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Clumsy Paws

By Draggs Connor, Horodep, sovogirl, frozenspots and Konkykong

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Overall584.0668
Fun2103.7068
Innovation3903.3766
Theme414.2568
Graphics364.5870
Audio1273.8460
Humor893.9269
Mood1093.9367

Comments

darylsteak 2017-12-04 02:53

A challenging game with great artwork and smooth animations, it also gets harder and harder as time progresses. Sound effects are also nice

fiakaiera 2017-12-04 06:43

**This has the potential to be a full on phone/tablet game.** Go with it.

* I really love the aesthetics and the sounds makes it really good. I love it! It makes the atmosphere fuzzy and the audio makes it quirky to play.

* As time progresses, it will become almost impossible for those who works with a mouse. As you know, the cats makes the items fall at the same time and it will be hard for people to react. Making this as a touch-centric game will make it easier but at least you can get the items falling from across the room.

* One broom is not enough for the mouse users. It doesn't even recover back until mom passes by! This is the bane for mouse users. I wish we could use it more.

This is simple yet stunningly beautiful. Good work.

sovogirl 2017-12-04 06:52

Thanks for playing and your feedback!

mark-kennedy 2017-12-04 08:13

Dawww! The art style is just. OOOOOOOOO. Good Work. and I agree with @fiakaiera 100%.

chris-hall 2017-12-04 08:20

Fun and endearing! The graphics are amazing. I was confused about why sometimes I could or couldn't clean stuff off the floor. The laptop is hilarious and adds that "OH NO" moment a lot. Nice work!

2017-12-04 08:21

Nice game. Broom using slightly non intuitive, since description tells you to click on the broom, but you have to click on the broken object instead.

The music theme is really catchy, I think I've heard something similar on NES.

wiseclock 2017-12-04 08:34

The game teaches us that we need to buy more brooms if we get a bunch of cats.

Suggestion, it would be better if the broken stuff had a highlighted outline or something like that on them if we get available brooms. :v Or maybe it was just me finding it's hard to check the brooms when concentrating on those cats...

meskaline 2017-12-04 08:43

Love this game. Looks good, pays good. I made such a mess.. :))))

horodep 2017-12-04 09:05

I just tested the game on a PС with sensor screen. That's really much more convenient. Phone/tablet version now looks like a nice option.

@chris-hall > I was confused about why sometimes I could or couldn’t clean stuff off the floor.

@s-ed > Broom using slightly non intuitive, since description tells you to click on the broom

@wiseclock > it’s hard to check the brooms when concentrating on those cats

Thank's for comments. That's important for us. In case of tablet port we'll rework onscreen and menu UI.

aciertz 2017-12-04 10:18

Such a very pretty looking game!

killnaprimer 2017-12-04 11:58

Great job! This game looks and sounds amazing, you must make a phone version of it! It took me some time to figure out where broom is - thought is was part of level, not gui icon, but i fugured it out. Also, mom's leg creeped me out for some reason, but thats a plus =)

jiri-hysek 2017-12-04 12:01

Oh, it's so cute! Graphics style is amazing..

ashtrail 2017-12-04 13:23

Really nice ! I do agree this game could make for a good smartphone port.

Not much else to say since everything is really well done, the art is lovely (that game over screen is terrifying O_O), the music and sound effects are nice and the gameplay is good (quite hard though).

pecolyte 2017-12-04 14:10

Haha this is one of the cutest entry I've played so far, cute and annoying at the same time though. Liked the mews before the cat push down something, most would understand this if they have had cat pets.

importantcreations 2017-12-04 14:26

Nice Art! But pretty hard to play with only one mouse. Seems like your cats ate all the other mouses...

jackisaacs 2017-12-04 14:32

Love the artisan art style! Fun gameplay

sovogirl 2017-12-04 15:13

Thank you all for your feedback! We are really happy that you like it!

r3l0ad1 2017-12-04 16:34

Maybe you could have added a Mac OS Build because there is none, unfortunately, I could not play it, as there was no mac build, but I really liked the Gifs from the posts you made

pkenney 2017-12-04 16:36

Oh no, not the belt!!

I tried a few times but I just could not stay ahead of those cats. Things got especially hard with the cat by the low table, which gives a very short time to catch the falling object.

I think I could have improved my performance a bit if the hitbox detection on the falling object was a little bit more generous. It seemed to be quite exact, and if I was zooming the mouse around the screen to catch several objects but I missed one by [what FELT like] a few pixels, then I'd have to reverse motion and try clicking again but by then I'd miss the rest of the falling stuff. Of course if I miss then I deserve to lose, but I maybe could have gotten into the ZONE better if the hit detection was like "you got pretty close, I'll give it to you". Also, omg that red sausage with its narrow vertical space!

