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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Langotriel's comment | |
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| Apr 24 16:21:48 | FARMACY | ♥ 2 | The art style is cute and the music is pleasant. It would benefit from fruit blast balancing, as you can rain down upon your enemies with great, tasty haste but, it is inherently enjoyable to play :) Good job! | |
| Apr 24 16:29:49 | 8m 01s | Poker-Man : Arcade + Poker | ♥ 1 | What shines here is the inherently funny concept and the mental image of the ghosts playing poker with pacman. Really cool concept! |
| Apr 24 16:37:50 | 8m 01s | Tetriform | ♥ 1 | So the concept is pretty neat and I think with a little tweaking, there is a real gem of an arcade game here. The idea of solving the puzzle of tetris while dodging the pieces made me think of a construction worker (the player) shouting orders to people above and having to constantly dodge the pieces of construction being lowered. As an idea, this has great potential! Well done! |
| Apr 24 16:42:32 | 4m 42s | Last Girl On Earth | ♥ 1 | Really solid visuals and audio! It's a simple concept but is put together super well! I love the humour and only wish there was more of it (maybe through dialogue etc). Great work! |
| Apr 24 16:50:19 | 7m 47s | Cosmic Smoothies | ♥ 1 | The concept is good, the art is fantastic and the music/sound is very fitting! I only wish the game worked properly for me to try it out. I could not seem to shoot the UFOs as bullets would not collide. Maybe I did something wrong. Still, I can see a lot of love went into it! good work! |
| Apr 24 16:58:52 | 8m 33s | Harvest Hook | ♥ 2 | I think the visual representation is where this game shines. The animation, the art etc is super well made. The music is cute and the sounds are well suited to the game! Well done! |
| Apr 24 17:16:33 | 17m 41s | Lorik the Slime! | ♥ 0 | Rough but, mechanically solid! A little bit of a large file, though :P |
| Apr 24 18:01:52 | 45m 19s | Ultimate Hero Simulator | ♥ 1 | Straight up 5/5 visuals. Whoever did the art, pat yourself on the back like the main character pets the dog! The music was decent, albeit, a little derivative. The SFX were good and generally, I liked the concept! solid entry! |
| Apr 24 18:08:18 | 6m 26s | Toaster Boy | ♥ 0 | I enjoy the concept, so it's unfortunate that the character sometimes gets stuck and can't jump while on top of an object. Well done on your entry, nonetheless! |
| Apr 24 18:19:46 | 11m 28s | On The Fly | ♥ 1 | If charm was a category, you'd win hands down. I didn't expect to see such a delicate, beautiful game but here we are! The visuals, the sounds; it all comes together wonderfully! Well done! |
| Apr 24 20:42:21 | 2h 22m | Graveyard dates | ♥ 2 | Fun concept that is inherently funny. Pleasing music tracks and serviceable sound effects! Well done! :D |
| Apr 24 20:57:53 | 15m 32s | Light Shaft | ♥ 3 | This game is wonderful and very charming. The atmosphere created by the visuals and audio from start to finish is spectacular. I think the concept is solid but the game warrants a few tweaks to bring it to its full potential. Very well done! |
| Apr 24 21:08:33 | 10m 40s | Rogue Soccer | ♥ 1 | I only have myself to play with which is a shame as it seems this game would shine in 2 player mode. As is, it is a valiant effort at meeting the theme requirements and with polish has some potential. |
| Apr 24 21:20:23 | 11m 50s | Ping Bang Pong | ♥ 2 | The game is well presented and mechanically solid. The predictive indicator showing you where the ball would go was a little hit or miss (as were the hitboxes) but it is an impressive show concerning theme and innovation. Great work! |
| Apr 24 21:41:32 | 21m 09s | The Waiting Room | ♥ 1 | Although I don't necessarily "get it", it was an interesting experience and I jammed out to the music. |
| Apr 24 22:00:39 | 19m 07s | ShootEm? | ♥ 4 | As a streamer, this blew my mind. I don't want to spoil too much but i went into it with certain expectations and it completely and utterly subverted said expectations. For sure one of the most fun gaming experiences I have had in recent years. |
