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Oct 3 07:47:44 Noah's Ark Destroyer ♥ 3 Neat little game. Enjoyed the aesthetics - everything seems to be in one style, fits well. On the gameplay I agree with the previous comment that at the start it feels weird due to not finding any animals. So at times there are pacing issues, but nothing unsolvable~ Lovely work on it!
Oct 3 08:07:50 20m 06s Puzzle Pawz ♥ 1 Cute little casual puzzle game. Lovely simple aesthetics, I enjoyed the music loop, though a bit more variation to it by adding the same loop with a slightly changed "pitch" could help a lot to improve it even further! There's some strange flickering at some points, but perhaps that's just my browser causing it. Good work on it overall, jolly nice work~ :)
Oct 3 08:55:21 47m 31s Sticktron 2077 ♥ 3 Very lovely vibes. I really love the atmosphere of it and the game-play feels smooth and neat. The sound levels were a bit off at times, the effects & music levels felt weird together, but good enough. A jolly good jam entry and lot of room to improve if you get the feel. Awesome work!
Oct 3 09:05:30 10m 09s The Last Capitalist ♥ 0 Everything does work well together - besides the camera as people have mentioned, also on the sound front having a sound for when the factory is getting attacked would be nice and a sound so there could be an impact heard when shooting creature. Jolly game overall though, the music sure gives a funky mood. :)
Oct 3 09:22:34 17m 04s Hangover Hole ♥ 1 Wild atmosphere. I wish there was more of it and I hope you do make some levels at least, the atmosphere is just that wicked and the character. Very polished feeling of what you got already, everything is so neatly done. Jolly good work on it overall!
Oct 3 09:33:57 11m 23s Hellfire Tiles ♥ 2 This menu did have cure for my non-existent marriage. Amusing text there~ I feel like the impact sound and music levels felt a bit too apart. Game-play was fine, although the start was really slow - so perhaps the pacing needs a bit of a bump in speed. Neat work!
Oct 3 09:43:43 9m 46s Fate of Ratlantis ♥ 2 Fun and full of atmosphere. I really enjoyed the art style of it. The cutscenes were specially well done, I enjoyed those a lot! Game-play was a bit simple as previously mentioned by Duckwings, but I think it's fine to have casual fun at times, though there's a lot of things that could be added if you guys continue with the project. The one thing that bothered me was that the sound levels were a bit off at times and specially the menu music was a bit too loud at start and the the first seconds didn't seem to fit, but perhaps it's just me and my music taste. Overall really jolly good work on it!
Oct 3 10:42:28 58m 45s Limited [Space] ♥ 2 Very cute aesthetics and the 'reset' having the time warp effect sure looks marvelous. Those eyes-out of body for the birds add some unique character to the style and everything seems to fit together so well. Music & sounds was quite good too, although perhaps a bit too squeaky, but I guess it does fit the birds in a way. Game-play was jolly fun as long as it was there, but ludum has it's time constraints sadly. Would love to see more levels and additional mechanics, lovely use of the theme!
Oct 3 10:51:33 9m 05s Packing ♥ 1 Packing is a neat and spooky game that creates an amazing atmosphere. You feel immersed in the role of a warehouse worker who has to load boxes into a truck, like a Tetris puzzle. The game is surprisingly relaxing and enjoyable, despite the horror elements. The graphics are stylish and retro, reminiscent of the old PlayStation games. The game also has a good amount of content for a jam project. Great work overall!
Oct 3 11:33:51 42m 18s Gyronimo ♥ 2 Fun to play and has a good pace to it, doesn't feel like there's much downtime which is really really nice and hard to achieve. Lovely level design also helped. Enjoyed the overall aesthetics, all of it worked and complimented each other well to create one consistent mood, audio was also quite fitting. The only gripe was also previously mentioned in the comments, the icons needing some text or perhaps more contrast to them to make them more clear. Overall a jolly good little game, splendid work!
