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| Timestamp | Since previous | Game | Gal Afik's comment | |
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| Apr 21 04:20:14 | Eggcelerate | ♥ 1 | Fantastic work! That was both hilarious and addicting. For a compo game, this was beyond any expectations I had. | |
| Apr 21 04:24:43 | 4m 29s | PICKLE on Mars (with Crab) | ♥ 1 | This was a decent project. I'm not sure if others had the same issues, but the game ran way too fast for me. If you guys used the Unity engine to create this, you may need to account for the time between frames (ie. use Time.deltaTime). Otherwise, this has potential. It's a good start! |
| Apr 21 04:32:31 | 7m 48s | Displacement | ♥ 0 | This is dripping with polish! While I didn't enjoy the puzzles as much as I'd hoped (I'm too tired to think after programming for 72 hours), I really like the concept and wish this was a full game with more mechanics. |
| Apr 21 05:13:56 | 41m 25s | Feed The Pillar | ♥ 1 | I'm afraid I couldn't figure out how to play without dying almost immediately. The idea is interesting though and I would like to play it again if you choose to expand on it. |
| Apr 21 05:29:00 | 15m 04s | WinterStorm | ♥ 1 | I couldn't quite figure out how to play, but the art, animations, and mood are terrific! I wish there was a soundtrack to go along with this and possibly a hailstorm :) |
| Apr 21 05:32:56 | 3m 56s | Keeper of the Flame | ♥ 1 | The theme was definitely represented well and I just wish game-play was a bit smoother. Otherwise, great job on your first solo jam! |
| Apr 21 05:36:52 | 3m 56s | Hope | ♥ 0 | The art style is phenomenal and I like the twist on the theme! |
| Apr 21 05:40:40 | 3m 48s | Be THE DOG | ♥ 1 | The art is great. It's hard to believe you made this in a weekend! Great job. |
| Apr 21 05:43:41 | 3m 01s | Dr... It's Alive! | ♥ 1 | I'm gonna have to come back and play this later. It looks great! |
| Apr 21 05:47:03 | 3m 22s | HarakiRun | ♥ 2 | As others have noted, the game moves a bit too fast to play with any real skill. That being said, you hit it out of the park with the mood and graphics! This art-style belongs in a full release, not a game jam project! |
| Apr 21 13:13:18 | 7h 26m | Sound Player | ♥ 3 | Great game! I enjoyed the simple concept and cute art style. It took me a few seconds to figure out how to play and I couldn't beat level 3, but enjoyed the experience. |
| Apr 21 15:12:25 | 1h 59m | up in the sky | ♥ 1 | This is a fun and really addicting little game. I really love the unique mechanic and great take on the theme! There is a weird "thing" going on with the background. When the character grows, it seems to flash as if it's shaking randomly, which is a bit jarring. Otherwise, I really love it! |
| Apr 21 15:15:35 | 3m 10s | Volty's Quest | ♥ 1 | I'm not sure what I'm doing wrong, but I can't enter chargers. I tried pressing Up while next to them, overlapping them, and jumping near them, but nothing seems to work. Otherwise, this game looks incredible! I love the charging mechanic, which is similar to the main mechanic in my LD game, but the art totally blew me away! The animations are smooth and the title screen really draws you in. Fantastic job! |
| Apr 21 17:26:30 | 2h 10m | Macrowave | ♥ 0 | This is great! I love the music and pixel art style. The game feels very responsive and smooth. Two suggestions: a restart button would be awesome, especially considering the difficulty, and I would add a sound effect to indicate that the player is within range of Mac. |
| Apr 21 18:13:20 | 46m 50s | Jerry Is Not Invited | ♥ 0 | That was quite entertaining. Not too much replay value, but it's a great jam project! |
| Apr 21 18:19:38 | 6m 18s | Holy Plague | ♥ 3 | The art style is great and the music is fitting, but otherwise, there isn't much to do. I managed to get to a higher platform on the second day and just hold Up to destroy everything. The instructions are also a bit unclear. Am I supposed to destroy everything? Just some things? It's certainly a good project. I wish there was a tighter game loop. |
| Apr 21 18:45:10 | 25m 32s | Dog Signal - Ludum Dare 46 entry | ♥ 1 | This is really good. If I may add a suggestion: I would like it better if the player moved smoothly rather than in fixed distances. |
| Apr 21 18:50:53 | 5m 43s | Sunlit | ♥ 2 | What a fantastic idea. It's calming and stressful at the same time! The art style and music are so soothing, as well. Really great work! |
| Apr 21 18:54:26 | 3m 33s | Space Jelly Factory | ♥ 2 | This was a very entertaining arcade experience, though I would have like a button to be able to exit the tutorial stage! |
| Apr 21 18:58:04 | 3m 38s | Vigtafl | ♥ 1 | I really like the concept and the art style is phenomenal. I would recommend a mode or option to play the game from a top-down perspective. The mood is excellent. |
| Apr 21 19:45:06 | 47m 02s | Power Source | ♥ 1 | The game is a bit too difficult, but I really love the skeleton sprites and animations and the bloom effect on the power source is very attractive. |
| Apr 21 23:22:07 | 3h 37m | The Box | ♥ 0 | I really like the idea of this and the aesthetic. The only note I have is that the camera needs to STAY WHERE IT IS. |
| Apr 21 23:28:03 | 5m 56s | FEED | ♥ 1 | The graphics, fx, and music are top notch! I really enjoyed the game and I think the difficulty is just the right mix of frustrating and addicting. Great work! |
| Apr 21 23:46:48 | 18m 45s | Goldsmith | ♥ 1 | I enjoyed the art style and basic game-play loop. This is clearly a great jam game, but if you were to expand on this, I would add more mechanics. |
| Apr 21 23:58:18 | 11m 30s | Sleepyhead | ♥ 1 | Great execution of a classic genre. I would have liked the game to move a bit fast, maybe slowing down right before an obstacle to let the player place a plank/spring? Great work either way. |
