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Oxy

By hbocao

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CategoryRankScoreCount
Coolness1100
Mood563.72
Overall963.67
Fun1053.57
Audio1103.43
Innovation1323.66
Theme4063.32
Humor5082.29
Graphics7632.56

Comments

budda 2013-08-26 06:09

DAAAAAAAAAAVE!!!

Cool little puzzle game! Well done.

ranf 2013-08-26 06:13

Interesting idea and surrounding story. Congrats on completing your first game!

zedutchgandalf 2013-08-26 09:58

First off, congratulations on finishing a game!
I like the atmosphere of the game, the concept and the subtle take on the theme :)
I got pretty far but ran out of oxygen, so I didn't completely finish it. But from what I saw, the puzzles seemed diverse enough, and progressively getting harder.
The only thing I had a minor "problem" with is that I had to try 2 or 3 times before I figured out you have to hold space to carry Dave (that little word extra in the control screen would help :P)
Anyway, great job! I like it! :)

hbocao 2013-08-26 16:09

Yup. The keyword is HOLD space. Well, I almost forgot to include the controls instructions. hehe

galman 2013-08-26 18:39

Well done for your first game :D You did a great job, I really liked the game idea and the music... I almost done it to then end on the second time without dying!

feysoura 2013-08-26 23:09

Loved it, but ran out of oxygen and didn't know what to do!

hitonagashi 2013-08-26 23:10

Really liked this. I couldn't finish it in a couple of goes, but it was great fun, and very responsive to controls. Great work!

cosmologicon 2013-08-26 23:47

Great job! The controls are so responsive, I didn't feel like I was fighting them at all. I brought Dave all the way to the last chamber and I was so low on oxygen at that point I knew it was me or him, so I had to cut him loose. It was tough. 5 stars on Mood from me. A checkpoint or two would have been really nice. Having to redo the whole thing was a bit of a chore.

andwhatnot 2013-08-26 23:50

What the hell dave why you always losing your oxygen tank.

Yeah, interesting idea for a puzzle game... good and frustrating!

tork 2013-08-27 01:11

The idea is good, I saw a lot of air balls but none gave me more oxygen :(, that is the only thing I didn't like, the puzzles are nice,the game is fast and controls are good.
Thanks for the game :)

ix 2013-08-27 01:30

I like the puzzle idea, and I also *really* like the feel of the controls. The slow sink, the drift, the turning. Well done!

greenyuk 2013-08-27 02:08

Great puzzle game. Very innovative. Love the ambient music!

oxysoft 2013-08-27 02:13

Gotta love the calm ambiance.

zeh 2013-08-27 02:18

Dave nooooo!

Great first entry. It's a great game, with a very good idea. Awesome mood and music. Perhaps just a bit too difficult. It took me a second run to understand how the oxygen is re-filled.

bassarisse 2013-08-27 03:17

I couldn't finish it, I always run out of oxygen, but it's a great game, loved the idea.

tiagosr 2013-08-27 04:53

I liked it very much, especially the mood that the sounds conveyed. And the sort-of heartbreak that happens about having Dave run out of air was really interesting. And congrats on your first game, I know too well that feeling of having lots of protos around and no finished game for a long time.

unept 2013-08-27 05:43

Fun game overall. I'm not sure if I was close to the end, but I sure panicked when my oxygen ran out. I also felt bad for dave a bit.

Also, we died.

kannas 2013-08-27 08:26

Congrats for your first game :D i see that even if it's your first game, you managed to make interesting puzzles, and that' s great. i managed to arrive half way ( because i suck at puzzle timed games :| ) and i am impressed by what i saw. really, keep up the good work, mate :D

fede3751 2013-08-27 10:37

Enjoyed this a lot!
I know it's a bad thing, but i laughed when I read "Daaave"! :D

sittaman 2013-08-27 17:53

Nice one. for your first game you did great! It's sad when Dave turns purple =( the soundtrack gives it a great mood, also. Congrats!

psychomonster 2013-08-27 18:11

Cool game. congrat for first submission. Hope it was a good time. Cool game.

ghribacki 2013-08-28 01:26

The game kept me tense for the most part! The atmosphere is just amazing and even though you say you have no talent for music you know how to build up a piece to put the player in the mood of the game!

I killed myself and Dave in my first try and manage to get out on the second, but I had to leave Dave. =( Is Dave's oxygen the only one supposed to recover? (it makes sense because you can breath precisely for 10 seconds when you're not with Dave? =p)

Congratulations on your first entry! The game is just awesome and I can't wait to check your next one in December. =D

neo-blue 2013-08-28 04:56

Really creative take on the theme. I enjoyed playing this.

lopiky1 2013-08-29 03:39

fun :3

nickw 2013-08-29 11:18

Nice work, the music really sets the mood along with the premise. The game itself is fun and challenging, nice work.

bipolarmike 2013-08-29 16:18

Wow this is a great idea for a game, it's super difficult but I really enjoyed it. Well done!

poohshoes 2013-08-30 03:08

Wow! Spot on.

bluberry 2013-08-30 04:08

This was absolutely excellent. My feels...nooo Dave(ha my mind yelled out his name as well the first time he blinked on screen)...I can feel the struggle, desperation, and guilt. This was very simple and clean, but had much depth. The music and details of Dave's slow fall and blinking while suffocating added much to the experience. Great job.

p4nurge 2013-08-30 09:03

Great idea, excellent smooth controls and really solid puzzle mechanics. Proper heart too, helped by the atmospheric music - I really felt concerned for poor Dave.