| Apr 24 22:11:36 | 10m 57s | ACCIDENTAL EXISTENTIAL | ♥ 1 | Very interesting experience. I feel this demonstrates a few different themes quite well and mechanics that could go well into larger games. Solid production! |
| Apr 24 22:28:56 | 17m 20s | Storming Sands | ♥ 2 | Great potential if the game was expanded either with humorous dialogue or multiplayer and tightened controls. Great effort! |
| Apr 24 22:45:47 | 16m 51s | The Alphabet Farm | ♥ 0 | Although it has potential for great improvement, it isn't that enjoyable as an experience in its current state. The best I can say is that it lives up to the theme very well. |
| Apr 24 22:58:28 | 12m 41s | Need for Coin: Island Hoppers | ♥ 0 | Generally fun idea, only neutered by lack of time. With polish, including the option to go in reverse, this game could potentially shine on mobile platform. |
| Apr 24 23:12:00 | 13m 32s | Dungeon Scrawl | ♥ 0 | A very interesting concept that I feel lends itself very well to a school environment. With a few tweaks, this could for sure be the kind of game you would give to kids in school to learn to type. |
| Apr 24 23:45:52 | 33m 52s | Typerider | ♥ 1 | The game suffers from a few classic game design flaws such as artificial difficulty. I think if the level design and introduction was a little more methodical in nature and allowed the player to soak in the challenge ahead a little more, it could make for a fun puzzle game. Visuals are top notch and although audio is serviceable, it clashes with the visual feedback. |
| Apr 25 00:08:11 | 22m 19s | Text-Gen Platformer | ♥ 0 | This game, unlike other similar games in this ludum dare seems to have a good grasp of design and puts the challenge in the hands of the player rather than making unfair. It's more about how well the player executes an obvious set of commands rather than about letting the player figure shit out as they go and losing constantly because of it. The music is suitable and fits the visuals. The SFX were serviceable. With tweaks, more variety and a doubling down on its design philosophy, this could be quite an enjoyable way to pass time. |
| Apr 25 00:33:25 | 25m 14s | Highway To Hell: First Person Rally | ♥ 0 | The humour is what carries this game. There are some needed visual tweaks and it could do with music. I also feel the genre of platformer didn't quite make it into the game but with that said, it was an overall enjoyable experience and one of the few games I finished (albeit, with some encouragement from the developer). |
| Apr 25 00:51:11 | 17m 46s | Searchlights | ♥ 1 | Solid execution of a simple game. It could quite easily be made into somewhat of a puzzle game if the player had more knowledge of what weapons were going to be found on what bodies and there were obviously better use-cases for each weapon, giving the player incentive to carve out an optimal route. |
| Apr 25 01:16:46 | 25m 35s | Cursed Princess | ♥ 1 | The game is charming and has mad potential, it just falls short in the amount of choices, variety in dialogue and the length is excessive. If the story was cut short but the dialogue was expanded and relationships between the npcs was further developed, this could be a gem of a game. It would also help to add music and sound effects! Good effort! |
| Apr 25 01:50:33 | 33m 47s | Grid Gunner | ♥ 3 | In general, the game has implemented very solid design on all fronts. A few tweaks here and there and this could easily be a commercial product. |
| Apr 25 02:11:57 | 21m 24s | Life Simulator 9000 | ♥ 1 | Fun idea with major potential for expansion. A great example of readable text, which some text games still get wrong. |
| Apr 25 02:35:49 | 23m 52s | READY SET DRESS! | ♥ 1 | Brilliant visuals and audio. I think if they doubled down on the theme and expanded in terms of humour and made the visuals more comfortable to look at, this could be a gem. |
| Apr 25 03:16:49 | 41m 00s | Checkmate | ♥ 2 | Neat premise, visual style and the audio is also fitting. With a little polish and a doubling down on the theme, this could be a great game. As is, good concept and solid execution. |
