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202353DeliveryDeliver The Torchjam4823.673.403.433.514.262.794.14

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Comments by Follett12

LD53 — Delivery

Delivery Rock by geck0 2023-05-06T01:42:08Z

Really different idea, obviously science has progressed far enough to know rocks are the true best form of transportation. I felt like maybe everything was just a tad too slow and speeding it up just a ton would make it more engaging. Regardless I love the art, and the music fits well. Maybe turn up the volume on the hit effects so you can hear it just a little bit better.

Really impressed with the art style though, incredibly impressive to do all that in such a small time frame.

Airborne Adventures by firellon 2023-05-05T23:06:13Z

Really beautiful game. Love the sounds and the music. I wish it was just a tad bit faster but besides that I absolutely adore it. I did get stuck on roofs a few times, but overall I think this is a really solid entry. Great work.

Theater of the Dead by bmacintosh 2023-05-02T06:41:38Z

This was super fun, the music, the voiceover and the interactions with the kitchen where amazing. Although it did take me a minute to figure out hotdog w/ popcorn wasn't 2 separate things, not that it mattered I kept burning my hot dogs anyway while trying to deliver a soda. Its odd that at times it almost struck me as a puzzle game, like how do I make that...really innovative.

I did experience an issue where the music didn't loop which was minor but I can definitely see this being expanded on and being super fun in multi player, like a first person overcooked. Leaving the popsicle fridge opening and having to unpack more, churning butter for more ingredients. My only major suggestion would be some more juice and feedback when delivering orders, like the ghost jumping for joy or saying boo.

Absolutely loved it guys, great work!

Maily Melo by Blix 2023-05-05T23:15:53Z

Wow what a cute game, the art is just amazing, and mixed with the music and sound its amazing. Really don't have any criticism this is just awesome. The way the characters move and emote along with their cuteness is unmatched. Really well done guys. I enjoyed this a lot.

God's plan by Raoph 2023-05-02T02:26:46Z

I really like the idea but would have loved to have a lose condition added. The music, and sound effects are very fitting and the picking and dropping of the buildings was super responsive.

I did have 1 small glitch when dropping a tree on another tree and it freaked out but besides that was great. Oddly enough I also loved the main menu, seems super fitting.

Good work/

Rush Delivery by Dongle 2023-05-05T08:29:48Z

Ooh I liked this one, and haven't played one yet that is similar. The screen may be just a tad too zoomed in for my liking but the music and graphics are so good I didn't mind. It gets kinda hectic which actually stressed me out, but that may be more due to taking a while to figure it out.

The art is really, really impressive though. Great work with that. I could see this being really fun on a touch screen having to drag around to see everything. A lot of potential here.

A Letter To My Friend D by Foursay 2023-05-02T08:50:40Z

Wow what a great little game and story. Amazing work guys. I have no real feedback, I think you absolutely nailed it.

Juggle Mail by kuviman 2023-05-02T06:55:19Z

When is juggle mail aim trainer coming out? Insane idea, executed perfectly. The graphics the sounds and gameplay all hang together perfectly. Great job! Granted I sucked at it but its amazing.

Fission Fight by Jahwffrey 2023-05-13T00:16:52Z

This hit me right in the funny bone, absolutely awesome. I hate that I cant change direction mid attack but besides that it was an absolute blast! Really really impressive how quickly this was made and the sounds are awesome.

Dust Courier by SmDaniels 2023-05-05T11:49:45Z

Love the visuals! The sounds and graphics blend well for atmosphere, although maybe the mixing on the effects sounds is a bit too loud. I played a few games, and got different events each time so nice work making a few, all of them were interesting too.

I would probably work on the route planning a bit more, and possibly add a full reset of the paths option. A few times I screwed up and just couldn't get the undo path feature to work correctly so had to restart the game.

Its a shame the game is so short as its definitely something I could play more of.

Food Dash Delivery by TheGamer 2023-05-13T00:22:41Z

Love the art and the sound, took me a moment to figure it out but its great! The sounds are all perfect. Love how it hides the buildings nicely too when you go behind them. Its pretty simple but it gets the job done. Good work.

Become a Courier by alisher_fazilov 2023-05-05T08:15:00Z

Game looks great but really needs a tutorial in the game to explain things a bit better. Took me a while to figure it all out. I do have to say I really like the graphics, especially considering this is a game jam. I like the tunes too. Frustratingly I did get spawn killed over and over by some yellow bloke but I did a restart and tried again it just got the hell out of there haha.

Great work.

African Bicycle Dealer by OldDog 2023-05-05T08:08:06Z

Really really like the sound work and its a nice little idle game which I can imagine could be expanded to have a ton of great complex mechanics. I did notice that a town got obscured by the UI but it didn't affect my enjoyment of a really fun game! Great work.

