say, great job ! |
| Oct 26 11:51:45 | 9m 35s | The Dark Wages | ♥ 1 | I like it, looks like our game ! Movement and ragdoll physic is fun, particularly impressed by the character animation ! I hit a wall when going through the "weird" rooms, I feel like the only way to progress is by going blindly through every door and memorizing the path, but the low poly environnement and the rotating rooms makes it really difficult. Adding some kind of riddles or environmental hints would clearly make it a very fun experience ! |
| Oct 26 12:37:37 | 45m 52s | JACKASTER | ♥ 0 | This game has a very unique look to it. Really difficult though, and the player head sometime gets right in front of the camera, occluding everything. |
| Oct 26 12:59:31 | 21m 54s | Loopfield | ♥ 1 | This game is neat ! It would gain a lot from having a wider screen/being zoomed back a bunch to better anticipate incoming objects. Overall, a clean simple idea an good execution, gg ! |
| Oct 26 13:34:24 | 34m 53s | oh shit i'm dreaming again. | ♥ 1 | Impressed by the amount of sprite work and image effects in this one. The story is great and the little puzzle are always fresh. Great job ! My only nitpick is that there's no glasses on the night stand sprite, so it's not clear where the glasses are, but I got them eventually (and then when you look back into the mirror, you don't have any glasses, but that could just be a surreal effect, it's not that important) |
| Oct 26 14:42:09 | 1h 07m | Stuck in the Clock | ♥ 1 | Quite fun to play, but I think adding a more progressive difficulty curve/more variation could go a long way ! Great polish overall, I like this "wobbly" effect |
| Oct 26 15:22:42 | 40m 33s | CONTRAST | ♥ 0 | Loved how you managed to do lot of different gameplays in this game. The main "battle" gameplay is a little hard though, but it's forgiving enough that I managed to finish it. Can't find any link to the theme though, but that's fine |
| Oct 26 16:02:12 | 39m 30s | Spin Attack | ♥ 1 | Great idea, there's some real potential here. I'd change the projectile sprite, right now it's quite unclear where they're headed since they're circles. Good job ! |
| Oct 26 16:12:20 | 10m 08s | Space Drummer | ♥ 2 | This is a top notch "rythm" game. Super original idea, and great execution, art, story. I can tell you're using FL studio, I instantly recognized those Sytrus synth x) |
| Oct 26 16:29:05 | 16m 45s | Memory Lane | ♥ 1 | I like the simple graphics, and the story is simple but great ! Some platforming challenges felt like I was "breaking" the game trying to complete them (some platforms are slightly higher than my jump, but with some weird wall collisions I managed to get up the construction site) |
| Oct 26 16:45:28 | 16m 23s | RoboBlast | ♥ 2 | This is a cool universe you got there, I like the enemy model, and that voice acting is perfect ! It's a good game, even if it's not quite my type. I can't think of anything bad to say. |
| Oct 26 16:56:42 | 11m 14s | Tum-Tum: An Unexpected Diet | ♥ 1 | That meow... Nice story ! Gameplay isn't the most groundbreaking, but it works fine ! |
| Oct 26 17:13:53 | 17m 11s | LoopBerries | ♥ 1 | The berries fractal was confusing at first, but once you get it it's quite funny ! The main thing that frustrated me is that I was still moving while combining my berries, leaving home and dying of radiation by accident. Some simple sound effects would have been nice too. |
| Oct 26 17:19:18 | 5m 25s | LOOP | ♥ 1 | My only complaint is that it's too short ! Nice graphics and overall aesthetic, I liked the small surprise when you first get the 3 shapes that turn into a key. Good job ! |
| Oct 26 17:26:52 | 7m 34s | Get Those Votes! | ♥ 1 | This is a great idea ! I'd love to see this game with some sort of campaign, like going for a small town election with only a few districts, all the way up to become president of the earth. Great job ! I had to replay because I didn't know I could move from state to state. Adding random texts/names was a superbe idea. |
| Oct 26 18:52:49 | 1h 25m | You Are Going To Die Today | ♥ 1 | Nice story, very funny, I like how unexpected everything feel. After a while the game is just some memory challenge, but it's totally worth it to die just to see what crazy story you came up with to make the main character die. On a gameplay standpoint, controls feel a bit weird since you can't press multiple direction keys at the same time and move diagonally, so movement feels a bit stiff. And the guy is working on his own universe, pretty meta ! |
| Oct 26 20:21:41 | 1h 28m | Magmania | ♥ 1 | I like the idea, but it's tough ! I think i'd really like it if the "normal" mode was a tiny bit easier. I feel like I need to do everything perfectly to win, there's not much room for errors and I'm always sinking in the lava after I print my first floater. I really like the player model and animation, and sound design is great, but the music is a bit repetitive. |
| Oct 27 08:42:15 | 12h 20m | DIMENSION LOOP | ♥ 1 | Something to be expected when you know the guy behind it, but still a good experience. I think you should add some kind of joke that prevent you from dying, as the warmup is quite long. Tons of work for a compo game, good job ! |
| Oct 27 16:27:18 | 7h 45m | The Myth of Sisyphus | ♥ 0 | It's a nice rendition of the tale. My few nitpicks : I think some kind of background would be nice, and I never saw a crow. Also, at first I didn't know you could pick up the rock, so I jumped on it and did the entire level with the rock still at the bottom of the level (witch broke the game once I got to the end). |