Loved your game, really. Narrative games are the one I affectionate the most I think. Because I can stop thinking about myself, about my thought, and live through the ones of the author, of the character they want me to play, etc. Your game is so well written, and I recognized myself in some of those lines, others where the one I think I needed to hear. So thank you for that.
And for me, the biggest frustration weren't the sound, but mostly the speed of the little ball. Indeed, when I think, I have a lot of thoughts coming from anywhere and they come fast. Here it felts like I was slowed downed on how much I wanted those thoughts to appear. It does not have to be super fast, but a bit faster could be great :)
Well done again on your game, I really like it