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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | davidwparker's comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| Apr 24 11:48:00 | Imuno | I really liked it. I wish you had more time to add additional levels. Other things that would be nice, which you may or may not have thought of: <br/>-speed up/down/pause <br/>-restart button (perhaps from pause?) <br/> <br/>Great art though, and definitely worth pursuing in the future. | |
| Apr 24 12:06:00 | 18m 00s | Lighthouse | Overall, I really like it. I think the lighthouse thing was great. Like quixotic said below, I had no idea what to do at the level once I started. The buttons didn't really say 'click me' and I had to tab back to this page to figure it out. I'd suggest adding some instructions for that. <br/>Another bug I found was when climbing the island, it didn't follow my character (the first time, I didn't go into any puzzle rooms) and then I couldn't see my character anymore (at all) as he had climbed too high. <br/> <br/>Good job though- the music was great. |
| Apr 24 12:10:00 | 4m 00s | Just My Immagination | You should add OSX- I think all you would need to do is modify your MAKEFILE. :) |
| Apr 24 12:22:00 | 12m 00s | The Tiny World of Pixels | Cute game. Agreed with the other commenters about the pixelverse idea being cool. I liked the intro. The whack-a-mole definitely could have used a time limit, or something. |
| Apr 24 12:29:00 | 7m 00s | Tiny World Big War | Interesting... I'd like to see more. Multiplayer, why units level up, how to 'win' (it would be nice to have a tug-of-war mechanic?), etc. <br/> <br/>P.S. Where's the source? (Luke) |
| Apr 24 12:34:00 | 5m 00s | Mini-Worlds and Monocles | Great game. I really liked the art (background, especially) and the monocle. Pretty fun stuff. |
| Apr 24 12:39:00 | 5m 00s | Lost Oxide | Great overall! <br/>The wall jumps were smooth. <br/>Graphics remind me a bit of Limbo... but were very well done (good choice of colors). <br/>The world felt pretty big to me :) <br/>Didn't have any sound? |
| Apr 25 15:18:00 | 26h 39m | My Tiny Town | Nice sim game. I wish you had time to do what you wanted to do... it's nice to see more JavaScript apps. I like the music- very soothing. |
| Apr 25 15:20:00 | 2m 00s | Small Slime Adventure | Indeed, it is pretty hard... only on the second level and the big guys move way too fast. But fun, nontheless. |
| Apr 25 15:26:00 | 6m 00s | Tiny Fishy World | Nice game. Like otaviogood said, very similar to Osmosis, but still fun to do. I thought you did well with the movement speeds/etc, which made it fun. |
| Apr 25 15:32:00 | 6m 00s | Tiny Kitty Harem Hero | Nice game. It's good to see other HTML5 games. <br/> <br/>I'd agree with @cosmologicon- it's hard especially at the beginning when I'm automatically firing a ton of missile s at my own cats. |
| Apr 25 15:40:00 | 8m 00s | Tiny Defender | Nice overall. <br/>A few thoughts- <br/>- I liked the graphics. Retro, but cool. <br/>- It would have been nice for the bosses to do something (if they did, then I didn't see it). <br/>- levels could have been shorter, but with more varie bad guys, or ones that took more than a shot to kill. <br/> <br/>Great game though, the particle explosions were great too. |
| Apr 25 20:05:00 | 4h 25m | Last World | Neat game. I didn't really see the point (long-term objective)- it would be nice to add points or a timer or something. I liked the graphics and the basic mechanics. The moons were hard to get (everything moves pretty quick) and didn't really do anything once you had them. |
