mf1214 2016-04-18 22:53
Cool concept for a game about shapeshifting. Would be better if it was a longer but overall good job!
Foon → Ludum Dare Explorer → LD35 → An Abnormality
By thecain
| Category | Rank | Score | Count | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Coolness | 1 | 100 | ||
| Mood | 485 | 3.17 | ||
| Humor | 742 | 1.96 | ||
| Innovation | 864 | 2.64 | ||
| Theme | 987 | 2.57 | ||
| Overall | 1034 | 2.66 | ||
| Fun | 1091 | 2.25 |
Cool concept for a game about shapeshifting. Would be better if it was a longer but overall good job!
Good mood but a little confusing
The story's well written, though it would have been nice if it were longer.
That was short
Interesting and poetic little game.. :)
Ah, I love a little text adventure. That was neat, left just the right amount to imagination. Thanks for this
Needs a little more work to get your ultimate story across.
I'll just echo what everyone else has said - too short! I enjoyed what was there, and definitely wanted more.
Interesting and impressionistic? A really good excuse to be able to rate some games!
Well done!
Cool text adventure. I'm into the enigmatic style. Glad you decided to submit.
Clever game, but would have loved to play a little more.
Well-written aside from the occasional typo here and there ("to close" instead of "too close" etc.), and the story had an eerie atmosphere.
Good entry considering the limited time you had!
Good twine game, it is a little confusing though, I think it would have been better if it was clearer what was going on, but good job
Twine, yeah! Short, but with an intense mood. I kinda liked it, even if the later bit was rather linear.
Haha, nice hack!
Nice idea, could have been longer of course. :)
The story is well written but a little confusing. Good job overall, nice use of theme.
Really nice text based game.I would like to see some music on it.
Whoa
Short but entertaining.
Excellent story writing and use of the theme!!! I like it!!!
Great try, express the ShapeShift theme by a Word game is innovated~
Pretty cool, we're many to do textual adventures on ludum dares. That's a good first game. Ï should try twine myself one day...
Gotta agree with others, it sounds like an interesting story but a tad confusing. Right now my theory is that the shapeshifter's true nature is a word, or something similarly abstract (dunno, it seemed like the book was the home, or something).
Not bad, especially for last-minute excuse for voting in LD. ;)
Nice concept, very poetic
That was pretty cool. Loved the writing style (abrupt, but still fairly descriptive, keeps you in suspence), and from what I could tell it fits the theme nicely, but now I want you to try writing more!
A bit short, but still entertaining nonetheless. I didn't rate you on humor though (doesn't really make sense to vote for that category)
I actually really love the mood to this. I liked that it showed what you clicked on already when you play through again. Some of it was really great poetry. When there is one statement that you have to click on, it really emphasizes it. It's like a new tool to use in creative writing! So a very cool concept.
Interesting game. Well written though a bit confusing at times. Great job anyway ;)
Really poetic. Nice writing =)
Short poetic game which is well written. It could be interesting to continue this project. I like your main idea - to do something in order to rate other games. Well done ++
I like this kind of thing a lot. Subtle, does not try to explain itself. You can take the time to figure it out and be rewarded or give up and play more Halo. Pretty good for the time it sounds like you spent.
Interesting. Definitely full of atmosphere, but I may be a bit too slow to pick up on the greater meaning!
Great atmosphere and cool game!
Interesting and original idea... but I think you must to introduce more multimedia elements (like fx/music) to make the player feel the story. Good entry.
great mood! nice story too... part of myself asks for more xD
I didnt understood a thing but tried to play different braches of story. Misterious and interesting, i would really like to play a full big game with that sort of narrative.
interesting concept of storytelling. definatley not the standard, i liked it