| Apr 25 08:39:47 | 5h 22m | Escape | ♥ 1 | Graphics and audio are top notch and do very well what they set out to do. The atmosphere created by the assets is also fantastic. The hints for the puzzles are a little confusing in their design and I feel like a different approach would be more fair to the player. |
| Apr 25 09:02:47 | 23m 00s | End of the day | ♥ 3 | Despite the simple visuals and audio, the design language is clear and non-intrusive (with the exception of the main menu colour scheme).I also miss the arcade elements and feel that there are ways to include it into the core concept of a simulator like this. Good effort! |
| Apr 25 09:28:05 | 25m 18s | F.P.S - Frootz per Second | ♥ 2 | Fantastic visual and auditory design with a good sense of humour to boot. Giving this game a little more meat in terms of progression would make it a potential 5/5 in a lot of categories. |
| Apr 25 10:12:09 | 44m 04s | A Carpenter's Tale | ♥ 2 | Visually, this game is top notch! I think it could benefit from a few quality of life tweaks but generally, it is a solid entry and a good example on how to do this theme right. Also, rage. |
| Apr 25 10:34:04 | 21m 55s | Clunky Ball | ♥ 1 | This game pulls through on humour and silliness alone. It's unfortunate that the dev didn't manage to incorporate a second genre or implement better camera control but it was an overall enjoyable experience. Solid work. |
| Apr 25 11:04:01 | 29m 57s | 00Boyfriend - A Spy's Dating Sim | ♥ 4 | Incredible game and really well polished. Minor tweaks and this is essentially in line with quality commercial games. |
| Apr 25 11:24:14 | 20m 13s | Pinplat | ♥ 1 | Interesting use of the pinball genre; it would be fun to see how someone could build off this concept. Music is also solid! |
| Apr 25 11:37:48 | 13m 34s | Zig-Pong | ♥ 1 | Near perfect audio-visual experience. Solid execution. |
| Apr 25 11:50:49 | 13m 01s | RPG Clicker | ♥ 1 | Would be better without its current music but the game is otherwise relatively well put together and has a charming look. Some balance changes are in order, though. Solid effort! |
| Apr 25 12:22:32 | 31m 43s | Seaman Sleuth | ♥ 3 | Fucking hilarious writing. Really cool screens that allow you to investigate crime scenes as well. This game does a lot right and a few things wrong. With a little polish and some minor design changes, this is sure to be a solid title worth paying for. |
| Apr 25 12:47:27 | 24m 55s | Fish Fighter | ♥ 1 | Fun concept and unintentionally hilarious through what is essentially slapstick comedy. With some visual polish and expanded gameplay, this would be ready to sell. |
| Apr 25 13:18:05 | 30m 38s | Hallway Rumble | ♥ 2 | Cute artstyle but lacking in readable visual design. The audio is serviceable and the gameplay needs to cook a little longer to be fully realized. There is potential here, though. Good job. |
| Apr 25 22:43:55 | 9h 25m | Rock The Road | ♥ 1 | If you could give the player more incentive to place objects all around the map rather than just in front of the goal as well as add some sfx, this could become a solid title. Awesome effort for your age, though. |
| Apr 25 23:10:08 | 26m 13s | Mud and Pixels | ♥ 1 | With some expanded gameplay, a grim battlefield background and some fitting music, this could easily be a commercial title. Extremely solid work all round and great concept! |
| Apr 25 23:30:34 | 20m 26s | BASEBALL in HELL | ♥ 1 | Excellent use of visuals and audio; it only needs some minor tweaking to truly strike fear into the player. Solid work. |
| Apr 25 23:53:37 | 23m 03s | Ghost&Balls | ♥ 0 | The biggest issue is simply bugs. Fix those and the game would be far more enjoyable. Well done, either way. |
| Apr 26 00:11:44 | 18m 07s | Dirty Pink | ♥ 1 | Among the best games part of ludum 41 in terms of visuals and audio. I think some tweaking to the gameplay in terms of balance and scope, along with some additional humour and this could easily be a commercial product. Extremely well executed. |
| Apr 26 10:27:25 | 10h 15m | RPG Racer | ♥ 1 | Doesn't commit any game design crimes but isn't something that blew me away either. With some expanded gameplay and polished visuals and audio, this could be a lot of fun. |