I was interested to read your thoughts on Construct 2. I used it myself because I have absolutely no programming experience but in your case I can see that it would probably be more trouble than it's worth.

Overall, a solid entry which was very enjoyable (and surprisingly moving) to play.

hypnohustla 2013-08-30 09:08

Great puzzle mechanic. I loved how the game didn't end when Dave died. Dragging a dead body around added a great amount to the mood. Brilliant job for your first finished game :)

ratalaika 2013-08-30 16:06

good job

duff 2013-08-30 20:00

Great game. One of my favorites from this competition.

mironix 2013-08-30 23:46

oh for a first finished game - splendid. same goes with my entry - first that i want to end. thanks for the game! and DAAAAAAVE!

zatyka 2013-08-31 04:05

This was pretty cool, and unique. Great choice of music. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Congratulations on your first game.

theholychicken 2013-08-31 04:29

NOOOOOOO DAAAAAAVE!!! ...I'm still going to use your corpse as a companion cube. lol
Terrific atmosphere. The music really makes you feel like you are drowning. The story gives a really nice sense purpose to the gameplay. You don't have to save your friend, but you can't help but want to. And if he dies you still need his corpse..
Awesome, awesome job!

gabriel 2013-08-31 05:50

Congrats, man! Very highly rated! Really loved the mechanic of dragging the other guy around, very creative and really creates an oppressive feel of urgency. I went pretty far but was unable to finish - if there's one thing I suggest, is making the difficulty curve a little less steep! Maybe it would encourage more attempts if one didn't need to restart the game from the beginning but instead from the last checkpoint. Anyway, I loved it!

About Construct, I hear ya. But I really think using such programs ('makers') is a great optimization of time and allows for focusing on design and creation rather than technical aspects. It does require getting familiar with the tool in advance, though! As a reference, Super Fair Trial Show was made in MMF2, which is also a 'maker'. But it is only worthy, of course, if you want to learn that language - ultimately the best language is the one you're used to, right? ;)

Congrats on your first finished game, it is actually quite good, and cheers from Brazil!

Gabriel

darkshadow 2013-08-31 19:56

The game fits the theme perfectly and is brilliant idea. Controls feel really nice, unlike some games this definitely feels like underwater. I'd would not have been able to tell that this was your first game if you hadn't mentioned it.

jod 2013-09-01 00:26

Damn it, Dave!

I really liked this! The mix between keeping Dave alive and speed is very well done! Plays smoothly.

joror 2013-09-01 00:34

Good puzzles. You ramped the difficulty up nicely. The pressure of saving someone else is a pretty personal touch for this kind of game. Nicely done! :)

moomoo112 2013-09-01 03:44

Very interesting concept, the music really helps with the mood

diogomuller 2013-09-01 22:29

DAAAAAAAVE. Really nice game. Love the mood, the music, the graphics. :)

jomomomo 2013-09-02 03:29

Wow! Dave didn't make it all that far, but I had to use his corpse to hold buttons down.

caranha 2013-09-02 13:27

Hey, thanks for the game. I think that, for a first try, this was really well done. There were no glaring bugs, the gameplay was clear, the controls were crisp.

Of course, you can work a little bit more on the graphics - specially the messages on the bottom, they were kinda hard to notice and read, but I think you got something really nice going on here!

Thanks for the game, and here is a video review :-)
http://youtu.be/idprISufHPI

mollymus 2013-09-02 20:17

Well done on your first game! I couldve wished for some better graphisc but overall a solid first entry!:)

murilo 2013-09-02 23:13

The innovation was superb! The rest was pretty good too. Congrats man! And you did that with a new learned engine? That was fast! I need to take a look at this Construct, man! Congrats!

xgeovanni 2013-09-03 19:16

And I was so close too...

tankenstein 2013-09-03 19:22

Terrifically fun!

jedi 2013-09-15 13:40

Very nice innovation, use of the theme, audio and mood!

It's too hard - remember that most of us haven't spent hours playing it!

It gets really slow for me (the fps drop) around when I'm scrolling the screen (in Firefox) for some reason. It really does ruin the experience, unfortunately. Since you used Construct 2, that probably isn't your fault though.

Like someone else said, I wouldn't know this was your first entry if you hadn't said so. Good job!

tobiasw 2013-09-15 16:05

Thanks a lot for the comment on Lost in the Darkness! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

For "not being able to draw" and "having no talent for music" this looks and sounds pretty well - it still creates this special underwater mood, although it doesn't convey much urgency. I like the gameplay, and the second time I nearly finished the game and died right before the airlock, unable to open the 3 doors. I like your level design, I would've wished for checkpoints though!

All in all, great job, and congratulations on finishing your first game!

jedi 2013-09-16 19:50

Disregard what I said earlier about it slowing down. Just had to restart firefox. Now I just think it's too hard :P
I did manage to make it out after a bunch of plays - Dave did not however :(

tombsar 2013-09-16 20:45

An excellent game! I thought I was doing well, but drowned right before the final airlock. :(