Oct 3 14:38:04 3h 04m Lord Of Dungeon ♥ 1 Quite the entry, different from usual genre choices. I really enjoyed it, though I agree with the previous comment that it's hard to get back to track once it's a bit downhill. Really liked the overall atmosphere of it, but I must admit the font does get to the eyes a bit and it's hard to read labels at times, but nothing too bad, just takes more time than needed. Good work!
Oct 3 14:43:18 5m 14s Veggie Rush ♥ 4 Took me quite a bit at first to unlock potatoes, or I did it in a wrong way, then the game got quite faster, the initial pacing felt a bit slow because of just cutting cutting and cutting, or I missed something in the tutorial. Afterwards it was jolly! Neat little low poly graphics and quite the calming tones and good sounds that accompany the game. Lovely work overall!
Oct 3 15:04:41 21m 23s Limited Judgement ♥ 1 Very neat idea and the aesthetics are very unique looking in 3D space like that, creates an very special atmosphere together with the music. On the game-play part I'd have to say that dialogue was a bit clunky, but everything seemed to work and innovative. Good work!
Oct 3 15:08:32 3m 51s Skull Hoarder's Club ♥ 1 Awesome work, very neat style and indeed is quite the polished game! I can see so many options to expand upon it too, with additional mechanics as the base is so solid! Marvelous work! ✌️
Oct 3 15:18:48 10m 16s Too Maneon Loots ♥ 2 Very innovative concept and quite the game-play loop I must say! Loved playing it, though the first time death came so fast as items piled ultra fast and I panicked. Induces quite the stress and tension playing it. The aesthetics were also really neat and fit together so well, graphics - music all of it~ Great work!
Oct 3 15:31:03 12m 15s Cats In Space ♥ 2 Very cute aesthetics, really love the art there and the music fits in quite well. One of my cats got inside a planet somehow when launched and others managed to pass it luckily, I guess he wanted to dig a bit. On the more critical note, it does get a bit tedious, perhaps 1-2 additional mechanics and some fancy bounce sound and the relaxation can continue on and on. Superb work on it though! 😺
Oct 3 15:47:27 16m 24s Drive Ice ♥ 1 Simple and good, having to move the penguin and the ice does create an interesting mechanics symbiosis. Really polished feel to what is there! Would have loved to see something more, power-ups, more fellas on the cliffs throwing different stuff into the water, perhaps a bear throwing fish etc. A good jam game though, jolly good work! 🐧
Oct 3 16:57:04 1h 09m Sprinttech ♥ 3 Such a nice game-play flow, pacing is really great and the game is smooth. I really dig the aesthetics a lot, everything fit together so well. I can easily imagine this being a full-blown small project, so I hope you'll continue it a bit~ Great job with it!
Oct 3 17:11:26 14m 22s Critter Crunch ♥ 2 Loved the simple yet really nice graphics, felt cute. Would have been interesting also if they'd have more emotions when eaten or something, like a surprised face before the poof of disappearing. Maybe a munch sound for the monster and so on too. Controlling them was fine for me, though maybe some ability that makes them scatter and one for bunching up together. That would obviously need to cost some resource, but I think it would add a lot to the game. Jolly little jam game overall!
Oct 3 17:16:39 5m 13s Morgue Mayhem ♥ 2 What a polished game! I love the graphics grim yet not too dark like a lot of games of this graphical genre tend to do. I also enjoyed the sounds, can't get enough of that huff-huff when moving around. I do have to admit that the start was quite slow for me as it took me quite a bit to understand what's going on and even with the helpful page here I still struggled with the controls at the start, but I guess it was because I don't really have a controller. Once I did get hang of it, it was a interesting experience, different from most genres used in these jams and that makes it stand out! Marvelous work with it!
Oct 3 17:19:44 3m 05s Dozer Dash ♥ 1 Had a very fun rampage with that dozer. Excellent coffee break game! 😄 ☕️
Oct 4 06:55:19 13h 35m Downsizer ♥ 2 Neat, very polished one with great overall aesthetics. The start was a bit slow to get hang of, but once you get hang of what's going on, it's quite fun and different from most genres picked around here which makes it a refreshing experience . Also the web version didn't really go full-screen so it's quite hard to read the fonts there, though manageable. Jolly good & solid work overall!