| Apr 25 20:09:00 | 4m 00s | Solar Sailor | Like others said, extremely sensitive controls. But it was fun once I got the hang of it. It would be nice to add mario-kart style attacks or something. <br/> <br/>Good job using WebGL :) |
| Apr 25 20:13:00 | 4m 00s | CastleMania | Interesting game. Curious how you made/had time for both WebGL and Java? <br/> <br/>Cool use of pseudo-3d... better than just straight on regular shooters. |
| Apr 26 15:32:00 | 19h 19m | The Dream Sequencer | Sorry, I'm not able to play as I don't have Windows. |
| Apr 26 15:34:00 | 2m 00s | Casal Navity | Sorry, I'm not able to play as I don't have Windows. |
| Apr 26 15:34:00 | 0s | shiprage | It ran smoothly for me, and I like the idea. It was pretty interesting and different from most that I've played before. Plane movement was good too. |
| Apr 26 15:35:00 | 1m 00s | Petri | Sorry, I'm not able to play as I don't have Windows. |
| Apr 26 15:35:00 | 0s | Primordial Smackdown: Bacteria with Badditude | Sorry, I'm not able to play as I don't have Windows. |
| Apr 26 15:35:00 | 0s | Leaving the Tiny Earth | Sorry, I'm not able to play as I don't have Windows. |
| Apr 26 15:39:00 | 4m 00s | BeetleVenture | I like the insect theme (for tiny world). Game was pretty laggard... it could have been faster paced. Good overall though. |
| Apr 26 15:39:00 | 0s | Itty Bitty Boxy Thingy | Sorry, I'm not able to play as I don't have Windows. |
| Apr 28 15:08:00 | 47h 29m | Worlds in Cards | Really cool game. I played it OSX. It seemed quite buggy though, as it didn't let me swipe tiles a majority of the time. The music is pretty repetitive, but still not bad. Sound effects were good. Liked the graphics and sprites. Well done. |
| Apr 28 15:09:00 | 1m 00s | BamSquitch | I'm sorry, I can't play your game because I don't have Windows (OSX). |
| Apr 28 15:09:00 | 0s | No Air Out Here | I'm sorry, I can't play your game because I don't have Windows (OSX). |
| Apr 28 15:09:00 | 0s | esCape | I'm sorry, I can't play your game because I don't have Windows (OSX). |
| Apr 28 15:14:00 | 5m 00s | Tiny Apocalypse | I liked the idea behind this game, but I had no idea what to do. Also, on OSX via Chrome, the application was super buggy/glitchy. Great use of the theme. |
| Apr 28 15:24:00 | 10m 00s | Alien Archaeologist | Thanks for playing my game, jplur... you made me realize I linked to an older version of my source code, and not the code people were actually playing... so you may want to check again (I updated the link to be correct). <br/> <br/>As for your game, that's really cool. I love the idea and the artwork. The sound effects went well with what was going on and the music was nice and mellow. There were a few times I got stuck in the planet, and I'm not sure how the plant grew, but it was okay. The slime guys that multilied when shot were cool too. |
| Apr 28 15:25:00 | 1m 00s | Space Bees Attack! | I'm sorry, I can't play your game because I don't have Windows (OSX). |
| Apr 28 15:25:00 | 0s | A Pale Blue Dot | I'm sorry, I can't play your game because I don't have Windows (OSX). |
| Apr 28 15:26:00 | 1m 00s | The Underground Court | Didn't run for me (OSX, Chrome). |
| Apr 28 15:26:00 | 0s | Battle of the Worlds | I'm sorry, I can't play your game because I don't have Windows (OSX). |
| Apr 28 15:26:00 | 0s | QBik | I'm sorry, I can't play your game because I don't have Windows (OSX). |
| Apr 28 15:28:00 | 2m 00s | Dangerous Baby World | I'm sorry, I can't play your game because I don't have Windows (OSX). |
| Apr 28 15:34:00 | 6m 00s | Cat Planet | Fun game. Like others, it had unbearable framerate at times... not sure why. Then it would be okay just a few seconds later. (OSX) <br/> <br/>The mechanics were good, the music and sound effects were great. Good job. |
| Apr 28 15:35:00 | 1m 00s | Crater | I'm sorry, I can't play your game because I don't have Windows (OSX). |
