DARKLINE by xk_the_name 2023-05-03T21:10:55Z
Really enjoyed it!Reminded me a lot of Undertale!Love the graphics and the whole style of it and I definitely could see it getting expanded!
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| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Hu | Mo | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2023 | 53 | Delivery | Cow Delivery | jam | 539 | 3.61 | 3.50 | 3.14 | 3.81 | 3.71 | 3.92 | 3.34 |
Really enjoyed it!Reminded me a lot of Undertale!Love the graphics and the whole style of it and I definitely could see it getting expanded!
Very neat controls and overall ultra nice movement of the car!Really enjoyed it even got a few leaderboard spots. Don't have any criticism it was a fun solid experience!
Enjoyed it!It was a neat endless runner!Would have liked it to be a little faster but other than that great job!
Really like the idea!I am a big fan of typing games and this was a unique take!Tho stage 4 is a bit too hard and I couldnt really get if there are 2 objects of the same size next to each other if I should type them both or only one
It was interesting!Tho I couldn't figure out if me typing had any impact sometimes it read the stuff sometimes it didnt respond so I was a bit confused but I guess thats because of the unpredictability of the AI but interesting idea good job!
Very impressive!Love the visuals and the sound design and the voice acting!It has a really cool space horror mood. And I like the small details like the flipping chairs in the navigation room and the quality of life feature thats being able to hold instead of tap the buttons. Also like that there is a 2 choice ending!Overall very very good my only problem was with the resolution which wasnt a big problem because the text I couldnt see was voice acted and maby the constant tapping of the flashlight isnt needed but the hold to tap feature made it not matter.Good job to the whole team!!
Unfortunately couldn't figure out how to put it on the simulator
Overall very fun and nice idea!The only thing that bugged me a bit is that the foreground and background were almost the same so sometimes I bumped into things which I thought were in the background. Just making the background darker could definitely improve clarity!
Honestly amazing and original!!Loved everything and its amazing its only done in 3 days!The only problem I had is that you can totally ignore the "press space to fix swerve" mechanic by just holding right and by spamming space I once skipped dialogue which was a bummer because the dialogue was very fun. Other than that cant say anything except that I had a great time and it was really fun! Love how hectic it was and how you had to press a million things! Ps. Daggers McBlack is the coolest edgy name for this dude.
Love the visuals!!Also the truck moves very nice tho those little rocks always screw me over ;o And the TV just never wants to stay there hahah but overall except the ultra difficulty it was very nice!
Very nice visually and I love the music and the movement feels very nice!!It was a bit hard to play especially when food was in the corners and you couldnt get it out also if you accidently push ingredients to other stuff it turns into a thing you dont want and you can accidently push stuff into a delivery and it can dissapear.Also it might be better if you cant push the oven because I push the oven and the food and it still gets overcooked.
Very impressive for a jam game!Really like the aestetics it reminded me of bajoo kazooie!Only thing is that it might have been better to make the tutorial required for the first level or maby more prominent because I didnt get it was a tutorial and thought I had 2 choices for level or something like that and picked the closer blue one and was a bit lost at the start but other than that very cool game good job to everyone!
Really liked it!Didnt even notice when I beat the 5 days!Very nice idea with the sorting and delivering and I really like the art(especially the houses) and the music!Very well done!
Interesting game!It's a bit like a puzzle because you need to go the most optimal way or you run out of resources. Also its a bit weird when you dont have ammo and aer just waiting to die maby without ammo a game over screen can appear or an option to punch with fists or something. But overall nice game!
This was honestly ultra fun!It feels like a complete game I would find on Nitrome. The level design was amazing and it kept me playing even tho it was a bit difficult(Which may be because I am a total idiot and discovered only on the last level you could double jump lol)But it was a very nice difficulty and I endured so I could hear the glorious rap which was a banger hahah!I also really like the art and music it had a nice cozy mood!Overall one of my favorites from the jam and its ultra impressive that you did it alone!
Looks great and has a nice mood!I could see this being expanded into a whole game with some random events happening which would be fun. Biggest problem is that I got tangled up and couldnt redo my roads one time but I just restarted and it fixed the problem. Overall very nice!
Looks nice and moody!The idea was probably too big for the jam but I am interested to see it if you will develop it further!
It was fun!The platforming challanges were a bit hard sometimes but nice!The only problem I had is that if you are too close to a wall you get stuck a bit while jumping and its a bit hard. Other than that solid entry good job!
Loved the visuals and the music!It was very interesting and I could see it getting expanded into a whole game like those party games where you need to figure out who the spy is!Very good job!