I also felt like a "doomed but not dead" state when I had missed two objects early. I wasn't exactly certain I understood how the broom goes, but I think I get one broom per mom-check, yes? It might be better if the broom is ALWAYS there but to use it is a distraction... that way I can always recover but things spiral out of control if I fall behind? Not sure.

Anyway, those are some minor thoughts about what could be changed, but I really liked this. It's a simple system but the art is great and nicely animated, I like the hints of a dark tone w/ mom and dad especially. The music and sound are nicely done. Oh, and it was a very nice design idea to have the laptop, a large visible object with insta-lose... this created a special area for my attention and prevented it from all being the same. The low table was also that way - really had to keep me eye on those two spots!

Very nice work.

sovogirl 2017-12-04 16:47

@game-coder28

Our musician understands your pain. We will add Mac-version later!

@pkenney

What a nice feedback! Thank you a lot.

We thought about "area around objects" but didn't have enough time to make it.

We will fix all little mistakes!

jk5000 2017-12-04 18:49

The game is super pretty. The game idea is okay, but it not super exiting. But the story is good. Overall is this a fine LD game.

hizrok 2017-12-04 20:29

This game is awesome! The art is beatifull! The music changes after every strike. I also like the game idea. And you made all of this in 78 hours :O. I am impressed! My highscore is 3:03. (PS: It would be nice to see how many objects I cought)

6smith 2017-12-04 21:32

one of the best jam games i've seen! art, audio and concept are all incredible. lots of personality, too! (also i loved the game over screen...)

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good job guys!

thomas-higgins 2017-12-04 21:54

The whole thing was great I enjoyed your use of the cats and it was just fun

kusaihana 2017-12-04 22:42

This looks so good! I need a Mac OS version to try :(

nia 2017-12-05 00:59

Beautiful art, great sound, overall wonderful game! I enjoyed the creativity and work you guys put into this. I played it several times already. Great work!

sovogirl 2017-12-05 06:28

Thank all of you for playing and your support! <3

yunix 2017-12-05 07:23

The art is adorable! looking forward to trying this when I'm back home!

draggs-connor 2017-12-05 08:28

Thanks everyone! Glad you guys like our game!

royoyo 2017-12-05 11:28

Really love Sounds and Visuals. Music keeps you tense in a good sense. And I'll always prefer the game with cats ^_^

sundaefactory 2017-12-05 13:19

Nice art and fun to play !

ionthas 2017-12-05 15:12

This game made me smile. I loved the overall mood the music gave to the game. The style and feel of the graphics was amazing. For me it was almost impossible to keep up with the rate those mischievous cats were messing with the objects. Also I couldn't find how I was supposed to activate/grab the groom. Overall very solid entry. Keep up the good work!

horodep 2017-12-05 15:20

@ionthas U just click on broken item on the floor to clean it.

ponchoguy 2017-12-05 15:29

Very funny game, would be a great addition to mobile!

I loved the variety of items on the shelves and the cats looked adorable even though they're very mischievous! :yum:

One fix I would recommend for the hitbox leniency issue other commentors were having, is that you could easily make it so on hovering over the falling object there would be a golden "shine" to it to give the player the indication that they are tapping in the right place!

Other than that, I had great fun with your game! Cheers! :smile:

reality-blind 2017-12-05 16:36

Very nice ! And design is great !

interpol 2017-12-05 16:50

As some people said, it will definitely be a nice mobile game! Very nice drawing, Sova, your art defines the overall game mood.

But I found out that sometimes I can't catch the falling item even if I clicked on it.

P.S. Сова, кстати, это интересное совпадение, но я тебя знаю. Я когда-то в старых 2014 был в Бате одним из редакторов, который выпускал Behind The Pixels.

sovogirl 2017-12-05 17:24

@interpol Thanks a lot for your kind words! However, it's a work of a team! The art was created by @frozenspots and @konkykong so compliments should go to them.

П.С. Как же, помню-помню) Хороший был проект.

don-fouts 2017-12-05 17:41

Very solid game! I really like all the mechanics. My suggestion would be to add a noise when mom comes in to inspect. Also some sort of indicator that tells you when you've successfully clicked on the broom. Overall this was a very awesome entry, nice job!!

nivbeth 2017-12-05 19:18

Love cats! Had to play the game :3 Really sweet gameplay, but I found it very difficult to catch all the items after 1 minute. But I think, if you play it more often you will improve pretty soon. The art is amazing!

vkmicro 2017-12-06 00:02

Overall the idea was actually very neat and would make a fun lil mobile game imho. I'd definitely like some kind of sound alert of mother about to come in. I also liked the cats meowing when they threw an object off. very awesome.