| Apr 28 15:42:00 | 7m 00s | Epic Scale Warfare | I couldn't really get into the game... wasn't sure what was going on. <br/> <br/>P.S. I made a browser game... come check it out. |
| Apr 28 15:42:00 | 0s | 3rd Planet | I'm sorry, I can't play your game because I don't have Windows (OSX). |
| May 7 16:28:00 | 216h 46m | Atomsmash | I wasn't able to get it to run on my machine, but I like you went unique with C64. |
| May 7 16:33:00 | 5m 00s | Cows and Stuff | Fun game! Very funny. I like the sound effects. Instructions at the beginning might have helped. <br/> <br/>Game become unresponsive a few times. Generally when I spammed my laser gun. Chrome on OSX. |
| May 7 16:39:00 | 6m 00s | Crashed on Minutiae Prime | Neat game. It would have been cool to see it a bit longer. I didn't find the radar the first time, not realizing it was right there by the ship... it would have been nice to have to begin with, as I almost quit after wandering aimlessly the first time. |
| May 7 16:43:00 | 4m 00s | Nasty Bubbly - 72 Hour JAM Entry | Very funny. I loved the pop-up bubbles of the person trying to get the fish! Well done. |
| May 7 16:47:00 | 4m 00s | The Lair | I agree with Matt. Good game, but the jumping through me off a bit with it's space-style physics. |
| May 7 16:47:00 | 0s | A Drop of Water | Sorry, I couldn't play this as I don't have Windows. |
| May 7 18:04:00 | 1h 17m | Atomic Bug | Ah, didn't see that H20 was the only implemented weapon. It would be nice to state that in the instructions... also, it was hard to constantly be making things and then dropping them too (on a touchpad/no mouse). Interesting idea though. |
| May 7 18:05:00 | 1m 00s | Honey Heist | I'm sorry, I can't play your game as I don't have Windows. |
| May 7 18:06:00 | 1m 00s | Establichment | I'd like to test this out, but was unable to get it going on OSX. |
| May 7 18:06:00 | 0s | Galactic Taxi | Sorry, I have OSX and wasn't able to get it running. |
| May 7 18:07:00 | 1m 00s | ResourceCollector | Sorry, I can't play as I don't have Windows. |
| May 7 18:07:00 | 0s | Ant Onslaught | Sorry, I can't play as I don't have Windows. |
| May 7 18:07:00 | 0s | First Import | Sorry, I don't have Windows so I can't play. |
| May 7 18:09:00 | 2m 00s | Asteroid Belt | Sorry, I don't have Windows so I can't play. |
| May 7 18:09:00 | 0s | The Littlest War | Sorry, I don't have Windows so I can't play. |
| May 7 18:10:00 | 1m 00s | TinyGiant | Sorry, I don't have Windows so I can't play. |
| May 7 18:12:00 | 2m 00s | BigMe | Neat idea. I liked the giant stick figure. |
| May 7 18:13:00 | 1m 00s | Unterholz | Sorry, I don't have Windows. |
| May 7 18:20:00 | 7m 00s | Alien Punch! | Funny game, well executed. <br/> <br/>Ultimately, I just moved my hero to the middle of earth and held down the space bar... which made it pretty mindless though. It would be nice to have it be a little harder/different gameplay then that. <br/> <br/>Great humor, sound effects, plot, and love the use of html5. |
| May 7 18:21:00 | 1m 00s | World Pong | Sorry, I don't have Windows. |
| May 8 12:50:00 | 18h 29m | Big Bad Dom Finds a Little Happiness | Sorry, I can't play this is as I don't have Windows. |
| May 8 12:51:00 | 1m 00s | Urth Defense | Sorry, I can't play this as I don't have Windows. |
| May 8 12:51:00 | 0s | [Darkness Creeping] | Sorry, I can't play this as I don't have Windows. |
| May 8 12:52:00 | 1m 00s | Watercolour | Sorry, I can't play this as I don't have Windows. |
| May 8 12:56:00 | 4m 00s | The tiny life | I agree with the other comments that the controls are really awkward, but I really like how unique the game is. Cool idea. |
| May 8 13:25:00 | 29m 00s | The Lost Isles | Sorry, I can't play this as I don't have Windows. |
