Writespace by blinry 2018-08-16T12:26:03Z
The idea for thisis very neat. And the narrative is fun. I would like to check lua, I dnd't know LÖVE engine. Thanks for made this game and congratulations :)
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → Users → 0nironauta
| Year | LD | Theme | Game | Division | Rank | Ov | Fu | In | Th | Gr | Au | Hu | Mo | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 2018 | 42 | Running out of space | Oniria Times | compo | 57 | 3.93 | 3.50 | 4.14 | 3.58 | 3.22 | 3.34 | 3.89 | 3.81 | |
| 2018 | 41 | Combine 2 Incompatible Genres | 👥 | SURVABY | jam | 504 | 3.52 | 3.40 | 3.31 | 3.78 | 3.55 | 3.63 | 3.43 |
The idea for thisis very neat. And the narrative is fun. I would like to check lua, I dnd't know LÖVE engine. Thanks for made this game and congratulations :)
This is an interesting concept, using tetris-like approaching. I played until day 4. I like the narrative with the paper notes. Congrats :)
This is a very fun interactive joke. I got a lot of points. Could be nice to add more mechanics :id: Captura.PNG
WOW do I have the record?? Congrats!
Even if it's unfinished, looks very promising and fun. You should polish and make multiplayer mode :D Congrats
I think this is the best game I've played so far. Looks like a ended game. Game system is perfect, graphics are cute, music and fx fits... Congratulations!
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This is an interesting revision of asteroids. I like neon graphics, and difficulty is nice. Hard at the beginning, but after a few tries you'll progress. Congrats!
@vulture-42 it's not so hard! Just walk a bit backwards and first level is piece of cake :D
This game it's simple but fits the theme very well. I can't play 2 players (because I don't have friends) but looks more promising than the solo mode. Also music it's nice. Congrats :)
This is what we can call a serious game, or interactive meditation. For me this kind of product is very interesting. In some way it waked my social phobia xD. I don't like to play this kind of serious game because I use games to get fun and forget problems. Real life is so rude for me that I don't want it also in my "free" time. But I think maybe is good that social succes people play it so maybe can understand. Congrats.
Wow! This is very good! Nice graphics, nice gameplay, nice sound, you used Saitama... :id:
Best thing is that you reach long gameplay time with little elements. Congratulations :)
Beautiful game. I like low poly art the most. Congrats :)
Thanks! I'm very glad you liked it!
@alexosa @jerripo this is the best you can tell me. Many thanks :_)
@lyxil thanks for your analisys. Oniria is in fact a great world that we all have inside. I'm writting a book about it. The Arena and some other things are the differenciate concepts (but Intellituna just emerged during the jam xD). (Also @rosypenguin) Instead removing the news from the list, I think maybe mark it like "wrote" can be a good improvement. Thanks for the idea.
@acdimalev if you tell me your browser and OS, I can maybe fix it. Thanks for the feedback :)
@rosypenguin some UI improvements are planned... maybe I'll expand the game in the near future.
@call-me-nutty thanks for the comments. I know the weak point of the game is that you must read a lot. I'm focusing in the type of player who loves to read (in a game).
@mediyaz, @darylsteak, @jk-studio, @sand-gardeners thank you so much!
@adam-harms I'm thinking about an expansion. Maybe doing a more advanced "accounts" management could work. Something like choosing distribution places for newspapers and so.
@adam-harms oniric advertising! So nice idea!! :D
hahahaha. So fun and so real (at least here in Spain). I went so fat (14Kg) XD
Also I thought it was no end, just like the real grandma. And a good idea for the theme. Congrats!
AAaaaand the grandma like a ninja shadow of the food is great xD
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Fun game for 2 players. I like the combos idea. It reminds me the robot wars, with the red button. Congrats!
This is a very good twine narrative fiction. Very innovative in the concepts of install and unninstall programs. I like the reboot when you erase your funcitons XD. Now I want to make one of these :D:D:D Congrats!!
I like the idea of moving walls. Gameplay is simple yet effective. Good game for being enternained for a while. Graphics are nice also. Eye laser it's a bit unfair because there is no anticipation to it, but wtf, It's a dungeon xD Congrats!
Great idea! Some puzzles are really very clever. Also very neat graphics. Congrats! :)
Even if this is very simple, I think you really reach the retro concept. It's like playing in my old x286. Good memories. Congrats.
This... is... strange..... xDDDD
This game is simple enough to keep you playing for a while without complicating your life. I really appreciate this kind of games, with simple aesthetics and simple mechanics. I think they are the best for a jam. Also, I see it on mobile perfectly. You have my votes. Congratulations.
In this game you can be sadistic and masochistic at the same time ... something quite disturbing. The graphic and animation display is quite impressive for 72 hours. Congratulations. By the way, I managed to cut the same hand twice XD
Hahaha I love it Music is a joke, the characters are cool and collisions goes perfect. Bigger ball maybe? Congratulations man! curraco!
Amazing 3D art, congrats. Funny and beautiful. I should explain controls ingame, maybe in menu.
Maybe you can speed up the music when there are a lot of cars. It's an interesting game. Ralaxing in some way due to the music.
Even if a coudn't play propperly bacause the UI, I have to congratulate you if this is you first jam. Art is very neat and pace is very proper. Let me know if you solve the UI issue so I'll come back!
Yeah Teddy is there waiting
@pkenney thanks a lot for your comments. Indeed the crying was very difficult to develop. We try 4 different audios and these 2 was the best. Maybe is a human brin thing XD
"And the execution is really strong, too. The voxel aesthetic works really well, and the sound is – well, err, let’s set aside the crying baby sound and talk about the rest – is very nice. I especially liked that dropping the shotgun on the floor made the same sound as dropping the bottle. A clever small joke."
YOU NOTICED!!! I'm happy XDDD
@yetman in the game over screen you have the score to share :id: It's secret formula.
(this is a development image, but you can see it :D) GameOver2.JPG
_Still a score UI during gameplay would be nice in my opinion_
@yetman we were looking for a game without ui. But you are right, it improves replayability. Thanks for your comments.
@samupo indeed I'm not fast making particle systems XDD
@rha too easy if you know that there is a zombi behind. Better you turn to check :P Thanks for your feedback!
@starlin please can you tell me your browser and OS? Or browser at least? :P