СУПЕР! Молодцы, отличная игра, забавная и спокойная. Хотелось бы какоенибудь звуковое предупреждение о том что мать скоро войдёт в комнату. В общем графика и звук что надо! игра без багов (в отличии от моей... =/ Молодцы)

dr-argus 2017-12-06 05:57

I played this on stream last night. It was a lot of fun and sooo beautiful! I jokingly said to my stream that when dad gets home it'll be the belt, and I was right! You and I must've had the same old-school dad. ;-)

Game was a lot of fun and looks really great. Nice work!

sovogirl 2017-12-06 06:28

@don-fouts @vkmicro There is a sigh that mom is coming! All cats... Freeze and pretend like they have nothing to do with all this mess!

@nivbeth Never give up, my friend!

@dr-argus We are so happy that you played our game on your stream and shared your emotions with other people. That's what games are for!

P.S. I hope your Dad doesn't use belt anymore.

cercle 2017-12-06 07:09

Art is great!

aemiliu5 2017-12-06 07:55

omg! purrfect! really cute graphics, the sounds are just nice and the gameplay was really intense! congrats!

eggnot 2017-12-06 09:19

art, music and progression are great! it would be nice to have broom as cool-down item, not as a consumable. re-appear of things in replace for broken are a bit clumsy

tom-schneider 2017-12-06 09:45

Wow, that's one nice interpretation of the theme! I really like the idea and it's nice to play this adorable game.

sun-wukong 2017-12-06 23:18

What an adorable little game! Couldn't pass it as a fellow cat lover. I always have an urge to make a game about cats every LD but manage suppress it usually. Though my first LD game was about cats, Cat-O-Pult from LD36.

Execution is perfect as I see it. Great style and I loved attention to little details especially how cats start to behave when mom is about to come.

nyri0 2017-12-07 20:15

Nice idea, very good graphics, you worked on all the details, like the nice rotation of the objects when falling, etc.

The click bounding boxes are too small though, I miss many objects because of precision instead of reflexes. The music is a bit disappointing too: ver y repetitive, after some time I just cut the sound.

Can work well as a mobile / tablet game.

duzzondrums 2017-12-08 11:52

I love the art, and very cute in general. NEEDS MORE CATS. Also, music was a little repetitive but extra audio points for the game over music sting :kissing_cat:

notpresident35 2017-12-12 14:39

Good job!

goat-toaster-games 2017-12-14 09:44

This was a really fantastic little game!! FANTASTIC graphics, addictive music and fun gameplay. The cats are so cute. Excellent submission!

ibrahimshersha 2017-12-16 16:00

Game play, graphics were great. fun and addictive. well made.

hisfantor 2017-12-21 14:22

i like that graphic style and I was very sad seeing my laptop fall :'(

niterich 2017-12-21 20:51

I love the graphic style and the cats were super cute, but I felt the gameplay to be rather meh. I like how the music built up after you get caught, but the loop that played each time was just too short and repetitive. If you are going to make a mobile port (which you totally should), I would say to make the hitboxes more generous. There were a lot of time where I clicked on an object but it didn't count.

gama-croma 2017-12-25 14:52

Great art, nice gameplay. I enjoy that it's not instant faults, makes it more manageable and adds depth. Also priorities (the laptop) are a great addition.

ddrkirbyisq 2017-12-26 00:50

Such fat cats! They really remind me of our [Pet Furball](http://cocoamoss.com/pet-furball/pet-furball.html), hahaha.

tuzepoito 2017-12-26 15:32

Probably one of my favorite games here. The graphics are cute, the game is fun and I liked how the music gets more ominous as you play. As others stated, maybe the object hitboxes could be more generous, especially considering the speed of how the objects fall.

psychedelia 2017-12-27 21:19

oh my, what is that ending screen! :D I loved it! The art is definitely amazing, my favorite was mom's leg. I think this game is too hard for clicking with a mouse, it's very unforgiving. Maybe this could be resolved by making the game for mobile?

The broom confused me for a long time. I think you should have more of them to keep the game going for a little while longer, or just make the player lose some score for using it too often for example. The way it is now, once two or more things break, there is no real motivation for you to continue trying to catch all your stuff (except for the laptop), because you get a strike anyway AND all the broken things will be cleaned.

Otherwise I liked what you did with the laptop, it freshens up the game a lot and adds a lot of adrenaline to it. god, those cats are cute!