| May 8 13:25:00 | 0s | Stupid Ants | Game was really hard, but I really liked the idea... reminded me of classic Sim Ant. Well done. I like the border smiling boxes too. |
| May 8 13:26:00 | 1m 00s | Secrets of The Universe | Sorry, I can't play this as I don't have Windows|Linux. |
| May 8 13:26:00 | 0s | Tiny World | Sorry, I can't play this as I don't have Windows. |
| May 8 13:27:00 | 1m 00s | Sfrumz! | Sorry, I can't play this as I don't have Windows. |
| May 8 13:27:00 | 0s | Tiny's World | Sorry, I can't play this as I don't have Windows|Linux and couldn't get it to run on my mac. |
| May 8 13:31:00 | 4m 00s | Supercell | Interesting game... wish I had a clue what was going on. Music was repetitive, but not too bad. Art/style was good. |
| May 8 13:32:00 | 1m 00s | Microbial | Sorry, I can't play this as I don't have Windows. |
| May 8 13:32:00 | 0s | The First Frontier | Didn't work on OSX. |
| May 8 13:34:00 | 2m 00s | SimHamlet | Sorry, I can't play this as I don't have Windows. |
| May 8 13:38:00 | 4m 00s | Particulate Planet | I liked the beginning, with the somewhat chaotic style/storyline... but then the gameplay didn't match that whatsoever. The shooting was a bit off too, but not too shabby. |
| May 8 13:43:00 | 5m 00s | 25 Rooms | I also experienced the flickering (Chrome on Mac)... <br/> <br/>Interesting game though... took a little bit and perhaps can be explained a little more. |
| May 8 13:47:00 | 4m 00s | Backyard Pirates | Controls are pretty bad on WebGL on a Chrome on Mac. (slow to respond). <br/>Other than that, I really like the game... cool idea, looks really nice. <br/>I could see this being expanded to include expansions+upgrades as well as multiplayer. Well done. |
| May 8 13:52:00 | 5m 00s | Disregard All Humans | I love the monster. Very cool. <br/>The gameplay got pretty repetitive. <br/>Great music/sound effects. <br/>The game crashed Chrome OSX on WebGL version... not sure why though. |
| May 8 14:02:00 | 10m 00s | Laser Coin Planets | Nice game. Physics were pretty cool, and it worked well. Hard to shoot the bad guys with a trackpad and no mouse. Also wished you offered arrow keys and not just wasd. Good sound effects too. |
| May 8 14:07:00 | 5m 00s | LittlePlanetBigRocket | Great idea... still needs a little work, but well done. <br/>Directions are a little hard to keep correct. <br/>Hitting a single bad guy and resetting the level sucks (makes it really hard). <br/>Well done though, love the use of WebGL. |
| May 8 14:19:00 | 12m 00s | Magma Defense | This was awesome. Well done... sound/music would be a nice touch. <br/>It was definitely hard, but once I understood that you wait until the bonuses are fully up, it got a bit easier... and I achieved victory :) |
| May 8 14:21:00 | 2m 00s | Massive Attract | Nice little game. Lost easily and won easily... |
| May 10 02:39:00 | 36h 18m | AquaWars | Sorry, can't play as I don't have Windows. |
| May 10 02:39:00 | 0s | Tiny Cubic Maze World | Interesting game. It would be nice to have a mechanic to make it either harder/different, such as a timer or something like that. Sounds would be nice too. It's also a bit short. <br/> <br/>Where is the source (or do jams not need source?) |
| May 10 02:40:00 | 1m 00s | Tiny World '82 | Cool that you used MAME, but I don't have it set up to test it out. |
| May 10 02:44:00 | 4m 00s | Michael is Myopic | Cool idea... I didn't get far as I got too big and got stuck and couldn't restart. Nice game though. |
| May 10 02:46:00 | 2m 00s | Tiny World | Interesting game. I like the concept a lot... especially the level editor. It would be nice for you to continue to work on this... there's a lot of potential here. As for what you did submit, it was a little short :) |