Enjoyed it!Love the perspective and the upgrades!Tho I got stuck a bit when running on the grass part and after the second upgarade a lof ot wolves spawned but I guess if I got the combat upgrades it would have made it easier!Solid entry liked it!
Looks very fun tho unfortunately like someone else said it doesnt register mouse clicks so I couldn't use the shop. Also movement of the boat is very slow. I saw there are upgrades for the speed but again shop didnt work. Visuals and music were very nice tho!Reminded me a bit of Sid Meier's pirates
Thank you all! And yes GLORY TO THE COW EATER
@joao-marcello Thanks a lot!And yea the code for the pulling is a bit janky so a lot of the stuff gets stuck couldnt do it better for the jam and you are right about the color not sure why I left it brown gray would have worked good
@hoshinu @ironcutter Thanks!Also yea I agree with both of you that the camera could have been done better because if you are not careful the going down part with the lasers is a bit frustrating. And @hoshinu I agree the background could have been different so its not that straining I just didnt have time and just made a repeat tile.
@ryusui Thanks a lot for playing and the feedback!And yea an explosion animation for the player would have been nice but I totally run out of time by the end because of bugs and yea the controls could have been better and mostly as the other people have said the camera so it would be easier to see where you are going. And also yea I didn't think that much during the laser hall all can agree its the most unfun part haha(not sure what made me make people go through it a minimum of 4 times)
@barce Thanks!!Also yea sometimes you may get stuck because the collisions are a bit wonky thats why with R you can restart if you get stuck somewhere.
@astramorae Thanks a lot!Also yea I was thinking of adding a charging animation but I totally ran out of time.
@denka Yea getting stuck is a bit of a problem but most of the time its not that game breaking and you can always press R to restart if you got stuck permanently.
@simex Hey thanks a lot haha! I am really glad you enjoyed it that much even tho it was really a bit frustrating!!
Very good job!!It looks very polished and the graphics are really nice!Would love to see it expanded into a whole beat em up!
Really like the visuals and presentation!Reminded me of Darkest Dungeon. Tho I was a bit lost as to where I should go as the map was a bit confusing and when its night you dont know where you are going. Also when you have too many units its a bit hard to move because they push eachother. Overall very nice and didnt expect to get called Maidenless!
Was a fun short game!
Like others said a bit hard to get at first but after that it was a nice puzzle game!The only negative is the last level where you have to wait for the things to float through the water that was a bit slow. Other than that nice graphics and idea!
Was interesting!It had very nice visuals!Tho the lack of ambient sounds/music made it feel a bit awkward. Also noticed you can drag your mouse down so much that you look upside down in the opposite direction. Also I couldn't really pick up the keys but when I was upside down I could.
It was very charming!Love the art(especially the mini cutscenes) and the music!The movement felt a bit slow(played the LD version) but I kind of like it tho it is probably improved in the v-0.0.6 which I will check out now!
Nice idea tho the kicking is a bit hard to pull off. There is a sweet spot in which he kicks the best but its a bit hard to pull off but solid idea!
Was nice!Seemed a bit hard at first and it was a bit confusing that the amount of force is saved and doesnt reset when you do another shot.
Was very enjoyable!Liked the music a lot!And the art was also very nice and I liked the sequence where you drop the delivery! It was also very fun to move around the tracks and especially hit the breaks(which I did a lot of times because of the effect and sound lol) The only problem I had is that sometimes it wasnt clear if you will be hit when there is an obstacle and you move tracks but other than that I liked it a lot!
I really like the visuals and especially the text effects with the bounce, jitter and so on!It was very charming and it looked good! My only problem was that you dont turn immediately to the other side which made it feel a bit unresponsive and the bounce and cauldron tactic was a bit hard to pull of tho I can understand that because it gives a lot of extra points!
Very impressive work!I really like the visuals and the mood. My problems are that its a bit buggy(which is fine in a game jam) but most of the machines didnt really work so the game was just going down endlessly and collecting crystals. The turrest didnt shoot and when I went up I couldnt deposit the gems so I didnt reall have much to do tho the game has a very cool atmosphere!
Looked awesome! I love the painterly look and the music fit it very well!I just feel like the ghost couldnt really hit me when I went up and down to get speed but it was satisfying to fly around
I was a bit confused at the start but it is a nice matching game!And as someone else said the brown pieces that match with a lot of stuff are a bit hard to see
The controls are a bit unconventional so I got quite confused and really am not sure what to do. A short visual tutorial will help definitely
Not sure if I did anything wrong but I could barely see/find drones and I just shot one and everything was empty. Other than that I like the moody music and atmosphere I just wasnt sure what to do
Very nice visuals!I am not really a fan of visual novels but props for addingg options and so much stuff for so little time!