CUBE RUNNER by itsBoats 2023-05-13T02:34:36Z

Absolutely awesome game. Had to give it a go after watching it on stream. Loved it, great work. Art and music are amazing and the controls made learning it even more fun.

Mouse Mail by Mateu 2023-05-05T10:55:15Z

This was absolutely incredible. Art was amazing, and the music and sounds really topped it off for me. I love the little pitter patter of the feet when running. Its actually a really amazing concept too, a mouse doing letter delivery for cats.

I would have been great to see more obstacles in the way when running between the different cats, maybe a river to jump as I would have love to have seen more of the amazing art, but understandably this is a game jam so you need to draw the line somewhere. Amazing work guys.

Hell'o-Cargo by agudar 2023-05-03T10:55:45Z

Amazing work guys. Cannot believe that's an LD game its so polished and high quality.

Cow Delivery by RenardGames 2023-05-13T00:32:40Z

This was so frustrating but I couldn't stop trying just to see big green get another chomp.

Ludum Dare 53 by Beebster Games 2023-05-02T06:50:11Z

Played it, really liked the vibe and the way the art style hung together with the sound, so I think you made some good choices there with what you used. I did explore the whole map but never found the grave, and at one point the sorcerer did pull me out of the map zone :)

I will keep this pumpkin with me until later then.

Deliver The Torch by Follett12 2023-05-03T10:39:29Z

@foursay ah mate sorry about that. It should only end when all the troops under your command die. Must be bug that snuck through. Admittedly I only added the ability to lose at the very end so its not fully tested, or polished.

C.R.A.B. signal by unkilledshadow135_Alex 2023-05-02T08:13:39Z

Love the graphics, kinda got a whole comic book vibe. Really good work. The UI was a little confusing at first but I got the hang of it by the end, although it took me 2 or 3 goes.

Also the music fits perfectly!

Mission: Intercept by Stephen Kyranakis 2023-05-02T03:34:07Z

I liked this, something about the graphics style was really nice and clean. Glad there wasnt a fail state though haha, that 4th level took me a few goes. I am actually impressed how clear the objective of the game is and it kind of reminds of a mix between a spot the difference and a pop-it style repeat the pattern game. But this is you need to spot the difference in the pattern. Really well done, great work!

QuadTrain by Alfredo Cossetin Neto 2023-05-02T02:45:27Z

I actually loved this, felt really innovative. My first play through I got my truck well and truly stuck because the cab got left behind :( . Had to rate it highly based on fun factor alone, loved the rope physics and had tons of laughs when I launched my cab into the sky.

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KnighToad by Wild-Babou 2023-05-05T12:00:56Z

Really cute art and great idea. I found that the collisions were a bit biggy. I got toad stuck in a wall a few times, and also found that the knights didn't always die when I throw toady boy into them.

The music is kinda basic but I found it suited the game really nicely, and once again I absolutely love the art. Really enjoyed this as a quick game and would love more levels and the few issues cleaned up. Super fun, and not really something I had played yet.

Post the Most by BLumbye 2023-05-13T00:27:04Z

Neat game but very confusing, the controls also are a bit unresponsive. I was really impressed with the concept though and it could be super interesting when refined. Also the graphics impressed me, it all hung together really nicely.

B.I.T.E by Zelirman 2023-05-05T08:12:21Z

Really cool idea, and I can totally see this being amazing with a little more polish too it. I did have an issue where I couldn't get form to stamp correctly but I just restarted and it worked fine. Really like the graphics too, add some more complex sounds and I reckon you are onto a winner.

FoodEx by stesim 2023-05-05T08:22:09Z

Loved this, for whatever reason it reminded me of Simpsons Hit and Run. The feeling when you completely spam full your truck with the constant icecreams "Mhmm" and then having half the load fly out is unmatched. Actually made me laugh. The long queues of guys waiting on hotdogs and soda was hilarious to me. I really think you should polish this up and release it as its really fun and challenging. I think you nailed the controls of driving the truck.

Paper Drone by KULICH 2023-05-03T11:10:30Z

Nice work! Straight forward and it controlled great, without being to easy. The trail effect really made it along with this image pic.PNG

Could basically win the art category with that alone in my eyes.

Totally Silly Forklift Simulator by garnold02 2023-05-02T08:45:43Z

This is a great idea and great execution! The controls of the forklift work really well, without being too easy. The physics interactions worked exactly how I imagined it would as well making it not too difficult. The game explains itself as well pretty simply which I really liked, and a lot of LD games tend to forget to do. Would have been great to have some sound effects, or even a little music but you cant do it all. Its safe to say I am not forklift certified.

Enrivery by Foraland 2023-05-05T10:02:49Z

This is awesome. Amazing job. Graphics are super clean and I found it easy to understand and its kinda cute to watch the resources travel back to the boats. My only major criticism is the looping of the music track, the rest is great.