| May 10 14:42:00 | 11h 56m | The Great Adventure of Mr.Galaxis | Sorry, I can't play as I don't have Windows. |
| May 10 14:45:00 | 3m 00s | Invasion of the Planet Snatchers! | Sorry, I can't play as I don't have Windows|Linux. |
| May 10 14:45:00 | 0s | A Minecraftesque Adventure a` la Rogue | Really interesting start. I like that ASCII style. You should work on it more and see what happens. |
| May 10 14:48:00 | 3m 00s | LHC | I had the same issue as Julian- Chrome on OSX is glitchy. <br/> <br/>Other than that, I didn't have a clue what was going on, and whether what I was doing was actually doing anything at all. I did score 80+ points though... not sure how. |
| May 10 14:54:00 | 6m 00s | In Delusion | Good job on your first Ludum Dare! <br/>Like the others, I don't know what just happened... <br/>The plotline was great, and I really enjoyed the notes at the end. <br/>Music was excellent. <br/>Could definitely expand this out into a full-fleshed schizophrenic guy-based, game. |
| May 10 14:55:00 | 1m 00s | Planetoids | Sorry, I can't play as I don't have Windows (and apparently it doesn't download anyway) |
| May 10 14:55:00 | 0s | Light the Lighthouse | Looks rad... but I can't play as I don't have Windows. |
| May 10 15:01:00 | 6m 00s | The Tiny World | Interesting little game. I would have used bootstrap to make it 'look pretty', but it's cool that you did a text-based one regardless. <br/> <br/>I didn't make it very far... just picked up the pen and paper, tried combining and couldn't. I also talked to the old man, but couldn't reply with gender. <br/>It would be nice to know what are the current actionable things to do. |
| May 10 19:40:00 | 4h 39m | Bottled Worlds | Looks really cute, but I can't play as I don't have Windows. |
| May 10 19:41:00 | 1m 00s | Dreamworld | Sorry, I don't have Windows. |
| May 10 19:45:00 | 4m 00s | Penguin | Neat game, but hard to play. I couldn't kill any of the airships (can you kill them) and it was hard to kill the bombs too. Also, a little hard to play with a trackball/no mouse. |
| May 10 19:45:00 | 0s | Alice and Bob's tiny cubic planet | Couldn't get it working on OSX. |
| May 10 19:46:00 | 1m 00s | Cells | I don't have Windows|Linux, sorry. |
| May 10 19:47:00 | 1m 00s | Tiny Robot Island | I would try this, but I don't have Windows. |
| May 10 19:47:00 | 0s | Nom Nom Planet | Looks fun, but I don't have Windows. |
| May 10 19:48:00 | 1m 00s | Tiny World - A Giants Tale | Sorry, I don't have Windows. |
| May 10 19:51:00 | 3m 00s | Breakdown on a Tiny World | Neat idea... it would be nice to be a bit deeper (weapon upgrades, etc, etc). Good job though. |
| May 10 19:52:00 | 1m 00s | The World in a Bottle | Sorry, I don't have Windows. |
| May 10 19:52:00 | 0s | Fire Around | Sorry, I don't have Windows. |
| May 10 19:52:00 | 0s | Anthill | Sorry, I don't have Windows. |
| May 10 20:00:00 | 8m 00s | WaterdropWorld | Interesting game. I found it ran extremely well in Chrome on OSX. <br/> <br/>Sound would be nice... and I had no idea if I won or not (or whatever... I just got enough to build everything). <br/> <br/>Where's the source code? |
| May 11 18:12:00 | 22h 12m | tiny world war | Sorry, I don't have Windows. |
| May 11 18:12:00 | 0s | Spaceways | Sorry, I don't have Windows. |
| May 11 18:13:00 | 1m 00s | Mayor vs Aliens | Looks cool, but I don't have Windows. |
| May 11 18:15:00 | 2m 00s | Frustrating Tiny Rooms | I like this... seems like something I've played before but I really like good puzzle games. |
| May 12 18:25:00 | 24h 10m | Memento XII | Loved your last Ludum Dare entry... loved this one too. Your style is great! Keep up the great work. Sad game, though. |