| Apr 26 10:41:53 | 14m 28s | Midnight pulse | ♥ 2 | The visual design language was a little confusing at times where a ledge could be blue rather than red when it was a jumping off point; if the visual design was a little more consistent, the game would feel better to play. With that said, with some minor tweaking to the levels so that everything feels like it follows the rhythm properly, this could very easily be a commercial product. Solid work in general! |
| Apr 26 10:58:05 | 16m 12s | Z for Zentipede | ♥ 5 | Great visuals that lack a little bit of beefy sound to back it up. With some audio tweaks and gameplay feedback, this game would be solid. |
| Apr 26 11:22:49 | 24m 44s | Honest Dan's Trout | ♥ 1 | Really good visual/auditory design; no strict flaws. The gameplay worked surprisingly well and was pretty fun, even though I suck ass through a straw. Awesome submission |
| Apr 26 11:38:17 | 15m 28s | Don't leave me | ♥ 1 | Cute visuals and generally clear design with the exception of the spikes. With some music, additional puzzles and a more fleshed out narrative and this could easily make it on to the app store! |
| Apr 26 11:57:37 | 19m 20s | PongCraft | ♥ 1 | Despite simple visuals, lack of audio and small scope; this game could be fantastic and it triggered some sparks in my brain and inspired some ideas. Good effort and cool concept. Also, awesome achievement in terms of meeting the theme requirement. |
| Apr 26 12:12:59 | 15m 22s | Guerrilla Gardening | ♥ 1 | Incredibly well done in terms of production quality, certainly top tier on that front. I think the game could improve from expanded scope and possibly increase its mood score with a little more grime added to the visuals. There is also room for additional elements of humour. Overall, incredible entry. Solid 4.5/5 |
| Apr 26 12:28:52 | 15m 53s | Skate'n'Snipe | ♥ 1 | As is, this is a really good example of meeting the theme's requirements and a relatively fun entry. I think it needs a little meat added to the visuals and for sure needs some audio controls but all round, cool game. |
| Apr 26 12:45:14 | 16m 22s | Match Shooter | ♥ 0 | The colour distinction between the enemies could be slightly altered to be a little clearer, otherwise the visuals are pretty good. I'd also say that the game could have more satisfying sounds but it is suitable as is and by no means dissatisfying; it's just a point for improvement. As is, really good title and really good use of theme. |
| Apr 26 13:18:48 | 33m 34s | Idleshot | ♥ 1 | The game has nice and clean visuals so good job on that front. I think the design needs to be revisited and altered a little to make the game more enjoyable and the audio could also be improved and expanded. There is some generally solid production quality considering the time you had to make the game, though. Well done. |
| Apr 26 13:32:41 | 13m 53s | Survival Quiz | ♥ 0 | Impressive menu screen; it got me pretty hyped. Also impressed by how disappointed I am :P I joke but I do feel the game needs a native English speaker to make the game better. A text game with confusing text is not a good way to go; find de way to go. Good mix of visuals and audio, though. |
| Apr 26 13:51:45 | 19m 04s | Super Dashball | ♥ 1 | Generally solid and lots of nice QOL additions on the menu (like satisfying sounds and dynamic feedback on sliders). A few design tweaks and this could be really fun. Good effort! |
| Apr 27 13:14:14 | 23h 22m | It's Always Your Turn | ♥ 0 | Reminds me a lot of minion masters. |
| Apr 28 11:12:34 | 21h 58m | The Tale of Witchnook | ♥ 3 | 9df29df3723c916b6bd58c1632ef3897.jpg I made dis. The game is fun to play and puts you into a zen like state. I just wish it had some more sound effects for the different structures being built and so on. With expanded gameplay, I'd totally buy this shit :D |
| Apr 28 11:28:53 | 16m 19s | Caves Of Mimicry | ♥ 1 | The bugs made it hard to enjoy but there is some potential here. I feel a better direction would have been to set up predetermined layouts as puzzles for the player to solve. Also, the audio could have been better. Good effort. |
| Apr 28 11:47:10 | 18m 17s | Rhythmobots Defence | ♥ 1 | Despite some conflict in game design and lack of SFX, there is a tried and tested concept here that just needs some tweaking and polish to shine. good effort. |