Oct 4 08:31:21 1h 36m Gacha Fever ♥ 2 Very polished and the pacing & game-play is just wonderful. I enjoyed the progression and can see it being expanded on post-ludum if there's a desire. Graphical style was very neat & clean and a joy to see - everything fit together so well! Excellent work overall!
Oct 4 09:57:48 1h 26m RIDE OF THE LIVING DEAD! ♥ 3 The atmosphere is great, although I'd like the pacing to be a bit faster at start, or maybe some just visual treats in the forest when just driving, even if repeated. Otherwise it's a a wonderful little experience, though I do agree with previous comments that it's hard to figure out items at times. Lovely graphics and fitting sound to it! Great work overall! ^^
Oct 4 11:33:42 1h 35m Fishy Business ♥ 3 Haha neat little game, the management~ I love the atmosphere all-together, the graphics, music all of it fits and creates quite the mood. Jolly little game! ^^
Oct 4 11:35:06 1m 24s Train Jam ♥ 1 "We couldn't find your page" when clicking on the itch link sadly.
Oct 4 11:59:16 24m 10s The King is Watching ♥ 5 What a wonderful little game, so far I've spent the most time in this game out of the jam games here, got quite hooked. Game-play just kept me going, died on the one wave to go on the first run and that got me going again haha. I love the graphics, the animations of it all, everything fits together well and nothing seems out of place. The UI is surprisingly neat and simple to understand, thus making it super accessible without any tutorials. The audio fit in really well too. An all-together well-done package Again, really good job on it! 👍
Oct 4 13:04:09 1h 04m Void Hunter ♥ 1 Very neat art-style and overall aesthetic, I'd would love to hear some impact sounds on hitting enemies and additional sounds overall, the music was good although a bit too loud in my opinion at start. Pacing was really good and got right into the action of it. Lovely project!
Oct 4 14:08:01 1h 03m Harvest Saturn ♥ 0 Was a bit confusing at start, but once you get it it's quite the nice puzzle concept and gets you quite into it. Very fitting with the theme as-well! I enjoyed the aesthetics a lot, pleasant to eyes and super quirky looking. Lovely work on it!
Oct 4 14:12:50 4m 49s Busy Bar ♥ 1 Fun and quirky, can imagine this could be expanded on quite a bit! Also loved the visuals & music, great atmosphere. Marvelous work!
Oct 4 14:17:37 4m 47s Skyland ♥ 5 Very lovely casual puzzle game that looks harmonious and jolly.I think some ambient sound or light happy toned music would have added a lot more to the atmosphere, but nevertheless it's really nice already! Excellent work. 👍
Oct 4 19:02:13 4h 44m Clockwork Express ♥ 3 Very neat work, polished in all ways. I love the aesthetic and the pixel art there, splendid work! Airship Tetris is quite the fun and I can see ways to expand it even further, great idea! My only gripe was that the pacing was a bit slow for me, but probably it is because I've played too much tetris or something like that hah. Marvelous work!
Oct 5 05:52:00 10h 49m Flob the Bloing ♥ 2 High level of polish in this one~ I enjoyed the overall vibe of it a lot, the graphics are superb quality pixel-art! Audio fits the overall package, it's all a little jolly adventure to go through it, although it took a bit because I'm not really good at these kinds of games, yet still went on with it - which speaks for itself. Superb entry!
Oct 5 05:56:53 4m 53s Cat Escape ♥ 1 I concur, it does feel hard, but that's probably because I am bad at platformers. I think some little sound effects would have given a lot uumpf to it, but a good start!
Oct 5 06:01:01 4m 08s Pallet Panic ♥ 1 Really neat work, very polished! It was quite challenging at times for me, took me time to get hang of it. I do have a gripe about the break "drift" etc sound, which is rather loud compared to anything else there, but perhaps its just me. I enjoyed my forklift experience a lot. Jolly good entry!