| Apr 22 00:06:38 | 8m 20s | Disco Boy | ♥ 0 | Super simple addicting game. The only suggestion I have is to add a health bar rather than a numerical. Otherwise, great work! |
| Apr 22 05:37:43 | 5h 31m | Egg Drop | ♥ 0 | I'm not sure if I did something wrong, but jumping only moves the characters a tiny bit; not nearly enough to get over any of the blocks. |
| Apr 22 05:49:24 | 11m 41s | Mother Hen | ♥ 1 | That was awesome! I really like the aesthetics and music. I really have no suggestions or complaints! |
| Apr 22 14:33:49 | 8h 44m | The Dark Cave | ♥ 1 | The was really cool. I'm getting strong Limbo vibes overall, and the sound design was top-notch. I would recommend adding some sort of distinction between the foreground layer and the default player level. There were times where I tried jumping over a ledge that ended up being part of the foreground. |
| Apr 22 15:33:07 | 59m 18s | Keeper of the Flame | ♥ 1 | I enjoyed the concept and most of the execution. Your ambiance was spot-on. There were quite a few times that I died because the collider on your player/water is too large. There were plenty of times that I died as soon as the fans started spinning, rather than when I was touching the actual water. |
| Apr 22 16:03:48 | 30m 41s | In the Valley of Souls Deluxe Edition | ♥ 1 | That was fantastic! I can't find anything wrong to comment on. You created a seriously entertaining piece of art. Also, thanks for playing my game the other day! |
| Apr 22 16:08:15 | 4m 27s | Tumbleweed | ♥ 2 | Hey, just a heads up: if you launch the game with a VR headset connected, it will not run properly. The game kept trying to launch my oculus software instead of starting the first level. |
| Apr 22 16:24:54 | 16m 39s | Dr. Noir | ♥ 1 | The graphics and ambiance are great! The controls for walking being limited to WASD was a bit annoying at first. Overall, a fantastic jam project! |
| Apr 22 16:34:15 | 9m 21s | Tiny Fragments | ♥ 1 | This is, by far, the best game I've seen this jam! This being a COMPO game makes it that much more impressive. This game is oozing with polish and I can't find anything to criticize! |
| Apr 22 19:45:45 | 3h 11m | Keep It Alive | ♥ 1 | Cool animation! |
| Apr 22 20:43:47 | 58m 02s | Mouse Trap | ♥ 1 | Great graphics and music! There were a few times where I walked into a new room and died immediately because the obstacles were right in front of the door and I couldn't see them. |
| Apr 23 12:42:17 | 15h 58m | Missing Pieces | ♥ 1 | What an absolutely fantastic little game! I would call it a hidden gem, except that it looks like I'm the only one who just found it. You already know your music, animations, and aesthetics are phenomenal. There's not much I can add other than suggesting some hints to the player about how to solve level 2 instead of relying on trial and error, which can get frustrating. |
| Apr 24 00:54:24 | 12h 12m | Dying Flame | ♥ 2 | That was enjoyable, though short. I would recommend speeding up the character a bit. It felt like he was lagging behind at points. |
| Apr 24 13:22:52 | 12h 28m | Tumble Baby | ♥ 1 | @omiya-games Same issue over here. If the block locks in place as the baby falls from above it, it will lock the baby in place with the block. I assumed that was the solution to this level, but... tumblebaby.PNG |
| Apr 25 04:15:44 | 14h 52m | Toasted Dreams | ♥ 1 | That was pretty fun! I really liked your art assets and music, but wish the bounding boxes on the player/enemies were smaller. For an endless runner type game, I would recommend placing the player to the left side of the screen rather than the middle to allow the player more time to prepare for obstacles. I would also recommend that you make it more obvious how many lives the player has left. Otherwise, this is a fun little game with a decent amount of polish. Also, by the way, the title screen buttons are not aligned when played in full-screen. The quit button hovers somewhere in the top right corner while the player button is around the center. |
| Apr 25 04:19:02 | 3m 18s | Sourdough Finisher | ♥ 2 | I really love the concept, but, unfortunately, I know little to nothing about sourdough starters and have no idea how to play! A tutorial would have been nice, but I understand the limitation, time-wise. |
| Apr 25 04:28:19 | 9m 17s | Rolling Chicken TD | ♥ 2 | That was a neat tower defense game and plenty of fun. I feel like the difficulty curve was just right and I really enjoyed the animations and variation in enemy types. |
| Apr 25 04:37:36 | 9m 17s | Egdar's Blobs | ♥ 0 | Excellent job. I loved the animations and sound design. My only suggestion relates to the camera movement. There were times that I lost simply because the camera locked on to the main character but didn't move fast enough to catch up to the action, leaving me helpless with nothing to grab as my little player fell to his doom past grab-able objects that were just out of view. Otherwise, the game is fantastic. I actually started attending game jams thanks to your youtube channel and this is my first LD jam, so thank you! |
| Apr 25 04:45:59 | 8m 23s | Turtle Daddy | ♥ 2 | This is the best game I've played from this jam! The art, music, design, etc. are all amazing! This truly is great. You should be very proud. |
| Apr 26 21:48:46 | 41h 02m | Pet Protecc TD | ♥ 2 | That was really enjoyable and well put together! i love the art and simple animations and the mechanics were simple and easy to grasp without making the game too easy. Great job! |
| Apr 27 17:27:36 | 19h 38m | Ice Ice Baby | ♥ 1 | This is a great concept for a game! i love the sprite work and simple mechanics. The levels are challenging and entertaining and I would love to see an expanded version! |