| Apr 28 12:19:33 | 32m 23s | Lands of Hello | ♥ 1 | Incredible compo entry. Visually pleasing and hilarious. Could use music and some more sound effects. I'd also like to see some more troop structure control (like being able to assign snipers to the back and possibly order them individually to pull aggro etc). |
| Apr 28 12:48:41 | 29m 08s | Sadie's Stabby Sword Story | ♥ 2 | The game looks decent and sounds good, so well done there. I wish there was some more variation in the visuals and maybe a little more integrated humour. I enjoyed the core gameplay loop but think there needs to be some tweaks to the artillery mechanic before it truly feels good to play. |
| Apr 28 13:06:38 | 17m 57s | Bloodsport | ♥ 1 | this is a pretty fun concept that requires some balancing and polish to bring it out of average territory. Give it some more love! |
| Apr 28 13:27:04 | 20m 26s | Cursed Ascension | ♥ 0 | Cool concept that is crippled by the lack of audio. It is a decent use of the theme and a well conceived game idea with a surprising amount of variety. I can't help but feel that time management could have been directed a little more towards auditory efforts, rather than more visual assets. |
| Apr 28 14:07:00 | 39m 56s | Flying By Yourself | ♥ 0 | Incredible experience; don't want to spoil. JUST FUCKING PLAY. |
| Apr 28 14:10:58 | 3m 58s | Xenoperil: You Must Survive | ♥ 2 | Fantastic visuals and audio, albeit not always suited for its purpose. On the occasional visual feedback and audio track, I'd go back to the drawing board to achieve a more cohesive and enjoyable experience. If this game can double down on what seems to be its philosophy, it would be worth paying for. |
| Apr 28 14:30:10 | 19m 12s | Crystal Library | ♥ 2 | Really good use of some sounds and fantastic atmosphere. Things got really tense on occasion and the game felt les cheap than a lot of horror games. Add some meat and polish and you've got yourself $10. |
| Apr 28 14:46:00 | 15m 50s | Shutin | ♥ 1 | Fantastic concept that would work great as a dream sequence as part of a bigger game. I feel like it ought to focus a little more on the horror and expand that a little bit, though. Solid experience. |
| Apr 28 15:29:11 | 43m 11s | Casino Intentions | ♥ 0 | Good visuals and suitable audio to create a good mood but, the game mechanics are clearly not finished and it was a little frustrating to not always have the opportunity to say what I wanted to say. Also, pls fix gremar. |
| Apr 28 15:48:33 | 19m 22s | Numbness | ♥ 1 | This took me back to the days of 2000 free games discs on Mac OS 9 in the 90's. The weird combination of clashing art styles weirdly enough make it extra retro feeling. In general though, this ain't my kind of thing and I do think it needs some more polish. |
| Apr 28 16:01:17 | 12m 44s | Remember or Die | ♥ 0 | Very good use of theme; the mix of hectic bullethell micro play and slow macro based memory based objectives is entirely incompatible in nature and you still made it into a digestible experience. Awesome job. |
| May 15 18:36:37 | 410h 35m | CardRush | ♥ 0 | The gravity card crashes the game consistently :( I would have liked to start with more mana initially as it seems the game is borderline impossible once they get too far ahead. Maybe I just suck, though. Other than that, the game idea itself is pretty neat (and sort of similar to our game in terms of card implementation). Well done! |
| May 15 18:50:26 | 13m 49s | Spike Ball | ♥ 0 | For a compo entry, this is pretty well made! I'd zoom the game out a little bit and make the background move slower than the foreground so that my eyes don't die. |
| May 15 19:12:50 | 22m 24s | Tower Defense Paradise! | ♥ 1 | The music is really nice to jam to :P I wish the game was longer and I also wish the game characters had different things to say depending on the towers you used (I never used missle towers for example so it would be fun to see that tower get mad). Great work, though! |
| May 15 19:29:26 | 16m 36s | TechNaut | ♥ 0 | I love the visuals and the audio is really fitting. I had no idea what to do with the cubes but hey, I am a dumb shit so I guess that's me. Really good work! |