Oct 5 06:06:10 5m 09s Work Space ♥ 4 My office day simulator. It's a nice coffee-break game at office - for the total immersion. Although the office I am at doesn't have that kind of a cozy vibe sadly. Felt polished and smooth and guided me well, so I didn't have to figure stuff out too much on my own, which is good. Good work on it!
Oct 5 06:46:43 40m 33s Draki's Journey ♥ 2 Neat & polished game. It's rare to see pixel-art mixed with other styles and even more rare to see it fit together - excellent job with it! Aesthetics are rather good and the game was quite fun - humor it has~ Lovely work on it!
Oct 5 07:18:53 32m 10s No Game ♥ 0 Sadly can't play - "If you're seeing this error, it means I can't find your index.html file.. etc"
Oct 5 07:23:44 4m 51s The Horridor ♥ 2 Awesome work on it, quite the jolly fun-horror vibe to it. I really dig the atmosphere it has and the graphics. Game-play was a bit confusing at start, but got hang of it fast,it does seem like it has a lot of room to expand in a lot of directions, which is always nice! Lovely work!
Oct 5 07:26:33 2m 49s Warehouse 2319 ♥ 1 Amazon warehouse simulator~ It was a weird & fun experience, some glitches were really funky, but nothing game-breaking for me. I can imagine there could be additional features of more package types of different durability, where & how to put them into etc. Jolly little game, good work on it! :)
Oct 5 08:26:02 59m 29s Compact Domain ♥ 2 Really enjoyed the game-play here, the mix of styles and the challenge.There's also many routes to go for expanding it post-ludum which is always good to see. The overall aesthetics are pleasing to the eye and fit well. Harmonious even. Quite the ambitious one too as mentioned, but it's good to have ambition and you guys succeeded with it. Good work!
Oct 5 08:28:43 2m 41s Fridge Frenzy ♥ 2 Haha what a nice concept. I also didn't notice the nutriscore at the start, so perhaps some better instructions could be helpful there and some polish to the controls. Very neat implementation of the theme though, jolly good job at it!
Oct 6 07:46:00 23h 17m Magical Trial: Kiki's Service ♥ 1 Very neat idea and wonderful aesthetics to accompany it and everything seemed to fit together well. There are some glitches that are annoying at times, but nothing breaking. A really good jam game overall
Oct 6 07:48:07 2m 07s Prickle ♥ 2 Awesome idea and wonderfully implemented both graphically & game-play wise. Everything felt as one big unit, audio, graphics- game-play which is rare to see in jam games. Very lovely work on it!
Oct 6 08:44:50 56m 43s Introvertigo ♥ 4 Haha nice idea! The aesthetics and sound is quite fitting, some sounds really reminded me of Don't Starve's soundscape, which was an interesting connection between the two. Very neat design overall and a superb job !
Oct 6 09:20:59 36m 09s PhotoMemory-Find my mempries through old photos- ♥ 0 Cute and relaxing, a superb casual experience to have~ Good work on it! ^^
Oct 7 15:42:49 30h 21m LiGHTHOLDER ♥ 1 Very lovely game, nice pacing and everything just works. Aesthetically solid, though perhaps could have a day-time labor music, something harmonious and then a wild sea track during night. Graphically perhaps monsters could have been more sea themed in a way to fit more, but that's for after-jam. Like some evil little cthulu octopus like things, mermaids, sirens who would perhaps scream from a distance- so you would need to focus on them first. Zombies wise a nice little look would be if a ghost ship brings them there~ Upgrades were really neat, there's a lot of routes to improve on which is nice and I can imagine so many possible updates about it, using the mouse for some special abilities for some monsters who are weaker to it and so on. Overall loved it, was a really nice experience with so many options open to it.! lighthouse.png
Oct 7 15:50:42 7m 53s Pattern ♥ 4 Very neat atmosphere, harmonious. The controls are a bit confusing at times, things don't work as I want them to, but when I do get things as I wanted, it's neat to float around. Although I did manage to land twice on the beige 'planet' and still stay alive itnerestingly, probably some glitch there. Awesome idea that could really be full game with more features and polishing the systems. ✌️
Oct 7 15:54:32 3m 50s Single Circle ♥ 1 Quite the different experience from most games on the jam. It brought up memories about playing old text based games, but with added descriptive drawings to it. Very awesome style to it and it worked well with the music to create a mysterious mood to the game. On the UI/game grip, perhaps when hovering over "items" it could just show what it is as a small tooltip, instead of clicking and then "back again. Otherwise was quite the nice journey, well done! 👍
Oct 9 05:12:35 37h 18m Death Row ♥ 1 Great atmosphere indeed! Would have liked to see more of it, but perhaps a tiny post jam update~
Oct 9 06:24:01 1h 11m Give Me BBQ ♥ 1 Quite fun and solid game-play. I'd love a spin on it. Using alien ingredients, meats etc would make it stand out more perhaps, or some other twist. Neat work though!
Oct 9 08:01:50 1h 37m PawLocked ♥ 1 Fitting to the theme & nice vibes. Glad to see fellow raccoon enthusiasts. Well done!
Oct 9 08:05:55 4m 05s The Great Ghostly Candy Heist ♥ 1 Neat work. I liked the art style. Somehow cute & creepy at the same time and the music fit in really well too, although it does start a bit too loud with some parts of it. I'd love if the enemy projectiles had some red outline or perhaps more contrast between the players & enemy projectiles to make it more clear - the only gripe I had graphically. Overall good work!
Oct 9 08:08:22 2m 27s PEIDEI 4 ♥ 1 Nice fast paced game, although I do have to agree it was hard, but mostly due the collisions being funky, so I got stuck at places at time. Some more momentum, friction and collisions fix would make it even nicer! Graphics were fitting and the music accompanied it well~ Neat work overall!
Oct 9 08:12:35 4m 13s Rabbit Hole Run: Don't Lose Your Head! ♥ 1 Nice level design indeed! The sound idea was interesting, though it felt a bit lagged behind the jump for example, thus I didn't feel the impact in the game with the action+ sound combined, or perhaps some little wind gfx under the jump would have fixed that, not exactly sure, but that was one of the gripes that came up to my mind after playing it. I enjoyed the theme and graphics and the game-play was fun enough, though for a longer rune would require some stand-out feature. Perhaps collecting cards and using them to solve platforming puzzles. Great work overall!
Oct 12 04:59:34 68h 46m RedHood ♥ 3 I also loved the lighting and the graphics, although I think having some small jump animation, perhaps the edges of the clothes going up etc would helped giving it a lot more impact when jumping. The game-play was fine although a little glitchy at times. It felt like I'd have to move a bit too slow and discover things beforehand a lot, because the light mostly showed me the fabulous top part and not the spikes. The atmosphere was really nice! Neat work overall!
Oct 12 10:03:37 5h 04m Last God's Bidding ♥ 1 Very neat game. I love the overall polish of it, feels like an finished product on that side. Graphics are wonderful and the music is very fitting. Game-play was solid, though as always with jam games, you get the feel that there could be so much more and this case it's also that, so much room for merry ideas! Awesome project though! ^^
Oct 14 11:35:38 49h 32m Bubble Space ♥ 1 Nice little coffee break game. Game-play was fluid and nice. The sounds were a bit weird though, not very pleasant to hear those sounds constantly and volume levels were off comparing the sounds, but that's easily fixed. Some nice ambient space music would help a lot to achieve a even better atmosphere too, some synth to accompany the geometry graphics style perhaps. Lovely work overall!
Oct 14 11:37:34 1m 56s Galactic Taxi Limited ♥ 0 Neat implementation for the theme, I loved the creative art direction of this, although as mentioned before, it is quite confusing at start. Can see many ways it could be improved and progressions to be added, could be a nice post-ludum project too. Awesome work!
Oct 16 06:32:59 42h 55m Red Zone ♥ 1 Good job, nice fruity one~ Very solid indeed for the first gamejam~
Oct 16 09:18:18 2h 45m Burned Out, Shut In ♥ 1 Neat art and has a really cozy vibe to it. Good work! ^^